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  1. HMTE

    HMTE Jedi Master star 2

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    Paxis, Judicar, Acharon...

    You're making allusions to the alternative names that were developed for Jacen Solo's Sith name before they settled on Caedus. Very clever. Very clever indeed. Wondering how you'll fit Taral in.

    I'm curious where the Canon characters like Sloane and Versio ended up between Endor and Onderon. Did they fall in line with Pestage? How did Pestage and Amedda work together after the Emperor's death? Did Amedda side with Isard? So many fun questions to consider.
     
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  2. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    @Force Smuggler, yussss...

    @Kadar Ordo, after Palpatine's dead? It's literally that!

    @HMTE, you caught on, good one! And in answer to your questions... let's see!
     
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  3. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Divided Empire IV: Taral

    Rae Sloane cursed Gilad Pellaeon.

    The older man had served in the Clone Wars, aboard Acclamator-class assault ships, Venator-class carriers and Imperial Star Destroyers, yes, venerably provided stability for Chancellor Palpatine, later Emperor, before falling into the orbit of Grand Admiral Thrawn.

    Pellaeon had began working with him to recruit similarly minded, unique individuals, Sloane had absently waited for the time when she was approached.

    Besides Pellaeon, Thrawn acquired the loyalty of the Noghri titled Rukh, collected the witch Morgan Elsbeth. Even now-Grand Moff Adelhard had served with Thrawn at Atollon, and then-captain Ferno of the Dark Omen, as well as Commodore Faro of the Eleventh Fleet. As too had a growing collection of parties who simply vanished from the Empire - Voss Parck, Eli Vanto and Assistant Director Ronan among them.

    But after the Battle of Lothal, Pellaeon survived, and Thrawn didn't, said to have either been whisked away by star whales, or driven from Imperial Court by Grand Moff Tigellinus, or simply dead. But rumours persisted, and Sloane kept track of them - a sighting of Thrawn keeping an eye on Inquisitor Jerec, or as a senior captain defending the edge of the Empire from warlord Nuvo Evsa, or commanding from the Grey Wolf, pursuing Grand Admiral Zaarin. Yet, Pellaeon remained on the sidelines, driven so by Thrawn's rivals in high command, too far removed for even Sloane to assist him. Last she had heard he was aboard the Chimaera, the replacement Star Destroyer constructed to erase the taste of the Lothal defeat from the Navy's mouth.

    Meanwhile, she had collected up the survivors of Thrawn's fleet, and assisted Ferno's rise to Vice Admiral. Nonetheless, he hadn't retreated with Sloane due to the sheer chaos of the Battle of Endor. What a catastrophe, she absently reflected. Looking out the viewport, she could see the Vehement, slightly ahead of them, and the Redoubtable, damaged, trailing debris through hyperspace, but besides her.

    Glowering, Sloane had no doubts that they would reach Coruscant and be sent back to the front - wherever that front would be. It would take three and more days to reach the capital world, and though she had given word by the HoloNet, there was no chance the Empire wouldn't begin to unravel before she reached the Core.

    That chaos had been caused by Gilad Pellaeon.

    While Admiral Strage of the Chimaera had been next in line to command the fleet at Endor, after Piett, Chiraneau and Montferrat were killed, Strage too was dead, and so the flag should have passed to Sloane and the Vigilance. Yet, the Chimaera had survived the attack that killed Strage, and in the confusion the flag had not been transferred.

    Which is why only a trio of Destroyers followed Sloane, and nearly twenty followed Pellaeon. Sloane cursed the man. The moment Strage was dead he should have passed the flag to her, and she could have commanded a squadron back to the frontline. Now she'd have to weaken one strategic force to assemble another, assuming she even had that authority... what could one of a thousand Admirals do? Against a thousand Moffs? A Score of Grand Moffs?

    The question of who was in-charge was going to shatter the Empire.

    What would she have left to protect by the time she reached Coruscant?

    ---

    The three most powerful individuals in the galaxy stood together.

    They had no choice.

    The news had reached the HoloNet, and chaos had broken out.

    Even here, on Coruscant, rebellion was being fought tooth-and-nail by Stormtroopers hopelessly outnumbered. Recall orders for various legions had been put out, if they were answered. The capital was aflame. Director Isard of all people had taken command of the suppression efforts.

    Grand Vizier Mas Amedda leaned heavily upon his sceptre of office, the statuette of Sistros tapping lightly on the transparisteel of the Imperial Palace. Well, of this Palace. There were several, more than one on Coruscant itself, indeed.

    "Come now, Mas, we cannot let hope go," Head of State Ars Dangor spoke roughly. "We might yet hear."

    "The clonemasters have been silent for days. None of the clones have woken," Mas growled. "Is Sate even here yet? How do we know he didn't die at Endor?"

    The double doors to the office opened, and the Royal Guard let Sate Pestage in. "I am here, and alive," the other Grand Vizier said, eyes frenzied. "I saw the fighting as I landed - are we in danger?"

    "Not here," Ars said, confidently. "The Imperial Army has been deployed."

    "Fine, fine," Sate said, rubbing his brow. "Do we have any word from Byss?"

    "Not yet," Mas said, despondent. "Just news of uprisings, secession, and treason."

    Sate blew out his breath. "Tell me the worst of it."

    Ars regarded a datapad. "Grand Admirals Takel and Makati escaped the Battle of Endor. Everyone else of note in High Command is dead. What is left of the fleet is on it's way to Yag'Dhul."

    "The Inner Rim?" Sate blinked. "They didn't regroup and head back to Endor?"

    "Admiral Prittick couldn't take command of the fleet," Mas groused. "Admiral Harrsk took his battlecruiser, the two Tector-class Star Destroyers, as well as the Whirlwind, Interrogator and Dark Omen into the Deep Core. The Elrood captains took the Thunderflare and Stalker back home."

    "Leaving Prittick with twelve Imperial Star Destroyers?" Sate thought, aloud.

    "And two Victory Star Destroyers, the Protector and Adamant, and some Interdictors," Ars confirmed. "So he retreated."

    "Execute him," Sate said, coldly. "He has cost us so much -"

    "Captain Pellaeon and Admiral Sloane called the retreat -"

    "As they should! We were defeated, there is no point wasting ships," Sate snapped back at Ars. "Prittick squandered our only chance to get to grips with this. The Emperor will have our hides."

    "If he survived," Mas pointed out.

    "Yes, I am aware of that," bit Sate.

    Silence. "Are you finished?" Ars eventually said.

    "Carry on, tell me how bad it is," Sate said as he heavily sat in the office chair. Palpatine's chair, Mas absently noted.

    "Of the surviving Grand Admirals, five have gone rogue or abandoned their holdings..." Makati, Takel, Tigellinus and Syn remained loyal. "Of the twenty Grand Moffs, four have been usurped or betrayed us." Kaine, Tavira, Nivers and Selit fell into the latter group. "So far all remaining Advisors are reporting from their sectors, but we've lost track of several Inquisitors, including Jerec, Halmere, and Marrok. Director Cronal has vanished, too."

    "But that's just High Command," Mas pointed out. "Several Admirals and Moffs have taken it upon themselves to secure their sectors, or swathes of space. Drommel took the Guardian the moment he heard, retreating to the Oplovis Sector, even Screed has gone rogue."

    "No great loss," Sate muttered.

    "It is however indicative of a trend," Ars grumbled. "Hundreds of sectors which were previously secure are now embroiled. The Tapani nobles have already reversed the partition of their territory and tendered articles of secession, which means we've lost Fondor."

    "Kuat? Corellia?" Sate was working through options.

    "Kuat of Kuat is dead, and his successor is looking for input from us on securing her position..."

    "I've already sent forces to restore order on Corellia, too," Mas confirmed. "The Diktat isn't inclined to hand over power to the masses, so we have a local base to rebuild from."

    "But there is very little territory that isn't contested," Sate reasoned.

    "It is all contested," Ars said. "We'll incur incredible losses to secure what we can."

    "Which means we need someone to start issuing commands," Sate continued.

    A moment of pregnant silence. "Yes," Mas said.

    This was the point of contention. If they fought amongst themselves, the Empire would be finished. A Regent need to be appointed, or it would collapse in less than a year, in the opinion of Mas Amedda.

    The Chagrian shrugged. "Had Palpatine been indisposed as Chancellor, I would have taken his position, to ensure continuity of government."

    Pestage scoffed. "He wasn't Chancellor, though, he was the Emperor."

    "And your role was transformed into that of Grand Vizier," Ars noted. "Which Sate was also appointed to."

    "We all know that Palpatine wished for checks and balances, to keep the Empire from turning on him," Mas replied, baring his fangs. "It doesn't obviate that I should be his successor."

    "I've been running the Empire on the day-to-day," Ars pointed out. "I am the Emperor's Voice, no?"

    "You're not Grand Vizier, notwithstanding," Sate said, slowly.

    "I agree," Mas said, heavily. "It should be the Grand Vizier."

    Ars Dangor was silent, merely looking at Mas pitifully. Mas hesitated; had he agreed to something he should not have. As if to give voice to the Chagrian's concerns, Ars continued. "Well, you can't be Regent."

    Mas Amedda felt the ground open beneath him. "What? Why not?"

    Sate Pestage smiled, somewhat drily. "Because you're not human."

    Another pause. Mas pressed his lips together and sighed. "Of course not. If I lead, the Empire will fall."

    "With alternatives to hand? Yes," Ars put it bluntly.

    Better alternatives, is what Mas heard. Marshalling his pride, the Chagrian looked to Sate. "Congratulations, Grand Vizier."

    "Ah, yes," Sate said, caustic. "The poisoned chalice of the Throne."

    "Until the Emperor returns," Mas pointed out.

    "If," Ars finished. He stepped over to the desk, speaking as he did. "Which means we need to give our first official order."

    Sate watched as Ars pressed the button to activate an awaited call.

    Fleet Admiral Rax swam into existence, a blue hologram above the desk. "Rax," Sate said, tightly.

    "Grand Vizier," he replied. "The Contingency stands ready."

    Sate Pestage drew in his breath, and Ars and Mas looked at each other. The Contingency would enact Operation Cinder, a wave of genocidal rage to activate in response to the death of Palpatine - to punish the Empire for failing him. It would also wrestle free from the corpse of the Republic the framework for the Imperial Dream to continue - the Dark Empire, the shadow skeleton that had been cultivated within the government.

    The twinned command structures of Grand Vizier, ISB and COMPNOR, Admiral and Moff, it had been merely been the first step to the true parallel Empire, the one in the dark which would deploy a thousand Dark Jedi to command a magocracy that would usurp all positions in the galaxy.

    Then, the Sith Eternal on Exegol would finish off the regime, when the armada was finished. Though Mas Amedda made no mention of Exegol, for he did not know if Sate and Ars were privy to the existence of Exegol, let alone the projects in the Unknown Regions beyond the mapping expedition the Thrawn clone was leading.

    Sate Pestage cleared his throat. "With the support of my colleagues, you now speak to the Emperor, Fleet Admiral Rax. With that supreme authority, I order you to stand down."

    Rax paused. "We will not enact the Contingency?"

    "It is not yet needed," Ars Dangor confirmed, stepping into view.

    "We shall secure Coruscant, then the Core, and rout the Rebels and traitors," Mas Amedda confirmed, flanking Pestage.

    Rax's eyes flicked from one to the other. "Is that so."

    "You'll need our support to enact Cinder fully," Mas Amedda reminded. "And when it is absolutely necessary, we shall commit to it. Your forces will remain your own, so that you may take the initial steps as need be - to secure Vetine, Jakku, and the other storehouses as need be."

    "I see," Rax said, dully. The man was dramatic at best, and Mas half-expected him to erupt into a tirade. "Only the true Emperor himself can stop my hand. If he does not countermand you in one week, I shall begin my offensive." His chin raised. "If you serve Palpatine, then you will not stop me."

    He cut the line.

    Sate Pestage sagged. "We aren't going to be able to stop him, if he starts Cinder."

    "So, we'll just have to hope," Mas Amedda said, drily. "I shall head to Byss, and keep watch over the clones. Not many know of them, but if they are sabotaged -"

    "Then we shall have no hope," Ars Dangor said. "I will stay here, on Coruscant, and ensure the loyalty of the Ruling Council. That should give us enough to rebuild."

    "Let's hope," Sate Pestage said. "As we won't last long without the Palpatine."

    -

    Palpatine drifted.

    It was dark, was all he could say.

    Dark beyond Dark.

    Where was he?

    A memory.

    Falling…

    Falling…

    So far.

    Cloying with his mind, stretching out, trying to find a tether. He couldn’t use Vader -

    Why?

    His mind, it struggled.

    Perhaps now he realises the shape of the spirit is not just the flesh.

    Not that he has one flesh to act as an anchor.

    Scattered; scattering; scatter.

    Riddles are for your prey, Rot, not us.

    Riddle me this; when is death not death?

    Enough. You too, sister.

    Why should we care about this one?

    An architect of imbalance, and chaos, perpetuating the eternal conflict that feeds us so.

    Palpatine, for he remembered his name at last, turned his… head? Himself? Towards that voice, and glimpsed a tentacled chin -

    There will be others. Lumiya, Krayt -

    Alarmed by the mention of Vader’s apprentice - his ‘secret’, Palpatine turned, recoiled at the sight of the Gorog -

    Awake, aware, awake -

    That oily voice and presence, and Palpatine felt it puddle at his… his feet? Beneath him?

    He shook off his stupor, recognised he was detached, disconnected from his body -

    Dead?

    Memory surged, and with it, rage.

    Vader.

    He had done this.

    Skywalker.

    Palpatine cast out his senses, summoning all the power his damaged spirit could muster -

    There.

    There was a slither of himself, someone under his influence in range of his spectral reach -

    But not quite.

    Galactic distances conspired against him, and Palpatine snarled at the Force itself, as the cosmic weight between threatened to smother him.

