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  1. Kit'

    Kit' Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oct 30, 1999
    With the advent of the new split in the fanfic boards, I'd like to extend everyone a hearty welcome to the new snippet thread. :)

    This is a place for you to advertise your new and existing stories. I?d ask that if you want to advertise more then two fics that you space them apart. Please don?t post several ads at once. Along with this, I?d also ask that you please keep it to one story per post (as to not confuse people). Cover-art is allowed (if you have some ? it?s hardly a requirement) but please keep your synopsis to a maximum of 300 words. Below is the basic format for your story.


    Title: I think this one explains itself
    Author(s): As does this one
    Timeframe: Where is your story predominantly set?
    Characters: Who stars in your story?
    Genre(s): Self-explanatory
    Notes: Is this part of a series/sequel? Is there anything that potential readers should know?

    ***

    Trailer : A short teaser/trailer should go here

    Link to story : Give the link to your story here :)
     
  2. Kit'

    Kit' Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Oct 30, 1999
    Well....this thread is popular :p

    I might see if I can start it off then.

    ***

    Title: In the Shadows, Darkness lies.
    Author(s): Kit' (Kithera)
    Timeframe: Pre-TPM. About the time 10 years before TPM.
    Characters: All OC characters. Its mainly focused on Tara and Davin (two characters that have breifly stared in the the Jemmiah's Chronicles). Pus a host of new characters.
    Genre(s): Action.
    Notes: It will eventually be part of a series.

    ***

    Trailer :

    Two Jedi take on an innocent mission that turns out to be much more then they bargained for.


    Link to story : In the Shadows, Darkness lies.
     
  3. Jane Jinn

    Jane Jinn Jedi Knight star 5

    Registered:
    Jan 12, 2000
    Title: itsy-bitsy teenie-weenie poor Pash Cracken fanfic-ini
    Author(s): Jane Jinn
    Timeframe: post ROTJ, pre- X-Wing, Wedge's Gamble
    Characters: Pash Cracken and a multitude of OC's
    Genre(s): A-Wing squadfic
    Notes: a lighthearted response to the "Hallucinations" challenge.

    ***

    Teaser:

    Watching Alant stand up and make a run for the door as though dodging enemy fire, or waiting for it to come, Pash turned and glared at Ficult. ?What did you say was in those chocolates??

    ?It was supposed to be a laxative, Captain!? Ficult exclaimed, too rattled to keep up the pretence any longer.

    ?A laxative?? Pash exploded. ?This doesn?t look like your ordinary case of the runs!?


    Link to story : It's in my signature. :)
     
  4. Ty-gon Jinn

    Ty-gon Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Jan 12, 2000
    Title: The Shadows of Conflict - Part Two: The Past Rediscovered
    Author(s): Ty-gon Jinn aka Tygon_Jinnus
    Timeframe: Post-Saga (Pre-NJO, not long after the Zahn trilogy)
    Characters: O/Cs, featuring Mon Mothma
    Genre(s): Action/Adventure/Drama (A little bit of everything)
    The Series: The Shadows of Conflict includes Prologue: One For the Annals of History, Part One: The Advent of War, Uprising: The Story of the Krioni Revolution, Of the Song of the Stars, The Fool Or the Fool Who Follows Him, and Expedition One.
    Notes: Because it is tied to a character from the old "New Order of the Grey" round robin character, The Shadows of Conflict is tied to the stories of (and features characters originally created by) Rokangus, and by that association, it is tied to the stories of (and features characters originally created by) Casper_Knightshade. A special tribute to forum mod JediGaladriel is also included.
    Summary: As the Second Galactic Civil War rages, it becomes clear that the weapon needed to end it may lie in an ancient artifact long lost. The one young man who may be able to find it needs to develop his Force potential, but works for the Empire. A Jedi has to put aside his old feelings toward Imperials to train him before time runs out.
    Posted On: The Classic JC Fan Fiction Stories Board (Reply Only)

    ***

    The Teaser...

    Malcolm walked into the cockpit of the cruiser to find Lara already there, watching the forest as it was slowly illuminated by the sun as it rose above the mists behind them.

    "You're up early."

    Lara jumped, then turned to see Malcolm. "You scared me."

    Malcolm sat down in the captain's chair, tearing open a packaged pastry. "Well, I certainly didn't mean to do that."

    "Sorry I'm a little jumpy this morning," she said as she stared out the front window. "I remembered some more last night."

    "Really?"

    "Really," she said, staring straight ahead.

    A moment passed in uncomfortable silence while Malcolm waited for Lara to say something else, but she never did. Swallowing a chunk of pastry, he leaned forward. "Are you going to tell me about it?"

    Lara sighed. "I told you I was an Imperial officer as soon as I was eighteen, right?"

    "Right..."

    "And I told you that I guessed my first assignment would have come around the time of the Battle of Endor?"

    "Yeah..."

    She kept staring out the window. "Malcolm, what happened on Coruscant the day of the Battle of Endor?"

    Malcolm swallowed another bite. "Uh, there were riots. A big rebel party, I guess. The statue of Palpatine was knocked over."

    Lara sniffed. "I was there, Malcolm." It looked like she was getting tears in her eyes. "And there's a reason people hated the Empire." She paused for a minute. "You may be proud to be an Imperial now, but I hate knowing I was one then."

    "What happened, Lara?"

