Jacen and Jaina Adventures (Anouncment.)

"Jaina wake up, look what I found." five year old Jacen said as he used one hand to push his sister and the other hand to hold a small creature.
"What is it Jacen." Jaina said as she sat up and rubbed her eyes.
"I found this little guy in my bed room." he said. He held out his to show her the creature. It had short white fur, black, sharp claws, a small, curly brown tail, a pink nose, small green eyes and small pink ears at the sides of his head. "Isn?t he cute." Jacen said as he petted the little critter. "I am going to call him Mousca."
"Yes he's very cute?"Jaina was cut off as Jacen started to talk again.
"Can we go outside and play with him before breakfast?" asked Jacen eagerly.
"Ok, I guess Uncle Luke won't mind as long as we stay close to the academy."
"Yippee." Jacen cheered. "I?ll go get washed up and dressed." he said as he ran back to into his room.

A few minutes later they were outside.
Jacen put Mousca down on the ground.
"Ok lets play." but no sooner did he say that when Mousca set off on a dead run.
"Hey, where are you going? He?s getting away Jaina." Jacen said as he began running after Mousca.
"Wait up!" Jaina yelled as she ran after her brother and Mousca.
They chased it until they stopped suddenly
A tall, square structure loomed over them and on one side there was a doorway. A green, glow danced inside the structure.
"Look, a building with something glowing inside it." Jaina said as she looked at the building.
"Wow, cool. Look there's Mousca." Jacen said
and chased it into the building.
"Wait, Jacen I don't like the looks of this place. She said as she chased him into the building.
Immediately a green mist enveloped them and they felt there selves falling and then everything went dark.

 

AWWWWWWWWW CUTE!! Little Jacen and Jaina! I hope they get in lots of trouble!

 

Wonderful start Jacen!

 

I always wondered what those two did as little kids. Great start!

~Miss Jaina

 

Jaina and Jacen fell with a small bump on a muddy ground.
"Jacen are all right?" Jaina asked as she got up and looked around for her brother.
"I'm alright." Jacen looked around. "Ahh, Jaina."
"Yeah." Jaina said as she walked over to her brother.
"I don't think were on Yavin 4 anymore."
Jacen said as he looked around.
There were swamps that looked like mud puddles, snakes and other weird creatures, no sign of any grass and trees.
"Yeah." she said as she looked at her brother.
"Come on lets find a way out of this slimy mud hole." Jaina said as she started walking.
"Yeah, I rather have adventures some where better then this." Jacen said following his sister.
"Hey Jacen, come take a look at this." Jaina yelled as she walked over to a hut.
"Wow a hut, in this place! Cool."
"Maybe there's some food in it I?m hungry.
"Whoever lives here or lived here probably was very small." Jacen said as he entered the hut with his sister.
"Something sure smells good in here." Jacen said as he looked around.
"Seems to be some kind of soup." Jaina took a spoon and tasted some.
" It tastes alright." she said as she took to bowls out of the cupboard and filled them with soup.
"Good, I?m hungry." Jacen said as he sat by his sister.
Jaina handed the bowl of soup and a spoon to Jacen and then got some for herself.

"That tasted great." Jacen said as he put the empty bowl and spoon down on the small table.
"Yeah. I?ll wash the dishes then we can go find away out of here." Jaina said as she got some water and started to take care of the dishes.
"Okay, I?ll go look around this hut." Jacen said as he began looking around.
"All right, it?ll be done in a few minutes." Jaina said as she started to wash the bowls.

Meanwhile someone with pointy green ears, green skin, with no form of expression on his face and a stick was watching them through a window.

 

i knew they were on dagobah right after the first line

 

"Jaina, i found some thing." Jacen yelled as he ran to where his sister was.
"what is it Jacen?" Jaina said as she dried her hands off.
Jacen held out a green crystal and imprinted on a small corner was the name Yoda.
"i found it in a small chest under a bed." Jacen said as he held it in front of Jaina.
"it looks like a holocron, like the one Uncle Luke showed us." Jaina said as she looked at it. "i think we should bring it to Uncle Luke." Jaina said.
"okay, i'll get a box to put it in." said Jacen as he hurried off to find a box.

