Barakin: Walking the Balance-An AU

This may seem incredibly odd but its an idea I've had foating around for awhile and I've finally worked up the guts to post it. Amaya is Luke's daughter in a galaxy were Force-sensitives have not been accepted for hundreds of years. Hope you like!

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Amaya Skywalker stared at the group of gaichou, outsiders, non-sensitives, whatever you called them they still were planning how to kill her. Looking around herself at the room, her eyes narrowed at the sight at the ysalamiri that were set in the corners of her room, to make sure that she would not be able to use the Force. She shut her eyes and prayed that some sort of the miracle would intercede before her execution. She hated her life, or at least the fact that she was going to die in at least an hour at the age of sixteen. She settled back in her bonds and waited for them to decide how she would die. By her own lightsaber, or maybe they would simply shoot her or maybe for variety torture her before her death in an attempt to gain information. If they did they wouldn't get anything from her, her father and five of her brothers were still alive, as well as her cousins and aunt. Her friends who had trained with her, learning about the Balanced Force which connected all the force-sensitives. Closing her eyes she forced herself to look back to her memories, to remember what they were fighting for.


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Good start and it sounds like a good plot!
Keep it up!

 

Please continue. This sounds very interesting!

 

Great start, but much much much to short young lady~!