    "My team was working 'crowd control.' They wouldn't tell me what was going on. The palace was evacuating; we were supposed to keep personnel safe on their way." Lara turned away from the window, keeping her head down. "We didn't even have weapons with stun capability." She sniffed back what must have been
     
  5. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 1, 2001
    Oooh, cool thread. I will get to posting later when I have more time. Awesome idea, Kit :D

    ~aeryn
     
  6. AngelQueen

    AngelQueen Jedi Master star 4

    Registered:
    Mar 1, 2001
    Title: Bring on the Rain
    Author(s): Emmi Darklighter, J_K_Dart, RebelMom, Aanix Durray, and AngelQueen
    Timeframe: Post-Vong Wars
    Characters: Luke, Mara, Leia, Han, Ben, Callista, and a few OCs
    Genre(s): Angst, Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance, did I mention Angst? ;)
    Notes: Be prepared to see some Luke-torture! [face_devil]

    *****

    Trailer:



    Knight Horn, ignoring his wounds, raised himself off the floor and made his way back to the ramp. I managed to follow, determined to help in some way. I barely noticed Knight Bornik race past me and into the cockpit. Mere moments later, I felt the ship begin to ascend into the air.

    When I made it to the ramp, I found Master Skywalker holding onto the ramp with one hand, while using the other to wield his lightsaber in deflecting the blaster bolts that the vehicles were shooting at us with.

    Knight Horn was shouting for him to grab his hand, but Master Skywalker ignored him, resolute in his determination to keep us from harm. This continued for several minutes, until we finally seemed to be away from the danger. Master Skywalker tossed his lightsaber into the ship and moved to grab Knight Horn?s hand.

    It was then that all hell broke loose. We had failed to notice the Za?zens?za ship had risen up into the sky. We saw this too late, for they opened fire on us. The impact threw Knight Horn and I to the deck.

    To our absolute horror, we watched as Master Skywalker lost his grip on the ramp. Helpless, we watched him fall several hundred feet, towards one of the few remaining vehicles that was chasing us. We thought we saw him hit the vehicle? right before the cursed thing exploded.



    *****

    Link: Bring on the Rain
     
  7. Jedi_Johnson

    Jedi_Johnson Jedi Grand Master star 5

    Registered:
    Apr 6, 2002
    Title: The Truth Is Always Greater
    Author: Jedi_Johnson
    Timeframe: Post NJO
    Characters: Jacen Solo
    Genre(s): ..... Its kind of a mix.
    Notes: Vingette of Jacen's return to Coruscant... still in progress.
    ***

    Trailer : They came years ago with no warning. Planet by planet the galaxy fell under their power. They carved a path of destruction into the core of the galaxy, to the precious jewel of the Republic, Coruscant. Countless lives were lost as the planet fell into their hands and became something new? something different. The Yuuzhan Vong changed the galaxy shaping it into something new, changing the perceptions of everyone. As awe-inspiring an accomplishment this maybe there is something else they were responsible for shaping. Something greater in the grand scheme of things. The rogue Jedi Vergere used the Yuuzhan Vong to accomplish a goal of a much grander scale. The invaders were used to shape the young Jedi Jacen Solo into something new, something truly different and in turn they were altering the galaxy on a completely different scale.

    Years passed and many more lives were lost before the war between the Yuuzhan Vong and the galaxy ended. The planet Coruscant, shaped into the new world of Yuuzhan?tar, fell but this time to the hands of the people who had first abandoned it. The capital of the galaxy was battered and broken, and then forgotten with the prospect of peace on the horizon. The Jedi Knights, under the joint leadership of Luke Skywalker and Jacen Solo, helped to spread this fledgling peace throughout the galaxy as people came together to rebuild their shattered lives. But during this time of peace something has continued to grow on the shattered world of Yuuzhan?tar, something that can only be found by one man. Jacen Solo, the man who was responsible for the shaping of the planet has returned to the only place he can call home.


    Link to story: The Truth Is Always Greater



    J_J
     
  8. Darth_Bog

    Darth_Bog Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Registered:
    Dec 6, 2002
    Title: Attack of the Phantom Mohawk
    Author: Darth_Bog
    Timeframe: roughly between Episodes II and III
    Characters: Mr. T, Anakin, Padme, Qui-gon, Obi-wan, R2-D2, Palpatine, Trioculus, Mara, Mace, Yoda, Luke, Tarkin, Thrawn, Pellaeon, C'boath, Karrde, Darth Maul, and more to come!
    Genre: ..... Comedy


    [image=http://www.youngadultministry.net/mrtlogo.JPG]

    I PITY DA FOOL, SUCKA!


    This story is about the adventures of the famous Mr. T and his encounters with the Expanded Universe.

    This is meant to be all in good humor as Mr. T "pities" the EU and commits himself to throwing stuff "helluva far" as he tries to rescue his kids in the Youth Centers who have been taken hostage by Grand Admiral Thrawn.

    The characters and much of the story background follow in the footsteps of Darth Holliday's infamous (and funny) "Exploited Universe" stories. If you're familiar with his stories then you will recognize many of the characters in Attack of the Phantom Mohawk immediately. You can check out Darth Holliday's stories on the boards here if you'd like.

    I hope you enjoy the story and have a good laugh...this isn't an attack on the EU (as I AM a fan of it), it's just Mr. T going crazy in the Star Wars universe, hopefully entertaining you in the process.
     