    A flap of wings; something neared.

    He seeks to leave, to return.

    Leave him, you Left Handed fool -

    Irrelevant, irrelevance, irreverent -

    A growl, and the two other presences, the Gorog, the oily one, they shrunk back.

    For two thousand years we have waited for another Dark One. The Sith were mere children for so long. I care not for Coruscant and Empire, but this one, he tears asunder the Force like the others. Adas, Xendor, Tor Valum, Vitiate -

    Tor Valum was mine.

    Keep your Zeffo, I care not. But the Sith, they are mine.

    Palpatine recalled the ancient tales of Peridea, of the Jedi Cal Kestis interfering in his research of such things -

    The oily voice again; Sith serve me, too, too, too -

    The Sith flirt with eternal life and you merely brought them eternal death.

    Project Vector, the zombie troopers, Palpatine reflected, the research of Darth Drear -

    A liquid chuckle.

    Amusing, their efforts were, to be more than just mine -

    Palpatine reached again.

    His presence imbalanced the Force; the Father, the Son, the Daughter…

    The Mothers… but what of Hunger? The Charon? The Children of Yuuzhan’tar?

    Golden shape, golden fool, golden trapped.

    I care not for them. Their machinations will serve the Sith. Serve me. Serve the Dark.

    Palpatine could not believe they were discussing Mortis… and Hunger? The golden cube? Waru, perhaps? He wanted to stay, to learn more, but he knew he would never be able to leave.

    He turned away from them, with all his will. His spite. He would avenge himself upon Skywalker. Destroy all he cared for. The Empire he would purge of the final trappings of the Old Republic, once and for all. There would be no bureaucracy to reform, no fallen Jedi to redeem, no corporations to have to micromanage. Just his Dark Empire; his Sith Eternal Empire.

    Endor would be a mere setback in his thousand year rule.

    And so, he reached.

    The shape of the vessel; one his Hands. An extension of himself. Jeng Droga. A Dark Protector, one he disdained even having to acknowledge, let alone rely upon...

    Behind him, he felt a push. A nudge from the winged, tentacled one, who spoke of the Sith. To cover that last, infinitesimal distance between here and there.

    He despised that assistance, minor as it was in comparison to his great power. He was Darth Sidious. He did not need anyone, or anything. But he was not too proud to understand he was close to the true death, and he needed out.

    Out of the Netherworld of the Force.

    He was Reborn.
     
  4. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Divided Empire V: Caedus

    Emperor Palpatine emerged from the ichor of the cloning cylinder.

    It was a perverse, monstrous chrysalis, and he despised that it was even required.

    "Your Majesty!"

    His eyes equalised, and he saw the four of them before him.

    Sigit Ranth, the Emperor's Physician, yes, but also his Grand Viziers, Pestage and Amedda, and the Head of State, Ars Dangor. They were all on one knee. Behind them, strapped to a table, was Jeng Droga, the Emperor's Hand he had possessed to make the rest of the journey here to Byss.

    He grit his teeth, feeling the cold, sterile air upon skin that was not his, not for many years. His clone. "Vader betrayed me."

    A moment of dismay across the faces of the four of them.

    "Skywalker?"

    "He lives, your Majesty," Pestage said, carefully. Palpatine's eyes passed from Mas Amedda and regarded him with the Force, for a moment, to be sure he still had the connection. He did, and he sensed Pestage's small sensitivity. The man stiffened. "The Death Star was destroyed, and the Empire is in disarray -"

    "Immaterial," Palpatine said, as his Physician rose, passing a robe to his naked Emperor.

    Palpatine's skin burned with the sensation, and he growled, nearly dropping to his knees. The transition was painful - moreso than any injured or torture inflicted upon him by Darth Plagueis. His eyes wavered, and he sat, heavily, on the step down from the cylinder.

    "Your Majesty?" Mas Amedda said, carefully.

    "Enough," Palpatine snapped. Their concern was despicable. "I have surpassed death, do not concern yourself for this flesh." His eyes blazed golden as he asserted his power upon the body. The pain ebbed, and he smiled, gritting his teeth.

    "Fleet Admiral Rax, he wishes to engage the Contingency -"

    "How long was I gone?"

    "Mere days," Ars Dangor said. "But more than a quarter of the Grand Admirals and Grand Moffs are in open rebellion, or dead. Hundreds of sectors have rebelled, or seceded, and we've lost control of the Tapani Lords, Hapans and even the Hutts."

    Palpatine absorbed this.

    Sate Pestage continued carefully. "We have secured Coruscant, and the Core, for the most part, but the southern quadrant is in the hands rogues, the Rebels, and various invading nonhumans, from the Unknown Regions. The Ssi-Ruuvi were repulsed from Bakura, and are now fighting the Alliance, while the Nagai are leading a campaign towards Bothan Space -"

    "The Nagai?" Palpatine's eyes turned to him.

    "The albino-skinned marauders that troubled us near Gargon," Pestage clarified. "They were a vanguard of an invasion force, from a satellite galaxy."

    "Not the Far Outsiders," he said, slowly. Without the Death Star, Palpatine wasn't sure they could hold back their shadow fleet. But with the Galaxy Gun...

    "No, my Lord."

    A momentary pause, as Palpatine thought of how he would avenge himself upon Skywalker. Perhaps something involving his sister, now he knew of her. Princess Leia. How many times had she attended Court, and he not known? It galled him. "Can we hold?"

    "Of course, your Majesty," affirmed Mas Amedda. "With Grand Vizier Pestage as acting Regent in your absence we -"

    Palpatine's eyes cut back to Pestage. "Regent?"

    "It has been chaos, my Lord," Ars Dangor added. "The Empire is in peril -"

    "The Empire is immaterial," Palpatine repeated. "Rax should have torn it down."

    "If that is your wish -" Mas Amedda said, cringing slightly.

    "Wait," Palpatine said as he stood. "How many years are we off from completing the World Devastators? Or the Eclipse? Or the Galaxy Gun?"

    "Years, your Majesty," Sate Pestage answered.

    "How many," he repeated.

    "Five? Six?" Ars Dangor replied. "But that's reliant upon us having the resources to do so."

    "So we need the bloated corpse of the Old Republic for now," Palpatine summarized, infuriated. Mas Amedda looked like he wished to interject, to mention how long the loss of the Empire would delay the armada on Exegol, but Palpatine glowered at him and he clearly thought better. Good.

    And so, Palpatine stood, straightening his attire. "Get me Rax."

    Palpatine's Contingency - one of many, and no more special than those hidden on Coruscant, Wayland, or a dozen other worlds - took his comm call as he squeezed his fist time and again, feeling the dark tremor of pain, and knew he would need time to recover. Maddening. His soul had been damaged by Skywalker, even his body was youthful and strong.

    "Your Majesty!" Rax said, surprise evident. "You are alive? And - changed?"

    Unperturbed, Palpatine sneered. "Such is the transformative power of the dark side." He snapped. "Tell me, has the Contingency commenced?"

    "I was about to secure one of the Nightcloak's from the care of Grand Moff Zsinj -"

    "Leave it," said Palpatine, firmly. "We have plenty of weather-based weapons in storage, and more superweapons under development." Rax looked faintly perplexed. "And for the time being we thus need the Empire. I shall be circumspect, recalling forces to Byss until the time is right."

    "Your Majesty, should I attend you?"

    "Bring what followers you have already gathered, and we shall discuss the future, my friend," Palpatine said, drily. Rax was no friend, merely pawn, an orphan who sought a father figure to overthrow.

    "I have approached Admiral Sloane thus far -"

    Yes, Rax had always taken a fancy to that one. "Bring her to Byss with the Ravager and Eclipse. I will have a use for you in good time."

    He cut the line, unwilling to pay attention to Rax's mewling, and turned to his sycophants. "Pestage, return to Coruscant. Hold it, and prepare the way. The longer the Rebels are focused upon the secular state, all the better for us to outflank them." A grin, malicious. He had everything he needed.

    Palpatine purposely forgot those who had assisted his return.

    The original Sith - the Old Ones themselves.

    He knew they remained, out there - that his dispensing with of the Ones left him vulnerable to their depredations - their return. They had bid the Sith spirits on Korriban to strike him, once, and Palpatine had resolved to never require them again... though the Oracle Stone rest in their mummified care, he would not require it.

    He was power.

    The eldritch machinations of those who came before, who shed their flesh to escape defeat in the Cosmic Wars of pre-history, they were nothing to him. Whereas Sith had, in the years gone by, fell to their influence - Soros, Adas, Drear, Vitiate - he cared not. Nor did he care for the Lady with the Locust Heart, be she Onrai, Indrexu, or any other feminine monstrosity, determined to impose her pathetic lamenting upon the cosmos.

    Nothing mattered to him.

    For he had surpassed death.

    And so the projects commenced anew.

    The Vengeance-class dreadnoughts pioneered by the treacherous Jerec; the Executor-class dreadnoughts Avarice, Arbitrator and Annihilator - Tagge's ship, not Saarn's - were recalled to Byss; Mandator-class dreadnoughts Aculeus, Javelin, too. He would build a new armada, for Operation Shadow Hand, and crush the 'New Republic' where it stood.

    And so too would he prepare for another confrontation with Skywalker.

    Nudging the boy to dispense with his rivals in the dark side - Lumiya, Jerec, Cronal, Kadann. In time he would defeat them all, and none would know of his survival unless he so decreed.

    What was five years, when he had eternity?

    Vader had achieved nothing.

    The Force remained his to command, and the candle of light that he had reignited in the cosmos, would be snuffed out.

    When Palpatine was all-but ready, he would send Thrawn's clone to devastate the Rebels, and he would send his newly created Super Star Destroyer armada to retake Coruscant and finish off them. Then, his final wave, tipped by his World Devastators, would end it, a Shadow Hand upon the throat of the galaxy. He wouldn't need a tenth of the fleet he had relied upon for all these years. Starkiller Base, and the armada beneath the surface of Exegol - he would not even need it to retake his Empire.

    He would win the civil war he had wrought with his death - the one within the Empire, between the fools Kaine, Teradoc, Harrsk and Delvardus, yes, but also the one in the shadows, in the dark side. Vader's pathetic secret apprentice, Lumiya, the rogue Inquisitors, and the Cronal, they were no True Sith, like he. The battle of darkness, the Caedus, he would himself triumph, and he alone.

    The Rule of Two was over.

    He had been wrong to assume he could not be excused from Darth Bane's principles.

    He had surpassed death itself.

    The Rule of One - of the Eternal Sith Emperor, would now begin.

    The mere announcement of his return would rob whole worlds of faith and hope.

    The day of the Dark Empire.

    And then, the day of the Sith!
     
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  5. Chrissonofpear2

    Chrissonofpear2 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Wizard... once again!

    Small note - Sigit Ranth does not seem outright confirmed, as the Emperor's Physician? A physician or scientist, for sure - but maybe not the Personal one?

    Given I referenced the character being in the Nightsaber RPG, set on Dathomir (back in "Delving Deep" a page or two back) his fate may not match up with Crimson Empire, too?

    Could be someone else using the same name, I guess. Wookieepedia doesn't seem to feel he's the same guy either, I recall?

    Meantime, Palpatine has gazed into the abyss - I now fear the abyss was the one who blinked first!
    Whilst the fate of those Sith spirits - be they on Korriban, Exegol or even roaming near Tython - is going to have clear long term ramifications.

    Forward - and backward... 'cross timeline.
     
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  6. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Occam's razor means I just equate them, for ease. It won't go anywhere, at this point in Legends, unfortunately.

    Like Pellaeon being at Ord Cantrell.
     
  7. HMTE

    HMTE Jedi Master star 2

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    The Pageantry and Theatricality of power is intoxicating...but divorced from pragmatism it is poison. The lesson Darth Sidious never learned.

    This has been an absolutely marvelous tale.
     
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  8. Force Smuggler

    Force Smuggler Chosen One star 7

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    Glorious!
     
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  9. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    24 ABY - Politics in the Black

    Grand Vizier Mas Amedda took a deep breath. He was not often called to the capital, as in the central regions of Coruscant. A comfortable incarceration, is what he had negotiated, and he actually came and went from the Core relatively often. A slight quirk of a smile.

    All the pain had been worth it.

    But this was going to be difficult, at best. To maintain the facade of the facile Chagrian, the self-effacing expression of a long defeated man. He, as the Head of State of the Galactic Empire, had to congratulate the Chief of State. Stepping from his hover-limo, Amedda reflected absently it had been years since a mob collected to lynch him. The New Republic had allowed him an honourable peace, and now, some twelve years after the Battle of Jakku, the Empire was so inoffensive as to be rendered irrelevant by the Holonews and media.

    He killed a smile before it emerged.

    Escorted through the Senate by the newly appointed captain of the security guard, the Twi’lek Kopri, who looked like a gnat with that flutterpack upon her back. This time, Amedda did allow himself a smile; she was an insect.

    When he reached the Chief of State’s office, he noticed much had been rearranged. Apparently Leia’s way of furnishing the palace had been offensive to the new leader. A slight mental scoff, and he thanked the guard which opened the door for him, absently.

    And then there he was.

    Borsk Fey’lya, the Chief of State of the New Republic.

    “Congratulations, Chief,” Mas said smoothly, loving how the Bothan had played the long game and came back from numerous scandals to become the natural successor to Mon Mothma, Ponc Gavrisom and Leia Organa - politicians he could not be more different to. Whereas they were moralistic Populists, Fey’lya was a conniver, in the stereotypical vein all Bothans were known for. Not that Borsk minded that label - if he still snuck something past an enemy who was aware of how manipulative he was, then he had done so at a disadvantage, simply increasing his victory.

    “Thank you, Grand Vizier,” he said smoothly, his fur flat. Borsk was in control, his emotions calm. His fur would raise in alarm when he wasn’t, and Mas could tell he was so proud of himself that his hairs may as well be inanimate, softly hanging as they were. Confidence. Borsk turned to indicate the two others in the room, the two men. “Do you require an introduction?”

