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Saga Black Moon Jedi/AU SW BleachX'over(New posts 8-12!!!)Anakin/Obi-Wan/Siri/Ichigo/

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  1. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Lol. I would vote for Yuki but she isn't on the list. So I would have to say the second one on the list, Kisuke Urahara.

    He sounds a bit egocentric but might make a good character for the story. So is this enough posts to make up for my lack of them earlier? [face_worried]

    Oh and great post! Can't wait for the next one!
     
  2. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Wow three replies. That sure does make up for the lack of replies earlier. Also i will get you a PM on Senna as soon as possible (something i forgot to put in the PM, you could just go to the Bleach wiki and look her up there if that is easier). And as for the poll I am waiting for ladybug's reply but so far it looks like it will be Kisuke. Also Yuki is my Beta's OC and she wanted me to put her in so it will be Kisuke (or whoever wins the poll) and Yuki going. Hope you like that. Also i don't know when the next post will be it depends on how long it takes to write it. Also i am currently writing the first chapter for a pure Bleach fanfic to be posted on Fan Fiction.net. As soon as i post it i will PM you with a link (if you want).

    Edit: Also on another note since the boards are moving i will (when i have time) put this up on Fanfiction as a backup. The user name is the same there and i will try to get it up soon.
     
  3. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I don't mean to sound pushy but if you read your PMs please reply to the story so i know if you are reading.[face_praying].
    Also the next chapter will (assuming i get no votes for anyone else than Kiskue today) be out by friday. I was originally going to do a meeting with Yammamoto but i can't write him well enough so i will just jump back to the SW dimension and have whoever wins the poll explain why they were picked later on.
     
  4. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Here is something to hold you over while i work on a longer chapter. I had hoped to make this longer and more informative but i figured i should not keep you waiting any longer. In the next post i will get the poll winner in. If you read will you please reply so that i know you are reading. Also this is the last chapter with just talking, in other words more action will be coming up. Well here you go enjoy.:)
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    While Ichigo was having his talk with Zangetsu and Shiro (and his friends were sleeping), the Jedi Council were discussing their guests. ?There is no doubt that they are powerful,? Master Windu started, ?but their story about coming from another dimension is too hard to believe?. All the other Masters (except Yoda) had also been thinking that. ?Sense any deception in them did you?? Yoda asked.

    ?No, we did not,? Mace said speaking for the rest of them, ?but we?ve never had any evidence for alternate dimensions.?

    ?Here the evidence is,? Yoda said in a voice that left no room for discussion.

    ?I noticed something else,? Master Tinn said, ?they (except for Ichigo) all seem far older than they look...?

    ?Notice that I did,? Yoda said, ?far too old are the look in their eyes even in Ichigo?s.?

    Mace thought about that ?Speaking of Ichigo, did you notice he has three force signatures instead of the two of his friends??

    ?Yes, I did notice that,? Obi-Wan said (he?s here because he is a candidate for the Council). ?While his and his Zanpaku-to?s are clear and bright, the third one is as dark as the Sith on Naboo.?

    ?Yes notice that I did,? Yoda said. ?Ask him about it we should only after gained his trust we have.?

    ?What about his companions?? Mace asked ?What do we think about their signatures??

    ?Well Rukia?s was pure, though a little cold, probably because of her Zanpaku-to,? Obi-Wan said. ?Renji?s was more fiery and hard to read.?

    Yoda then said, ?Notice something I did, Jushiro?s was the most pure of the group and there was an air of honorability around him.?

    The Council thought about that before Mace said, ?Are any of them awake, so we could summon one of them to ask about their age and force signatures?? Obi-Wan was sent to see if any of them were awake. He found Ichigo, Renji, and Rukia asleep in their rooms but? Captain Ukitake was resting in the Room of a Thousand Fountains.

    As Obi-Wan walked up to him Jushiro said, ?Hello Obi-Wan, do you need something??

    ?I was wondering why you were here.?

    ?It is so tranquil here and it reminds me of home.?

    ?So this reminds you of your home.?