  9. zeekveerko

    zeekveerko Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 30, 2002
    Title: Star Wars II: They Became Heroes (from the Adventures of Luke Skywalker)
    Author(s): zeekveerko
    Timeframe: just after A New Hope
    Characters: Luke / Leia
    Genre(s): action / adventure / drama
    Notes: This is an AU fic based somewhat on Splinter of the Mind's Eye, which extends far outside the realm of canon. Luke and Leia are not related, Vader is not Luke's father, and the emperor has no force power.

    ***

    Trailer :
    BLACK
    May 1980:
    BLACK

    Scene - Fade into a vast sea of stars.
    A tattered Noobian royal cruiser speeds in and out of frame.

    Music - Up Star Wars theme song.

    Scene - Luke and Leia sitting huddled under a blanket by a fire, looking into each others eyes.

    Luke: "I will become a Jedi knight like my father... somehow..."

    A large brown ball of fur with patches and stripes of green covering its body shoots out from the brush. It stands a meter tall, supported by four short furry legs with two cloven digits on each foot.

    Luke gets up and turns on his saber.

    Scene - Han, Chewbacca, and Lando in a speeder racing across the Tatooine desert.

    Lando: "Luke Skywalker?"

    Han: "You've heard of him?"

    Lando: "The Empire just put a price on his head so large every bounty hunter in the galaxy is looking for him. You'd think he was the last Jedi, the price they're paying."

    Scene - Vader standing before the emperor?s throne, in front of a large round window overlooking a Coruscant sunset. Palpatine approaches him in perfect posture, dressed in purple senate robes.

    Vader: "He is strong in the force, like his father was."

    Palpatine: "He must be destroyed."

    Vader: "It will be done."

    Scene - a tropical island. A tall mountain looms over the white sand, pouring down water from above into a river that divides the beach. The Millennium Falcon shoots out from behind the waterfall and flies off frame.

    Scene - Jabba's Palace.
    Han, Lando, and Chewbacca stand before Jabba.

    Han: "Forget it Jabba. We're joining the rebellion..."

    Chewbacca grunts in agreement.

    Scene - Luke and Vader dueling in a broken down library in the Jedi Temple, overlooking a Coruscant night sky.
    They clash sabers a few times in a quick montage, then pause with their blades held together in front of a close-up of Luke.

    Scene - a grand space battle over Coruscant. The Millennium Falcon speeds over a star destroyer, raking it with fire before disappearing in the giant ship's wake.

    Scene - Palpatine's throne room - night. Lando Calrissian trains a gun on the emperor. A massive hairy beast with extra long arms and a swaying, hairy, trumpet-shaped snout stands behind Lando, training a large gun at the emperor, well-over Lando's head.

    Palpatine cackles.

    Scene - the Jedi library, where Luke lays face down on the floor.
    Vader clenches his fist.

    Vader: "You are defeated."

    Luke looks up weakly at him.
    Princess Leia walks into frame and picks up Luke's lightsaber from beside his hand. She looks coldly at Vader and turns on the saber.

    Leia: "It's not over yet, Vader."

    Fade out to black.

    Link to story : Star Wars II
     
  10. jedi_bounty

    jedi_bounty Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Jul 26, 2002
    Title: In My Father's Shadow
    Author(s): Jedi Bounty
    Timeframe: AOTC
    Characters: Tiari Enam Kenobi (OC), Amé Enam (OC), Etana Jade (OC), Obi-Wan, Anakin, Padme
    Genre(s): OC, Romance, Angst, Action
    Notes: None at the moment

    ***

    Trailer :
    Obi-Wan awoke, the still darkness surrounding him. For a second he couldn't remember where he was, or why there was a woman in his arms. Then it all came back to him; he was with Amé, beautiful Amé. He gently stroked her silky, dark brown tresses, reflecting on her intoxicating beauty. Waves of hair encircled her head, and her long dark lashes concealed deep brown eyes. Her full, red lip parted gently with each breath, her slender body, covered in seemingly flawless skin, was soft against his, and he loved her all the more.

    *****

    Tiari watched as her mother gently wiped specks of dust from the glass picture frames. They were old frames, ones made of either wood or metal with complex designs wrought in them. In the middle was a picture, covered by a sheet of glass. Her mother had collected them for as long as Tiari could remember. She kept all of her special pictures in the frames, though she also kept a holographic copy of each as a back up. Each frame was different and every picture showed the same people at their various ages, Tiari, Mother, Grandfather and Grandmother, and Father. Each picture was the same, except one. Hidden in the back, closest to Mother's bed, was a picture of another man, a younger looking man. Tiari had never asked Mother about the man; there had never been a need to.

    Tiari watched as Mother tenderly cleaned a picture of Father. Tiari had been fourteen when Father's ship had crashed, taking his life with it. Although she missed him, they had never been very close. Tiari didn't want to seem like an unloving child, but her father's death hadn't been as catastrophic to her as a similar even was to other children. No, Tiari had always been closer to her mother than to her father, and she had always had her tutor, Linu.

    Her mother picked up another picture, the one of the other man, and started to rub the dust off the glass. Tiari watched, her curiosity soon kicking in. Gathering her courage, she touched her mother's shoulder, turning her around.

    "Who is that Mother?" Tiari asked, pointing to the picture.

    Link to story : In My Father's Shadow
     
  11. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

    Registered:
    Sep 21, 2000
    Title: Silent Maiden
    Author(s): Sara Kenobi
    Timeframe: About 6 years before ANH
    Characters: Padme, Obi-Wan, OC's
    Genre(s): Angst, Drama
    Notes: Vader and Palpatine will be also in this.

