Boba Fett hired to kill two Jedi, Clone Wars' ending (my first story!)

Hello everybody,
This is my first story and I thought it would be best to post it here to see what people think. I haven't made the final title yet.

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Hope you enjoy it.

Star Wars




The fighters moved in perfect formation, flanking the Corvette. Two on one side, two on the other. The new Z-95 Headhunters have proved themselves as the best snubfighters on the market, and Jedi Master Terrak was glad to have them as escort. He did not like to travel like this, in a warship with a squadron of starfighters, but in these days even the Jedi were not safe. The Clone Wars have been ravaging the galaxy for almost ten years now, and there seemed to be no end. Hundreds of Jedi have been killed just in the first two skirmishes. Now the Jedi Order that once counted tens of thousands was reduced to less than a thousand Jedi. The power of the separatists was growing every day, more and more star systems joining them. All hope of peaceful solution was long abandoned. And now, the only reason why Master Terrak was not on the frontline was that he was traveling to Kamino, to order a million more clones. A million! For the price of all those clones, an entire planet could live for a month! Worse yet, Terrak never liked clones. Whenever he was near them, he had that strange feeling... most uncomfortable.
A knock on his door cut into his thoughts. "Enter," he said. The door opened and a young lieutenant - a cloned lieutenant - entered. "Sir," he began, his voice filtered by the helmet. " We are approaching the planet Kamino. We will be docking in fifteen minutes."
Master Terrak nodded. "I will be on the bridge." he said and waved the lieutenant out. Time to spend a lot of money he said to himself. The only planet that had any real use of this war was Kamino. With every battle clones were killed, and the Republic had to order more and more. They earned billions. He sighed and headed to the bridge.

The bridge doors opened and all present officers - ones who were not busy flying - snapped to attention as Master Terrak entered. He ignored them and sat in the captain's chair. Helmsman turned to him. "Master Terrak, we are entering orbit now. Docking in five minutes."
"Sir," the comm officer called over from his console. "We are being hailed by the Prime Minister of Kamino."
Being hailed? That was not their style. The Kaminoans did everything face to face. Strange. Terrak nodded to the officer. "Put it through." he said. He stood up and walked up to the holoprojector. The air in front of him flickered and the Prime Minister of Kamino appeared.
"Greetings, Master Terrak." he said gracefully, with a slight bow. "We are honored by your visit. Have you come to place another order?"
"Yes, indeed I have." Terrak replied. Doing business over the holonet? This was most unusual for a Kaminoan. "The Republic needs another million units. As fast as possible." He added.
"Yes, Master Terrak. They will be ready within six months."
"Good." Terrak smiled. "Then I guess I just have to inspect the units from the last order."
"That will not be necessary, Master Terrak." the Prime Minister said politely. "I can assure you that they are in perfect condition. We even included a few new programs."
"All right, then." Terrak said, now growing really suspicious. The Kaminoans never let him go before inspecting the new units. They were obviously hiding something. Maybe he was just paranoid. But still... something was wrong here, he could feel it. "Until our next meeting, Prime Minister." he said with a respectful bow.
"Goodbye, Master Jedi." the Prime Minister said and cut the connection.
"Get the shuttle ready." Terrak said to the captain standing next to him. "You will take the ship to this system," he said and pointed at the galaxy map. "and wait for me there. I have a feeling something is not right here." The captain nodded and relayed the order to the hangar bay. Terrak went to his quarters and halfway the

 

Nobody wants to read my story!

 

Good story. It takes time to get readers in so don't worry.

 

I'm gald you liked it. I'm gonna try to post it a FF.net.

 

I enjoyed reading the story very much. I'm glad you are posting it on ff.net.
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