    ?Yes, this room is truly beautiful and so is Soul Society.?

    ?Could I go back with you to see what you mean??? Obi Wan asked.

    To this Jushiro replied, ?I don?t see why not, but why did you really come Obi-Wan? I?m certain it wasn?t just to ask why I was here.?

    ?The Council would like to see you.?

    ?What do they need me for?? Jushiro asked.

    ?We just have a few more questions,? Obi-Wan replied.

    ?Wait you said ?we?; I thought you weren?t a member of the Council, Obi-Wan.?

    ?I am a candidate for mastership,? Obi-Wan explained, pride mixed with sadness.

    ?I can feel a great pain on you Obi-Wan; what is it?? Jushiro asked.

    ?I was just thinking about my old master, Qui-Gon Jinn,? Obi-Wan said with a pained look clouding his face.

    ?What happened to your master?? Jushiro asked.

    ?He was killed by a Sith six years ago.?

    ?A Sith? What?s that??

    ?I should let the council explain that,? Obi-Wan replied.

    ?Ok we should go see the Council then.? As
     
  5. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Ooooooh let's now delve into the deep mysteries of the Force! Wheeeee!

    Also great job with this one. I can't wait for the next post! Soon please![face_praying]
     
  6. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Yeah we will be diving full on into the mystery that is the Force. I would assume that the Soul Reapers will be shocked as much as the Jedi were with their powers (I say assume since i have not started writing yet). In any case the next post will hopefully be sometime between Friday and next Wednesday.[face_praying]
     
  7. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I know i said i would have a chapter by Wednesday but i have not had much time to type so i won't have it till about friday at the earliest sorry.[face_worried]
     
  8. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Ok here is the next chapter. Sorry for the long wait. I hope it is worth it. Well hope you enjoy.[face_praying]
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    Ichigo was trying to think of way to explain to his friends about Senna, ?I wonder if they will believe me,? he thought. ?Senna was ?dead? for a month so how can I convince them??
    ?You worry too much King,? Shiro chimed in. ?Just tell ?em and see how they react.?
    ?I didn?t ask you, Shiro!? Ichigo yelled.
    ?{Ichigo, you could try to show them her Spiritual Pressure},? Zangetsu suggested.
    ?I don?t know how!? Ichigo complained.
    ?You sure are an idiot, King. You know that, right?? Shiro said.
    ?You?re not helping Shiro!?
    ?{Ichigo, before you try to kill Shiro, I have something to tell you},? Zangetsu said.
    ?What Zangetsu?? Ichigo asked, ready to strangle Shiro at any given moment.
    ?{I could show them her Spiritual Pressure.}?
    Ichigo punched Shiro repeatedly while he answered. ?That sounds good to me.?
    ?OW! Will you stop that?!?
    ?Ok, but only if you leave me alone,? Ichigo replied.
    ?Fine! I?ll leave you alone, King? Shiro replied, humming a song as he jumped off to a different area.
    ?Was that ?Kill the King? by Megadeth?? Ichigo wondered, sweatdropping. ?I should go tell them now,? he told Zangetsu. ?Can you figure out a way to show them her Spiritual Pressure??
    Ichigo then went off to tell his friends about Senna. As he was running to look for his friends, he almost bowled over several young kids. ?Sorry!? he yelled as he jumped over a particularly large group. He ran to the left of another group only to run head on into a female Jedi that looked about Obi-Wan?s age.
    ?Ow!? she yelled. ?Watch where you?re going, you moron.? Ichigo noticed that she looked nothing like anyone he had seen before, with long blond hair and icy blue eyes.
    (?Maybe it?s because she looks normal,? Shiro put in. ?Die,? Ichigo replied. ?That hurts, King; I thought you were warming up to me!?).
    ?Hello? Are ignoring me now, you ignorant youngling?? the woman said angrily
    ?What are you talking about?? Ichigo returned, wincing when he realized that he had been spacing out. ?Hey, wait,? he said before the woman could reply, ?what?s a ?youngling???
    ?How can you not know when you are one?? she replied carefully
    ?Oh, so you?re calling me a little kid, eh?? Ichigo said angrily.
    ?Keep a hold on your anger, you little squirt.?
    ?LITTLE SQUIRT!? Ichigo yelled. ?Why you arrogant Jedi b?? Before Ichigo could finish his sentence, Obi-Wan arrived to break up the fight.
    ?Ichigo, Siri, stop fighting,? Obi-Wan said as he walked up.
    ?He started it!? Siri (?So that?s her name,? Ichigo thought.) said.
    ?Hey that?s not true!? Ichigo yelled. ?You started it by calling me a youngling!? ?You are a young person, Ichigo,? Obi-Wan said, trying to calm Ichigo down. ?But you do need to respect him more, Siri.?
    ?Tell me, why does he deserve my respect, Obi?? Siri asked, using said person?s childhood nickname.
    ?It?s simple, really,? Obi-Wan said. ?At age 16, he has almost as much power as Master Yoda.?
    ?Wow,? Siri mumbled, stunned. ?That?s impressive, but also dangerous since he has so much anger.?
    ?Why do you Jedi care so much about anger and hate?? Ichigo asked.
    ?Because it leads to the dark side,? Siri replied, like he should know that already.
    ?What?s the ?dark side??? Ichigo asked, stupidly.
    ?I?ll explain later,? Obi-Wan replied, before Siri could hammer into Ichigo what it was. ?Now you two should apologize to each other.?
    ?Fine, I?m sorry Siri,? Ichigo muttered, not looking her in the eye.
     
