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Beyond - Legends Worth Saving (Kyp, Zekk, Alema, Jaina)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Zonoma, Sep 12, 2005.

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  1. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    And Nurse Lola is not finished, no not yet!

    It's nice to know you haven't forgotten about me. :D
     
  2. skywalker64089

    skywalker64089 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Add me to your PM list please?

    S.
     
  3. Lusa_Thul

    Lusa_Thul Jedi Master star 4

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    Whew, sorr I'm late, but I just got back from a camping trip! And what a lovely post to come back to! Congrats on actually making me cheer for J/K, because you wrote both of the mbeautifully! This whole fic is really spectacular, and I'm absolutly loving it! :)
     
  4. Darth_Scroobius

    Darth_Scroobius Jedi Youngling star 2

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    It seems to me that his five-year absence was, in fact, a search for omnipotence. I doubt he even realizes the danger he is skirting, but trust me when I say, ?Jacen is in trouble.? I mean, who else have we known who was vaguely omnipotent? Yeah, see what I mean?

    Mmmmm omnipotence... *evil cackle* :oops:

    After all, it?s not as if someone walks up to me every day and tells me to have casual sex with his sister.

    Confused, but intrigued.

    During Jaina?s time with the Taat, they actually rewired her brain. I think it has something to do with the membrosia, despite Cilghal?s pheromone theory. Breaking all contact with the other Joiners, Zekk especially, will have physical repercussions.

    I'm sure you're expecting some Scroobian Tangent action but I have to be honest: biology ain't my thang. So I'm going to leave this one alone. I'm not sure if that is a relief or a disappointment, but...

    Dangit! I can't help myself. Membrosia? That sounds like a fruit drink (Coming soon to a juice bar near you: Membrosia, the nectar of the Force. Only five credits per ounce). And I have no idea what pheromone's have to do with membrosia or brain-rewiring. I suppose it has something to do with the alleged 90% of the brain that we don't use (which is of course a myth).

    I hate to repeat myself in a post this short, but as I said above I am "confused, but intrigued."
     
  5. jedi_master326

    jedi_master326 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Commander Mommy is my hero. [face_love]

    Great job, Z! [face_dancing]

    [face_clown]
     
  6. Souderwan

    Souderwan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Great update, Z! I gathered that there was some sexual context to what Jacen was proposing to Kyp but I didn't quite get it...hopefully that'll be clearer later on.

    I'm particularly fascinated by this relationship between Jaina and Kyp. I really loved the way you helped me get to know this character. You've written him very well and I think I've gotten to know him (at least I know him the way you see him anyway :p). Great job!! I can't wait to read more.

     
  7. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    I's back, and laughing, Kyp is such a nerd. *hides from Lola* Did I just say that our loud?
    Anyways, I prefere Zekk, but this post was great! :D *runs away from furious Lola*

    "Hey! I used your name in a fic!" I call to her.

    "You insulted my Kyppie!" She screams... I could go on and on. ;)

    ~Courtney~
     
  8. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    Lola,
    Perish the thought!

    Lusa_Thul,
    :eek:YOU are enjoying the idea of K/J, too!??[face_plain] I can't believe this.

    Darth_Scroobius,
    Confused? Yet intrigued? Works for me, I guess! I will try to answer all your questions at some point in this fiction... though to be fair I will explain Membrosia now (though I loved YOUR explaination better! LOL). Imagine honey made by giant borg bugs and you get the idea.

    jedi_master326,
    Thank you, Dan.

    Souderwan,
    Hopefully all questions will be answered in due time. It would appear that I have managed to confuse the heck out of more than one person.

    Courtney_Solo
    :(I like Kyp. At least he is a lovable nerd. Poor guy. I have put him in a rough position, haven't I?[face_devil]
     
  9. Jade_Max

    Jade_Max Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    That was one of the best usages I've seen of the first person POV in a long time, excellent post, and a great choice for Kyp's part in this..