    ******

    [Star Wars: Across the Stars theme]



    What if you had a second chance?

    "You must be Jowen Xavier," Obi-Wan Kenobi smiled. "Padme has told me much of you in her messages
    over the years. Your daughter, Joy, as well."

    What if everything began to happen to take it all away?

    "Why would he hate her so much?" Jowen demanded, clearly frustrated. "Our
    marriage, and life together, is perfectly legal. Their marriage was declared void upon
    him leaving her. It is illegal to abandon your family on Naboo, sir."

    What if you decided, enough was enough?

    "I'm here concerning your last message, Milady," Obi-Wan said. "You stated that
    you're returning to Coruscant. I think you should seriously reconsider that idea.
    There still is a danger you know."

    "I'm most aware of that, thank you," Padme snapped sharply. "But I'm long tired of
    hiding. I've hid here for nearly sixteen years. My own home is my prison. It will be no
    longer."

    What if the secrets of the past could no longer be kept secret?


    "What is it?"

    "At the request of the Organa's, Padme," Obi-Wan began gentally.
    "I performed a Jedi mind trick on her, before I left with you to Naboo. She will remember nothing about you.
    They felt it was necessary with Vader and Palpatine lurking about in the Alderaani Court so much. It would
    have been only time until Vader discovered who she really was. Then-"

    "How dare you!" Padme cried, slapping his face.

    What if you could no longer stand to just let things happen?

    I will be going with Eowen to Coruscant," Padme barked. "There is no debate. Is
    that clear?"

    What if you could no longer run, hide, or ignore?

    "It is good to see you again, Amidala"

    "Eowen, run." Padme screamed.

    What if the past was present? There would be no more running.

    "It has been a long time, old friend."

    "You'll not be the death of me, yet."


    [Lightsabers ignite and flash]

    Silent Maiden



     
  12. ViariSkywalker

    ViariSkywalker FoFF Hostess Extraordinaire star 4 VIP - Game Host

    Registered:
    Aug 9, 2002
    Title: Kineris
    Author(s): Viari Skywalker
    Timeframe: Intertrilogy, 8 years before ANH
    Characters: OCs, Vader
    Summary: Eight years before A New Hope, two young Imperial naval ensigns from Alderaan are assigned to their first ship, a new Victory II-class Star Destroyer called the Kineris.
    Genre(s): Adventure, Drama, (a mix of genres really)
    Notes: will eventually be part of a series (hopefully)

    ***

    Trailer:

    Jash watched closely as the commander seemed to weigh his thoughts. His pale blue eyes gazed steadily into the ebony armor that shrouded Vader?s face. There was really no way to describe the absurdity of the scene. Kedla on one side, average in height and frame with his icy eyes and boyishly wavy black hair, his uniform crisp. He was the model of stunningly good looks and cool charm. Opposite was Vader, like a raven god standing high above everyone else. His entire being dripped with power ? not merely political and military influence, but physical strength as well. Even against the dark backdrop of space, which could hold no light to begin with, Vader was as black as the very essence of night.

    The two men ? if Vader could indeed be classified with normal men ? were as different as day and night. Jash didn?t claim to know much about Darth Vader?s personal history, but he imagined that the Dark Lord had at one time lived a life free of his monstrous armor. Still, he doubted that Vader had ever been anything like Commander Kedla.

    ***

    Link: Kineris
     
  13. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

    Registered:
    Jun 4, 2002
    All right, here we go.


    Title: While you were out...

    Author(s): DarthBreezy

    Timeframe: E-3 AU

    Characters: Obi, baby Luke and Liea, Anakin and Padme'

    Genre(s): Very AU, humor

    Notes: Updated weekly with at least an author's note if things are stuck.

    Lowbrow Humor ;)


    Trailer :

    In an alternate galaxy, far far away, Anakin Skywalker and his Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, find themselves in a precarious situation that no amount of Jedi training could prepare them for. A weekend with force sensative twins. Skywalkers to be exact.


    *****************************

    ?Four days Master,? Anakin replied, trying to sound more confident then he felt. ?Padme? does it all the time, the children, the Senate, How hard can it be??


    ***************************

    ?Luke, say ?daddy?.?

    ?Sy-OCK-bbbbbbbb.? replied his son through a happy burst of bubbles.

    ?Father.? Anakin repeated, determined.

    ?Masa-OCK! Bwan!? crowed Luke.

    ?Faaaaaa-ther.?

    ?Be-WAN poo!?

    *******************

    Obi-Wan set the squirming infant down on the counter and began the process of undressing him with Luke giggling and cooing all the while. He took a piece of cloth like towel and ran it under a bit of warm water and proceeded to wash the boy?s body. The instant the warm cloth touch his bottom, Luke let out another happy cry. Within an instant, Obi-Wan realized that there were worse things than a bit of food being splattered all over his robes.






    Want more?

    While you were out
     
  14. Mistryl

    Mistryl Jedi Master star 4

    Registered:
    Jan 5, 2003
    Title: Sins of the Father
    Author(s): Mistryl
    Timeframe: During the original trilogy
    Characters: Luke, Leia, Vader, Emperor Palpatine, Mara, rebels, Shira Brie, OCs
    Genre(s): action/drama/angst
    Notes: There is a main character death and Luke is very dark in this one and the rebels are not nessecarily the good guys. This is more an Imperial based story, yes, I know that's unusual for me.

