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A Complicated Friendship: Story of Jagged Fel and Jaina Solo *GUESS WHAT!? New Post on 3-25-03*

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  1. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    A Complicated Friendship:
    The Story of Jag Fel and Jaina Solo


    A little note to the reader: Hey, what?s up everyone. I thought that I would give a short background for my weird Star Wars Universe. It kind of follows the cannon set up in the books, but it is also an AU story. You?ll see as you go along. I hope that you enjoy!

    Disclaimer: All of these wonderful characters belong to the great George Lucas, Timothy Zahn, Michael Stackpole or Kevin J. Anderson: With the exception of the Jade-Skywalker children, minus Ben, the oldest Antilles (you?ll see what I?m talking about), and the Fel children?s names, excluding Jag Fel. I AM MAKING NO MONEY OFF OF THIS.

    Dramatis Personae

    Luke Skywalker (Jedi Master; human)
    Mara Jade-Skywalker (Jedi Master; human)
    Benjamin Brady Jade-Skywalker (Jedi Knight; twin brother to Taylor; human)
    Taylor Naberrie Jade-Skywalker (Jedi Knight; twin sister to Ben; human)
    Corran Biggs Jade-Skywalker (aka C.J.) (Jedi Knights; twin brother to Ami; human)
    Amidala Hannah Jade-Skywalker (Jedi Knight; twin sister to C.J.; human)
    Han Solo (Captain, Millennium Falcon)
    Leia Organa Solo (New Republic Ambassador; human)
    Jaina Padme Solo (Jedi Knight; Lieutenant, Rogue Squadron; twin sister to Jacen; human)
    Jacen Lucas Solo (Jedi Knight; twin brother to Jaina; human)
    Anakin Christian Solo (Jedi Knight; human)
    Corran Horn (Jedi Master; retired Rogue Squadron Captain; human)
    Mirax Terrick Horn (Captain of Pulsar Skate; Trader; human)
    Valin Horn (Jedi Knight; human)
    Jysella Horn (Jedi Apprentice; human)
    Wedge Antilles (retired General, Rogue Squadron; human)
    Iella Wesseri Antilles (New Republic Intelligence; human)
    Sean-Connor Antilles (Lieutenant, Rogue Squadron)
    Syal Antilles (Oldest Antilles daughter)
    Myri Antilles (Youngest Antilles daughter)
    Baron Brady Soontir Fel (General, Imperial Remnant; human)
    Syal Antilles Fel (Baron Fel's wife; human)
    Valin Fel (Jag's older brother; human; deceased)
    Jade Fel (Jag's older sister; human)
    Jagged Fel (Colonel, 181st Imperial Squadron; Remnant; human)
    Neeja Fel (Jag's younger brother; human)
    Zena Fel (Jag's younger sister; human; deceased)

    Ok, I know I got a little carried away with the names. Some of them will make sense later. In the case of Soontir Fel, I really always thought that Soontir was a stupid name, no offense to the guy who made him up. So, I have always liked the name Brady, so I decided to change it to that. All will be revealed in time.

    P.S. This is mainly a Jag/Jaina story. Just thought I?d let you know before I get started. The characters listed above are just the main families used in the story. Other secondary characters will be used also.

    Don't worry, I am about to start. Luke and Mara have 4 kids, 2 sets of twins, Ben & Taylor and CJ & Ami. Of course the Solo kids are the same, as well as the Horn children. I thought Wedge should have a son so I gave him one. The Fel's I believe have five kids but only one, Jag, is named so I used my imagination. This is kind of an AU timeline, so in this story Mara and Corran are twins. The Horn background history is the same, just Mara is included now. But she didn?t find this out until right before her and Luke got married (she was still the emperor?s Hand, with no memory of her past). I hope to expand on this in later stories. NOW ON TO THE STORY!!!!!

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    A Complicated Friendship:
    The Story of Jag Fel and Jaina Solo

    Author's Note: This story begins at the end of DTII: Ruin. The adults? ages are the same. I will say that the teenagers ages are as follows: Valin Fel, 22; Jade, 21; Jag & Sean-Connor, 20; Jaina, Jacen & Neeja, 18; Anakin, Ben, Taylor, Valin Horn & Zena, 17; CJ, Ami, & Syal Antilles, 16; and Jysella & Myri, 15. I hope things haven?t conflicted too bad.

