Whatever happened to Cindel Towani?

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  1. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    As my first story I've decided to write a story about the long lost charecter from the Ewoks movies but this time there will be a few changes. A Dark Jedi named Sauros, one of Emperor Palpatine's underlings, is fleeing after the second deathstar's destruction and lands on the forest moon of Endor. He is hiding from the forces of the Rebellion. While he is hiding out he feels a disturbance in the force. Enter Cindel. After her attempt to escape Endor ,Sauros attacks the ship and kiddnaps little Cindel. He starts to train her into a Dark Jedi. Then (10 yrs later) Sauros decides to complete her skills by sending her to kill the Skywalker line. I would like to know what you think about this and give me ideas. and by the way Cindel is going to have a gold bladed lightsaber :).
  2. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    :) This story takes place 10 years after Return of the Jedi and flashbacks which take place around Truce of Bakura. :)

    Chapter one: Dark Trial

    Darkness surrounded the quarters of the young woman. The heat was intense and sweat was glistening of her forehead. Eventhough she was alone she could sense the presence of her Master. She pulled back her curly blond hair away from her beautiful face.

    The heat started to rise to unbareable heights. Then sounds started to fill the air. She then reached for her belt, she slowly pulled out a handle to her lightsaber.

    This was not the first time Cindel Towani had to face this kind of trial. It reminded her of the first time she had ever meet her master the Dark Jedi Sauros.

    She had been bond to a table with strapes on both her wrists. At this time she was just a child. Besides the reptillian creature that stood infront of her Cindel was very much alone.

    He was not that much taller than her yet he looked even more menacing than anything she could posssibly imagine. He then hovered over the child and reached for her hand. She tried to resist the hand of her kidnapper but it was no hope. Their hands grasped, and a wave of electricity passed over her.

    "Now child, tell me your name." The words had been said but they lingered in her still today.

    She remembered trying to hold her tongue but it was to hard for her, "Cindel Towani."

    "Tell me Cindel do you honestly fear me?"

    Silence had then passed through the room. Then another wave went through her stronger than before. She tried to scream but her breath had been driven from her.

    "Cindel do you fear me?"

    It was silent again. The wave yet again passed through her this time leaving marks on her hand.

    "Do You Fear Me?!"

    The next shock had almost knocked her out and before it did she uttered "Yes".

    She woke up from her "Remancing" and activated her lightsaber. It's Gold blade lite the area and she sliced the air and the room was lit. Before her layed two pieces of a blue droid sizzeling and smoking up the air.

    "You have done well my young apprentice." Sauros said as he entered the room.

    "Thank you my master."

    "It is time for you to fullfill your destiny, you will now go to the planet of Othain and bring me the head of the twins of Skywalker."
  3. Coota

    Coota Jedi Padawan star 4

    Nov 2, 2002
    The funny thing is that she actually did show up in the EU; she ended up being a reporter during the Black Fleet Crisis Trilogy.
  4. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    I need more replies please? :)

    Chapter 2: Revelations

    It was now colder than when she had been training in her room. The entire ship was like this. The Dark kl`50 was once used by the Dark Lords of the Sith. Its design was much like that of a TIE fighter but it was much bigger. Yet its body resembled that of Star Destroyer.

    Her only companion in the bitter cold ship R7b7. Her interaction with her master or that of his droid underlings was all but none. In the past her master?s droids where the only thing she interacted with, sometimes she thought that was her master?s idea. As far back as she could remember it was only her and her master.

    For you see Cindel could only remember up to her first encounter with Sauros. All the events and adventures she encountered with the Ewoks and that of her and her family crash landing on Endor where gone.

    But Cindel does not try to go back if she wants to make her self powerful enough to full fill her master?s wishes she must give up being as human as she was. She must become as R7 and the very ship she resides in, a machine, cold, heartless. She must learn from the mistakes that were done by other Dark Jedi. Even the mistakes of the Emporer who is long gone just like his
    weapons the Death Star, Darth Vader, and his now crumbling Empire.

    As today, she would often meditate and become one with the Dark Side. This time it was different, Cindel was being pulled to the light side. It was awkward at first until the calm feeling washed over her. She was now somewhere else in time on a desert like planet. She knew it wasn?t Othain. Othain was more aquatic and peaceful. She was on a battleground.

    On one side she could see an army of Super Battle droids (the kind preferred by Sauros) and an army of bug like creatures. She remembered of the tale of a Dark Jedi and his army of droids at the begining of the Clone Wars, but this is nothing like that, the bug like creatures were being lead by three Jedi against the droids.