    “To Ambassador Yarmond, of the Imperial Remnant, and my own Senator Fyor Rodan, of Commenor?” This was slightly unexpected… but also what could he do? Ambassador Yarmond was completely invisible in the Force. Mas Amedda bared his fangs as he smiled; betraying his nervousness. “To what do I owe the pleasure?”

    Whilst Yarmond was an entirely different problem, Fyor Rodan was an independently minded politician from a difficult member world of the Galactic Empire. Commenor had overthrown its own Moff and appointed a Senator to Amedda’s own Council of Moffs, purely out of contrariness. But Commenor had been betrayed; ceded to the Empire by the Galactic Concordance, in spite having been attacking by Operation Cinder, and having been a nominal - if thorny - New Republic ally. Seemingly the Senate had grown tired of the Commenori playing both ends against the middle and just handed the problem to Amedda.

    Mas attempted to keep his smile planted upon his face, and drew back his fangs. Borsk was watching the Chagrian, his hands folded under his snout as he leaned on them. Appraising. “We wished to discuss the state of the wider Empire.”

    The Grand Vizier paused. “I appreciate the Imperial Remnant was given an exception to the Concordance, but they don’t speak for the Empire.” His tone firmed. “I do.”

    Rodan scoffed. Yarmond smiled. Borsk simply watched, before standing, lowering his hands, turning to look at the Coruscanti view behind him. “One of my first acts as Chief will be to commission a new fleet, to solidify the support of the corporations beneath me.”

    Mas paused. Rearmament? That would not do. “The Chancellor -

    “Is about to be irrelevant,” Borsk interrupted. “I do not appreciate competing foes to my rear, and so I shall divide the Senate - it will never challenge my veto.”

    “How?” Mas said carefully, the aged Chagrian opting to play the role of waif and political naive for the moment.

    “I have discussed with Senator Rodan here the admission of Commenor to the New Republic, and the dissolution of the Galactic Empire. Each sector will have a Senator, and a bloc will form beneath him.”

    “This will strengthen the Centrist Party,” Mas said carefully, referencing the Senators of Kuat, Adin, Orinda, Arkanis and other systems. Senator Meido of Adin had been a particular irritant to Leia, just before the Thrawn War.

    “I’ll similarly remove Elom from the Inner Council and replace them with Commenor,” Borsk continued. Elom had been a founding signatory of the Declaration of the New Republic - but had also fallen into Imperial hands several times during the war.

    “Which will invite the suggestion you’re aiding and abetting the Empire.” Mas frowned slightly. “That will weaken your hand.” He looked to Yarmond, who answered.

    “Not when the Chief sends Admiral Ackbar on a policing excursion into the Deep Core,” he said, looking to the Chief of State. “To bring to heel the last of the Second Imperium.”

    “I will simply be seen to be rearranging the end of the war, and strengthening the New Republic,” Borsk said with a smile. “Ending division.”

    Mas knew why Yarmond was here now. The entire time the Second Imperium had been raiding the New Republic had been a test of the Bastion Accords. An offensive into the Deep Core - years after the defeat of the Imperium at the Battle of Yavin 4, would be controversial without Remnant support. But Yarmond would agree to it, as it would narrow the herd of opponents for his true masters.

    And as the strengthening of the Centrist Party was ultimately the plan of the true master of Mas Amedda… a slight breath escaped him. He had been holding it in for all these years, keeping secret Exegol, and Korriban, more recently. The entire ersatz Palpatine charade, commanding the Second Imperium. Ensuring that the Corporate Sector and Moff Quillan’s quiet support of the recently reformed First Order had not been noticed by the New Republic.

    With the final dissolution of the Galactic Empire, he would be free to fade into obscurity. To stand beside his Master on Korriban. Inevitably Mas would end up managing the New Sith Order, as the Voice, but it would be worth it. He could finally shed Mas Amedda as his true name, forever.

    He smiled, genuinely, and held out a hand to Borsk as he stepped forward. “The Galactic Empire has had no direction for years. The Moffs squabble, in-fight, and argue endlessly about what traditions to retain and which ones to abandon - all the while our shipyards and factories on Rendili and Loronar took contracts from the New Republic, and we grew weaker still. It is time for division to end, and I will agree to this dissolution.”

    “In exchange for?” Borsk said mildly. “I’ve already granted Rodan a seat on the Inner Council, and Yarmond here simply wishes that refugees from the Deep Core be allowed to retreat to Bastion.”

    Mas made a note of that. The Remnant was not in a particularly strong position economically, having been flooded with cheap New Republic goods. Adding refugees to the burden too… was Yarmond using those who flee war as weapons? Delightful. Perhaps an indicator of what the Far Outsiders would do in the years to come - taking advantage of the weakness of the do-gooder Rebels, by allowing entire populations to escape, and drawing upon resources that could be better used to fighting. Perhaps the Far Outsiders would even pursue those refugees, as a psychological weapon?

    Fear, Mas Amedda reflected. Fear would be the greatest weapon of their invasion. He looked to Yarmond. When the New Republic realised that a Far Outsider could stand in the centre of their government and they wouldn’t even know… resistance would crumble in the face of the power of an InterGalactic War. This was not the Nagai assault, a group on the run in their home galaxy, or the subsequent Tof invasion, which had been a barely planned pursuit of their old enemies to another hunting ground.

    This was a plan decades in the making.

    And Borsk Fey’lya was about to centralise power beneath him, and that meant he would make it much, much worse. If they won this war - and it was an if, in the mind of Mas Amedda, no matter what his master thought - the Centrists would be strengthened. The entire philosophy of the Imperial would be justified.

    And the First Order would reap those benefits.

    Mas shook Borsk’s hand. “I simply wish to retire, Chief. I have led the Empire for fourteen years, since Onderon. I served Chancellor Valorum - I think I deserve a break.”

    Borsk paused, clearly thinking of this. “You’ll have no power, like Grand Admiral Grant, or the other Imperial’s we’ve let retire over the years. You won’t be able to come back from this. The Empire will despise you for agreeing to this… and I will not be able to spend New Republic resources protecting you.” An apologetic smile; insincere of course.

    “Will you head to Bastion?” Fyor said carefully. Clearly he wanted to keep tabs on a rival. “Or perhaps Denon?” Denon had been the capital of the Galactic Empire since Coruscant was ceded, after all.

    Mas smiled, just as insincere. “I don’t recognise the Imperial Remnant as anything more than a warlord state.” Yarmond didn’t react to that; the nuance would be lost on him, no doubt. “So I shall simply do what I wish. I won’t be bound by my responsibilities to the Empire any longer.”

    He turned to go. “If you have no further need of me, I would like to begin my well deserved retirement,” Mas said, allowing genuine tiredness to enter his voice.

    Borsk looked upon the Chagrian with a barely disguised sneer. “Of course… Grand Vizier.”

    That would be the last time he was addressed so. His time as Regent, as Acting Emperor, was over. He had ruled longer than Pestage or Dangor. He was content to be second fiddle to the majesty of Emperor Palpatine.

    The door closed behind him, and Mas Amedda, for all intents and purposes, became irrelevant - died.

    Which was just fine by Darth Wyyrlok.

    The Deep Core would fall, the Empire would be absorbed into the heart of the New Republic, and the Far Outsiders would come and crush them all… from the ashes of victory or even defeat, the First Order would rise… and, from them, the Sith would return!
     
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  10. Force Smuggler

    Force Smuggler Chosen One star 7

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    It all fits.
     
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  11. Darth Corydon

    Darth Corydon Jedi Master star 4

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    yes yes yes the puzzle is falling into place
     
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  12. Chrissonofpear2

    Chrissonofpear2 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Short - but sweet. The only possible loose end concerns if Amedda shows up in future fiction, or is killed off somehow.

    But that would just perfectly mirror Pestage's story too - would it not? :cool:[face_rofl]

    Also - this likely means, with Wyyrlok familiar with the Vong approaching, he also probably kept an eye on the Killiks too.
    Perhaps sabotaging them or using a crucial proxy.

    And that would also be nice to discuss/expand maybe... should my potential Jagged Fel prequel story get off the starting block?
     
  13. Chrissonofpear2

    Chrissonofpear2 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Next tale, then... here we go (for those who thought Yoda counted as very old...)

    The Old Republic: Imagine Dragons
    (approved by Sinrebirth)


    By Chrissonofpear2

    (Thanks to Angela Phillips – for the character, and the idea…)


    3630 BBY…

    Jedi Master Gnost-Dural led the expedition, in the end.

    The scholarly minded Kel Dor, masked and dark of eyes, flew a souped up D5 Mantis-class patrol gunship, which he manouevred artfully through the wispy Marasa Nebula. Two sharp nosed Liberator-class fighters, constructed by Corellia StarDrive, accompanied him as they together delved deeper into the reddish nebulae clouds.

    “So your source indicated it was the planet Marasai itself we would be advised to search in particular?” Gnost asked one of his escorts.

    “Yes, that’s what he told me,” replied Dazh Ramos. The young female Chiss was now a fully trained Jedi, ready to take on apprentices of her own, but had a chequered reputation already with the other surviving Jedi in the Order, at this juncture. Being very independent minded, she had already clashed with some of her instructors and contemporaries – and had also indicated growing sympathies for the Eternal Alliance that had recently formed as a new power. “Rumours had located our target roaming the nebula, and my source indicated he came to rest on the planet itself: so assuming he’s not on the move, that would be a great place to start.”

    “I’ll take that advice, for now,” Gnost-Dural replied, watching the clouds slowly slip past, seeing the first signs of a major break ahead. “Stay close behind me, but do not land immediately. We do not want to frighten our… target, if that is the right word.
    Comm units clicked in wordless acknowledgement with his own communications board. Their journey had been a fairly long one, taking them clean across the Slice region of the ailing Galactic Republic – now riven by repeated galactic wars, and those usually against the ascendant Sith Empire… and more recently, the rival Eternal Empire too. It was a particularly dangerous time to be a Jedi right now, after fifty years of ongoing conflict, only briefly interrupted by treaties and ceasefires. Even the famous Jedi temple on Coruscant was yet to be rebuilt, after so many years, following a direct Sith strike upon it – and Gnost-Dural had been forced to find quieter parts of space for his own recent Jedi colony.

    Always a student of history, ever since his time as a Jedi Padawan, Gnost-Dural had found the planet Ossus to be far less inhospitable than he had believed it would be, from the records he had studied. The ancestral home of the Jedi had been abandoned for some three hundred and sixty plus years, and despite the severe environmental damage dealt by searing solar winds, he had seen clear signs of the rocky planet’s recovery. And so in one out of the way valley, he had begun work on his new home – and a new fallback position for Jedi to dwell within: those that had survived the recent and ruinous campaign by the Eternal Empire, and its dreaded legions. But the colony was still young, sparsely defended, and vulnerable – and so Gnost had favoured the idea of seeking out additional aides – even, champions perhaps.

    Breaking through the thicker cloud layers, they discovered the planet, Marasai: from a distance a fairly wild looking place, closer in, sensors picked up all sorts of electronic signatures and data feedback. A secluded yet quite advanced civilization dwelt below – surrounded by gas clouds, tangles and briers of turbulence, and passing plasma fliers – a dangerous, predatory species often spotted within the nebula. Reportedly, they now had a newer, guest resident there – it was said, a protector, for quite some time now.

    Gnost traded messages with space traffic control, and had to wait some time for clearance – the planet’s weather systems were also tightly controlled, and could feasibly have become hostile, tempestuous and a significant impediment to atmospheric flight at this stage. But finally he had clearance – as well as a fairly good idea his hosts knew the general purpose of his visit, by now. Descending through the mesosphere, he brought the gunship down over a shallow sea, and in towards a small mountain range, which he was pointedly assured, housed several caves.

    Descending the small ramp of his borrowed Mantis gunship, Gnost finally set foot upon the planet, gazing briefly up at its swirling, orange clouds above, blotted and inked by the colours of the nebula all around.

    “Master…?” He said, tenuously, then feeding the power of the Force into his words, magnifying and enhancing them, in both volume and impact, so they would be unmistakable for hundreds of metres around. “Master Lywin – I am Gnost-Dural: I am an emissary of the Jedi Order, and I have humbly come to seek an audience with you, if you are willing.”

    No reply came immediately, beyond a faint swirling of wind. But before too long, a deep, resonant – and very slightly raspy – voice began to issue from within the shadows of one cave, about three times as far away as Gnost’s ship was long: “I greet you, Jedi – but I am not sure you will be satisfied with the outcome of your journey. I have come here to seek a quieter purpose, and I have become comfortable here: there are people who value my presence, and ships that pass near here, whom I am able to aid… even without fully exposing myself. I serve the galaxy in my own time… and in my own way, even now.”

    “I hear all that your say, Master Lywin – but I do still beg that you hear me out: It is not just the galaxy that may benefit from your wisdom, power and aid: the Force itself may have need of you… as it repeatedly has of me, in these, desperate times,” Gnost replied, projecting as much assurance as he could, without making it all seem overbearing or presumptuous. “Since you have disappeared from among us, the Jedi Order has repeatedly faced turmoil, and even near extinction, these last three centuries. The galaxy also suffers from repeated strife – and repeated degradation too.”

    “The old enemy… it is them,” rumbled the voice from the cave, as Gnost slowly drew closer. Within the shadows, a faint orange light briefly flared, throwing into relief, a long, sinous shadow within the gloom, very fleetingly. “It is – is it not? The Sith live still? And they hunt our kind?”

    “They do – with great success. They hit Coruscant hard, and then their Emperor massed forces in secret for another devastating campaign: now even our holdings on Tython have been abandoned…”

    “Tython?!” The voice thundered briefly, before regaining a controlled pitch and timbre. “They threaten the first world?”