    ***

    Trailer : Luke was taken as a child and Leia has been captured only to realize there is more to fear than the Empire.


    ?Lord Skywalker,? a young Imperial soldier said from behind Luke?s shoulder and he turned towards him.

    ?Yes??

    ?A group of rebels have been apprehended.?

    ?Does Lord Vader know about this??

    ?Uh, not yet, my Lord,? he stuttered.

    ?Very well. Bring the rebels to the detention center. I?ll see to them after Lord Vader is informed.?

    ?Yes, my Lord. One of the rebels was armed with this.?

    Luke looked down at the weapon in the soldier?s hand. A lightsaber. The weapon of the accursed Jedi Knights.

    He nodded and took it before turning around and leaving.


    ___________________


    Darth Vader looked up as he felt the presence of his son approaching. He felt Luke?s thoughts on the rebels, his unease of them. The door opened and he watched the cold gaze of his son on him.

    ?A group of rebels have been captured.?

    ?I know.? Vader nodded and saw the rock cold look on his son?s face.

    ?One of the rebels was carrying this.? Luke offered the lightsaber to his father.

    Vader?s menacing mask tilted downwards towards the weapon. ?A Jedi? It?s not possible. A new Jedi could not have been trained. All of them are dead.?

    ?Could you have missed one??

    ?There is no one to train them.?

    ?Yes, but I felt her presence. She is here, and trained.?

    ?It?s not possible.?

    ?You doubt my abilities?? Luke
    questioned, his cold gaze questioning.

    ?You are not trained.?

    Luke gaze a curt nod but them removed the lightsaber from his belt. ?Shall we decide whether I am or not right now??

    ?You think you can defeat me??

    ?You know I?m powerful.?

    ?Yes, but you are only a learner.?

    ?Do you truly believe that? Do you believe I couldn?t harm you??

    ?You do not have the training to harm me.?

    ?Then why are you afraid??

    Vader had nothing to respond to his son as a sly smile crossed his son?s face. ?If you fear my abilities than trust them. Do not try to tell me you don?t fear them. I can feel your fear.?

    Luke hooked the lightsaber to his belt again. ?When you wish for the contest I shall be in my quarters after I interrogate the prisoners.? Luke bowed his head and with a curt, military turn, left the room.


    Link to story : Sins of the Father
     
  15. Kiin_Jasiin

    Kiin_Jasiin Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Aug 12, 2002

    Title: Star Wars Saga II - Episode I - A Creeping Doom
    Author: Patrick Reid (Kiin_Jasiin)
    Timeframe: 1,000 years after RotJ
    Characters: (All OC) Kiin Jasiin, Kyrik Lune, Sherrrursh, Taba Feydan, General Xas Thorstrike, Kiri Ogan, Master Gruda, Kaitain Solo, Darth Siren (and others)
    Genre: Script (A "novelized" version will come soon)
    Status: In Progress

    Notes:
    The first of a Star Wars saga set in two separate galaxies, the original Star Wars galaxy, and the Ta Hayana galaxy where the Republic has begun colonization.

    Backstory:

    When the Sith were made nearly extinct, one went into hiding, instituting a Rule of Two to hide themselves until they could avenge themselves to the Jedi. But there was another survivor, Darth Agony. Rather than hiding from the Jedi, he chose to exile himself to a distant galaxy, flying alone in his long distance transport vessel to the nearest galaxy, the distant and vast spiral Ta Hayana galaxy.

    870 years after the Sith were thought defeated for good, after the Force was brought to balance by the Jedi Skywalkers, the Republic began to reach into this galaxy, and the Jedi Order began to follow.

    Two detachments of the Jedi were sent, both were lost without a trace.

    At the start of A Creeping Doom, the third detachment's only survivor, Kiri Ogan flees to Coruscant to bring disturbing news to the Council.


    Link:

    A Creeping Doom
     
  16. JediStarMoonstruck

    JediStarMoonstruck Jedi Master star 5

    Registered:
    Feb 19, 2002
    Last time I try to get people to read my fic. :p

    Title: Danger Among the Shadows
    Author(s): JediStarMoonstruck
    Timeframe: NJO
    Characters: Anakin Solo, Ken Palpatine, OCs.
    Genre(s): Action/Adventure, Fantsay
    Notes: I haven?t read NJO so Luke and the others will have limited roles until a certain point. At this moment, I have started to push them toward that point.

    ***

    Trailer : Tahiri got tried of this kid?s insults at her life. She pushed her way to the front. His eyes widened at the sight of her, but she ignored that and said, ?You don?t know what you?re talking about. The Jedi have saved the lives of many people over the years and we will save people this time and win this war. It?s only a matter of time.?

    She thought that would have shut him up, but it did not. The kid had narrowed his eyes in disbelief. ?Really? I don?t see you winning. When are you going to make a move? Oh, that?s right, Jedi don?t fight back. They let themselves be stepped on!? he said mockingly.

    Tahiri felt a hand on her shoulder. She was probably disobeying what Master Luke taught her about the Jedi, but she felt that she had to defend the life she chose to live. ?The Jedi do fight when the lives of others are in danger.? She choked on the next part. ?Many have died to save the lives of others.?

    But like before, her words did nothing to convince this kid. ?Really? If the Jedi were so powerful, then how come they can?t save their own lives?? he snarled. ?I bet you?re not as powerful as you make yourselves out to be. If the Jedi were powerful, then why didn?t that Anakin Solo live?? he questioned.

