Before - Legends The Slave. (Qui-Gon - Obi-Wan angst. - AU- - Completed

Obi-Wan stared at him, and thought, how can I convince him that I?m not worth wasting his time on.

?Padawan, you?ll never convince me that you?re a waste of my time, and I certainly don?t want to hear you say that again.?

Obi-Wan?s eyes filled with tears, and yet he smiled. ?I didn?t say anything Master, I thought it.?
Qui-Gon smiled back. ?Well don?t think, my Padawan; it isn?t good for you.?

I knew the healers would be able to fix Obi, I wasn't worried!

Lovely ending, Gkilkenny! I'm sad this story had to end, but I'm excited to hear you've already got another one going.

 

This was an Amazing story but like all great things it must come to a close. You've got me hooked on your writing style though, so you'll definately be seeing more of me in the future.

Can't wait to see your next work and I'm glad Obi-wan turned out fine!

Bravo!

 

Great ending to an excellent story!!!
Good job!!!
Obi lives!!! Yay!!!

 

Thanks for the wonderful reviews I am sad to see this story end but you know me and another one is alive and kicking.


p_stotts

Thanks for your help and I?m so glad you enjoyed it.

Valairy_Scot
Glad you liked it. I know we both love Obi-Wan especially when he's hurt and needs comfort.

Lady_Misty

Yes it is finished and now I need some stories to read.

KELIA
I enjoyed writing it and thanks for being with it from beginning to end.

GeneralKenobi7

I did enjoy writing Obi torture and yes I am posting another story now.

earlybird-obi-wan

Thank you for being with me from the beginning. I always appreciate your support.

EGKenobi

I?m so glad you enjoyed it and keep up the good work on your story.

Kynstar

I like happy endings and I love writing about Obi-Wan. Thanks for reading.

CelseteAntola

Thank you I have one started on the Saga if your interested.

Bastet

I?m glad you liked it, and you know me I can?t let Obi suffer forever.

Raphire
Thank you I am continuing to learn more about writing and
I find it fun to experiment with words.

Icepaw_Kenobi

Yes Obi is saved to be tormented another day.


Thank you everyone. I hope to keep you all interested with my next story.

 

*feels guilty for not updating*

You can read more of my work while you're waiting for me to update OiaL. I posted a viggie named Oath here and I have a number of other short fics in The Saga Forum.

 

Thanks I'm happy you read it.

 

Wow....

*takes a look at the clock*
It only took me some hours to read through this....
For some reason I hadn't been following up after reading the first post a long time ago, but now I finally have!

What a great story!
I don't even know where to begin or end....

Poor, poor Obi!
Am glad he made it in the end!


Awesome story!

 

Thank you for reading it and in one go too. I am happy your liked it.

I enjoyed writing it and I'm sad that it is over. But theres always another one just around the corner.

 

Well. It took me three days but I'm finished! That was intense! I loved your relationship between Qui-gon and Obi-wan.

If you're still wanting stuff to read the two dares in Beyond the Saga are really good!

Still Loving Jania and Past Loves I think they're called. Also I updated Centerpoint if you're still interested.

 

HelloKelly

Thanks for reading and reviewing
I'm happy you liked it.

 

Thank you. To the kind readers who nominated my story The Slave for Best Drama. That was very nice and I thank you once again.