  9. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Well in case anyone still cares the next post will be out between this Friday and next Wednesday. I know that it can't be so boring that my readers ditched me so if you have read the last chapter please reply to it.[face_praying]
     
  10. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Upping in the hopes that someone will reply.[face_praying]
     
  11. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Sorry about taking so long to reply. I loved Siri btw.

    Also I found the whole Dark side conversation funny. What would Ichigo look like as a Sith? [face_thinking]

    I think I like this idea.

     
  12. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Just to let anyone still reading know i will have to have a post out by Wednesday. I am out of school then and i don't know when i will have access to another computer. Also it will be a little bit rougher than other posts since i currently don't have a Beta. So there you go i should have a new chapter (rough or not) in a couple of days.
     
  13. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Well here is the next chapter. This is rather short since I only have one more day at most to work so I just decided to post it now. Like I said earlier I don't curently have a Beta so it is more rough than normal. Hope you still enjoy.[face_praying]
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    So thus the Soul Reapers (and Zangetsu) were about to leave the room to tell the Jedi about their discovery. Before they could though Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Siri ran in. ?Hey guys" Ichigo said ?we were just about to come see you.? ?We don?t have time for that now Ichigo? Obi-Wan said ?the temple is under attack!!? ?What!? the Soul Reapers yelled ?by who? Rukia asked for them. ?A group of Dark Jedi? Anakin informed them, ?and since we are the nearest to them the Council is sending us to fight them.? ?Ok which way? Renji asked ?this way!? Siri yelled as the Jedi ran to the base of the Temple. As they were running Zangetsu told Ichigo that among the Dark Jedi was a person who was more powerful than anyone in their group except Ichigo, Jushiro, and Anakin. ?Which one is he?? Ichigo asked ?{you will know when you see him Ichigo}? Zangetsu replied cryptically. After running for what felt like an eternity they reached the base of the temple.
    ?Well where are they? Renji asked? but as he said that they all felt a sudden cold feeling. The source of that feeling was a group of men and women 15 strong in dark robes. One of the Dark Jedi stepped forward ?Hello Jedi, Soul Reapers? he said ?I will make this easy for you, hand over Ichigo or die.? ?And who are you to demand that? Ichigo asked. With that the Dark Jedi lifted his hood to reveal the aged face of Count Sar Dooku. ?You!!? Ichigo yelled ?you?re the one who has been torturing Senna!? ?So that?s her name? Dooku said not denying the accusation ?now when I torture her I can use her real name.? With that Ichigo ran at Dooku screaming at the top of his lungs only for Zangetsu to be stopped by Dooku?s crimson lightsaber. ?Good, I sense much anger in you.? ?Don?t listen to him Ichigo!? Obi-Wan yelled. Dooku then waved forward his allies and soon the Jedi and Soul Reapers were fighting for their lives. ?Who are you anyway!?? Ichigo asked ?that is not important what is important is that you will come with me willingly or not.? ?The only way I?ll go with you is if you lead me to Senna so I can save her!!? Ichigo yelled angrily. ?Good use that anger and hate Soul Reaper it will make you powerful? ?