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Beyond - Legends Useless Dreams - Han/Leia, AU - songfic - now a short story! COMPLETE 1/3

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Sep 18, 2006.

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  1. dm1

    dm1 Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 9, 2004
    I agree, these were my favorite parts of this last chapter, along with Han kissing Leia's hand in a courtlike gesture. Well done, even if I like Han and Leia making it through everything, this is the best type of circumstance if they didn't. Your Isolder is a much better character than the book indicated, with more honor than one would imagine, and Ynna is a wonderful character and sounds like she will be a good match for Han. At least they both can end up potentially happy.

    Well done!
     
  2. alhana_antilles

    alhana_antilles Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Aug 16, 2002
    What a bittersweet ending. You wrote the characters very well. You made me actually interested in your OC character, which is quite a feat because I usually am bored by them. Instead, I was wanted to see more scenes with Ynna. Well done. =D=
     
  3. Jedi_Tigris

    Jedi_Tigris Jedi Knight star 4

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    Mar 7, 2005
    :_|=D= That was beautiful, VaderLVR! It's so sad that Han and Leia didn't stay together, and ended up unhappy (or happy to a limited extent). Good to see them reconcile though because there really isn't anything they can do anymore, and now they can both move on.

    Wonderful job!
     
  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Aug 31, 2004
    Hi:

    Came at this from the rear entrance as it were. Got captivated by Room for Me, and got curious. :D :D

    Ynna's a marvel: she's honest, loving, and lets Han work things out without crowding or whining. :) She deserves him, like only one other can. :)
    I have a hard time with H/O or L/O, but this works. Only someone as talented as you could pull that off. :)
    =D=
    [:D]
     
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