minutes later they were set to go.
"do you got the holocron Jacen?"
"got it."
"then lets go" Jaina said as she headed for the door.
"uhhh, Jaina where are we going?"
"we go where the force leads us Jacen."
"oh, okay."
Jaina opened the door and almost tripped over a green creature.
"This little creature is yours I believe?"
the green creature said as he handed Jacen Mousca.
"tthanks,uh sir." Jacen stamered as he took Mousca.
Jaina still recovering from landing on her bottom stood back up. "thank you for finding my brother's pet, Uhhh, sir."
the green creature turned to face them. "Yoda is my name." Yoda nodded at them and then went into his hut.
Jaina and Jacen's mouth opened wide when the
dooor to the hut closed.
"Jacen, that was Master Yod..." she didn't get to finish her sentence.
"Mousca escaped again." Jacen yelled as he ran after it.
"not again." Jaina said as she ran to catch up to her brother.
the ran for for a few minutes when Mousca dissapeared.
"where did he go?" jacen said looking around.
They walked to the spot they last saw Mousca and before they knew what was happening they were enveloped in a swirling green midst and felt their selves falling.

 

i need some ideas on where and what they will find next. anyone?

 

I say they go back and meet Anakin Skywalker and Padme on Naboo.

 

i say vader...

 

Hey, Jacen200015, it's a small world...I'm the one who wrote that pod-racing story on FanFiction.Net that you reviewed about five times. Well, let's see: How about Coruscant, where they encounter Darth Sidious as he's looking for a young apprentice?

 

The green mist swirled around them as they fell. soon a soft humming could be heard, coming closer and closer.
"owww." Jacen said as he hit a hard cold floor.
Jaina fell right on Jacen just has he was picking himself up.
"ooo, sorry Jacen."
"thats all right."
they helped each other up off the floor and took a look around.
"its pitch black in here." Jaina said as the green mist dissapeared.
"yeah, lets find a wall and be careful, who knows where we are." Jacen said as he felt around for the wall.
"shhh, did you hear that?"
"what?"
"it sounded like a ramp was lowering."
"yeah, i hear footsteps going down the ramp to."
"we must be on a ship, the question is what type of ship and what time period were in." jaina said as she listened for more sounds.
"well we won't find out by just standing here." jacen said and started searching for a door of some sort.
Jaina used the force to create a little light and started to look around.

a few minutes later.
"Jacen! i found a crate of spice, we must be in a smugglers ship." Jaina said and climbed to the top of the crate.
Jacen turned around and began to help his sister lift the trapdoor off with the force.
"got it." Jacen said and he climbed up onto the crate to help his sister get out.
as Jaina pulled herself out of the smuggeler hold she took a look around.
"Jacen."
"what is it Jaina?"
"you'll never guess where we are."
"where?"
"come up here and take a look."
Jacen climbed out and gasped. "we are on are Dad's ship."


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what do you think?
all of your ideas are great, i'll be sure to include most of them where i can.
heh sulbulba, nice to have you on board.

 

I'm think of making this into a round robin. does anyone think i should?

 

Up!

Yeah, I think a round robin would probably work; as long as you don't have two people writing two different scenes at once. But as far as that goes, since a half-dozen of us have interesting new ideas, why don't we all put them to good use?

 

Jaina and Jacen quickly got over their shock and headed toward the ramp.
?I wonder what time period we are in?? Jaina asked.
They walked outside and saw their parents, Chewbacca, Lando and the droids head into the building.
?I think we are on Cloud City.? Jacen said as he looked around.
?Cool, maybe we?ll see Grandpa.? Jaina said excited.
?I don?t think that would be a good idea Jaina. Grandpa was still evil in this time period.?
?O yeah.?
They walked into the building and down corridors.
?Jacen I think were lost!?
?How can we be lost if we don?t know where we are going??
Jaina shrugged her shoulders.
They walked into a small room that had a comfortable looking couch.
Jacen yawned. ?Lets take a nap.?
?Good idea.?
They curled up on the couch and fell asleep.

