Saga Black Heart ( V/P Padme is at Vaders mercy when she is captured by the Empire *suitless* [16/5/06])

This is my first Star Wars fic and post so please be kind

Disclaimer:Star Wars does not belong to me unfortunately. I don't own, you don't sue.
Title:Black Heart
Characters:Vader/Anakin, Padme and random others
Summary:Padme Amidala is taken captive and given to the dark lord of the sith. She must battle her growing feelings for the evil man behind the mask as he attempts to find redemption and fulfill his plans for the Emperor.
Author:Well me obviously.

Black Heart

Chapter 1: Strangers Among Us

Padme Amidala mingled with the bustling crowd, talking animatedly with fellow senators and receiving generous compliments from male suitors.

The war was raging in the galaxy and everywhere you looked, death and destruction was around the corner. The republic was slowly crumbling and the evil Emperor was gradually gaining control of the Senate.

Despite Padme?s best efforts, democracy was failing and innocent people were dying throughout the corrupted galaxy.

Using the evening to try and repair severed connections and unite the divided people, Padme sighed in despair as another hopeful young suitor asked her to dance. She had no time for idle relationships and merely wanted to restore peace to the galaxy.

?I apologise. My fellow senator, Bail Oragani, has called for me,? Padme lied, tucking her chestnut curls behind her ears guiltily. Casting a wary look at the disappointed man, she quickly hurried away, desperate to escape his lustful eyes.

Standing to the side, Padme scanned the room, suddenly noticing someone who seemed to be getting a lot of attention himself. A handsome young man was completely surrounded by a crowd of fluttering women and admiring men, all of who seemed to be listening intently to what he was saying. He had bright blue eyes, faintly tanned skin and dark blonde hair that seemed to rest just above his shoulders. He seemed vaguely familiar, but Padme was unable to figure out were she had seen him.

His face was alight with excitement as he talked passionately and Padme was unable to stop a rush of attraction she felt towards him and immediately blushed. Seemingly sensing her gaze, he looked up at her, momentarily forgetting his line of thought. A faint smirk washed over his face before he returned to his conversation, ignoring her blank stare.

Padme stood staring, unable to believe that a man had just caught her gazing at him. Shaking her head to regain her composure, she decided to walk past the mysterious male and hope to catch a glimpse of their conversation.

?My my, where did you do such things?? An old man was saying in admiration as Padme skimmed past. Clutching at her skirts, she pretending to be focused on the nearby refreshment, determinedly not looking in the blonde male?s direction as her heart thumped wildly in her chest.

?I?ve been very involved in the war,? the man replied, a soft smile curving at his lips.

?What?s your name?? One of the ladies asked flirtatiously, flashing him a smile.

The man suddenly looked uncomfortable as everyone looked at him expectantly, scratching the back of his neck in distress.

?I?m sorry. I think somebody?s calling me,? he lied evenly, causing Padme to smirk in realisation. He?d done exactly what she had.

Suddenly aware that he had now walked off into the bustling crowd, Padme headed into the gardens, not wanting to pursue him any longer. He obviously had not wanted anyone to know who he was and she had better things to do than stalk the mysterious stranger.

The soft wind washed over her and the noise and bustle of the party had drowned out, leaving the distance sounds of laughter. Padme sighed in relaxation, glad to escape the constant hounding of people.

However in her wonderings, she did not notice someone approach her silently from behind. Before she could even scream, she fell into darkness?

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Padme?s eyes fluttered open and the world around her came into blurry focus. Her head was throbbing and she

 

Great start. A little rushed in some parts but overall a nice job. Good premise. About the marrying comment. I am not completely sure either. Watto's shop was the angel and I'm a person lines. Then on the royal cruiser he gives her the jappor snippet and she tells him space is cold. I know he foresaw them marrying in TPM so it probably did happen there. I will investigate further.

 

TPM novel is were little Ani tells Padme he's going to marry her. It happens in Watto's shop when he first meets her. I'll send you a PM (Private Message) about it.

Great Start to your story! This has promise.

 

The story looks very good, hard to tell that you're actually a first timer

 

I just wanted to let you know that I have enjoyed your story so far. I am curious to see what will happen in the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

 

I likem this! so Ani doesnt want the others to know who he is?...