    “They do – or are capable of it: we do not believe they stayed long. They seek our leaders and our best and brightest, more than they do our old heritage. I have gathered various Jedi, and need elders, to both protect the young – and to pass on wisdom, to the new generation. Should all fall to ruin, a remnant must continue, and work towards the future… just as many once did on Ossus before; and on Teya,” Gnost finished – meaningfully dropping the name of a particular planet.

    “Very well young Jedi – then I will hear more of your grim tale: give me space… as I extricate myself from here: age has been good to me, and I have only recently stopped growing.”

    From out of the dingy cave, a great shape emerged – long, segmented, and many legged. It seemed like a giant insect at first, but the rough and calloused skin resembled scales far more than it did a chitinous shell; and the body curved and swelled in an impressive shape, building eventually towards pectoral like muscules, below a long, aquiline head. Two slightly webbed looking wings crested the top of the body, behind the great head, and far down the back. Great nostrils issued faint puffs of steam every few seconds, and great glaring eyes came into sharp focus above, withdrawn behind the long snout, and in a slightly bumpy, yet powerful forehead. In all he stood over twenty metres in length, perhaps twenty-five, with his tail still obscured in shadow.

    “I am the one you seek then, young Jedi?” The great dragon rasped – sound echoing impressively for a moment before the great creature stepped almost fully into the daylight. “I am Willm Lywin – Jedi Knight and Master, teacher – and exile. I have been many things in my long life: explorer, curious child, servant of the Force, teacher of Jedi, and defender of the vulnerable. I have fought Sith, man, creature and terrible beast – and seen many Jedi fall, to my pain, in spite of it all. Tell me, do many still live?”

    “They do, Master Lywin – they do still: though plenty have fallen, many still live… in hiding, or in missions around the galaxy, working to hold back the advance of the Sith. For fifty years we have struggled now, since their Empire reappeared in new strength. I am Gnost-Dural: teacher, scribe, scholar and protector… and I have heard many stories about you, thus far. I also have students – and they would, I suspect, benefit greatly from the lessons and wisdom you have accrued, across millennia.”

    “Then you had better tell me more, Master Gnost-Dural, Kel Dor, scholar and Jedi,” Lywin replied portentously. “I am a relic of an earlier time – but one who can, I hope, aim to be of some more use. Lead me then… to your ship.”

    * * *​

    Gnost led his expedition back home, a long, and winding path – up the Trellen Trade Route, and then across the Perlemian Route, out towards the Ash Worlds… and finally back to the Jedi enclave on Ossus, bordering the ancient Tion Hegemony; one of the oldest rival powers of the Galactic Republic, many millennia ago. The planet had a storied, very long and celebrated history – and had also been one of the most prominent targets of the malicious Sith armies, across more recent centuries. A terrible catastrophe had destroyed entire stars – sending a wave of destruction towards Ossus, and scouring its surface, destroying most of the forests, and stripping back many oceans. Only by now were even the first signs of recovery emerging, blinking in the light, like the gaze of a newborn.

    Gnost’s colony consisted of fairly small, compact buildings, plus a power plant, and some hangars. Off to the side, a quiet and discreet training temple – more of a dojo, in many respects – stood up, somewhat domed. His key lieutenants waited: his trusted chief of security, Tau Idair, a former student – and Nadia Grell, the dark-skinned young human woman who had sought out his teaching more recently. Dazh Ranos, with her distinctive powder blue skin, dark hair and red, luminescent eyes, strode close by, coming to join the circle.

    “Come, students – let us go within: we have an honoured guest awaiting us,” Gnost told them. As they ventured into the threshold of the temple, he waited expectantly for the impressed gasps or murmurs of surprise… of those unaware of the nature of their guest, or simply awestruck at a creature formerly known only in legend to many. Willm Lywin stood within, almost the size of a passenger shuttle – and filling almost the entire room: special adjustments had been made to much of the original furniture, to ease his access even further. Willm was a Duinuogwuin – a huge, dragon-like being, whose species were ancient, powerful and wise, as many stories about them had colourfully expressed: once enemies of the Galactic Republic, they had developed into a much valued member, after initial misunderstandings… and yet they were rarely seen by most citizens; vanishingly rare, in common sight.

    “We are honoured by your presence, great one,” Nadia Grell said reverently. Gnost was glad that his student was familiar with the importance of courtesy and deference among Duinuogwuin… especially the more elderly ones. If records were accurate, their guest exceeded five thousand years of age.

    Gnost reflected upon that momentarily – the awe-inspiring nature of that simple fact: many species within the Jedi Order were long lived… two hundred and even three hundred years were common for many knights and masters, in terms of projected lifespan: Master Oteg, for one, was expected to live for eight hundred years or more, and was already pushing two hundred seventy, if he recalled correctly. But Duinuogwuin dwarfed pretty much all other examples – some being recorded to even live for six thousand years, or slightly above. Willm Lywin’s recorded date of birth, reconstructed from available data, was thought to have occurred no less than five thousand, three hundred and sixty-five years before the Treaty of Coruscant, which had ended one of the more recent wars… and also instigated a new calendar, for many of the players. During that time, the gnarly dragon had seen over six hundred Supreme Chancellors of the Republic come and go… including the famous Blotus the Hutt, who had been given an especially long tenure, due to his acumen and accomplishments. One probably never to be repeated… unless perhaps one of the Duinuogwuin themselves should ever ascend to that highest of political offices. Only they could eclipse a Hutt or some other rare species for longevity.

    “Forgive me for my temerity, Master,” Tau Idair said, speaking up abruptly. “But records have you listed as having died three hundred and twenty-two years ago… during a great Jedi purge, that slew many of our numbers: may we learn more of how you survived that time… and where you have been since?”

    Gnost thought about slapping his student down for his forwardness, but Lywin indicated no offence being taken, and stirring and undulating his segments slightly, he began to muster a response…

    “Come then, Jedi – and hear the dragon’s tale: it is a long, dark, and often tragic one…”

    * * *​

    “My family has always been a quiet one, among our people, for the most part… but long ago… almost twelve thousand of your planet Coruscant’s years before… my grandfather joined in a great expedition against an upstart, two-legged race that was threatening our people, out near the world you now call Murkhana. This was the terrible conflict we now know as the Duinuogwuin Contention. One simple misunderstanding between my people and the Republic, led to a short, but for your kind… a most terrible conflict. Fire, hot as plasma, spitting from the sky… laying waste entire skyscrapers within the galaxy’s grandest city: my grandfather fought that day, and at first he was proud… but after the conflict ended, he came to see the great harm that had been inflicted, and the many lives extinguished. As your Chancellor Filorean brokered peace with our own philosopher, Borz’Mat’oh, he wished to show contrition, and offered his services in bringing relief supplies. During that time he also encountered Jedi, and I grew up with many tales of them, throughout my first century of life. That fired my curiosity… and when I was around three hundred years of age… in your own fleeting calendar… I set out into the stars, eager to see the galaxy.

    “In time I came into luck, following stories of a Jedi academy starship – a praxeum vessel – and I offered my services as a guide and an escort across perilous stretches of space, to help navigate them through the worser spots. As the years passed, I began to get better and better at sensing peril, and also of opportunities… wonders, sights to see, and share with my new Jedi friends. In time I was assessed… measured for my potential, and then, I was taught – as a Jedi. It was one of my fondest dreams… brought to realization. I was among the first of my people ever assessed in such a manner… and the masters aboard the ship took it in turn to train me, and to avail me of their wisdom. For though I was older than most of them, in experience I was still greatly lacking. And so, after four hundred years of travel, I was an almost fully trained Jedi, who had participated in several missions… and then I travelled to the centre of the galaxy, to Coruscant… the world my grandfather had once assaulted. There I continued my training, and also out at distant Ossus, or visiting the grand record halls on Phateem. I began to train students of my own in time… and worked mainly as a mediator and an advisor, mostly avoiding combat. Great events did I witness over the next thirteen hundred years… the centuries long tenure of Chancellor Blotus, the Hutt who has been the truest friend to the Republic of all of his unpopular people… the assault by the Waymancy Storm… the short (by my people’s own reckoning) but still harrowing Tapani civil war, and more besides.

    “And then one day, terrible strife and upheaval arose for the Jedi… but this time from within our very ranks: scholars unveiling old secrets on the fringes of the space controlled by the warlike Sith species, who were barely known to our Order back then. And other texts and teachings they say were smuggled back from remote places elsewhere on the rim of the galaxy. In time, some of our best and brightest turned towards grim new purposes and intentions… falling into the embrace of the Dark Side. Ajunta Pall… XoXaan… Sorzus Syn, and Dreypa… more besides: lost to us. It was a terrible blow for many… and disillusioning for me, for quite some time.

    “Among my people, there is a dark and quite tragic secret all must sometimes face: our gestation as a species is complex, depending on many key genetic and chemical, even environmental factors, so that we may be born healthy, strong, and of sound mind. But periodically… some do not complete the process properly. Some are born… wrong: sick... unreasoning… and violent. For centuries we tried to help them, in the distant past… but in the end they invariably turned against their fellows, or lashed out, consumed by strong emotions and instincts, growing ever madder as they aged. In time our elders saw no choice… nor did their parents, generally… but in their elimination. But I had barely payed attention to such stories as a fledgling, and felt most of that terrible time was long in the past. I did not expect to see the same kind of horror unfold within my new family, too. But alas… that is what occurred, nevertheless,” Willm said, coming to a halt, and meditating for a few seconds, tamping down powerful regrets and emotions.

    “The Hundred Year Darkness,” Nadia Grell said, ruefully. It was a story familiar to many Jedi students… the second great schism within the Jedi, and one often more detailed than the legendary first one. What had begun as a simple disagreement between Jedi alumni had blossomed into a terrible uprising, and then a war… which had ended in horrors being unleashed upon the galaxy.

    “Yes, young human – that is what we called it, within a century or so of its conclusion: a terrible war, far more devastating than that fought against the Legions of Lettow, and Xendor, millennia ago. Ajunta Pall and his allies unleashed horrifying new powers against us… and then hordes of monsters too. For decades the Republic staggered back, weakened and uncertain, as chaos spread, and lawlessness, and new hordes of marauders filled the vacuum, to spread further misery. For a time, the Republic split into three or more parts, struggling to maintain order and peace within the inner systems, whilst unable to fully help the outlying ones. Ossus was cut off for a time. And horrifying monstrosities bore down upon vulnerable worlds… including the planet Balmorra. You have heard, perhaps, of the Leviathans…?”

    “Yes – yes, I have… I read about them in the Temple, when very young. I had… nightmares about them once,” Nadia replied grimly. “Forged by Sith Alchemy, as ultimate weapons against the Jedi: able to withstand small armies sometimes… and to slay many, then to absorb their energies within themselves… trapped inside.”

    “Within blisters, upon their great backs… yes. It was a dire time for the whole galaxy, but fortunately, the Jedi rose to the occasion: they would turn back the tide of the enemy advance, no matter the cost to themselves. And I went with them… joining Master Saba’ton and others, swooping in with their ships and fighter craft… and we met the enemy near Balmorra. There were five great Leviathans that day… and I personally fought one, lashing it with the fire of my breath, and melting slowly through its terrible, thick, obdurate hide. I heard it scream, bellow within my mind, but I dared not show mercy… and in time, it finally fell, drifting among meteors and dust clouds. Then I heard the other voices… the howls of the departed spirits, finally set free… and rejoining the Force. Those absorbed within the strange, terrible creature… victims, yes. But perhaps, I thought… not the only ones. Perhaps the creature too was tormented in its own way, and imprisoned. But finally… we won the day. After that time, I found myself unable to resume my duties, as I had before. In time… I headed back into the stars, recusing myself, and seeking peace: I could not continue to be a true Jedi until I had done so.

    “And so I allowed the terrible war to conclude without me, and the rocky years of rebuilding and restoring of galactic order that followed, as leaders vied to pick up the pieces, and central authority slowly returned. In time I found the peace I sought, travelling among other space dwelling creatures… even with the great exogorths… the ‘space slugs’, and other strange life besides. I also saw purrgil, and longed to follow their pods and families on their great migrations… but I never went the whole way. I could feel the galaxy, the citizens I had abandoned… slowly calling me back. But I had been gone a long time: I needed to reconnect with the Jedi, who were now greatly changed from their conflict, and ordeal. In some ways more centred and resolved… but in others, more radicalized, I felt. They were more wary of the Dark Side than ever before. Far less talk now of Balance or of seeing shades of grey, or making space for certain emotions: far more adherence to code, and to discipline, and control. Far less mercy for those who began to go far astray too… for the cost was now known to be far too dear, not just for the Order, but for the galaxy. So I returned eventually to teaching, after refamiliarizing myself with the Jedi ways, and with the redefined Order. And I hoped that we would not see such terrible times again.

    “Alas – it was not to be: other renegades arose from within the Jedi ranks, and Dark Side seemed to grow in influence, as harmony often retreated. Strife slowly and repeatedly engulfed the galaxy such had not been seen since the schism, and since the terrible crusades of Pius Dea, in my father’s time. The Sith invasion first… repelled by great Jedi of the past like Odan-Urr. Then Korriban and other worlds laid waste, just as my people once tried to do to Coruscant. Then… I thought it was over: the wars finally done… the Sith defeated. They had evolved from a simple tribal society of warriors into powerful magicians, and then further radicalized by our own exiled Jedi deviants – becoming the worst nightmares of many Jedi, realized: abusing their power, seeking conquest and domination… power over life itself. And every time we thought them defeated, another would arise – often from among our own Order. Exar Kun, young and arrogant… bringing ruin even to this very world, Ossus, the wellspring of the Order. Forcing us to leave and build temples elsewhere… and in time the curse of the Sith arose again. In the fires of the wars with the Mandalorians… two of our most promising Jedi became Darth Revan, and Darth Malak, and more and more it became too much for me to bear.