    Then she noticed one of the Jedi was her.
  5. ZaraValinor

    ZaraValinor Jedi Grand Master star 4

    May 31, 2002
    At the plot thickens. Dun, dun, dun. Good Job, Padawan. Keep up the good work.
  6. Jedi_Liz

    Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Apr 24, 2000
    very interesting

    So, when Cindel was kidnapped, did "Noa" get killed? You know, the guy that was flying the ship away in "Battle For Endor"? ;)
  7. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    Thanks for all those who replied and read this story :)
    Chapter 3: Watcher in the Waters

    Othain was beautiful this time of year. It was mostly water except the capital city, the island Dethodain, and the small barge cities that were scattered around the planet.

    Today was especially important to the leader of the people, King Doso. He had received a warning from one of Othain's force strong citizens who urged the King into inviting Jedi their planet for the first time since the fall of the Old Republic. It's not that they distrust them but the planet is small and out of the way of most people in the universe, barely any attention was given to them at all.

    The capital palace was located at the end of the huge city. The capital was covered in a pearl looking metal called L'tha, which made the eyes of two Jedi in particular glisten.

    Luke Skywalker and his sister Leia Organa Solo covered their eyes as they exited a ship called the Los't 5 an Othainian ship constructed by the same metal as the capital.

    "Luke I thought I felt something!" Leia said suddenly stopping.

    "What is it?" Luke said grabbing his sisters shoulder softly.

    "Never mind, it was probably just the wind or something."

    "Welcome master Jedi for coming, my advisor Jonas has been receiving disturbing revelations about one of our neighbors from the planet of Geonosis." Doso said as he came to greet the Jedi.

    "And why did you not contact the leader of Geonosis?" Leia said in her ever so majestic manner.

    "They have stopped most communication from off the planet to be received. They have felt embarrassed by the mistakes of their past leaders and shut themselves up from the Universe."

    "What did your advisor see?" Luke asked.

    "A battle with an army of droids unlike the battle encountered by our neighbors on the planet of Naboo long ago."

    A look passed over Leia's face as she felt a chill go up her spine.

    "Leia will you please ready the ship we will have to go talk to the governor of Goenosis."

    Leia stood their unheeding to her brother's request.

    "Leia?" Luke said reaching out to his sister.

    "Oh of course." Leia said turning back.

    Leia entered the ship and was startled by a disturbance coming from the cockpit. She
    activated her lightsaber.

    And at that exact moment she herd the hum of another lightsaber coming from the
    compartment next to her.
  8. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    I need more people to read please :)
  9. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    Please read :(
  10. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    Chapter 4: New questions

    Leia reacted with the spead of a cat as her lightsaber meets another's in a spark of fury. Her oponant leaped over her in hopes to best her but she meet the blade again.

    "Your more powerful than I expected." Her blonde advisary said stricking Leia's light saber.

    "You'll see that your expectations aren't up to pare with everyone elses!" Leia said as she sent a fury of small tools at her advisary from the cockpit's tool compartment.

    Leia's attack was bested by the young girl she was facing. She left all the tool's smoldering heap on the floor.

    "My master said that te Skywalkers wouldn't be easy to defeat I guess I'll have to prove him wrong!" The girl said as she sent a ball of goldish light from her hand.

    Leia screamed in pain as she fell on the floor. Her lightsaber deactivated as she tried to recover.

    "LUKE I NEED YOUR HELP!" Leia said using the force to her brother.

    Luke then ran into the room and activted his green lightsaber. He leaped to reach his sister's victor and meet her blade.

    "Who are you? An assassin, a bount hunter, I want to know why you just tried to kill my sister?"

    "I am Cindel Towani and I am a Jedi, and more powerful than any other Jedi even you!" She said sending a ball of golden light at Luke.

    Using the force Luke caught the ball in the air and flung it back at Cindel. Like Leia, Cindel slumped to the floor and her light saber diactivated in her hand.

    "Is she alive?" Leia said as she finaly recovered from Cindel's attack.

    "Yes The blasts where not strong enough to kill."

    "Is she strong enough in the force to kill anything?"

    "Maybe a a Jedi less poweful than me or you but she wasn't even using that much energy."

    "Well than we need to get a some answers out of her."

    Then without warning the ship started to take off, and they now noticed that a droid was at the head of the cockpit.
  11. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    Somebody please read me !!!!!!!!!! :)
    Please :(

    Please :)

    Just kidding
  12. ZaraValinor

    ZaraValinor Jedi Grand Master star 4

    May 31, 2002
    Patience, Padawan. Good job.
  13. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    Chapter 5: What happened to Cindel Towani

    Luke ran to the small droid and tried to regain control of the ship. Then out of a lens on the droid appeared a hologram of a short cloaked figure.

    "Luke Skywalker how pleasant to finally meet you at last, my name is Sauros, and I do believe you have my apprentice Cindel, so I propose a trade."

    "You are not in any bargaining to trade Sauros."

    "What if I told you that me and my battalion of droids have control of the planet Geonosis?"

    "So if we hand over your apprentice then you'll leave Geonosis?"

    "Of course."

    "We will land in the capital, meet us there." Luke said as the hologram deactivated.