 

Black Heart

Chapter 2: The Resident Evil

Padme steeled her shoulders and set her jaw as she was taken towards Vader?s personal quarters. Storm Troopers lined the cold hallways and droids passed frequently. The hard metal walls and doors filled Padme with dread; sending ice shivers down her spine. By the looks of things, she was obviously onboard some kind of command ship.

But it didn?t matter. She would be strong. She would be strong for her people.

Her silent escorts came to stop in front of a large door in one of the quieter hallways. Each Storm Trooper that patrolled was heavily armed and nothing else seemed to want to venture down this corridor. She had the feeling that Vader was a private person and would not take to her presence lightly.

Padme jumped slightly as a Storm Trooper pressed a button on the wall, alerting Vader to her arrival. Breathing in deeply, her heart thundered in her chest as the door slid open.

?You got word of the Emperor?s request I trust, milord?? One of her escorts asked.

?Yes I did,? replied the chilling voice of Darth Vader. He stood in front of her, tall and strong, face covered by a large black mask and cape bellowing out behind him. Padme felt herself shudder in fear but pushed it away, determined not to be intimidated.

?We will leave her with you milord.? The Storm Troopers bowed and walked away, leaving Padme staring hopelessly at their retreating backs.

?Get in,? Vader ordered sternly, his voice chipped and cold.

Brushing past him quickly, Padme fled into the large apartment, hoping that Vader had not noticed her shivering. Trying to ignore his eerie presence behind her, she gasped as she entered the rooms.

Vader?s chambers were not what she had predicted. The floors were lined with black lavish carpet, the walls painted rich reds and luxury furniture decorating the large rooms. Padme couldn?t help but notice a large bed in the centre room, with a small bed stand beside it. However with a quick glance through the chambers, she suddenly realised that Vader?s was the only bed and only small chairs provided other relaxation.

? I only knew of this a minute ago and I don?t like it. However the Emperor wishes that you stay here and I dare not disagree. You will sleep in my bed with me or outside in the corridor on the floor, and believe me the Storm Troopers will not take kindly to you being in their way,? Vader explained as Padme hissed in protest. Pausing for a moment to allow her to digest the information, he studied her angry features. Rolling his eyes behind his mask at her horrified expression, he was unable to shake off the feeling of familiarity that she gave him.

?You have free run of my chambers but you will not leave them without my say so. Additionally, anything that you learn while you are here, stays here. Is that understood??

?Yes,? Padme replied reluctantly, fire flickering in her hooded eyes as she stood stiffly in front of him.

?Go get something to eat if you wish,? Vader barked waving a gloved hand towards the small kitchen area. Throwing him an annoyed look over her shoulder, she darted away, trying to return her breathing to normal.

?Uh why have you got a load of pop tarts in your cupboard?? Padme asked before she could stop, silently cursing herself for even talking to Vader.

?To eat,? Vader snapped from behind, obviously not amused about her observation. Rolling her eyes defiantly, she prepared her meal in silence, ignoring the Sith that was prowling about the room, reading reports and answering comlinks.

Perching herself stiffly on a small armchair, she ate her food in silence, wondering when Vader would be leaving. He was a leader of the Empire and was bound to have to leave. She doubted he stayed constantly in his chambers. Feeling curiosity bubbling in her chest, she took a deep breath.

?When are you leaving?? She asked, causing Vader to spin around to face her. Suppressing a large gulp that had risen in her throat, she tried to look impassive; her shoulders hunched and face stony.

 

mmm.... I wouldn't mind waking up next to him Poor Padme!!! she went to bed with the beast and woke up with the beauty!! even if said beauty needs an attitude adjustment urgent!!

 

I really Like this fic. If you have a pm list I would love to be added

Great post and Please post soon!

 

As I said in my PM, "You are most welcome".

Uh-Oh, Padmé's just now in bed with the handsome one. The next installment of this story should be an interesting one, to say the least.

UP!

 

Very nice beginning.

Poor Padme for being kidnapped but at least she got to wake up next to Anakin....

I look forward to more. If you have a PM list, can I be added?

 

Interesting fic so far

 

I am loving this story. Can you pm me when you update it?
Thanks.

 

I'm enjoying this story as well. Can you PM me when you update as well.

 

your story is a beauty itself )) please, put me in your PM list, if there is any.
and update soon!!!

 

Oh, please send me a PM too when you decide to update. I can't wait to see Vader's reaction to being woken up by Padme.

