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Beyond - Legends [Disney Song Challenge] The Force of Love between Mara Jade and Luke Skywalker

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by RX_Sith, Dec 28, 2024.

  1. RX_Sith

    RX_Sith Force Ghost star 6

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    Mar 13, 2006
    This story is for the Disney Song Challenge here:
    https://boards.theforce.net/threads...024-challenges.50053388/page-43#post-59063184 by Kit'


    My prompt was as follows:

    Write a Star Wars Theme story based on the following prompt: Continuing our love theme (because what else do you expect from Disney) we have I Won't Say I'm in Love from Hercules where Meg laments everything...including her terrible love life. So, let's take these songs and finally give them their place on the stage - as the show stoppers they are meant to be!

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    Star Wars: The Force of Love


    The Hidden Love

    In a galaxy far, far away, on the desert planet of Tatooine, there was a beautiful, red headed woman named Mara Jade. She was strong, independent, and had sworn to protect the galaxy from the Rebel forces. However, deep down, Mara had a secret: she was in love with a charming Jedi Knight named Luke Skywalker, but she refused to admit it to herself.

    Scene 1: The Cantina

    Mara enters the bustling cantina, scanning the room for any signs of trouble. Luke is at the bar, chatting with his droid companion, C3-PO. He notices Mara and gives her a teasing smile.

    Luke: "Hey Mara, fancy seeing you here. Looking for trouble, or just me?"

    Mara: "I'm here on none-of-your business, Luke. Not everything revolves around you."

    As she tries to ignore the flutter in her heart, the iconic tune of "I Won't Say I'm In Love" begins to play softly in the background.

    Scene 2: The Revelation

    Later that night, Mara finds herself alone under the twin suns of Tatooine, reflecting on her feelings. She begins to sing, her voice filled with a mix of longing and denial.

    Mara: If there's a prize for rotten judgment, I guess I've already won that No Jedi's worth the aggravation, that's ancient history, been there, done that

    The Force spirits of the past Jedi Masters appear around her, adding their voices in harmony, urging her to be honest with herself.

    Spirits: Who'd ya think you're kidding? He's the Earth and heaven to you Try to keep it hidden, honey, we can see right through you Girl, ya can't conceal it, we know how you're feeling Who you're thinking of

    Mara: No chance, no way, I won't say it, no, no (You swoon, you sigh, why deny it, uh-oh) It's too cliche, I won't say I'm in love

    Scene 3: The Confession

    As Mara battles her inner conflict, a sudden attack by the remnants of the Empire interrupts her thoughts. Luke comes to her rescue, fighting off stormtroopers with his lightsaber while she zaps them with her trusty blaster and sinister looks.

    After the dust settles, they stand together, breathing heavily. Luke looks at her with concern.

    Luke: "Mara, are you okay?"

    Mara: "I'm fine, Luke. Thanks for the help."

    As they share a moment, the Force spirits appear once more, their voices echoing in the wind.

    Spirits: You're way off base, I won't say it, Get off my case, I won't say it Girl, don't be proud, it's okay, you're in love

    Mara: (sighs) At least out loud, I won't say I'm in love

    Scene 4: The Embrace

    Realizing the truth in her heart, Mara finally admits her feelings. She turns to Luke, her eyes filled with determination.

    Mara: "Luke, I...I care about you more than I want to admit."

    Luke smiles and pulls her into an embrace.

    Luke: "I've known all along, Mara. The Force works in mysterious ways."

    As they stand together, the Force spirits disappear, leaving them with the realization that love is indeed a powerful force in the galaxy.

    Screen fades to black with the iconic Star Wars theme music playing

    And so, in the vastness of space, Mara Jade and Luke's love story begins, proving that even in a galaxy far, far away, love can conquer all.
     
  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Host of Anagrams & Scattegories star 8 VIP - Game Host

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    Aug 31, 2004
    A unique format and a lovely song. :D Luke and Mara are the perfect choice for the song lyrics.
     
  3. ConservativeJedi321

    ConservativeJedi321 Force Ghost star 6

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    Crazy fast turnaround but you created the perfect story for the prompt! Mara fits Meg's model to a T!
     
  4. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    Aug 21, 2006
    Super to see Mara admitting that she is in love with Luke and getting him. Love is indeed a powerful Force. Great use of the song.
     
  5. Kit'

    Kit' Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oct 30, 1999
    Wow! That was such a creative use of the prompt and so well done too (and so fast!). Love the way you showed the relationship between Luke and Mara and that you even managed to get the muses in there too :D