{Don?t Ichigo}? a voice said in Ichigo?s head. ?Who was that? Ichigo thought but said out loud ?I will never listen to you old man? ?So be it Soul Reaper? Dooku spat and used Force Lightning to throw Ichigo into a wall. ?Ichigo, No!!? Rukia yelled, but she was stopped from helping him by the 2 Dark Jedi she was fighting. Meanwhile Ichigo was being electrocuted by Dooku. ?Now foolish boy do you see the power of the Dark Side.? ?I see a weak old man actually? Ichigo said voice strained but still un-cowed, ?and, by the way, I will never join you!? This angered Dooku to the point that all his attention was focused on frying Ichigo. Obi-Wan, meanwhile, had through jumping; kicking, slashing, and Force Pushing defeated his three Dark Jedi opponents. He at first was moving to help Siri, Anakin, and his new Soul Reaper friends? but then he noticed Ichigo being fried alive by Dooku. So thus Obi-Wan decided to sneak up behind Dooku and help Ichigo. As he did just that Obi-Wan heard Dooku saying ?foolish little boy, you could have been a Great Sith but now you are going to die.? As Dooku said that he used his free hand to Force Choke Ichigo. As he did that Ichigo?s eyes went wide because he saw Obi-Wan sneaking up behind Dooku. Dooku, whose attention was entirely on Ichigo, never saw the attack coming. The next thing he knew he was missing a hand with Obi-Wan behind him. Dooku then roared at the top of his lungs and stabbed Obi-Wan through the stomach, much like Darth Maul had
     
  14. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Well here is the next chapter (actually part 2 of the last chapter). This will explain how the last chapter ended like it did. Hope you enjoy.[face_praying]
    Edit: Ok i have gotten this part beta read now so it will hopefully be better now.
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    ?NO!!!!? Siri yelled as Obi-Wan collapsed to the floor ?Obi-Wan!!!?

    Then with a new surge of energy borne by anger and grief for her best friend, Siri started pushing back her enemy who had to use both of his lightsabers to hold her back. Ichigo, meanwhile, was shakily getting to his feet to fight Dooku. But when he stood up he saw only Obi-Wan lying motionless on the floor, because Dooku had fled abandoning his allies. Ichigo then walked up to Obi-Wan to see if he could help him.

    ?I don?t think you can do much here, King? Shiro said. As he said that Siri had managed to cut off one of her opponents lightsabers. This seemed like a good thing until he discarded his remaining lightsaber and drew a double-bladed lightsaber and slashed up Siri?s body. It was only through a quick down-stroke that Siri was able to save herself. Even so her tunic got scorched and she got burned a little bit.

    Obi-Wan taught me how to handle one of these ,then Siri thought, what did he say? She then remembered that she needed to stay in close so that her enemy could not use both blades. And she did just that by using her anger and grief for Obi-Wan, and going perilously close to the Dark Side, to aggressively attack her enemy.

    Siri?s opponent was now barely able to parry her aggressive attacks. Unable to keep parrying Siri?s attacks, the Dark Jedi pulled out his last trick. He attempted to use Force Lighting to stop Siri. Siri was able to catch it on her lightsaber but it pushed her back a little. Her violet lightsaber was close to shorting out from all the Force Lighting being pushed into it, when a warning from the Force caused Siri to jump back. As she did that a blood-red wedge similar to Ichigo?s Getsuga Tensho cut her opponent (and one of Renji?s) clean in half.