    Chapter 1:
    The Argument

    Shortly after the battle for Ithor, the fighter squadrons regroup on the ?Ralroost?. Among these groups are Rogue Squadron and the 181st Imperial Remnant. A huge discussion is going
     
  2. Jedi_Jaina_Durron

    Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Knight star 5

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    HAH! I get first post, I get first post! YAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! you finally did it! I'm sooooooooo excited. And I won't even say anything about my dislike of Jag, I'm so excited! Thanks, JFH!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    My, my aren't we excited. :) Hope you enjoy.
     
  4. Jedi_Jaina_Durron

    Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Knight star 5

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    I will be your faithful upper on this fic. 8-} Up! People, read this!
     
  5. Gr-Adm-Thrawn

    Gr-Adm-Thrawn Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jade Fel Horn Interesting beginning - can't wait to hear some more !

    I will comment though that the 'personae dramatis' was a real helper.

    "A credit for your thoughts " .. ;) good one !

    more ? please ?

    the Admiral
     
  6. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Hey, thanks for the posts guys!

    JJD-glad you like it so much even though you are one of those Kyp fans:)

    Admiral-glad you like it so far. I thought the character list would be helpful since I changed a few things.

    Next post should be up tonight or tomorrow. Keep reading, enjoy and reccomend it to others. I want lots of readers.
     
  7. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Just thought I'd up it in hopes of getting people interested, new chapter tonight!
     
  8. Jedi_Jaina_Durron

    Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Knight star 5

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    yay A new chapter! Not that I haven't already read it, but it's good! I'll read it again!
     
  9. Gr-Adm-Thrawn

    Gr-Adm-Thrawn Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Will be waiting for that one right .. HERE !

    sits down and starts waiting for the new chapter

    the Admiral
     
  10. Jedi_Jaina_Durron

    Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Knight star 5

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    *joins my Admiral* More!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Here's the next chapter, hope you enjoy!


    Chapter 2:
    The Challenge

    Elsewhere on the ship:

    Jaina Solo was about to enter the gym. The people on this ship were really getting on her nerves. The way the guys talked and acted really annoyed her. But something that probably bugged her even more were the thoughts she would have after these people made those comments. Like [/i]?Jag wouldn?t say that?[/i] or [/i]?he wouldn?t act that way.?[/i] Then of course, it was always, ?WHY am I thinking about HIM like that!? And to make matters worse, she just found out from Colonel Gavin Darklighter that the Rogues had been grounded until further notice. Talk about a wonderful day! So she decided to go to the gym to work off her frustrations. She went to the punching bag and started working on her kicking and boxing technique.

    Jag walked in to see her working out. ?Man? he thought to himself ?she?s pissed about something.? While she punched and kicked he stood in the doorway and watched with awe. Soon she was done, and basically collapsed into a heap on the floor.

    Soon she realized that someone was watching her. As she stretched out with the Force she felt that familiar flicker that was Jag.

    ?I?m not a performer.? She bit out. ?What do you want??

    ?What, it?s a public place isn?t it, a guy can?t work out when he wants to?? He added with a goofy grin.

    ?Whatever you want, I really don?t care right now.? ?He?s got a pretty cute gr?oh, no, I am not going there. He?s a stubborn, cocky flight-jockey, definitely not in the cute category. But maybe the roguishly handsome. I CAN?T BELIEVE I AM THINKING THIS!?

    ?Hello, galaxy to Sticks! Boy, you must really have something on your mind.?

    ?You have no idea.? She mumbled. ?Hey what?s up with you, there?s something bugging you also.? She said as she pointed a finger at him.

    ?Oh, nothing.? He said trying to hide his feelings. ?By the way, I want to apologize for the way I acted the other day. I shouldn?t have yelled like I did.? He added looking away, he wasn?t really good with apologies.

    ?Hey,? Jaina said, knowing he was uncomfortable she added that lopsided grin, ?Don?t worry about it.?

