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Saga Tears of Sorrow (Anakin leaves Padme)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Leah, Apr 4, 2003.

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  1. Leah

    Leah Jedi Youngling star 1

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    You were always by my side making me feel safe. You always walked by my side holding my hand and never letting me go. You had the sweetest smile and the most gorgeous laugh I had ever heard. I wish I could see your smile and hear your laugh because you are gone. I look out my window and I see you coming back, your smile shining in the sunlight, but I know it is just an illusion for you are never coming back. Everywhere I turn I see your face, and all I can do is cry. Please come back and wipe way my tears. For they are not tears of joy they are tears of sorrow...
     
    Leah, Apr 4, 2003
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    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I look out my window and I see you coming back, your smile shining in the sunlight, but I know it is just an illusion for you are never coming back.

    My favorite lines, I assume you're talking about Anakin leaving her. But still, really good poem with that melanchaly feeling.

    ~aeryn
     
    AERYN_SUN, Apr 4, 2003
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