 

Great story . I can?t wait to see what will happen. If it is not to mush to ask, can you please pm me when you update.

 

Great time to scream Padme! Add me to your PM list please!

 

Gosh! I just discovered this story, and I love it. Please (oh pretty please) add me to the PM list. The picture you paint of Padme screaming at the end is so cute.

I'm all eager for you to post another update soon.

- Rachel

 

I love this fic! Very awesome! Please add me to your pm list!

 

I've updated!!I've updated!!I've updated!! Go me! I am very proud of myself!!

Chapter 3: Now you see me

?Ahhhhhhhh!? Padme shrieked, causing the newly awoken Vader to fall off the edge of the bed and land ungracefully onto the floor.

Scrambling to his feet and fixing the screaming woman with a beady glare, Vader?s face flushed surprising red about being caught off guard. Striding over to her and clamping his warm hand over her gaping mouth, he tried to gather his fuzzy thoughts.

?What are you screaming for, woman?? Vader hissed, his eyes flashing yellow as her muffled screams caused his head to throb in pain.

Padme?s eyes widened and her howling momentarily ceased as she gazed shockingly at her captor.

?Vader?? she asked shakily, her eyes raking over his chiselled body that was exposed to her surprised stare. Her face began to heat underneath his hand when she realised that he was naked from the waist up and was undeniably gorgeous. Disgusted with herself for having such a thought about the monster before her, she tried to calm her thumping heart.

Pulling her eyes away from his sculpted abs with some difficulty, she forced her gaze up to his angry face.

?Well I?m not Father Christmas,? Vader said sarcastically, obviously not best pleased about the havoc she was causing.

?But your not ? you don?t ? the suit,? Padme stuttered as he removed his hand from her mouth.

Vader rolled his eyes, looking quite attractive as he did so. Covering her face with her hands, Padme blushed crimson as she realised the effect he was having on her.

?I don?t always wear the suit. I am a person,? Vader said absently, suddenly reminding Padme of a little boy she had met during her term as queen. The small child had cried ?I?m a person and my name is Anakin!? when she had discovered he was a slave. It was strange to her how a man so evil, could remind her of a boy so good and sweet.

Smiling at the distant memory, Padme failed to notice the silence that had fallen between them. Taking her hands away from her face she looked awkwardly at Vader, who was slack mouthed and distant. His blue eyes were fixed upon her legs with obvious interest, totally unaware that she had caught his gaze.

Letting out a gasp of horror, Padme realised what he was staring at. The small nightshirt she was wearing had ridden up her waist during the chaos and everything from her hips below was visible to his gaze. She only had on a small black thong that she was wearing at the party, to cover herself.

Pulling the shirt down towards the knees violently, the force of the sudden pull caused the top seam of the shirt to rip. A nice amount of cleavage was now on show as Padme screamed in dismay, trying desperately to pull the top back together.

Raising his eyebrows in amusement, Vader made no move to help her as she tried to hide her flesh from his view.

Her face turning from pink to electric red, Padme held the top of the shirt together tightly, trying not to expose anything that the Dark Lord of the Sith had not already seen. Scrabbling away in utter embarrassment, she fled into the bathroom, slamming the door behind her.

Allowing a small smirk to cross his face, Vader stood for a moment, watching the place that Padme had left, not at all annoyed that she had ripped his shirt. It had been worth it.

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?You can do it! Yes you can! You can do it!? Padme told herself as she gripped the bathroom door, intent on facing Vader after the humiliating incident. She had luckily found Vader?s dressing gown on a hook by the bath and was wrapping it tightly around herself.

?Get out the bathroom! Or I will get you out!? Vader called menacingly through the door, having been waiting for his shower for 45 minutes.

Face flaming red, Padme flung open the door and stormed past the Sith who was casually leaning against the wall. Rolling his eyes at her once again, he glided into the bathroom and snapped the door closed behind him.

Muttering curses under her breath, Padme stalked into the closet and found

 

A PM list is a group of people that you private message when your story is updated. And this chapter ruled!! MORE SOON!!

 

I loved Padme's reaction to Vader's sculpted abs...



Their interaction was priceless!!

Thanks for the PM - loved the update

 

That was a lot of skin for the morning after

 

yay! Vader with only a towel on!!! OMG!!! Great update, btw.