    ?How do you feel about sparring?? she asked him.

    His face brightened as he looked up and said, ?Is that a challenge, Lieutenant??

    ?But of course. When I win, you will tell me what?s wrong and I get to decide how to cheer you up.?

    ?Deal. When you lose, you must admit, once and for all, that the 181st Imperial Squadron is simply the best group of combat pilots in the galaxy.?

    ?Fine, but it?s not gonna happen flyboy.? She added with a sly smile.

    A little while later:

    Luke and Mara were heading to the gym for some saber practice, Wedge tagging along to watch. Even after all of these years spent around Jedi he was still fascinated by their weapons.

    As they walked to their normal room, they heard the sounds of people fighting coming from inside. They rushed to the counter, knowing that only family and friends were allowed in there.

    ?Who is in our practice room?? Mara demanded. Luke was just behind her with a worried look on his face.

    ?Um?I believe the last person to check into that room was Jaina Solo.? The lady replied nervously. She?d heard of the notorious temper of Mara Jade Skywalker. While she didn?t show it as much now as she did in the past, all you had to do was get on her bad side in order to see it.

    ?JAY!? the three adults exclaimed at once. The took off sprinting towards the room.

    When they arrived they found Jaina laughing like crazy with some guy pinned under her.

    ?Well that serves you and your big ego right.? Jaina cried.

    ?Hey, Sticks that wasn?t fair, you tripped me!? the guy protested, while finding her ticklish spots to make her get up.

    ?Sticks?? Luke asked confused. ?The only one that calls her that outside of the Squad is Jag Fel.? He added throwing a look at Wedge.

    ?Hey, don?t look at me!? He said throwing his hands up in defense. ?It was Mara
     
  12. Gr-Adm-Thrawn

    Gr-Adm-Thrawn Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    grabs a bucket of salted butter popcron and gobbles down a few before handing them to his regally beautiful neighbour.

    "Care for some, my Queen ?"

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    [face_laugh] - I like it ! funny , entertaining - a little bit cheeky but the readers never mind that ..

    My Judgement :

    MORE !!!!!!!!!


    the Admiral.
     
  13. Jedi_Jaina_Durron

    Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Knight star 5

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    Regally beautiful, huh? I like the sound of that. ;) I loooooooove popcorn. it's one of my favorite foods. *grabs some*

    Great as usual! More!!!!!!!!!!
     
  14. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Hey Admiral, what do you mean by a little bit cheeky?

    Thanks JJD, more soon.

    To anyone who reads this *cough*lurkers*cough* please post and let me know I am appreciated!:)
     
  15. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Here's Chapter 3, enjoy!

    Admiral: you still haven't answered my question :) .


    Chapter 3:
    The Discussion

    After their showers, Jaina and Jag met outside her quarters to head to the Mess Hall. On the way there Jag noticed that Jaina was off in space somewhere.

    ?Hey, Sticks, anyone home in there?? He asked waving a hand in front of her face.

    Brought out of her reverie she replied a little startled, ?Sorry, I was just thinking how long it?s been since the last time I saw my brothers.?

    ?You?re really close to your family aren?t you??

    ?Yeah,? she said smiling.

    As soon as she strolled into the Mess Hall someone basically tackled her.

    ?Sticks, are you ok.? He said as he tried to pull the guy off of her.

    She just looked up at him and laughed. ?What?? he asked confused.

    ?Colonel Jag Fel, meet my twin brother, Jacen Solo.? She introduced them as Jag helped her up.

    ?So I finally get to meet the famous Jagged Fel that Jay?s told me so much about.? He said with a grin.

    ?Shut up, Jace. I don?t like him like that? she thought towards her twin.

    ?Sure, ok, whatever you say.? He replied to her.

    ?Well, Colonel, it was nice meeting you, I had better get back before Mom, Dad, Mara and Luke send the search and rescue party.?

    ?Yeah, it was nice meeting you also Jacen, and please just call me Jag, everyone else does.? He said as he shook his hand.

    ?Alright catch ya later Jay.? He said as he hugged his sister. ?Ok, Jace.?

    After Jacen left, they went to get their food.

    As they sat down Jaina cleared her throat and began to speak.