    Tahiri felt her heart tighten. She felt great sadness and started to get angry. From behind she felt his words opening up the old wounds Anakin?s death had imposed on his family.

    ?If he was as powerful as he was supposed to be, why didn?t he live? He didn?t have any power. He was worthless. His death just shows what little power you Jedi have,? said the kid. He pushed his way through the two families, leaving them there shocked and in complete agony.

    Link to story : Danger Among the Shadows
     
  17. cadence

    cadence Jedi Youngling

    Registered:
    Sep 15, 2002
    Title: Decked
    Author: Cadence
    Timeframe: PT, 1.5 years post-AotC
    Characters: Anakin, Obi-Wan, OCs
    Genre(s): Action/Adventure
    Notes: The OCs play very prominent roles and often play perspective characters, so keep that in mind. Self-contained, but hopefully the first of a series.

    ***
    Teaser:

    Boots sounded on durasteel flooring. Lieutenant Denalt opened the door.

    Inside, the standard issue assortment of pilots played games, watched holovids, slept, and cheated egregiously at sabacc. No discernable change in their activities occurred as Tellan and Lieutenant Denalt entered. However after a few moments, their continued silent, uncomfortable presence drew the eyes of their fellows with undeniable magnetic appeal.

    One of the sabacc players - a thin, squarely framed young man ? waved his hand at them in consideration; the other players, a female Bothan and a very pale man, snuck glances at his cards as he did so.

    ?Interesting meeting you here. Hope you?re Sabres. We don?t tolerate any other cards around here.?

    A dark haired girl, mostly obscured by the couch she had sprawled on to channel surf the holovid, spoke up in a Core accented voice, ?That?s right, that is. It?s our lounge. We made a flag and everything.?

    The new Lieutenants raised their eyes to the wall. On it hung an enthusiastically painted banner, decorated with a badly outlined sword and blue stripes that trailed enthusiasm onto the military gray wall.

    ?It?s very nice.? Tellan complimented. ?That?s a . . . saber??

    The gazes fixed on them hardened. In her evident startlement, Lieutenant Denalt accidentally stepped on his foot. Hard.

    ?It?s a lightsaber,? replied the channel surfer.

    ?Haven?t met the Commander yet, have you?? A new voice chimed in.

    Decked!
     
  18. cadence

    cadence Jedi Youngling

    Registered:
    Sep 15, 2002
    Eek! Double post.
     
  19. Lisse

    Lisse Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Jan 6, 2001
    Whee! Snippet thread!

    Title: The Circle
    Author: Lisse
    Timeframe: A few decades after ROTJ.
    Characters: Primarily OCs, especially a boy named Ben Darklighter, but Han, Luke, Palpatine, Wedge and Corran are all key players.
    Genre: AU, drama, action-adventure, sprinklings of comedy and angst.
    Notes: This is an AU that starts with a what-if at the Battle of Endor and heads into left field. I am selectively ignoring the NJO. Vong? What Vong?

    ***

    Trailer: Luke Skywalker fell to the Dark Side during the Battle of Endor, and the universe changed forever. Now history is repeating itself -- and the only way to stop a dark future is to stop believing in the Force itself.

    From Chapter Nine: Mirror Image --

    He pushed himself up on unsteady legs, supporting himself against the cold bulkhead. His heart hammered against his ribs and his breath came in shallow gasps, but his hands were curled into white-knuckled fists. Somehow he was going to fight back, even if it meant spending his last moments in silent defiance.

    Darth Rage raised his saber. Ben lifted his head, letting the red light of the saber flood over his features, and locked his gaze with those inhuman, soulless eyes.

    And then something utterly foreign flickered across the Sith's face.

    Recognition.

    Link to story: Here
     
  20. red rose knight

    red rose knight Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Registered:
    Sep 3, 2001
    Title: Seeking Solace
    Author: red_rose_knight
    Timeframe: 9 years after The Phantom Menace
    Characters: Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi, OCs, Yoda
    Genre: AU, Drama, Angst, Action
    Keywords:
    Summary: At age 11, Anakin Skywalker?s apprenticeship with Obi-Wan Kenobi came to a tragic end during a diplomatic mission to Selenoor Bukha. Now seven years later, he is being sent back to Selenoor Bukha where he must face his demons and Obi-Wan again for the first time.
    Notes:

    * * * * *

    In the small circle of men stood Obi-Wan Kenobi. His cloak hung ragged and limp, scorched and burned against his weary form. Muscles straining as he raised the pale blue fire to defend against the continuing onslaught.

    His eyes.

    Anakin had seen that look in dying men?s eyes before.

    * * * * *

    Startled out of the nightmare, Anakin abruptly sat up. Realizing that he was in his room in the apartment he and his master shared safe in the temple, the chill of the nightmare began to lift. His breathing slowed and he consciously took several long, slow breaths. Fingers drifted to the roll of muscle at his left shoulder and he massaged the slight ache that radiated out.

    His shoulder always hurt after the nightmare.

    For a few moments, he sat there silently, listening to the dearth of sounds in the apartment. Good, he thought, he had not awakened his master. Every mention of his nightmares always brought worry out in the older Jedi.

    A few moments more and he had regained control of his raging emotions. Stilling his mind, he sat there quietly in a light meditative state. He never tried to seek answers for the nightmare. He knew the cause and knew there was no reason to analyze it.

