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Saga Trouble in the healers ward, DDC 2014 (Kaagi Adin)completed

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2014.

  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    Title: Trouble in the healers’ ward
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: Saga
    Character: Kaagi Adin
    Genre: diary
    Summary: Kaagi Adin writes a diary
    Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to Lucasfilm and Lucasfilm belongs to Disney.

    Entry 1
    I have a new – Nu proof – diary. Caf, grease and pictures from a procedure on the first pages with all the details will make it very horrible for her to see.
    Last entry in the previous diary I wrote that I was worried.

    I am still worried. Our healer’s ward disaster duo came back from Tatooine with the royal transport from Naboo and what did they bring?

    A nine year old boy and he is radiating in the Force and untrained.
    And that boy has me worried. Jinn and Kenobi are now with boy and queen going to Naboo.
     
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  2. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    A nine year old boy and he is radiating in the Force and untrained.
    And that boy has me worried. Jinn and Kenobi are now with boy and queen going to Naboo.

    I have no clue whom you are referring, too. :p

    Of course I know you are talking about our dear Anakin guy.
     
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  3. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Hi, first out of the gate with the DDC 2014 entries. =D= Nope, I don't know who that could be either [face_laugh] Kaagi has reason to worry. :( [face_nail_biting]
     
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  4. Falcon

    Falcon Chosen One star 10

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    Awesome start, should be interesting
     
  5. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Force Ghost star 5

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    Nine year old boy...[face_thinking] I wonder who that could be? That boy should have you worried. Shoot him out an airlock while you have the chance! [face_worried] Nice start to your diary!
     
  6. jcgoble3

    jcgoble3 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    "healer’s ward disaster duo"

    [face_rofl]

    And yes, Jedi_Lover has it right. Space that boy now!
     
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  7. RX_Sith

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    Interesting start especially with Anakin's presence.
     
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  8. Thumper09

    Thumper09 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Heh, smart way to keep Jocasta Nu away from the diary. I can guarantee something like that would work on me, LOL.

    Interesting to see Kaagi's reaction to "this boy." ;) Looking forward to this next year in his ward!
     
  9. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    You will see
    He sure has reasons
    And no Vader and Saga;)
    The queen didn't[face_mischief]
    the 'boy' will lead to interesting entries



    Entry 2
    Now I am extremely worried.

    This morning I went with my datapad to master healer Vokara Che to get approvement to order the new therapy tools for the exercise pool of the healers’ ward. She wasn’t there.
    She was gone and not alone.

    She and the entire high council left with the transport of the new Chancellor.
    Palpatine was elected by the majority of the senate. I think he was chosen because the queen gave a compelling speech about the needs of her people before going back with Jinn, Kenobi and Skywalker in tow.

    Aaqu is worried too. He told me that Jinn or Kenobi must be in trouble, great trouble, deadly trouble. That’s how he voiced it. ‘I felt a being becoming one with the eternity.’

    Who?
    I have to go. A crèche master is here with a crying baby.
     
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  10. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Excellent =D= Very much in line with canon. Oh, what-if Padme hadn't endorsed Palpatine as Chancellor? :eek: Doubtless, he would have found another way to power. [face_thinking]
     
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  11. RX_Sith

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    Some very interesting developments as Palpatine becomes Chancellor. And Padme mainly endorsed him because he was from Naboo like she was.
     
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  12. jcgoble3

    jcgoble3 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Nice! And yes, somebody's in trouble. And of course Padmé would endorse ol' Palps.
     
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  13. Thumper09

    Thumper09 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    That's got to be a horrible feeling, knowing that one of your friends is in terrible trouble, possibly dead, and not knowing which one it is or what's happened to them.

    Lots of developments in store with the new Chancellor. I'm curious to see how Kaagi is going to react to Palpatine.

    Great post!
     
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  14. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    I have to go. A crèche master is here with a crying baby.

    Despite all great universal events life goes on. Babies cry, get consoled.
     