    “During that era I had travelled to Teya and opened a Jedi academy there that taught many promising students. I swapped many tales with the human Simikarty, and we passed on our teachings to others besides… one I remember fondly, as always being interested in my stories… a small, green being, with large ears, who often spoke strangely…”

    “Was that… Tokare? Master Vandar Tokare?” asked Dazh Ranos. “I have heard quite a few stories about him… he was there when Revan’s training began… Malak’s too.”

    “Yes child… that was the one,” Willm Lywin replied sonorously. Meantime, if Dazh felt any umbrage over being called a child, she admirably concealed it, to her great credit. “Vandar… we spent many hours in discussion, about history, philosophy, and of the Force itself. And one day I was… greatly saddened to feel his light go out, extinguished. In the aftermath of Darth Malak’s defeat, new leaders took charge of the cult of fallen Jedi now referring to themselves as ‘Sith’. They began targeting Jedi, aided by mercenaries and assassins… and destroyed many of our enclaves. As Malak destroyed one on Dantooine, so did the gathering on Katarr also fall, and with it my friend Vandar. In time they came for my own academy on Teya, and we mustered an evacuation. I stayed behind… with some of the strongest of our number, and we fought a delaying action. Our sacrifice allowed several students and other inhabitants to flee the system safely… and we destroyed many of our attackers. In time I found myself the last one standing… and I felt nothing but regret, overshadowing whatever sparse victory we had. All had felt as if it had come to nothing… to ashes and defeat, to ruination. So I withdrew… again. I left everything behind, and I wandered the stars, as I had dreamed of doing since being a child. I kept going, far around the outer rim of the galaxy, and out to distant clusters and far separated stars, even to one of the dwarf galaxies. I did not know if any Jedi survived, for quite some time. When I returned, war was again ravaging the galaxy, in spite of all the Jedi had sacrificed… and so instead I came to the Marasai people, offering to protect them against threats within their nebula, including the plasma fliers. Whether this was solace or penance, I could not say… until, maybe, now, I suppose,” he said with great weight, allowing his breath to slow it’s almost furnace hot rasp through his twin, gigantic nostrils.

    “Did you encounter any of your own people, in all that time?” Gnost asked softly.

    “Yes, I did – and we spoke briefly for a time. But I had seen so much… and changed so much: my own siblings and cousins barely recognized me, and in time they feared I was being lost to some new madness, different in kind from the one that has befallen my people’s young, but no less alarming to them. So, after a short time… I departed, following purrgil, nebray mantises and other fauna that journey across the stars. Now you tell me three hundred years have passed… and I am finally ready to be among Jedi again. I cannot confess I truly wish to fight – indeed, I hope to avoid doing so, as long as possible: But if the Force wills it… I will contribute. I will train, teach, or advise… and defend this place, now that the light is finally returning to Ossus. As I hear, it has, to Tython… too. So tell me, Gnost-Dural… how did the Jedi find their ancient home? And what have they uncovered, from the old fountainhead of the Force?”

    Gnost leaned back in his seat, sighing a little, and readied himself. He signaled to Tau Idair abruptly. “Tau, my friend – bring me tea… a nice, large and hot pot of it. I have a long story to tell… and I wish to sooth myself before I begin, so I may tell it the best…”

    * * *​

    3628 BBY…

    About a year and a half passed, as the colony slowly grew, so far concealed from the gaze of the Sith, be it either of their Empire sprouted from the nearby world of Dromund Kaas, and venerable Korriban… or the new, Eternal Empire, in the Unknown Regions of the galaxy, that had uexpectedly unleashed itself upon the unsuspecting settled galaxy a few years ago, attacking Republic, Jedi, civilian and even Sith alike, with barely any discriminating intent behind the action. Founded secretly by Emperor Valkorian, the fanatical legions of Zakuul and other terror troops seemed determined to enact a final sanction upon those seen as having failed their ruler only a few years before… or of bringing them at least, sharply to heel. In that time, Gnost had lost touch with many of his old friends, including Grand Master Satele Shan… who, as he had told Willm Lywin the day he brought him to Ossus, had led the expedition that finally located Tython, thought by many to be the lost birthplace of the Jedi religion.

    There, precious secrets and knowledge, even relics… had finally come to light, over time. Remnants of the great temples of Kaleth and of Anil Kesh, the Martyrium of Frozen Tears, and the Seeing Stone, to name a few: whilst some had crumbled into sad piles and remnants, others still endured. Amazingly… the First Blade, a relic from the time of the early Je’daii, of Garon Jard, Cala Brin, and Rajivari, had also been discovered only a few years ago. In a terrible conflict called the Force Wars, Rajivari had stolen the blade and concealed it, whilst plotting to strike at his fellow council members, and eliminate them. The very first lightsaber ever crafted by Jedi hands had vanished utterly from sight… and within a few years, terrible storms had wracked Tython, eventually driving the surviving Force users away from the planet, over twenty millennia ago.

    Since that time, the Je’daii – now known as Jedi – had lost so much of their past, but had gained a new home, and new friends, and a new purpose within the Galactic Republic that had arisen in the centuries that followed. The fragmentary stories unearthed by Gnost, by Satele Shan, Tol Braga and Yuon Par, had seemed fantastical at first… legendary, even farfetched: stories of ancient pyramidal spacecraft, Rakata warriors wielding dark powers of their own… flying rancors… it had overwhelmed many, for a time. And much had been left uncatalogued and unconfirmed when the Jedi had again fled the planet. Gnost hoped they would be able to return someday… soon, hopefully, once the Sith were defeated. Already, rumors were rife that Emperor Valkorian was slain… still, Gnost had heard that bit of good news before, and was skeptical it was an assured truth this time, either. Stories of the new Eternal Alliance continued to spread… an alliance, it was said, between a legendary Jedi figure known as the Outlander, and of others, even of some senior Sith, such as this Lana Beniko many now spoke of. Those who had helped turned some of Valkorian’s weapons and minions against him, and brought his onslaught to an end… at least for now.

    Gnost was still greatly unsure what to make of all of that… but the possibility was becoming clear to him, over time: peace, some kind of reconciliation… with Sith. Was it possible? Was it now a valid outcome, that certain Jedi and Sith could come to trust each other, to some extent, and go forward in, if not true peace, then at least mutual coexistence? Personally, Gnost was far from sure it would last… all he had seen of the Dark Side suggested it dominated its servants and fed their rapacious desires quite utterly, spurring them on to greater conquests, greater anger, and greater cruelties. The Sith Empire had time and again enslaved people, conquered or bombarded worlds, seized riches – and then more often than not, had fought among themselves, before too long. Knight vs knight… warrior vs warrior, apprentices vying with one another, and Lord vs Lord, with ordinary people and vassals caught viciously in between, more often than not. Others had sought control over nature and life, even immortality itself… with Gnost’s own intensive reseaches into the history of the Sith confirming that, and even being confirmed by reports of Sith defectors, such as Sajar, and Praven… that the Emperor, variously known as Tenebrae, Vitiate and Valkorian, had succeeded, in many respects, in this arcane goal. Had lived for perhaps as long as fourteen, perhaps even fifteen centuries, before he had finally been slain (they now hoped)

    Unless the Sith greatly changed, Gnost could not truly see peace ever dwelling within their hearts… only perhaps, a contentment for a time, to rule the worlds they already had. But even a hundred worlds in their grasp would be a price very steep to pay, for the freedoms and lives of many people. After the Treaty of Coruscant, almost twenty five years ago, it had seemed like half the galaxy had been about to fall into the clutches of the feuding dark lords and magicians. Peace had lasted barely more than a decade before terrible new battles began – superweapons, like the Desolator, unleashed… Taris devastated again. And more attacks upon the Jedi. Even the cult of Revan, returning… now… that was a story still to be properly catalogued, Gnost mused to himself, and quite a tale all by itself. For now, he preferred to consult with an old friend on the matter…

    “And so what do you think, master Lywin? Can the Sith ever know peace? Or better yet, the Light again… restored to it?”

    “Nothing has so far allowed this, for the most part,” Willm said, sighing, and huffing through his capacious nostrils. “Some have returned… many not living for long. Ulic Qel Droma… he returned, at great cost, and having lost nearly everything. He lived another ten years before passing from life… somewhat at peace, I heard, from Grand Master Sunrider. Revan also returned… but he practically had to become an entire new mind and personality in order to do so. And he too vanished, within a few years of his return… maybe he returned to the Dark, in that time?”

    “They say he returned… and helped to defeat the Sith Emperor, Vitiate. The first time at least… the shavit keeps cheating the reaper, just when we think him finally laid to rest. That Revan again passed into the light, at the end… but I am not sure what to make of such stories. This is a time of legends… of tales meant to inspire hope, and raise spirits. Many are being told now – some even contrary to each other. New heroes, like the Barsen’thor, the Outlander… even my friend Satele is sometimes spoken of in such terms. Rumours reach me she is returning to Coruscant to teach, even now.”

    “Stories can be powerful, my friend… and I would know. I have collected so many, over the years. I hear you have done the same… and begun to become a part of many yourself, these days. Still… there have been successes: Sith can be redeemed… something the Jedi of my day thought impossible. Sajar, Praven… prominent defectors, who returned to the embrace of the Light, and gave us much help and information. Even this Lord Scourge, briefly, for a time, I hear.”

    “Yes – that is true. Tol Braga redeemed Sajar, and the Hero of Tython did so with Praven too. We learned many secrets from them – about the Emperor, his empire, the powers and the teachings… things we must guard carefully against, from now on. One troubles me in particular… this ‘Force walk’ or spirit-walk, that has been attributed to the Sith Lords Kallig and Nox: the harnessing of departed Sith spirits, as servants and sources of power, boosting the raw energy of the one who commands them. Such a power could rival that of Nihilus’ perhaps, if developed to its ultimate potential extent?”

    “Alarming indeed – something known to the more ancient Sith, and perhaps taught at the Malachor Academy, maybe?” Willm asked somberly.

    “Sajar confirmed some of those stories, and he did indeed say the technique had been studied there, as well as on Korriban. There are supposed to be many Sith spirits there… and sometimes they fight back, viciously. More worrying still was rumors that the technique had been perfected once on some planet called Ixigul, where the ‘dead often walk’… and that the Emperor was seeking out this power. Sajar did not know how successful he had been, however. It is secrets such as this that make me worry we will never be rid of that sorcerer,” Gnost said bitterly. “Or perhaps of some successor, in millennia to come, maybe, who could rise to such power. Ixigul – whatever it may be, must be found someday. Its threat eliminated, or contained.”

    “I think even Darth Marr would have agreed with us there,” Willm replied steadfastly. “And perhaps this Lana Beniko would too – both have shown willingness to cooperate with the Jedi on some things. Both were also horrified by what Vitiate intended… the exploitation and draining of life on a vast scale, to feed his immortality and power. Such a danger is an existential threat even the more craven Sith lords can hopefully understand.”

    “And hopefully not covet equally, too – hungry dragons, set on dark desires of their hearts,” Gnost replied darkly. “If you do not… mind that analogy, here,” he added mindfully.

    “It fits well enough – my people have known darkness too,” Willm replied gloomily. “Although I find it harder to understand… a willing descent into unreasoning and covetous madness, as opposed to one stemming from mental derangement: the end result is also usually identical – but the Sith do still reason as well, and do greater harm as a result. Their minds remain somewhat flexible. That is what makes them the greatest threat to the Light we have known… one to dwarf even dragons like myself.”

    “You do also seem quite tired, these days, my friend,” Gnost said softly. “Do you see yourself returning to Coruscant this year?”

    “Perhaps… I am rather old now, and cannot see myself having many more years left to me. I am glad we have had this time together, and that I have been able to pass on my wisdom before my mind begins to slip from me. My grandfather also became a bit odd at the end… towards the last years of life, he began to wander the stars. And he never showed up at the burial ground… the great graveyard of dragons.”

    “And where, old friend, is that…?” Gnost asked, almost teasingly.

    “Ah, young friend – that is a secret! And an old, and sacred one, which is not mine to tell. As to my own fate, I have not chosen it yet. Although…” he said wistfully… “I have never seen where the purrgil ultimately go. It’s said by some they go far beyond the galaxy itself… and I have truly never seen that before. Do you know the story of the purrgil, and the old spacers who first studied them, Gnost-Dural?”

    “Only parts,” Gnost said indulgently. “Perhaps you could regale me, before the midnight chimes?”

    “Settle back, then friend – and let me think where to begin…”

    * * *​

    3618 BBY…

    In the end, Willm Lywin did visit Coruscant again. He had not seen it in a very, very long time, by this point. Long ago, his family had chosen his name based on one of the people they had met there in that era, and he had borne it with distinction since, one of many new names, words and phonemes that had worked their way into the Duinugowuin culture over the last twelve thousand years. Their people had roamed the Ash Worlds for millennia, known to early spacers from the Tion kingdoms, and passed off as legends and fables for the most part… celebrated on Duinarbulon and other worlds, and then told in children’s stories long afterward, in and outside of the Republic.

    So his return was feted for a time, in a year of what seemed like growing peace, as fewer and fewer assaults seemed to be mounted against the Republic. Perhaps the great galactic war had finally reached its terminus, after more than six decades now? The Sith Empire collapsed more into disarray every year it was said, with more and more civil wars, coup attempts and ousted leaders. Most of that had come from infighting rather than a genuine uprising of the wider populace, however, but their outlying worlds were increasingly being left under looser control, and looking more to their own affairs. Many of the figures of the past were no longer seen… even Sajar had disappeared, last Willm had heard. The Jedi Temple, once devastated on Coruscant, was now greatly restored, and new generations of Jedi students were growing in wisdom and power. It was hoped a golden age would soon be around the corner again… as it had been in the days of Blotus, and Fillorean… even back to the Jedi Chancellor Biel Ductavis.