    "Luke it's obvious we are headed into a trap why are you bartering with this guy?"

    "This time I feel we have the upper hand, and besides I wasn't the one who tried to give up Chewie to get Han out!"

    Leia gave Luke a cocky grin as she went over to the still uncouncies Cindel.

    "What are you doing." Luke said as his sister tuched the girl's face.

    "I'm going to find who exactly this Sauros is, but first I have to get through this mental road block someone's got in my way."

    Then suddenly her mind mealted with Cindel's. she was now seated in a ship behind an old man and small girl. She could see the atmosphere and tree's of the moon Endor that she once visited.

    Then once they were out of the moon's pull the peace was ruined. The ship had been hit and now fire was burning inside the ship and the old man layed on the controls the girl nugged him but he wouldn't get up.

    Then Leia noticed that the ship was being pulled by a bigger ship and had landed inside it. Blue droids poured through the door. Leia tried to reach for her lightsaber but she could not do anything.

    Then a blast of blue light burst out of one of the droids wrists' and the girl being caught by the stun blast fell into a deep nightmarish sleep.

    Then suddenly both awoke out of their trance and yelled "Noa!"

    "What did he do? What did he do?!" Cindel said as she began to cry.

    And Leia could not resist in joining her.
  14. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    Please Read Please :)
    Or I'll be sad like this :(
    Just kidding
  15. ohanzeetala

    ohanzeetala Jedi Youngling

    Oct 29, 2002
    Well, where's the rest of it?!!
    JK This is great. Keep it up. By the way, is Noa Cindel's father? older brother perhaps? "Neighbor with a beard?"
    Let me know. I'll be back on Friday.
  16. Frodo_Yoda2

    Frodo_Yoda2 Jedi Youngling

    Dec 4, 2002
    Chapter 6: Fire Flight

    The super bettle droids that had been created to fight the Republic at the begining of the clone wars were now scattered all over the capital of Geonosis.
    Many of the termite like Geosnosisians had been driven out of their catacombs and where now centered in the capital.

    The Los't 5 was now in the crouded city. Luke, Leia, and Cindel came out of the pearl like ship and greeted the governer of Geonosis Mo'uk the Wise.

    <We are glad to see you master Jedi we wish to end this peacefully.> Mo'uk said in his native language.

    "We do to, where is Sauros? He had agreed to let your planet go if we handed over his apprentice."

    <He is in one of our ancient battle arena's I will take ou to him.>

    Luke reached out in the force and he sensed Sauros he was strong but he knew that he could overcome the villian.

    They had arived in the center of the battle arena and on a balcony was Sauros lurking over the railing. "Welcome twins of Skywalker I have been waiting for the day I would see you face to face."

    "Sauros you said that you would trade the planet back for your apprentice, we expect you to hold to that trade." Luke said almost as demanding as the time he was trying to negotiate with Jabba the Hutt.

    "Well unfortunatly I can no longer acept that offer, you see I can not sense the dark side in her any longer, but if you handed you, your sister, and my apprentice I would be glad to oblige, and will leave willing, but only with you!"

    Luke searched for an answer to his demand their were a lot of inocent people on the planet yet he could not sacrifice his siter and himself. Then he heared a voice, it was Mo'uk he was some how allowing Luke to hear his thoughts. <Master Jedi my troops are hiding in the catacombs, I've comanded them to attack the droids at the moment diplomcy could not solve the issue. ....They are on there way.>

    Then started the battle. Hords of Geonosisans were coming out of a crack out of the ground fireing at the droids. Luke, Leia, and Cindel activated their Lightsabers each one starting to hack through the surounding droid masses.

    The droids had already begun to loose against the Jedi and the Geonosisians. Unhurt by what seemed like a loosing battle did not afect Sauros. He centered a small ball of force lightning in his hands. He threw the ball to the ground, but not really towards anybody.

    The ground shaked and everyone for a secind stopped. Then like something out of a nightmare came a hord of droids. Destroyer droids, regular battle droids, and even the droids that had recantly been deactivated had come back to life from somewhere out of the past.

    Then something had blackened the sky.
  17. ohanzeetala

    ohanzeetala Jedi Youngling

    Oct 29, 2002
    Good stuff. This is really good. What's the black thing? Interesting parallel to Episode 2.:D
  18. Ohanzee_Tala

    Ohanzee_Tala Jedi Youngling star 1

    Dec 26, 2002
    Well, aren't you the author?! Goodness Gracious. Post!!!!! Now!!!!! Am I the only one alive?!? :(
  19. Ohanzee_Tala

    Ohanzee_Tala Jedi Youngling star 1

    Dec 26, 2002
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  20. Ohanzee_Tala

    Ohanzee_Tala Jedi Youngling star 1

    Dec 26, 2002

    I feel like I'm the only one alive!! Please post!!!!!!
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