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Saga Asajj Ventress in ATOC and ROTS? Good or bad idea? With Maul in Dooku.Read my idea.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by generalaayla, Apr 7, 2006.

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  1. generalaayla

    generalaayla Jedi Youngling

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    What if GL made Asajj Ventress Sidious' new apprentice instead of Dooku? I know she aws the original idea for Sidious' apprentice but i think she is nore Sith like anyhow. Plus adding Maul and Dooku back in.In my version of TPM,Maul gets his arm chopped off,and Obi-Wan thinks he is dead after seeing Maul not breathing.Obi escapes,so does Maul.This is my first post on this board so i am probablly not WAY too good with all this but OK,here's my idea for ATOC and ROTS:


    Asajj Ventress is Sidious' new apprentice after Darth Maul had failed in TPM.Maul has replaced his severed arm with a mechanical one and is now a Jedi Hunter (like Aurra Sing) and has hired an old politician,Count Dooku to help Nute Gunray form the Confendaracy of Independent Systems.Asajj,not knowing about Dooku's relationship with Maul,who she thinks is dead,helps as she captures Padme,Anakin,and Obi.After the battle in the stadium,there should be an added scene with Mace Windu and Aayla Secura dueling Asajj.Meanwhile,while Obi and Anakin are chasing Dooku,Maul jumps in,shocking Obi-Wan.They should have a long discussion,and defeats Obi.He chops off Anakin's arm saying,"Now you feel the pain just as I."He is about to kill them when Yoda comes in.Maul duels Yoda,with it ending the same result as with the Dooku,Yoda fight.Then,in ROTS,they should bring back Dooku,Maul and Ventress.Maul,still unknown to the Sith,has killed many Jedi,including Adi Gallia(switching her fate from Grievous to Maul).He has connected them to make more double bladed ones,using them for battle also.During the Battle of Coruscant,Anakin murders Asajj instead of Dooku(the same way as he killed Dooku in the REAL ROTS).Greivous escapes blah blah blah, Maul and other Jedi throughout the movie(one fight will show Maul slaying Shaak Ti,just like Grievous did in the ROTS deleted scenes).Obi sent to Utapau,kills Grievous,and at the massacre on Mustafar,Maul is guarding the Seperatists as Anakin arrives.After murdering every Seperatist except Dooku and Gunray,Maul duels Vader.Maul gets injured,and Anakin slays Dooku by chopping him in half,and Gunray like original.Then,Maul gets up and they continue to duel.The duel goes on until Padme's ship arrives.Vader knocks Maul out and visits Padme.The Obi-Vader duel starts. After Vader getting his injury,Maul and Obi-Wan duel to the death.This duel is long with lots of emotions(the same as the Vader-Obi duel just before it),Obi wounds Maul,and leaves with Padme.Sidious discovers Maul and Anakin,both wounded.Sidious gives Maul the right to be their bodyguard.Then he dies in ROTJ in a duel with Luke(a duel on Endor).Luke and Maul are fighting on the LARGE tree houses on Endor.Maul slays some Ewoks,and then Luke chops his saber in half,slices Maul's chest,and Maul tumbles backwards to a loooong fall down onto the grass to his death and that continues the story.


    I know it was very dragged out but at least I have a good imagination What do you think?

    If you're ready to post a story you can do so, but this is not the proper forum for a "What If?" thread.
     
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