    ?So what?s wrong with you Jag?? She said with a big grin on her face, ?You thought I had forgotten about our little bet, didn?t you??

    ?Well Sticks, I was hoping you would,? he grumbled. ?Well I might as well get this over with. The politicians for one are starting to annoy the crap out of me, especially my good ol? buddy Borsk Fey?yla. They?ve given orders to have my squadron grounded. How that idiot has control over a Chiss squadron, I?ll never know, nor do I want to. It just really pisses me off!?

    ?I was beginning to wonder why you were here and not on the Chimera.?

    ?That idiot Fey?yla is why. He came to the Chimera and said that since we were helping the NR in the war, that we had to follow his orders. Then he told me that my squad wasn?t needed right now. It?s like he?s trying to lose this war on purpose.?

    ?But that doesn?t explain what you are doing here.? Jaina wondered.

    ?Well when we were put on leave, they wouldn?t let us use the sims because we weren?t on top of the priority list. Wedge knew I didn?t just want to sit around and do nothing, so just before he left he came and asked me to come with him here.?

    ?Ok, so now that I know why, what are we gonna do about it.? She asked with a wicked grin.

    ?Uh?Sticks?Uh?I really don?t like that look you?re giving me right now. And what do you mean by ?what are we gonna do about it?.?

    ?I mean, what are we gonna do that will cheer you up. And don?t even spout off that this is war and we need to be grim crap, cause I don?t want to hear it.? She added with a glare that could rival her Aunt Mara?s.

    Jag just set there and looked defeated, ?Ok, what do you propose we do??

    ?Have you ever been camping?? She asked.

    ?Camping??

    ?Oh my gosh, you?ve never been. Ok, that settles it, we?re going camping.?

    ?Ok, whatever you say Sticks.? He said, thinking, ?what have I gotten myself into now?.

    ?GREAT! I?ll go make arrangements with Luke and Mara. Meet me at the hanger bay in an hour.?

    ?Ok, 1 hour.?

    ?You?ve got it.?

    A little while later at Jag?s ship:

    ?What have I gotten myself into now?? he wondered. ?I mean, sure I consider her a friend and trust her, but how come every time I get around her I have this funny feeling? Well I?m sure it?s nothing, I grew up in a Chiss society, not really used to being around other girls besides family. Yeah?that?s probably it. I mean what else could it be? We?re just friend
     
  16. Gr-Adm-Thrawn

    Gr-Adm-Thrawn Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jade Fel Horn Cheeky - you know ... amusing but mildly improper: amusing or endearing despite offending good manners, especially by being mildly sexually improper The stories are performed by a raconteur with warmth and a cheeky charm.

    I really liked the part where Jagged was pinned under Jaina. it's the terms you used (i.e. pinned) that I found .. you know. ;) but it doesn't mean i don't like it .. "au contraire" I love that style .. I just wanted to tell you I appreciated it ; that's all.


    Can't wait for the next : W E A R E G O I N G C A M P I N G [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    the Admiral
     
  17. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Ok, If you get someone else besides you or JJD to post I might have another one up by tomorrow :) if not you'll have to wait *evil grin*!
     
  18. Jedi_Jaina_Durron

    Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Knight star 5

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    i'll put a shamless plug on Resistance. I'll coherce peeps into reading it!
     
  19. Jedi_Trickster

    Jedi_Trickster Jedi Youngling star 1

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    <--self-proclaimed lurker

    Its great!! :) Can't wait to read about the camping trip! [face_mischief]
     
  20. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Yay, another person! j/k I'll try to get the next chapter up tonight, if not it will definately be up tomorrow.
     
  21. Lady_Tahiri

    Lady_Tahiri Jedi Master star 4

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    All right, I'll drag myself out of Lurkersville once in a while, but only if you keep up the great posts! Do we have a deal here? ;)

    UP
     
  22. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Lady_Tahiri, you have a deal. By the way I love your stories, I haven't quite made it out of Lukersville yet, but I'll try to. :)
     
  23. Risste

    Risste Jedi Youngling star 3

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    *delurks*

    I is here. Cool so far. I'm not usually a J/J reader, but you have my attention. Keep it coming!
     
