So this is an ongoing fancomic I've been working on. Thought I would share it here... ESB AU. Focusing mainly on Luke and Vader. Premise is basically: what if Luke chose not to fall on Bespin?
Wow, I'm really enjoying the story on this so far. It's a very different take on the infamous scene on Cloud City. I'm looking forward to seeing how this all unfolds!
Very nice update! Luke and Vader confront each other for the first time since the duel! And poor, Leia. Not only has she lost Han, but she feels like she abandoned Luke as well.
Cool stuff. The greyscaling is well managed and your use of the "gutters" and choices of where each panel picks up from the last is really smart.
Very nice update, @Starith! You gotta love Vader - manipulating poor Luke into thinking that Leia and Chewie abandoned him. Let's see if he actually buys into that and eventually follows the dark path.
Oh wow, that last frame! Luke is in complete denial, and then... BAM! I love that! Also, very curious that they're going back to Tatooine. Looking forward to the next part!
^Thanks again, HanSolo29. Also I know it's been a lot of 'talking heads' but for the situation with Luke and Vader, but I think it's called for... Anyway, next page... with even more talking heads...
I don't mind the 'talking heads' at all, in fact, it's great for character development. These are some great moments! They are needed to flesh out your story. With that said, a very nice addition! I'm looking forward to more!
Thanks again, all. You may have noticed I've made some changes and editing here and there. So I hope no one was too attached to the greyscale.
Oooh! I love that you've added color! They really look great; very clean and crisp. Oh, Chewie! It looks like our heroes will be off to rendezvous with Yoda in due time. Hopefully, Luke can hold out long enough for Leia, Yoda, and Chewie to come up with a plan!
(Idea/design for Vader's inner 'dark form' taken from the "Dark Lord of the Sith" comics by Charles Soule and Giuseppe Camuncoli.)
