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Story [GODZILLA POEM] ANOTHER GODZILLA POEM! CAN YOU SPOT THE MESSAGE?

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by The Sith Camp, Mar 13, 2015.

  1. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Mar 10, 2015
    A SHORTER POEM on BIG-G GODZILLA :D

    Can Anyone SPOT THE HIDDEN MESSAGE? :D

    Ghosts of the Nuclear,
    Over Millions of Years,
    Deep in one’s Fears,
    Zero Hour Near,
    I Destroy all you cared so Dear,
    Lives Severe,
    Legacy of ‘New Clear’…
    And Skreeonk! My Roar you’d Hear…

    Terror SINCE BIRTH!
    He leaves Destructive Worth,
    Easy to give me a great berth …

    King who struck harder than Glamdring!
    Alas Terror… the King Sings!
    I am beyond… your Nightmare’s Dreams…
    Justice? Injustice? I care not what I bring,
    Until the Crumble, Crust Shake … Horrors awake … Thunderous Ring…

    Kong could never compare,
    I am Toho’s Heir,
    None would ever Dare,
    Godzilla’s they’d Compare…

    Prehistoric Nuclear Veteran,
    Atomic Savior! A ‘New Clear’ Avatar!
    Legacy of the Ancients…
    Annihilate my foes…
    Empires I shatter… nothing to matter..
    Opponents I batter,
    Standing buildings … which I shall shatter…
    Omnipresence!
    Zone of Power!
    One could flatter,
    I, ゴジラ the Kaiju King,
    Come at me, and I Nuke your Dream …

    Looming the Pacific,
    Encroaching Japan,
    Godzilla I am,
    Atomic Beams I Spam,
    Cities I rampage…records of my rage …
    Your challenge futile, you lost your will to engage…
     
  2. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 6

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    Jul 31, 2014
    I have to ask: why random capitalisation? It looks...messy.

    Other than that, I like your ability to create things quickly!
     
  3. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

    Registered:
    Mar 10, 2015
    Hello!

    Ah - I understand - yes I think I was actually half-asleep when I composed this - because this is a 'short' one I composed - my poems are usually 1000-1500 words long ... and anything 2000 words or more I probably need to be more awake and motivated ...

    BUT - the reason with the random capitalization - I wanted also at times to 'highlight' certain words - to highlight POWERFUL WORDS - particularly this is on Big-G Godzilla so haha ...
    But did you spot the message in the poem? :)

    Or have you any requests for any topics SW or Non-SW poems?