    There was nothing he could do to change the past.

    Seeking Solace
     
  21. Padawan_Jess_Kenobi

    Padawan_Jess_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Nov 20, 2002
    Wohooo! Fic promotion is fun... 8-}

    Title: Will The Sun Ever Shine Again?
    Author(s): Padawan_Jess_Kenobi
    Timeframe: Jedi Apprentice. Obi-Wan is 14-15 years old.
    Characters: Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon (someone else, but don't want to give it away until you read it)
    Genre(s): angst, angst, and more angst. Oh- and Obi-torture, also.
    Notes: Did I mention there was Obi-torture? [face_devil]

    ***

    Trailer : What if pain...

    [shot of Obi-Wan screaming, and a glistening weapon stained with blood]

    Coldness...

    [Obi-Wan shivers helplessly]

    And death were upon you?

    [shot of Obi-Wan coughing up blood]

    Voice: "I will see to it that Kenobi dies, but first, I will make him suffer."

    What if you had no chance to live...

    Voice: "Your days are numbered, Kenobi."

    Unless you put your trust in the one you least wanted to.

    "I want to help you Obi-Wan."

    Obi-Wan: No!

    "I've changed Obi-Wan, trust me."


    Could you...

    "Trust me..."

    Believe...

    Obi-Wan: "Why do you want to help me?

    The Truth...

    "Because I've lost everything I loved. And I'm like you, Obi-Wan."

    When its put in front of you?

    Obi-Wan: "I? I trust you. I trust you-"

    "Somebody get him help!"


    But could you hold on enough...

    [shot of Obi-Wan fainting, and the man catching him]

    To live...

    Obi-Wan: I...can't make it. Master!"

    "You can make it Obi-Wan. Just hold on!"


    And see the sun again?

    [flash to Obi-Wan coughing up blood, and falling to the floor]

    Qui-Gon and Xanatos: "Nooooooooooooo!"

    [evil laugh]

    Can a broken circle...

    "I can save him Qui-Gon, trust me"

    Save his Life?

    [shot of a broken circle and ice blue eyes]

    "I can do it, and I will do it."

    [screen goes black]



    Link: Will The Sun Ever Shine Again?
     
  22. Mcily_Nochi

    Mcily_Nochi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Sep 23, 2001
    Ooooh, a snippet thread. :D


    Title: And the Children Shall Lead
    Author(s): Mcily_Nochi
    Timeframe: Luke and Leia are 12
    Characters: Luke, Leia, Han, Obi-Wan, Vader, Padme, Rabe, Sabe, Bail, Chewie, Talon Karrde
    Genre(s): little bit of everything (like the OT) but especially AU
    Notes: The first in a trilogy. Followed by In the Valley of Shadow (below) and Blessed are the Peacemakers (yet to be written).
    ***

    Trailer :

    And the Children Shall Lead

    [text against a starscape] In a time of darkness . . .

    [A Lamda-class shuttle swoops across space. Camera pans to reveal the Death Star.]

    [text] In a time of uncertainty . . .

    [Bail Organa stands with his arm around wife. Both look worried.]

    [text] Disaster can strike at any time.

    [Camera zooms slowly in on sleeping Leia. Suddenly she sits bolt upright, her eyes wide.]

    [Leia] Who are you?

    [Han] Han Solo, at your service. [clamps his hand over her mouth and drags her out of bed]

    [fade to black]

    [fades back in on Bail and Saché Organa. Saché has tears in her eyes and is white-faced. Rabé rushes in and hugs her]

    [Saché] We let Padmé down. For the first time ever, we failed her, Rabé. The Empire is sure to find them before we do.

    [fade up on Vader. close-up of his face]

    [Vader] I will not fail my Master. Not this time.

    [fade up on the twins in a cell on Kessel, full of elderly and ill prisoners. Camera zooms in on Obi-Wan Kenobi, with Padmé asleep on his lap]

    [Luke] I'm Luke, and this is my twin sister, Leia. What is your name, sir?

    [Obi-Wan] My name is . . . Ben. Ben Kenobi.

    [fade up on Vader storming into the cell and lifting the twins in his arms]

    [voice-over Palpatine] Bring them to me.

    [fade to black]

    [text] Now they must fight not only for their own lives . . .

    [fade up on Luke and Leia wielding lightsabers, their faces grim and frightened]

    [text] . . . but for the galaxy . . .

    [fade up on the Death Star destroying Alderaan]

    [text] . . . and for their father's soul.

    [fade up on Luke looking down at a fallen Vader]

    [Luke] Father, why did you do this?

    [Obi-Wan] It was all a mistake.

    [fade up on Obi-Wan, standing over Vader]

    [Obi-Wan] Your children will redeem you. I swear they will.

    [Vader] I know.

    [fade to black]

    [text] The heroes of the future . . .

    [fade up on Han helping a limping Chewbacca across the docking bay]

    [fade up on Luke and Leia embracing their mother]

    [fade up on Han and Talon Karrde bending over a computer in desperation]

    [text] . . . join up with the heroes of the past . . .

    [fade up on Han, Karrde, Sabé, and Rabé running down a corridor]

    [fade up on Obi-Wan grinning at Han]

    [text] . . . to rid the galaxy of evil . . .

    [fade up on Vader at the center of a dark storm inside the Imperial Palace, heartlessly murdering hundreds of stormtroopers while Obi-Wan looks on in horror]

    [fade up on Luke and Leia facing Palpatine with a lightsaber]

    [Luke] We will never give in!

