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Saga The John Doe Jedi OC/Vader Between Episode III/ANH

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by TheBurntMan, May 19, 2004.

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  1. TheBurntMan

    TheBurntMan Jedi Youngling

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    The Newly formed Rebellion had sent spies to find imperial secrets. They were about to close in on a tip that a base might be on a deserted plant.

    "We are closing in" Said a Pilot.

    "Excellent search the planet for life forms" said The ship's captain.

    "Negative"

    "That's funny,why would someone tip us off" He thought it would be an ambush.

    "Prepare for anything."

    "Should I do a scan for technology?" said another pilot

    "My educated guess is that the planet was blown to bits in a battle in The Clone Wars,but I`m not certain. Go ahead with the tech scan,you never know"

    "There most have been some long ago"

    We'll check it out. The Captain,and his two companions got on swoop bikes. The Captain's prediction seemed to be correct,it looked as if it had been destroyed in a battle. Nothing was left of the land.

    "Here we go" said the Captain noticing an abandoned Republic outpost. They walked in to explore. He expected to see ruins,but found most of it was completely intact. They went in deeper.

    "Captain!" shouted one of the captain's companions in a surprised voice.

    He had found a door. They opened it,and discovered a grim room,full of imperial torture devices.

    "This is from the Dawn of the Empire,be on guard I think we were deceived"

    Update 5/20

    The three of the rebels walked farther,into the supposed Republic outpost. They explored each room,trying to find answers. When they reached a giant hole in the wall.

    "It looks as if It were flooded in." said a pilot

    "Interesting if we want to know what happeneded here we'll have to go through"

    They walked,it lead to a cavern filled with glaciers,and ice. The captain's assumption most have been correct. When they found a set of stairs. Though scared himself the captain walked down them,then his pilots. They found a room which looked like a dark and deadly torture chamber,a torture chamber for jedi. Inside were skeletons,with jedi robes. They continued in,until they found three men frozen in carbonite.


    "Check to see if they are alive"

    The captain doubted it,but it was still worth a shot.His pilots checked,only one of the three,had survived the freezing process.

    "He sure looks like he didnt enjoy it" said one of the pilots"

    Ignoring it the Captain began to press the buttons to free the frozen man. The carbonite began to melt.

    "Be ready to get him when its done"

    The figured poped out,it was a man in peasant farmer's clothing

    "I cant see" said the man in a raspy voice,as if he'd be waken up from a long slumber.

    The two pilots grabbed him.

    "Who are you?"

    "I am Captain James Genyolds,and these are my pilots,Shea Racker,and Kil Rehcok. Who are you sir?"

    "I`m not quite sure,if I remember."

    "You mean you have no memory of how you got here,and what happened to you?"

    "I dont think so."

    "Amnesia" said Captain James

    He got up and walked into a skeleton. Startled,he jumped away.

    "Where am I?"

    "We dont know ourselves?"

    The man saw something on the floor that seemed vaquely familiar. He picked it up,it was a lightsaber,from one of the dead jedi.

    "You have some skill with that?" Said Shea the pilot.

    "I think I might of"

    He ignited it,and swung it around like a pro.

    "The weapon of the Jedi" said Kil

    "The Empire killed them all off 6 years ago when it was created by that mad man Palpatine,and his servant Vader"

    "We will have to tell the base about you"

    "I`m not sure thats a good idea"

    "Why?"

    "I cant remember"





     
  2. DARTH2-D2

    DARTH2-D2 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    nice start,
     
  3. TheBurntMan

    TheBurntMan Jedi Youngling

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    Thanks should have the update tonight
     
  4. AnakinsHeir

    AnakinsHeir Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 2, 2004
    Good start, look forward to more.
     
  5. TheBurntMan

    TheBurntMan Jedi Youngling

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