    Willm was a bit skeptical – but there was much cause for optimism. He did not speak to many of the Jedi Council these days, and was sure his mind was just beginning to go. At five thousand four hundred years (in trifling human terms at least) of age, he was now decidedly, venerable. Still, he had enjoyed a few fruitful discussions with Satele Shan, now entering her eighties he estimated, and Gnost had been even older. He had taught more students, and passed on his wisdom… from a time when the Sith had been barely a rumour to the Jedi, rather than their dark reflection, most ardent enemy, and greatest fear… twisting them often, into acts of great heroism, or of alarming desperation.

    “Fear is the the most dangerous foe…” he had once told a student on Teya, many centuries ago. Now Willm was afraid too… but for different reasons. Afraid he would never know the peace he had known in those early days, whilst travelling with his praxeum training ship, when he had first explored the wonders of the Force, under the light of so many strange stars. Never feel so at one with the Force again… like the Jedi writer Trayos Toreggen had once written so vividly and beautifully about.

    Within days he made his request of the Jedi Council – and asked to go away… out into the stars again. He expected he would not return… and although he did not openly state as such, he suspected several of them had understood his subtext well enough. The Jedi had survived… had prospered… and he had served them well, longer than any other of the Order, undoubtedly.

    It was time for peace – if not in the whole galaxy, then within himself. Time to relinquish attachment to regrets, anxieties, failures of the past, and fears for the future: A time to be at one.

    Out into the stars he roamed, seeing many of his favorite nebulas one last time – passing the Marasan one along the way. After a while he came to a distant, quiet world called Seatos – marked by the remains of some old civilization, apparently inclined towards the Force, in some mystically mannered way that Gnost-Dural would surely have found fascinating. So too… would Vandar. So too even… might Ajunta Pall, who he had once briefly known and seen so much potential in… but no. All that was past… and all that was now peace: no more attaching to regrets.

    He was in orbit some time before he saw them… the great whales of space… the Purrgil: huge, bulbous bodies, trailing tendrils behind them, rear portions undulating as they propelled themselves by strange mixtures of chemistry, energy manipulation, pure will – and now, he suspected, the Force as well. Wiser than many suspected perhaps… back to the very early days, when primitive spacers had figured out some of the earliest clues to faster than light travel, by studying them, epochs ago. Jedi had also studied them, back in Willm’s youth, and prior – though he feared much was lost of that knowledge, now.

    They were wary of him, sensing his raw intellect and energies – but he soothed them via the Force, touching their minds, inquiring of their plans. And finally they granted him his old wish.

    Willm Lywin settled within the mouth of one the creatures, undigested, protected and safely embraced. Energy coarsed through the great creature’s bones, stomachs and organs, trailing into their rear tendrils… and they opened the heavens before them… leaping into the often unknowable realm called, somewhat reductively, ‘hyperspace’, by those who used it for profane commuting around the galaxy.

    They travelled far, for what was surely weeks… and emerged in a new place. A new galaxy, Willm sensed, falling into orbit around a distant world.

    And there, amidst the light of strange stars… Willm Lywin embraced his peace, and became fully one with the Light.
     
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  14. HMTE

    HMTE Jedi Master star 2

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    That was really beautiful.
     
  15. Lady Delpheas

    Lady Delpheas Previously Delpheas star 3

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    Alright, so here I am catching up on the last few Tales.

    First up Divided Empire and Politics in Black by @Sinrebirth

    I want to say that these were some great explorations of the Imperial Minions in the era of Endor and beyond. And you clearly put a lot of work into the fleet movements and getting the different continuities to match up. I loved seeing Sloane and Rax, two of my favorite d-canon Imps. And Palpatine waking up on Byss was great. As HMTE noted it was cool to see the different names for Jacen mixed in here, as well as Sidious actually name-dropping Caedus as a concept. Your excellent Sidious POV here and in the Pellaeon Collection make me want to re-visit my I, Necromancer and just make sure it meshes well with what you've added since I first wrote that.

    And it was also fun to see Mas shed his "ahh don't kill me" persona from Aftermath to lead us into his later Legends story. And also Borsk, a character I love to hate (and also wish that he, along with the Diversity Alliance, weren't veering close to the stereotypical "member of oppressed group goes to far in being angry at the oppressor group" trope)

    I also appreciate how both here and in Power Struggle you expand on the party system in the Senate to help it make more sense. Tying characters like Mon and Daala to parties we never got connections for. And the teases for the Vong.

    All these bits just make me excited to get to NJO...

    I'll come back to TOR: Imagine Dragons later.
     
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  16. Chyntuck

    Chyntuck Force Ghost star 5

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    Sorry for falling behind on reviews for this thread! January-March is a busy time on the fanfic boards because we have this intense writing challenge called the Kessel Run that soaks up a lot of my time and energy; meanwhile, you One-Canoners have been busy little bees over here!

    I'm going to jump back in time in-universe and review stories that belong to eras where I already left reviews, since I have the One Canon elements for those period relatively fresh in my mind, but I hope I can eventually catch up with the whole lot (famous last words!) So, without further ado...

    Evasive Action: Turnabout of Doom by @Delpheas

    I really enjoyed the fantastical dimension of this story and the fact that, even by the end, we cannot know how much of this happened in reality and how much was only in Barriss's head. At first I thought that the vision itself was Shaak Ti forcing Barriss to explore her alternate past, but, as Barriss finds out herself, it might have been far more than that. And I loved how you used it to explain the beginning of Barriss's change of heart, when she decides to give Zondor a chance to survive – she's still very much the Barriss we know, who believes that the Jedi were in the wrong about the war (and in particular about the use of clone troopers) but she's coming to realise that there is something bigger than her at work here, and that maybe not all deserve a death sentence.

    (Also, a detail in the grand scheme of things, but a cute one: loved how you explained away Shaak Ti's multiple deaths!)

    A Wrench In The Works by @HMTE

    This was so, so good! You couldn't have thought of a nicest bunch of people to bring together in the same room and have stab each other in the back, and watching it was delightful – but the best part was the expanded role you have to Galen in his secret rebellion against the Empire. He's not just the man who gave the Death Star a crucial weakness and managed to communicate it to the Rebel Alliance, he actually managed to sabotage a number of other Imperial weapons projects by ensuring that they didn't receive funding. Like Lemelisk, I'm tempted to say that "I didn't think he had it in him", but it makes perfect sense – every word of the story makes sense, from Galen's thoughts about Qwi Xux to his silent snide comments about his fellow scientists, his arguments against the Dark Troopers and next-generation TIE fighters, and his clever shmoozing of Tarkin. I also really liked the little detail that he doesn't know where the meeting is being held, which is something you'd very much expect in a paranoid police state like the Empire. Very, very nicely done!

    I'm stopping here for today because the next story on my list is a long one and I want to do it justice, but I'll do my best to be back soon.
     
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  17. Sinrebirth

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    The New Sith Order circa 25 ABY

    Mas Amedda was dead.

    Darth Wyyrlok lived.

    Returning to Korriban had been a boon to his soul. The dark side revelled on this world, deeper than Coruscant or even Byss. It had been layered by millennia of Sith, and though it had that dead, stale edge to it, within its shadowed embrace, a fire had been lit.

    The New Sith Order.

    A play upon the title that the hated Luke Skywalker had bequeathed his students - as the New Jedi Order - they were indeed their dark mirror. The Second Imperium had been since its inception an experiment in the dark side - beginning with Dark Jedi such as the Reborn, and the artificially Force-imbued Shadowtroopers, before moving to Sith adjacent solutions such as the Disciples of Ragnos. Those having failed during the early years of the New Republic-Imperial Cold War, a longer term solution was sought, in the Shadow Academy, with Dark Jedi trained for years instead of darksiders mass produced, allied with the Nightsisters.

    The survivors of their defeat retreated to Korriban, and now Darth Wyyrlok was their master; as the Voice of the Emperor. It was so fulfilling to see master returned. It was another day in the New Sith Order, when he knelt to his white-eyed Master. His current clone had not been ready at the time of his demise on Onderon, so it was blind, which meant nothing to the mastery of his Emperor.

    “Lord Wyyrlok, report,” he said, gravely.

    “Master Plo continues to train Morto and Welk, and the Umbaran twins show promise with their unique techniques. My daughter excels, of course.” As Mas Amedda he had been used to managing fools, and Dark Jedi were no different, but more dangerous for it. “Dician rises among the youth swiftly, and should be watched.”

    “Her obsession with perfection is not Sith,” sneered Palpatine.

    Wyyrlok hesitated, and Palpatine gestured with malformed hand. “Speak.”

    “When you allowed me to act as Darth Wyyrlok at last,” he drawled, leading to his point, “I thought I would act as your Sith Apprentice, with Dark Jedi acting as your tools.”

    Palpatine stared with his milk eyes, waiting. Wyyrlok had said nothing warranting a response.

    “But instead you encourage the Sith teachings thoughout the Shadow Academy and Nightsister survivors…” Wyyrlok continued, “in breach of the Rule of Two, no?”

    “The Rule of Two has been surpassed by the Rule of One,” Palpatine said, drily. “My divine rule. None of these Sith are threats to myself - I could snuff them out without a thought.”

    Darth Wyyrlok opted to believe this estimation did not include himself. “So we inculcate them as Sith for no reason?”

    Palpatine’s face seemed to flare at the use of the word ‘we’, and Wyyrlok felt fear. His Master was precocious, he might punish the Chagrian for the comment. “The teachings of the Sith will provide them strength. Imperial science, simple patriotism, it is not enough. Even Brakiss, stealing the techniques that Skywalker used to teach, did not create warriors that could surpass the New Jedi.” He spat that last word. “So a Sith Order will rise beneath me.”

    “And should we create a threat?”

    “Then we shall crush it,” Palpatine chuckled. His laughter became a hoarse choke, and even though he was sitting, the white eyed clone slightly pitched forward, hand on his chest.

    “My Lord!” Wyyrlok stepped forward -

    A gesture from Palpatine, warding him away. “I am fine,” seethed his master. “This clone is imperfect, but it serves for now.”

    “Project Necromancer -“

    “I care not for its progeny,” Palpatine snarled. “Snoke is a malformed creation, not fit for my spirit. A monstrous mutated clone of myself could not host my essence.”

    “And Dathan -“

    “Nothing has been heard of my son,” spat Palpatine. “His daughter escaped Ochi, and Panshard was lost.”

    “Managing that Sith spirit was becoming troublesome, my Lord, he merely sought to use the Kiza girl to get to Exegol -“

    “I am aware,” Palpatine said, almost tiredly. Wyyrlok felt panic rise within him. If this clone died, then it would drag his Master into the netherworld. Its defects had trapped Palpatine, and only the care of the clonemasters had kept it alive. Inevitably Palpatine would be confined to a cage, recovered ironically from Onderon, that belonged to the ancient Sith King Ommin, who had draw upon the dark side so deeply as to liquify his own skeleton. The cage had kept him upright, and alive.

    When his Master was contained in that, the time would be nearly come. The Emperor would be at the edge of death. Wyyrlok was pained. “Is there no solution?”

    “The boy,” Palpatine intoned. “His fall will allow me to take his body, as I intended with Anakin Solo.”

    Wyyrlok nodded. At least, this time, Ben Solo would offer his master a teenage form, rather than that of a baby. Palpatine had been, at a distant, manipulating the youngest of the Skywalker brood, making sure his turn was embedded, and inevitable. Snoke was to take over the effort, to insulate the Grand Design, shortly.

    For years his Master was obsessed with taking a Skywalker body, becoming the Chosen One. Vader being ruined on Mustafar had prevented that from being realised, and Wyyrlok thought the matter settled - his Master sought clone solutions with essence transfer. But then the discovery of Skywalker’s twin children ignited that desire anew.

    Wyyrlok didn’t believe it was worth the trouble…. But now Ben Solo was his only hope. He could not bear to lose his Master… his dark light. “I understand, my Emperor.”

    There was a rap at the door to the chamber. Palpatine shifted, projecting strength with a new pose, leering. He was again White Eyes, the secretive leader of the New Sith Order - the code name he used around the Sith and their operatives. “Come.”

    The Sith Master Lomi Plo stepped in, ornate in her dark armour. Her lightsaber hung from her belt, a standard form hilt that emphasised the uniformity of the New Sith Order. Wyyrlok despised it, but Plo aspired to it, and she was powerful for it - despite her predilection for improper relations with her apprentices.

    “Speak,” Palpatine snapped.

    “The war has begun, your Majesty. Coral ships have been spotted at Helska, near Sernpidal and advancing upon Dubrillion.”

    And finally Palpatine smiled; at last. “The Rebel response?”

    “Minimal, my Lord, their forces focus on the Core, on the unrest that Nom Anor has caused.”

    “And the enemy strength?”

    “At least three dreadnought analogs, so far.”

    A nod from Palpatine. “Excellent. Ensure that the Sith and our other assets are not deployed along their invasion path. We do not want to lose resources unnecessarily. No opportunistic assaults on the Jedi will be authorised.” His tone was firm.

    Wyyrlok was not looking forward to all of the Sith being on Korriban at once. The politicking would hit a fever pitch. But his Master would handle it.

    “Ship!” A voice shouted across the cloister, and Palpatine looked to Wyyrlok; he was hardly going to rush across the floor in his state. “Coral ship!”

    Trepidation filled Wyyrlok; they had not a fleet to protect them, and the First Order would struggle to get ships to Korriban in time. Why would the Far Outsiders come here so early in the invasion? Checking he had his paired lightsabers, Wyyrlok swept out of the Emperor’s room, with Lomi Plo trailing behind.

    Arriving in the control room, Wyyrlok regarded the displays. “What are we looking at?”

    A tech spoke up. “Single craft, assault ship sized. A shuttle analog, perhaps.”

    So a scout? “Where is it going?”

    “Towards the Valley of the Dark Lords, the cloister of XoXaan, perhaps.”