    [fade up on Palpatine sitting on his throne, cackling]

    [text] . . . forever.

    [fade up on Leia running the Emperor through with her lightsaber, then Luke cutting off his head. The twins look at what they've done, then fall into each other's arms, crying.]

    [fade up on Luke and Leia bending over comatose Padmé, their hands resting on her, and then a flash of light]

    [light fills screen, then fades away to reveal the starscape again]

    [text] And the Children Shall Lead





    Title: In the Valley of Shadow
    Author(s): Mcily_Nochi
    Timeframe: 7 years after And the Children Shall Lead (above)
    Characters: Luke, Leia, Han, Obi-Wan, Rostek and Corran Horn, Mon Mothma, Garm Bel Iblis, Rabe, Sabe, Admiral Ackbar, Chewbacca, Wedge Antilles, Mara Jade, Tarkin, Thrawn
    Genre(s): a little of everything (just like the OT) but especially AU
    Notes: Second of a trilogy. After And the Children Shall Lead
     
  23. HandmaidenEirtae

    HandmaidenEirtae Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Jun 23, 2001
    Title: In the Emperor's Service: Arden Lyn
    Author: HandmaidenEirtae
    Timeframe: Intertrilogy
    Characters: Arden Lyn primarily, Tremayne, OCs, Palpatine and Vader
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Drama
    Snippet:
    (Note: Arden Lyn is meditating to remember her past)

    Again Arden touched the Force. She struggled for a minute between her desire to know and her fear of what she?d learn.

    The Force swept her away then, making the decision for her.

    * * * * *

    ?There hasn?t been a Sith for generations,? Arden said. ?There hasn?t been a dissenter for ages. How can we even be sure there is a Dark Side??

    Master Caltina looked shocked. ?Arden, history has taught us the evil of the Dark Side. Surely you learned in your history classes-?

    ?Of course there are people who would use the Force for evil,? Arden cut in. ?But does that mean there?s a Dark Side? Perhaps there?s just the Force, with no opposite and balancing sides, and each person uses it according to how they see fit.?

    Master Caltina remained silent for a minute, scrutinizing Arden. Arden, caught in the passion of the moment?s argument, had a second to recollect herself. A shiver of horror ran through her. She couldn?t be found out as a dissenter, not this close to the trials. She just wanted to be knighted, and then she and Torrie could escape with their friends.

    ?There are two distinct sides of the Force,? Master Caltina finally said. ?I know, Arden, for I have brushed them both. In time, I fear that you shall know too.?

    * * * * *

    A wrinkled face loomed in front of her. The yellow eyes seemed to send sparks, and the dry lips curled in a sneering smile.

    ?If she will not join us, she will die. We cannot have silent dissenters in our ranks.?

    The wrinkled face dissolved into Tremayne?s. His lips were set in a cold smile. He raised a silver lightsaber ? Arden recognized it as her own blade ? and brought it down in a flash of blinding light.

    * * * * *

    Link: In the Emperor's Service: Arden Lyn

    ~Tae
     
  24. ZaraValinor

    ZaraValinor Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Registered:
    May 31, 2002
    upping so I can find this
     
  25. ZaraValinor

    ZaraValinor Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Registered:
    May 31, 2002
    Title: Thread of the Force
    Author(s): ZaraValinor
    Timeframe: Post-NJO Ben Skywalker is 17
    Characters: Ben Skywalker, Anakin Solo, Jacen, Tahiri, Jaina, Jag, Tadeo and Aunecah Fel (Jaina and Jag's children), Han, and Leia.
    Genre(s): Action/adventure. Tiny bit of romance.
    Notes: This is the third book in a trilogy. First two books are "Pattern of the Force" and "Rent in the Force."

    ***

    The balance of the Force hangs on a thread.

    Ben Skywalker lies writhing on the deck, pain spasming through him.

    A girl must chose her destiny.

    Tahiri sat across from the Sith Lady Sarlana. "You could have killed him? Why didn't you?"

    The past, present, and future, waits in anticipation as the fate of the galaxy is decided.

    Ben hangs suspended in a anti-gravity chamber, while Nefarion circles him. "Forget the delusion
    that your father has filled in your head. Our mother once embraced the Dark, follow here
    example. It was her destiny...and it is your destiny."

    Forgiveness will be tested.

    Anakin enters Sarlana's cell. "I should kill you for what you have done."

    A boy will come into his power.[/i]

    Nefarion stretched out his hand, fingers splayed and stiff, blue jagged bolts of light shooting out
    at Ben. Touching the Force deeply, Ben lifted his hand up to intercept the lighting.

    An alien race abandoned by the Force will find their savior.

    Dorsca Cherrz stood before Representative Zorel.

    "Cherrz, how surprising to see you," Zorel stuttered

    "Do you think I would run and hide while you corrupt our people?"

    Balance hangs by a thread.

    Anakin and Sarlana lie prone on the floor, unconscious and unable to help Ben as he crashes to
    his knees.

    Will the thread break?

    "I can't hold on father, please can't I be with you?"

    And the galaxy fall to darkness?

    A large fleet of Separatist Yuuzhan Vong encroach upon Mon Calamari. Jacen stands at the
    helm of a Mon Cal cruiser. "Jaina get your squadron our there."


    Star Wars

    THREAD OF THE FORCE

    Thread of the Force
     
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