Beyond - Legends Unaware (PosNJO - Yuzhann Vong Remnants unaware the war is over cont'd to fight (Solos, Jag Fel)

Unaware Part I.

This is the first part of a story about Yuzhann Vong that are unaware the was has ended and are still trying to wage it on a small jungle moon. It takes place during the months of reconstruction of the gaxaly. Jaina Solo and her parents are on a back-water world helping many cope with the diaster of being put in a death camp and left to rot by the now defeated enemies. Artoo's sensors pick up something on one of moons orbiting the planet, and the Elder Solos take off to investegate. Chief of State Cal Omas, Ambassador Jag Fel, and a toren Jaina Solo will follow in there wake and meet a suprising force of lunatics and sucicidal holymen. Threepio and a Ryn have uncovered an underground mystery and someone is out to kill Jaina... if that sounds intresting too you please read on.

Dramatis Persona.
Jaina Solo (human female; Jedi Knight)
Han Solo (human male; pilot)
Leia Organa Solo (human female; former chief of state)
See Threepio (driod male; protocol)
Artoo Deetwo (driod male; astromech)
Ambassador Jag Fel (human male; Ambassador)
Chief of State Cal Omas (human male; Chief of State)
Erli Prann (human male; adventurer)
Ryn the Ryn (Ryn male; miner)

Jaina Solo moved through the death camps, with her sorrow enclosed deep inside her soul. She would never want these people to sense her pain, she would never want to put more burden on those who on the winning side who had lost the war. A hand touched her shoulder, and in an instant she knew it was her father, she turned and gave him a quick hug.
"It ain't pretty."
"I've forgotten what pretty is, dad...we must have really been screwing up don't you think?"
"Whadda you mean?"
"I mean we must have been something terrible, for some higher power--"
"The Force."
"Yeah, the force, we must have been something terrible for the force to allow this kind of pain."
"It's not the first time your Uncle's force has found a reason to turn the universe on its head, sometimes I'm glad I don't understand it."
"...Ha, listen to us talking about it like its some kind of primitive god worshiped on one of the backwater planets."
"...Yeah, look at us." Father and daughter continued to move through the camps, there was an silence followed, a silence looking to cut them off from the long years that they had just endeavored, a silence that Han, hoped, would be the end of this time in the galaxy. No destruction, peace, for a time.
"Master Solo!" cried a voice from behind them, ending that silence, bringing it all back to them all to quickly.
"Some things will never change." Han offered, and his daughter offered him a laugh and a smile two of things she didn't often favor doing anymore.
"Master Solo -- it seems that Artoo has picked up a strange signal from one of the moons rotating this planet, it?s a code he believes, one he has never come across before... Master Solo, you don't think that there are still military remnants around do you?"
"You know remind to tell Luke to look into down grading Artoo's sensors, he has to long of a range, and I don't need to fix every little problem in the galaxy." there was a laugh from behind him as Leia walked toward her husband and wrapped her arms around him.
"Did a Solo just say he didn't have to fix every little problem in the galaxy."
"Yeah, a Solo did, and its an attitude I think the Solos should stick too."
"Let's go check it out."
"Leia..."
"For old times sake."
"Old times sake, Old times sake when we were getting blasted at and covered in slime, and escaping death stars... Old time sakes..." Han continued his crumbling as Leia and he walked away from there daughter who felt like dropping to the ground and letting all her troubles die, for about the thousandth time she asked herself why not me? why Anakin? She could see Anakin surviving this war, see Anakin diving head first into the babble of his mother and father, she Anakin bring light where ever he came and with that light hope that would give these peoples some security. She was Jaina, Jaina wasn't a light, Jaina

 

Great start. It's great you brought Erli Prann back. I wondered what happed to him after Bilbringi.

 

Thanks.

 

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Woa talk about some read. Maybe a small suggestion. A format like this is nice if someone were to print the story out and then read, but if one is to read this on screen it might be nice to have some more paragraphs, it makes it easier to read

Other than that I really really like this. You are a really good writer and this story has potential, even if it has Jag Fel

 

Nice job, but...

"Oh, lets drop the familiarities kid, were both Corellians here."

Omas is Alderaanian.

 

Ooops