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  15. Jedi_Lover

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    I've got a bad feeling about this.:(
     
  16. Falcon

    Falcon Chosen One star 10

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    Great entry and I agreed with Nyota, if Padme didn't support Palpatine, he would've talked someone else into doing the deed. More soon
     
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  17. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    Palps must have begun his scheming long ago
    Find out who in the next entry
    He will in his own unique way
    He is a healer
    For who;)
    He sure would



    Entry 3
    The baby was getting his first tooth. I could soothe him with a chewing toy. That was days ago and now I am back in my treatment room after a visit to the hangar.
    Aaqu urged me to come with him.

    I was there when the shuttle landed in the hangar and Obi-Wan Kenobi – with Anakin Skywalker following beside him – came with hunched down shoulders walking down the ramp.
    A padawan has aged in days.
    Obi-Wan Kenobi is a Jedi knight now.

    But I can see it in his eyes.
    They let me see the sorrow and the pain at loosing his master, his father, his friend.

    Obi-Wan and the kid walked past me.

    Aaqu gave a small nod.
    Obi-Wan turned his head for a moment before heading to the Jinn – Kenobi apartment.

    I wanted to follow him but Aaqu halted me.

    ‘We will have to examine him and the boy. Come and help me.’ Aaqu told me and yes I have to go now.
     
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  18. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Touching entry @};- [:D]
     
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  19. jcgoble3

    jcgoble3 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Very nice. :D
     
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  20. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Force Ghost star 5

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    That must have been sad. I wish TPM had some touching moments examining Obi-Wan's grief but that would have cut into Jar Jar's time. TPM wouldn't be the same without that Gungan…it would be better, but not the same.

    Nice update.
     
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  21. Falcon

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    very sad and touching more soon
     
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  22. RX_Sith

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    Sorrows fill Obi-Wan as he has lost a huge part of himself with Qui-Gon's demise.
     
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  23. AzureAngel2

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    I was there when the shuttle landed in the hangar and Obi-Wan Kenobi – with Anakin Skywalker following beside him – came with hunched down shoulders walking down the ramp.
    A padawan has aged in days.
    Obi-Wan Kenobi is a Jedi knight now.

    But I can see it in his eyes.
    They let me see the sorrow and the pain at loosing his master, his father, his friend.

    @};- Good and touching description of the events in PM.
     
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  24. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    Thanks all for the replies. Obi-Wan should have had more moments


    Entry 4
    I am trembling all over.
    Why?
    I woke up this morning after a really bad dream and I cannot remember what I dreamt.

    Yesterday we examined Obi-Wan Kenobi and his new apprentice Anakin Skywalker.

    Kenobi protested of course when Aaqu called him but yes after some persuasion and a promise of a surprise for the boy he and the boy came to our treatment room.
    Muttering Kenobi was examined by Aaqu and me. He told us that the Naboo healers had given him a full physical after the fight. He didn’t know if the Sith Darth Maul was an apprentice or master.

    Anakin protested when we took bloodsamples but began to smile when he got one of the large plastform syringes.
    I saw Obi-Wan giving me a small smile when he got one too. The first water fight will be there soon in the Kenobi – Skywalker apartment.

    I was baffled when I examined the bloodsample of Anakin. He has by far the highest midi-chlorian count ever encountered in a human being.
    How could that be?

    I don’t know but he must have been acting like a Force magnet to Qui-Gon Jinn.
    The high council first refused to let Anakin be trained by Jinn but now they have agreed that Obi-Wan can train him.
    Obi-Wan told me that it was the wish of his master. He will fulfil that wish.

    Today passed very uneventful except from seeing Obi-Wan and Anakin in Serinka’s restaurant and Obi-Wan asking Serinka if he had seen Siri Tachi.
    I haven’t seen her either. It is now bedtime for me.
     
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  25. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    LOL on the water fight ;) and :) about the wanting to see Siri. But [face_worried] that dream doesn't sound good. Like a warning? [face_thinking]