  24. Jade243

    Jade243 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great story so far. I like it. :)
     
  25. Jade_Fel_Horn

    Jade_Fel_Horn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Since you guys were nice enough to delurk, or gather others to post I will post Chapter 4. Enjoy and keep posting!


    Chapter 4:
    The Camping Trip

    A Few Days Later on Yavin 4:

    When they had first landed on Yavin in Jag?s ship, he had been very nervous. Of course, he wasn?t about to let Jaina know that. He had heard so many stories about Jedi over the years from different Imperials. Most had been after the incident at Nirauan, and they hadn?t been good.

    ?Hey, Colonel, anyone home?? Jaina said jokingly.

    Snapped out of his reverie, he replied, ?Yeah, let?s get ready to go.?

    As they went down the ramp Tionne and Kam were there to great them.

    ?Jaina, it?s so good to see you. How is the Squadron treating you? How are Masters Luke and Mara? Is the war against the Vong going any better?? Tionne asked as she gave her a hug.

    ?Well, sweetheart, you don?t waste any time in getting to the point do you?? Kam said with a smile, then added, ?What I would like to know is, exactly who do you have with you young lady??

    ?Sorry, Master Solusar, Tionne this is Colonel Jagged Fel of the 181st Imperial Regiment, Jag this is Master Kam Solusar and Knight Tionne, they run the Academy for Uncle Luke.? They all exchanged handshakes. Jag with some hesitation, which Jaina noticed.

    ?Well it is very nice to meet the two of you.? He said while thinking, ?Everything I?ve heard about the Jedi so far has turned out to be a lie.?

    ?Well, we hate to run, but we have a camping trip to get to, the Colonel here has never been before, so I can?t wait to get started.? Said Jaina with a smirk.

    ?Gee, thanks Sticks, just tell the whole world.? Jag commented wryly.

    ?Ok, you two have fun.? Tionne said as they got their supplies and left.

    ?You know what,? Kam started as he pulled Tionne into an embrace.

    ?What?? she asked.

    ?The two of them remind me a lot of Luke and Mara.?

    ?Well, if that?s the case,? she said, ?let?s hope they realize it sooner than the two of them did.?

    Just as she finished her thought, a student came running out of the temple, ?Master Solusar, Tionne, there is a call from Master Skywalker inside for you.?

    ?Well speak of the emperor.? Kam said as he reached the holonet.

    ?Hey Kam, I?m not gonna ask what that remark meant.? He said with a grin as Mara appeared in the picture. ?We were just wandering if Jaina and Jag had arrived yet??

    ?Yeah, and I just got done telling Tionne how much they reminded me of the two of you.?

    ?Skywalker, don?t even think about asking that question,? Mara said mock-sternly. ?We already settled that with Antilles and yes we were that oblivious.?

    ?Yeah,? Tionne added, ?Let?s just hope that their courtship goes along a lot shorter and smoother than yours did.? They all laughed, hoping that was true.

    In the jungles of Yavin:

    ?So, you are dragging me through the jungles of this humid planet for what reason?? Jag asked wiping sweat from his brow.

    ?Well if you could be a little patient, we are almost there. Look there it is!?

    As they entered the clearing, a beautiful sight greeted Jag. A huge waterfall towered high above them emptying into a small lake. The bright sun reflected off the water, giving a beautiful glow to the wildlife around.

    ?Wow? Jag said breathlessly.

    Jaina just smiled and said, ?I thought you might like it here. Well don?t just stand around, help me set this tent up.? He just looked at her embarrassed. ?Don?t tell me you don?t know how to put a tent up.? He just looked down at his feet. ?Oh my gosh, you don?t.?

    ?Well sorry to disappoint you Sticks, but the Imperial Navy doesn?t stress things like that while we are training for flight combat.? He said with a bit of heat.

    ?I?m sorry Jag, I didn?t mean to seem like I was making fun of you. I can always teach you now.? She added with a grin.

    ?Ok, I?m sorry I got upset, it?s just that I?ve never been able to act like a normal teen before. This is all new to me. But I am glad to my first camping experience with one of my best friends.? He s
     
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