    XoXaan, Wyyrlok wondered. The ancient Dark Lord of the Sith, one of the twelve Dark Jedi Masters exiled some seven millennia to Korriban. The tomb was empty, a secret chamber looted and the anticipated Holocron missing. Most of the artefacts of the original twelve were missing, what with the fact that nearly half of them died on other worlds outside Sith Space, during the offensive led by Tulak Hord - who spent the war betraying his fellow Lords.

    “Come, Master Plo, bring the Twins and your apprentices,” Wyyrlok affirmed. Speeder bikes were supplied for the four lesser Sith, and would escort the shuttle that Plo piloted for Wyyrlok.

    As they flew, keeping close to the surface to avoid detection, Lomi voiced her concerns. “We do not know the secret of the Far Outsiders communication, how do we prevent them from reporting back?”

    Wyyrlok stretched out with the Force, but either the enemy was invisible, or the miasma of Korriban obscured them, and he could not untangle the new arrival. “We shall isolate and secure them,” Wyyrlok affirmed.

    The team swept towards the tomb of XoXaan, and he frowned. The coral craft had crashed, it seemed, the landing besides the cloister was haphazard. Wyyrlok felt hope. A stray? A prisoner escaped perhaps?

    The shuttle dropped and Wyyrlok swept out. The speeder bikes were already present, the four Sith having ignited their red blades, surrounding the ship. The coral hull was cracked, and smoke emerged.

    “What a curiosity,” Wyyrlok said, softly.

    Lomi Plo stood besides him, cautious. “Lord Wyyrlok, I cannot sense the ship.”

    “Apparently we cannot detect the Far Outsiders in the Force,” Wyyrlok said, absently. “They exist beyond it.”

    “There is no life without the Force,” muttered Lomi.

    “Apparently the old truisms don’t apply to extragalactic species.”

    “But the species from the FireFist Galaxy were not so,” Lomi said, thoughtful.

    “A matter of distance, perhaps?” Wyyrlok wondered aloud. Though he himself believed the Far Outsiders had merely come from a unique satellite galaxy. Their species’ language was evident in this galaxy, apparently, which implied some historic connection.

    Suddenly though there was a surge in the Force that surprised them all - a chunk of masonry was wrenched free of the tomb edge and slammed into the coral ship, right upon the crack. The rock exploded into dust and debris, and Wyyrlok covered his face -

    “Rawwwwww!”

    It was a roar, inhuman in its pain, and suddenly a topless human leapt out of the coral ship, targeting Welk, Lomi’s human apprentice. Welk was caught off guard, and the man backhanded him, sending him tumbling -

    And then the stranger stretched out his hand and yanked the red lightsaber to his hand -

    Lomi Plo ignited her lightsaber, and charged. Wyyrlok watched the human, noted that his arm and eye appeared to be some kind of different flesh, as if a gnarled experiment.

    Definitely an escaped prisoner.

    The man lifted a hand and fired off a bolt of Force lightning that sent Morto, the Togorian, flying, and Wyyrlok arched an eyebrow. An escaped darksider.

    Lomi and the interloper clashed blades, giving Wyyrlok a chance to study him. The tattoos upon his face reminded him of something. But focus was needed. “Twins?”

    The twins in question were two young Umbarans, Nyss and Syll Nenn. They had a unique Force connection, having been brought up on the shadowed world of Umbara. That shadow lived within them, and they could bring others into their worldview, suppressing their use of the Force. It was an unpleasant feeling, at best.

    The twins held out their hands to the enemy and Lomi began to immediately slow, too. Wyyrlok tugged her back with the Force, saving her from a slash across her midriff, and with his other hand Wyyrlok unleashed a bolt of lightning -

    The stranger dropped to one knee, and then lifted his malformed arm up. The bolt played out across the limb, but it was reduced. Wyyrlok frowned. Far Outsider flesh?

    But Nyss and Syll had him in their field, and clearly the man was struggling. Wyyrlok kept up the pressure, even if it was less effective. He stepped closer, so he could examine the man better, as he struggled to keep his head even up.

    A memory clicked into place.

    “Tusken raider,” he said aloud, and he knew of an Old Republic Jedi who was unaccounted for. “A’Sharad Hett.”

    The dishevelled man looked straight up at Wyyrlok, and the Chagrian felt fear. He went to ramp up his attack, when Hett launched forward, lightsaber swinging -

    Wyyrlok stumbled, pained as a lethorn was shorn from his head by the blade. Hissing, Wyyrlok decided enough was enough -

    He swept his hand and the Force gripped and hurled Hett against the cloister wall - hard. Lomi Plo stepped in and launched a bolt of lightning too, and Morto and Welk stood besides her and joined in. Nyss and Syll shifted their field to encompass him too as Wyyrlok kept Hett pinned.

    At some point Hett stopped struggling, and Wyyrlok lifted a finger. They all stopped, but remained wary for the moment. “Is he dead?” Morto spoke first.

    “I hope not,” Wyyrlok said, grinning.

    Taking the unconscious form back to their fortress, Wyyrlok dumped the body in-front of his Master and dismissed the other Sith. It would be the talk of the Order, no doubt.

    “Hett,” Palpatine said, intoning.

    The man woke, as if tugged with a string. He promptly looked at Palpatine, mismatched eyes wide. “You lived -“ He lifted his hands, electricity curling around his fingers. “I can destroy you, at last, and take my revenge!”

    Palpatine lifted a malformed hand and crushed Hett to the ground. “You are nothing to me, Jedi.”

    Wyyrlok watched, impassive. Hett snarled from his position. “I am no Jedi, I became a Sith to kill you and Vader. XoXaan’s spirit chose me!” A surge of the Force and Hett began to struggle against the power being used on his body, slowly standing.

    Unphased, Palpatine flexed his hand and sent Hett crashing into the far wall. “Tell me your path, child of Tatooine.”

    Wyyrlok hesitated at the turn of phrase. Was his Master seeing provenance in Hett’s delivery?

    Picking himself up, Hett snapped back, bracing too hands on the floor. “There will be no need for politicking, and in-fighting, in my Order. The Sith Order will be primary, and we shall all be One Sith.”

    Palpatine chuckled, darkly. “I am the One Sith. I am all the Sith.”

    Hett grinned, even when pained. “You are dying.”

    The clones smile grew severe. “So are you.” A gesture, and in Hett’s mind the coral implants within him grew, transforming him into a monstrous creation. Wyyrlok sensed a part of the trauma being inflicted upon Hett.

    “No! I am - power, and strength, and I saw my future!” Hett clawed his hands and leapt into the air -

    “A vision,” Palpatine said, softly. “A side effect of your origins, no doubt.” He pressed anew with the Force, and Hett was flattened back to the ground. Wyyrlok felt the Tusken draw upon the Force even more deeply.

    “My - origin?”

    “You were a Jedi, boy. You maintain a tie to the light - and thus you can still see the future,” Palpatine was bemused. “And yet, even as you draw upon the Force, you cannot sense what is happening to you.”

    Gasping, Hett struggled again. “What, what do you mean?”

    “The creature inside you, it feeds on your struggle, on the Force. It will grow, and you will die, you will become a monster,” Palpatine crooned, delighted. “A dragon of flesh.” Another chuckle. “The Dragon of the Sith.”

    “I, I refuse -“ Hett released the Force and was promptly crushed to the stone floor. There was a wet crunch; his nose was broken.

    “Young fool,” Palpatine said, as if sermonising. “Then you will die.” Wyyrlok looked to his Master, and saw the blood trickling from his mouth. Hett began to struggle back, again, powerful but pathetic, more coral growing across his back, and another rivulet of blood dribbled from the other side of Palpatine’s lips.

    Palpatine would win, yes, but at what cost? How many years would be shaven from this clone?

    Wyyrlok touched his injured horn. He wanted Hett to suffer, and to die, but he was a powerful man. He could be useful… “My Lord?”

    “I know,” groused Palpatine, vexed, and he released Hett, who lay on the floor, panting. “You can die here, not even as yourself, as a monster, or you may live - and join my New Sith Order.”

    “The One Sith,” Hett hissed. “We shall be One, and under myself.”

    Palpatine paused. “You are correct, my body is dying. My physicians have failed to create new clones. Sabotage has destroyed my original genome.” Wyyrlok wondered where his Lord was going with this. “And yet, your body will give out sooner than mine, it seems.” A curled smirk. “But they fashioned ways in which to place my body in stasis, and leave my mind alive. A half-measure, and I do not accept it.”

    Hett was trying to stand, but barely managed to reach one knee. “Why are you telling me this?”

    “You retain the ability to have Force Visions,” Palpatine said simply. “I do not, and I require the skill to navigate the future. I have ignored the potential of those who can see forward in the past, to my expense.” Supreme Prophet Kadann had very specifically warned Palpatine about Endor, and he had ignored the Prophet of the Dark Side - and lost much for it.

    “I will not be used.”

    “Everyone has a role to play,” spat Palpatine. “I am the Emperor of the Sith, and Wyyrlok here, maimed as he is,” a smile that Wyyrlok did not appreciate touched his Lord’s lips, “is my Voice. But the One Sith can be yours to shape and command, from stasis. I will maintain your body, and your mind may enact your vision as my Eyes.”

    “I am no pawn.”

    “Then you will die, Hett, as nothing. As Master of the One Sith, of the New Sith Order, you will have power, and I will be placed to engage with my other projects.” Wyyrlok stiffened. Was he not to manage the One Sith? Was he to be subordinate to this… fallen Jedi?

    Practical power would remain with Palpatine, though…

    Hett appeared to be mulling it. “My vision will bring order to the galaxy.”

    “I am the best chance you have for that,” Palpatine chuckled, drily. “The resources of the Second Imperium, my projects in the Korriban necropolis, they will be yours. You will inculcated into the Grand Design, and the great impediment to order - the Jedi, will be destroyed.”

    Hett was silent. “The Jedi would not understand what I propose. Not the Old, nor the New that the Yuuzhan Vong spoke of.”

    Wyyrlok filed away that name. The Far Outsiders species? Hett continued to ramble.

    “Vergere did not believe I could succeed, she sought to continue the Rule of Two -“

    Palpatine’s lips turned down. “Vergere is among the invaders still?”

    “She is, as the familiar of a priestess, running her own scheme to bring the Yuuzhan Vong low, and find her own disciple.” Hett tilted his chin up. “I found her wanting, deceptive for its own end.”

    Palpatine sniffed. “She was a candidate of mine, yes, when Maul and Tyranus served me… but more trouble than she was worth.” A crooked smile. “Her vision is not mine. The Rule of Two no longer commands me, the Rule of One has for many years.”

    Hett’s eyes widened. “You already intended to reform the Sith?”

    “There is a New Sith Order here, in these halls. Not pathetic Inquisitors, or weak cultists. Sith, in all the ways I accept them.”

    “With you above them…”

    “With you above them, my friend,” Palpatine gestured a clawed hand. “Perhaps you’ll outlive me, then it will all be yours.” A smirk. “My path to survival is slim. We can be of use to each other, with your power and resolve, and my resources and organisation.” Wyyrlok could see the temptation before Hett, curdling in his heart and soul. Opportunity, where he had otherwise known, even if Palpatine was inevitably planning for his betrayal already.

    “A’Sharad Hett vowed to kill you,” the Tusken said, firmly.

    “Then kill him,” Palpatine sneered. “Rise anew. A’Sharad Hett died in the hands of the Yuuzhan Vong.” His voice acquired a slight reverence. “Became one with the Order, and you shall be reborn.”

    “As who?” Hett seemed suddenly entranced by Palpatine, and Wyyrlok knew, as with many people, his Lord’s spell had been weaved. He absently resolved to accept that he would now serve Krayt directly, and Palpatine, from afar. As their Voice. Therefore, he would rule, once more. The upper echelons of the Grand Design grew more filled - himself, Hett, Snoke, let alone Ren and their other tools in the New Republic Senate and Moff Council.

    Palpatine licked the bloody spittle from his lips, pleased.

    “Rise, Darth Krayt - the Dragon of the One Sith.”
     
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  18. HMTE

    HMTE Jedi Master star 2

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    Always a pleasure to see the gaps filled in. The One Sith as a piece of Palpatine's Grand Design is a fun way of reinforcing old Sheev as the ultimate big bad. It's funny that, in the long term, they will be his only lasting achievement in his post-Endor career. The Dark Empire, the Sith Eternal, the First Order and all its accoutrements. They all crumble like sandcastles hit by the rising tide.

    The One Sith are the only thing that last. And even they are destined to be swept away, given enough time.

    You can see that with Palpatine in this chapter. He is able to subdue Hett and bring him along side. But the exertion has done more damage to an already damaged body. But that's the darkside; short term gains at the expense of long term achievements. They win battles, but their actions ultimately cost them the war.
     
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  19. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    @HMTE, I always thought the Annihilator's were decent spiritual successors to the Xyston's and the Sith Troopers evolve into the form of absolute loyalty that is nurtured in the Necropolis, which itself turns into a novel reference to The Star Wars comics, as stardestroyers are starfighter sized by them.
     
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  20. Force Smuggler

    Force Smuggler Chosen One star 7

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    Yes!
    Glorious. Simply Glorious.
    Tying everything together.
    Will we get a story about Darth Krayt in the ST era?
     
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  21. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Definitely. :) The One Sith will be very relevant in the two years between the Ossus Massacre and Battle of Exegol!
     
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  22. Chrissonofpear2

    Chrissonofpear2 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Man - that was a really good one, and maybe one of your best so far.

    Seeing more of Krayt was very welcome, and Amedda is really growing into the role of Wyrrlok quite nicely.

    Hopefully Disney will not kill him off any time soon too - but if Pestage can survive such a thing, then this is no real biggy.
    Krayt being subordinate is obviously going to rankle him - but he also feels really reckless at this time. And rather overconfident.

