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Saga Thy Endless Wait (poem) [ongoing]

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DaenaBenjen42, Jan 29, 2006.

  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    KYP! :) =D= [face_dancing] Where his story starts. :cool:
     
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  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    a beautiful tale about Kyp
     
  3. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 6

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    I've not read anything involving Kyp, but from what I know, I feel that I will probably get a crush on him, so he's always seemed to be an intriguing one. That's really a painful beginning for him and you have sort of...sort of illustrated this kind of a void with words, the void around and inside.
     
  4. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    @WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Yep. Kyp. So is this. :)

    @earlybird-obi-wan Thank you. :)

    @Ewok Poet I'm still, even now, trying to get my head around this predicament, you know? But since I STILL have the Durron family on my mind... (Thank you.)

    And that's honestly the longest I've gone between posts on this. (Are we on page 19? Really? Wow... welcome back, one and all, to the poem series where EVERYONE was waiting for a thing, no matter what the thing was.)

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~​

    On Deyer
    a family
    lives life

    On Deyer
    on the floating City Rafts
    Life
    is simple
    peaceful

    On Deyer
    word
    of
    tragedy
    arrives

    On Deyer
    Protests
    lead
    to
    punishment

    On Deyer
    nothing
    will ever
    be
    the same
     
  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    great to see your poems again continuing the tale
     
  6. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Super details about world changing events on Deyer. =D=
     
  7. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    @earlybird-obi-wan ...thank you. :)

    @WarmNyota_SweetAyesha ... Thank you. :)




    Balanced
    on
    one hand

    Hand
    sunk
    into the dirt
    of Yavin 4

    Balanced
    relaxed
    into
    the
    Force
    Waiting

    Waiting
    for
    signs
    of impatience

    Balanced
    lifting
    a tree
    a rock
    and Artoo

    Balanced
    and wanting
    to laugh

    Balanced
    and waiting
    for a student
    to get bored
    and shuffle
    their feet

    Balanced
    on
    one hand

    Balanced
    it is
    a good day
    for teaching
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    and a great poem to describe Luke
     
  9. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    [face_dancing] [face_love] Terrific ESB snapshot.
     
  10. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    @WarmNyota_SweetAyesha ...did Yoda end up on Yavin 4 and no one told me? ;)

    @earlybird-obi-wan ...yep. It's too bad that Queller had to ruin the moment.




    Waiting
    Waiting
    So long
    to train
    a student

    Waiting
    hiding
    for so long
    watching
    from
    afar

    Waiting
    a long
    long
    time

    Years
    and years
    alone
    in the swamp

    Waiting
    for the moment
    to train
    training
    students
    once more

    Waiting
    it has been
    so, so long

    Waiting
    waiting
    so long
    to train
    a student
     
  11. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    A great way to describe master Yoda
     
  12. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Excellent tone. I'm not surprised that he had an idea there would be someone to train. [face_thinking]