    I agree... Jacen is just... well... creepy :/

    Edit: I just re-read it, and some of the comments....

    sex = CPR LOL! I loved it :D

    Still, I can understand why Kyp would be the choice to help Jaina in this. If that Force Bond is the only thing that can help her, and it has to be someone untainted by the Taat... well, she couldn't ask for a better friend ;)

    Poor Kyp, forced into the decision... and yet, it -is- a desicion ;) Loved it!

     
  10. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :eek:

    They're not all stud muffins?

    Whad'ya mean they're not all stud muffins? *Is shocked*

    oldj
     
  11. aurrasingrules101

    aurrasingrules101 Jedi Master star 4

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    ooh, this story is interesting. please add me to that PM list.
     
  12. DathomiranAuthor

    DathomiranAuthor Jedi Knight star 3

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    :eek:

    :eek:

    AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *pokes Jaina* WAKE UP!

    Good post. :)
     
  13. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    ojn,
    Nope, I'm afraid not. Do you need to sit down? Would some water help?

    JadeMax,

    I think you have a handle on what is going on, thanks for rereading and commenting. I was afraid I had made too large of a logic leap for anyone not as twisted as me so either that fear was unfounded or..... well, you are a little twisted! ;)

    aurrasing,
    Consider it done and thanks for joining us!

    DA,
    I am still working on the next post (Though I have the one after completed -backwards me!) and hope to complete it before Monday.
     
  14. ladylaurel18

    ladylaurel18 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    This thread needs to...rise!

    I think it also needs an update, Z. You have kept us in the dark long enough about what the heck Kyp's gonna do...
     
  15. Briman

    Briman Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I concur with your padawan...
     
  16. BigFatty

    BigFatty Jedi Padawan star 4

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  17. Anakins_Force

    Anakins_Force Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow, I'm caught up.

    I liked Kyp's thoughts on Jacen. I am getting to know NJO Jacen (I'm on book four) and I have read both Dark Nest books, so I can definitely see why Kyp might be a little wary of Jacen--he's almost become ruthless and willing to do anything he thinks is necessary and then justify it later.

    I snickered at the part where Jacen was uncomfortable at feeling what Zekk felt for Jaina through their Taat connection, lol.

    It was cool to see the segment you brought over to the Parthenon; it does work better in context.

    I too am curious to see what Kyp is going to do with Jaina. He's going to help her out I'm sure...
     
  18. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    Everybody: Okay, okay! Cool your drives for one nanosecond! (okay, a few more days:p) I am working on it now, though. Thank goodness!

    Melissa!
    Hello again! It is wonderful to have you here. And I am relieved to know that reading it in context helped clear up the confusion! I still snicker when I read that part, btw.
     
  19. Killik_Swarm

    Killik_Swarm Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Great job, Z! I like your characterization of Jacen quite a bit. He really seems like the Jacen in TUQ and TJK. Not evil. but not necessarily good either?

    KT
     
  20. Mustafear

    Mustafear Jedi Youngling star 1

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    KT,
    I am so glad you joined our little Jacen Fright Fest this week! Yes, it bothers me that so many think he is evil now, too. I believe that he is just willing to pay more dearly for things than anyone else. That would scare many people, though, I guess.
     
  21. Fiana_Novarr

    Fiana_Novarr Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Hi there!

    Really intersting character developments you have here! Your Jace is creepy, and I really like your Kyp. I am very much looking forward to reading the next part!

    So ... Could I be added to the PM list, too, please??

    Ys, Fia
     
  22. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    Thanks for stopping by, Fia. Consider yourself added.


    And, I am really sorry for the delay guys but after writing the next post, I realized that it sucked. So I am currently rewriting it.
     
  23. Neo-Paladin

    Neo-Paladin Jedi Master star 4

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    :eek: It did not suck!

    ...

    There were just some untapped opportunities. o_O
     
  24. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    Thus sayeth the beta.:rolleyes:
     
  25. Fiana_Novarr

    Fiana_Novarr Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Up!

    And muchas gracias for adding me to your PM list.

    Ys, Fia

    P.S.: And somehow I am pretty sure it did not "suck". o_O
     
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