    On the other hand, Palpatine has never looked more (seemingly) weaker too - though with a mind generally as sharp as ever.
    The story also makes a great bit of rhyming poetry with my last one - as we move from 'dragon of the Jedi' to 'dragon of the Sith'... and see the contrasts, including about being at peace vs being constantly at war, with one aspect of the universe, nature and the mind - or another.

    Small headache with Tulak Hord maybe... but that's a long term niggle anyway (working out his timeline, plus that of Kallig and Ergast, being one of the more difficult feats these days; would make Hord nearly up in Vitiate terms of longevity by some analyses)

    Overall though - really excellent work. And Legacy of Caedus also looks very promising.

    Shout out also to Delpheas for managing so well so far, in a rather difficult shared writing experiment indeed... joining the ranks and precedent of Karen Traviss, Christie Golden and Allston, and more - and being very up to the challenge!
     
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  23. HMTE

    HMTE Jedi Master star 2

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    The Mortis Quest: Episode I-Edge of the Abyss


    Chrelythiumn System, New Territories, 40 ABY

    The galaxy seemed to lurch from crisis to crisis.

    The Clone Wars. The Reign of the Empire. The Galactic Civil War. The Yuuzhan Vong. Each catastrophe had attracted to its name heroes and villains of all stripes. The catalogue was vast, and as her Uulshos Justice Droid body reclined in the seat of her Stealth-X starfighter, Ilum pondered her own place in that catalogue.

    Many initially mistook her as a mere droid. But the machinery she ensconced herself in was little more than a vehicle for her true form. Ilum was a Shard, a sentient crystal. On her homeworld of Orax, her fellow Shard were immobile, and spent the millennia of their lives in quiet contemplation. When offworlders had first arrived to their homeworld and revealed to their colonies the great scope of the galaxy, specially modified droids had been constructed for the Shard to inhabit. It was a radical change. To move, to come and go with but a thought, was an alien means of existing.

    Ilum, and others, had joyously welcomed the opportunity. With their new machine bodies, she and the other Shard had traveled to the stars, learning and experiencing all there was to encounter. Eventually, many of them had returned to their homeworld, and had shared with their immobile brethren all that they had discovered.

    Ilum had returned, but had not stayed. In her travels, she had encountered the Jedi Master Aqinos, an Altisian Jedi who had been expelled from the main Jedi Order for his theories regarding machinery and the Force. It was he who had opened her mind and soul to a wider universe. She, and some other shards, had proven strong in the Force.

    Together, under the guidance of Master Aqinos, she and her fellow Force Sensitive Shards had formed the Iron Knights, a collection of Shard Jedi dedicated to the defense of the Old Republic and the advancement of the Jedi ideal. After assisting the Jedi Master Mace Windu in the Arkanian Revolution, Aqinos and the Iron Knights had gone to Coruscant, to seek approval and recognition as official Jedi.

    When presented to the High Council, they had been met with suspicion. To many, the fusion of the Force with cold machinery was an abomination. Millennia had come and gone, but the Archives of the Jedi Order spoke with foreboding of the Ordu Aspectu and the Ascendant. The fusion of crystals, machinery, and the Force had been a path to Darkness in the past on two separate occasions. It was seen as madness for a third group to be encouraged when all precedents pointed to disaster.

    Ilum and the other Iron Knights had been disheartened, but they had stood by Aqinos as he stood by them. Aqinos's status as a heretic was upheld, and the Iron Knights were not recognized as official Jedi, though they were allowed to depart in peace.

    Rejected, but not discouraged, Aquinos and his Iron Knights had continued to work with the Altisian Jedi to maintain peace and justice where the Coruscant Jedi were not available. The work had been fulfilling, but Ilum had always regretted the disunity between the Jedi Order and its splinter sects. For a Shard community was all. Disunity was an appalling loss.

    It had been a long and trying existence, Ilum reflected. But ultimately, the rewards had outweighed the tribulations. She and her Iron Knights had been embraced by Luke Skywalker's New Jedi Order. It had taken the near extinction of the Jedi, but in this day and age the Jedi tradition was whole, as it should have always been.

    Ilum only wished the path to unity hadn't been so fraught with trouble. There had been times of peace after the fall of the Empire. The Galactic Concordance with the Imperial forces under Grand Vizier Mas Amedda and the later Bastion Accords with Pellaeon's Imperial Remnant had afforded some calm between the Galactic Civil War and the arrival of the Yuuzhan Vong. And, fortunately, the Dark Nest Crisis and so called Second Galactic Civil War had been more akin to regional conflicts than the full scale, galaxy spanning wars that she and her kin had lived through. Most of the galaxy had been calm while those struggles were waged.

    But the intermittent stretches of peace had proven themselves to be brittle. Regional conflicts, mop up operations, and brushfire campaigns threatened to plunge the galaxy into chaos time and again. They never succeeded, never spread, but compared to the Great Peace of the Old Republic the current peace was turbulent. The danger refused to recede, no matter what some might have hoped.

    The latest cause of this instability was the reason for Ilum's current mission.

    Abeloth.

    Ilum had been dismantling a cell of the Crymorah Syndicate operating in the Inner Rim when word had first come down from the Jedi Council.

    Abeloth was an abomination of the Dark Side. A creature of power and influence on par with the long departed Celestials. A being of ravenous hunger and ambition that sought to bewitch the entire galaxy and bring its peoples into her thrall.

    It was she who had been responsible for the pandemic of madness that had torn through the Knights of the Jedi Order. And while Master Skywalker had struck her down, he'd known that he hadn't truly killed her for good and all.

    Abeloth was more than mere flesh. She was a wound in the Force, more energy than matter. A simple lightsaber could wound her for a time, but Luke Skywalker had foreseen that one day she would return.

    And so Ilum and nine other Jedi Knights had been appointed to a great Quest. It was their duty to find the lost Dagger of Mortis, the only Force artifact strong enough to permanently kill Abeloth and prevent her from consuming the galaxy. They had spread out into the galaxy, tracking down as many clues about the mysterious One's and their connection to Abeloth.

    Ilum's quest had taken her far and wide. She had studied all the records she could acquire of Mortis, the hidden realm said to be a conduit through which the Force of the universe flowed.

    She'd read the reports written by Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Ahsoka Tano of their time spent in Mortis, and how they'd witnessed the Dagger's use to kill the Celestial called the Son.

    Ilum vibrated at a frequency that could have been translated as a sigh. Skywalker, Kenobi, and Tano had been eager to write their experience on Mortis off as a vision. But it was real. Real enough to be the key to this entire puzzle.

    And so Ilum had retraced their steps, back to the Chrelythiumn System where the Mortis monolith had first appeared to those three Jedi all those years ago.

    The monolith had long since vanished. The trail was decades cold. But something in the Force told her that this was where she needed to be.

    It had not been an easy sojourn.

    Chrelythiumn was a lifeless system on the edge of the galaxy, but it lay to the far corner of the Galactic North; just beyond the territory of the former Imperial Remnant.

    Ilum vibrated again, and commanded her droid body to recheck the Stealth-X's long range passive scanners. The droid's optics translated the data into a language matrix that the eyeless, lipless Shard could understand.

    Nothing. She was alone.

    But for how long? The recent revolution in the Remnant had been largely bloodless. Head of State Fel was said to be holed up on Bastion, surrounded on all sides with nothing but a part of the Imperial fleet standing between him and the usurper Snoke. This new Imperial state that had taken the Remnant's place, this First Order, was rattling its sabers loudly, denouncing the Galactic Alliance, the New Republic, and every peace treaty and act of cooperation going all the way back to Bakura. If she were caught so close to the First Order's territory, at a time when its border was in flux...

    It could mean war.

    Ilum centered herself. Like a stone, she allowed herself to sink into the deeper ocean of the Force. She was old, and her unity with the Cosmic Force was one cultivated using the mentality of her forebears. Millennia of contemplation had made the Shard infinitely patient, infinitely willing to receive knowledge.

    She did not demand. Did not take.

    She simply made herself available.

    "You were here once." She said to the void. "My friends need your help. Will you be here, with me?"

    Nothing happened. She didn't expect anything to happen.

    Days came and went. She did not move. She simply made herself available.

    And then...

    There was a ripple.

    A wave.

    Something contracted, and then expanded.

    The optics of the Justice droid flickered in recognition as the Stealth-X's sensor suite lit up.

    Ilum looked up and out through the cockpit, and saw it.

    Five kilometers tall. Five kilometers wide. It's obsidian surface was riddled with glowing red lines. It was ancient and sinister.

    The Mortis monolith.

    Cautiously, Ilum reached out her senses. There was so much about Mortis that they didn't know. Was this monolith a machine? Was there some hidden consciousness at work here? Some mechanism she could manipulate?

    More time passed. Days. A week. As she studied the monolith, she found that there was no way she could open it. And yet, she felt that she'd established a link.

    She needed reinforcements.

    Ilum caused the droid to look at the comm unit. She paused.

    Could she risk contacting the rest of the Jedi?

    She sent her senses out to the monolith again. No, she definitely could not compel it to open on her own. And even if she could, there was no guarantee that she'd ever get out.

    But she could not just leave, either. She had been able to summon the monolith. If she left, it was likely to disappear. And there was no guarantee that she could summon it back.

    She had to stay, she realized as she considered the connection between herself and the monolith. She was the anchor tying it to this place, this time.

    She needed other Jedi, strong in the Force, to help her open the monolith and gain access to what lay within.

    A tinge of regret shrilled through her lattice as she commanded her droid body to activate the comm unit. She had to trust that the Stealth-X encryption systems were up to the task.

    "Temple Control, this is Quest Knight-7." Ilum intoned. "I've found it."

    The Unknown Regions

    Far away, in two separate places unknown to most, two separate sets of eyes opened as a single mind pondered the great mystery.

    "there is a disturbance in the Force." The puppet spoke his Master's words, and thought them his own all the while.

    "My Leader?" Asked General Hux, arching an eyebrow in confusion.

    "just beyond our newly acquired territory on the Outer Rim. the...Chrelythiumn system." The creature called Supreme Leader Snoke ran his hand over his chin in contemplation, and never wondered what force moved his hand, or caused him to contemplate.

    Hux frowned, glancing down at a datapad in his left hand. "Some fleet movement by Fel's revisionists? The Resistance?"

    "no." Snoke hissed. "Fel's forces are bottled up at Bastion. he stands alone. this is something...older. Greater. a conduit of immense power."

    Hux pursed his lips, his eyes narrowing in contemplation. The Force was immaterial in the grand scheme of things to a man like him. But he'd known his Leader long enough to never doubt him. All of his premonitions had proven themselves correct.

    "If it is great enough to attract your attention Supreme Leader, then it must be acquired for the glory of the First Order." Hux concluded.

    Snoke leaned back in his throne. He waved a hand dismissively. "send a Maxima-A cruiser and a wing of TIE's. secure the Chrelythiumn system."

    Hux's frown deepened. "If this entity is of such importance to you, Supreme Leader, why not send a Resurgent?"

    Snoke slouched deeper into his throne. He interlaced his fingers. "our hold on the remnant's former space is still infirm. we are still accumulating centrist worlds that have seceded from the New Republic. if we display too much of our power too soon, the nations of the Galactic Alliance will rally against us. we are not ready."

    Hux nodded. "It shall be done."

    The General clicked his heels, saluted, turned smartly and left the Throne Room.

    Snoke chuckled to himself as the doors closed. Hux was always testing him. The General knew that they could not expose their full power yet, or even hint at it. The galaxy had to think the First Order were a band of harmless radicals. Dangerous enough to sway popular opinion in the Imperial Remnant, but of no threat to the New Republic's fine fleet.

    Hux knew this. But the General was always probing for a weakness, a failing, an oversight. He was loyal, but only to a point.

    Snoke chuckled again, but the laugh did not emerge from his own will. If only Hux really understood.

    Perhaps, one day, he would.

    Farther away, on a shrouded world, a dying man pulled his puppet's strings and reflected on the power long denied to him. It was close. Closer than it had been even at Lothal, all those decades past. So close that he could taste it.

    The power of gods.

    Mortis would be his. At long, long last.

    Up Next: The Sword of the Jedi and the son of the Grand Master embark on a critical mission.
     
  24. Chrissonofpear2

    Chrissonofpear2 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Mar 25, 2020
    Well we're really moving faster now...

    Have to admit, I never expected to see the Iron Knights ever again - not that I had kept up with all the details about them, either.

    Wild times may very soon be ahead.

    What's next? Tho Yors turning into World Devastators...;) ?

    As for the revolution on Bastion - that ought to be very interesting indeed.

    (Not sure also if Snoke would remain in the shadows to all but an inner circle for a while, too...?[face_thinking] )
     
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  25. HMTE

    HMTE Jedi Master star 2

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    Feb 7, 2021
    Trying my best to bring back the minor D-tier characters @Chrissonofpear2 . First Ikrit and Marda Ro in my last story, now Ilum. Why? *Shrugs* I guess it's my way of averting the Main Characters Do Everything Trope. It's nice to bring in a minor character now and again to add a fresh perspective. It's not like they're doing anything. And the main characters are rather busy in this time period.

    Wild times indeed are a'coming. And I'm going to do something controversial. Real controversial. So controversial that the characters in the story will debate it. But that probably won't be until Episode III.

    Episode II of Mortis Quest will be coming out in a week. I've got part of it written out already. Hope to have finished writing Episode II in the next few days, and will then send the draft off to @Sinrebirth for approval.

    We're in the super early days of the "public" First Order. We know that Snoke was a public figure known by the galactic population by the time of the Sequels, which is about a year and change after this story takes place. Right now the "First Order Revolution" (need to come up with a cooler name) is still happening. Planets are still in the process of leaving the NR to sign on with the FO. Everything's up in the air in what used to be the Imperial Remnant and no one's sure what's entirely going on. I'll be going into that a bit in Episode II.