They woke up when they hear weapons being fired and people running.
?What?s, going on?? Jacen asked sleepily.
?I?m not sure.?
They stayed huddled on the couch for a few hours. And soon the shouting, shooting and running stopped.
They got off the couch and went outside the door. They saw the bodies of dead people and storm troopers.
?Umm, I think we know what happened.? Jaina said as they walked down the corridor.
Suddenly Jaina halted, just ahead was a storm trooper who had a blaster set to kill toward a three-year-old girl and was about to shoot.
?Noooooooo.? Jacen yelled.
The trooper turned to face him. Jaina quickly grabbed a blaster from a dead trooper and fired an accurate shot at the storm trooper and Jacen dodged the stray shot.
The trooper was shot squarely in the chest and fell down dead on the floor.
Jacen rushed to the little girl who was curled up on the floor sobbing.
Jaina put the blaster down on the floor still shocked at what she did.
?Are you all right?? Jacen asked the little girl putting his hand on her shaking shoulder.
She looked up at Jacen with a tear stained face. ?They killed my mama and papa.?
?Shhh its all right.? Jacen said as he cuddled her. ?What?s your name??
?Mella.? She said as she wiped her face with her hand.
?Mella would you like to come with us?? Jacen asked.
She nodded her head yes. Jaina came over to them and helped her up.
?You kill trooper?? Mella asked.
?Yes I did Mella.? Jaina said and took Mella?s hand into her?s.
?Jaina look!? Jacen shouted as he saw pointed at Mousca near a swirling mist in the floor.
?Listen Mella were going to go into that mist so hold my hand and if you get scared hold my hand tight. Ok?? Jaina said looking at her.
?Ok.? Mella replied and held onto her hand.
The trio then entered the green mist after Mousca.


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alright, now this is my idea. this is going to be like a RR except with a few changes.
first, if some one has an idea for the next time period and they want to post they have to say "Idea Tag." in a post with an idea. then i'll confirm that person may do it when i say. "Idea Tag confirmed for ___________."
in a post preceding it.
now your idea starts when they come out of the mist and ends when they enter the mist. now at the ending of the idea type in "done." on the bottom of that post.
Rules:
1. no killing Mella.
2. She has to be with Jacen or Jaina when they enter and leave the green mist.
3. they may bring something back from the past.
4. you have to complete your idea so that some one else may post onto the story.
5. if you have questions please PM me.
6. you can't bring the twins and Mella back to Yavin 4, only i can.
7. try to have less then ten posts for an idea.
8. Have fun.

if i left something out that you have questions about please PM me.

 

is anyone intrested??

 

Great fanfic so far, you really fit their age group well. Ooooo Jaina takes her baby steps down the Dark Side at the age of 5! (killing the Stormtrooper).

Idea Tag: Go to Tatooine where Luke is still a moisture farmer's kid. During a situation where Luke, Biggs and others are having a party. Luke's gotta go back to home to get some stuff, and J,J and M tag along with him. Luke (believing them to be distant relatives of Biggs [see Bacta War] doesn't suspect their calling him "uncle" Luke to be true) gets the gang into trouble, but with encouragement from J and J, unconciously uses the Force to save the twins. At his home the twins discover a holophoto of Luke and his Aunt and Uncle, and take it to give to Luke when they get back. Mella's just hanging around in this time.

done.

I know you said PM, but while I'm here I've got some questions:

How old is Mella?
Can they go back to Yavin 4 but in another time (say, Ep4 or JAT timeline)
Can they go forward in time? (e.g. NJO)
What's the point of Mella? (You won't answer this question yet, will you?)

Thanx

 

Mella is 3.
yes they can go to Yavin Four only in a diffrent time period.
they can go forward in time.
the reason for Mella being with them will not be revealed till later on.



Idea Tag confirmed for Rogue_of-Peace

 

UP!!

 

Ok, Rouge-of-Peace isn't able to post at all now either so Agent_Jaid would you like to take a crack at Rogue_of-Peace's idea?

 

Mu-mu-me?????? You want me to do it???????
Sure......
Um... Would you beta it for me if I did though? I've never EVER done this before in my life.
And, well, I don't know much about, who was it? Bigs? Well, I don't know a lot about him.
I'll give it my best shot.... *something you'll probably want to give to me when I'm done*
*gulp*
Alright. I'll give it a go.
PRAY FOR ME!!!!!!
~ Jaid

 

relax i don't know that much about Bigg's either, of course i'll beta it for you. I know you can do it. *gives reasuring smile.*

 

*re-reads master's post*\

Yeah right.

From now on, I beta.

 

I'm not that bad part of the time.

 

I sortof lost track of where i put that post i was writing. oops.