    As that attack dissipated a new attack started (literally) burning the Dark Jedi alive. A wave of flame poured in and the Dark Jedi who were still standing (two had been captured by Jushiro) were unable to block it and were turned into ashes. All that survived was their lightsabers. Behind this attack came Kisuke and Yuki.

    ?Kisuke!? Ichigo and Renji yelled, ?Yuki!? Rukia yelled, ?Hello Mr. Urahara,? Jushiro said.

    Anakin was about to say ?more Soul Reapers, wonderful? when he noticed Obi-Wan and immediately ran to his side. Master, how could this happen Anakin thought on the verge of tears when he noticed Siri crying and cradling Obi-Wan?s still form in her arms.

    ?Don?t die on me Obi? she cried out,I never told him that I still love him,Siri thought not able to bring herself to say it out loud.

    Just then Kisuke, Rukia, and Jushiro ran up to help. ?Miss Tachi you need to move so we can heal him? Jushiro said,

    ?How can you heal him when he is so badly wounded? Siri cried not letting go of Obi-Wan.

    ?We have special healing abilities,? Rukia explained, ?and trust me we have healed worse wounds.?

    Hearing this Siri finally released Obi-Wan and let the Soul Reapers heal him. Combing their Kido and Spirit Energy they were able to bring Obi-Wan back from the brink. To the Jedi it looked like a green glow (bristling with Force energy) surrounded the Soul Reapers? hands.

    And amazingly Obi-Wan?s wound closed. Wow Anakin thought, if only they were here when Qui-Gon died, he thought, sad at the thought of the old Jedi?s death. As soon as the Soul Reapers were done with the healing Siri ran up to see if Obi-Wan was truly okay. Amazingly it was like he was never even stabbed.

    ?Now it will be better if he doesn?t move for a while so as not to reopen his wound? Kisuke said.

    As he said that Obi-Wan started to stir. When he opened his eyes he saw Siri hovering over him. He smiled weakly up at her and said

    ?Hey Siri,
     
  15. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    :eek: :confused: :eek: :_| [face_praying] :D [face_love]

    I think that about covers it!
     
  16. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Well here is the next chapter. It is being Beta read so it is rough for now but i will edit the post when it is done. This is a really soft chapter so no real action. Hope you enjoy.:)
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    While Siri and Obi-Wan realized their true feelings, Dooku made it back to his hidden base. With each step he took towards his master Dooku realized that Sidious would be most, displeased, when he found out about Dooku?s failure. Dooku found his Master observing Senna fighting droids as another of his?tests?.

    ?So my Apprentice did you succeed in capturing Ichigo?? Sidious asked without turning around. Senna of course cringed in shock upon hearing Sidious say?Ichigo?.

    Bracing himself Dooku replied ?No Master, I failed.?

    Palpatine then turned around and said, ?How did you fail to complete such a simple task.?

    ?I had Ichigo in my grip when Obi-Wan Kenobi attacked me from behind and cut off my left hand.?

    Dooku replied lifting said stump to emphasize his point. Sidious maintained a calm appearance, while on the inside he was fuming, How could this happen, it wasn?t even a Master who did this?

    ?What about your team, where are they?? he asked Dooku.
    ?All dead, except for two captured by the Jedi.? Dooku replied.

    ?YOU FOOL!!!? Sidious screamed, ?Do you have any idea how much it took to train that team?!?

    Looking for a place to vent his anger Sidious chose Senna. He then proceeded to use Force Lightning on her. Sidious was electrocuting Senna so bad that she sent all her energy into a mental call for help to Ichigo, before passing out. The sheer force of this call put Ichigo into (what looked to his friends) a coma. In reality he was in his inner world with Senna (or at least an image of her).

    ?Senna? Ichigo said softly.

    ?Ichigo.? Senna replied.

    They then ran up to each other in a crushing hug. Now on the outside Ichigo had collapsed and seemed to be in a coma.

    ?Ichigo!!? Rukia yelled.

    ?What just happened?? Anakin asked.

    ?I don?t know? Renji replied, ?maybe that lightning took more out of him than we thought.?

    They then carried Ichigo to the other med-center. Now to the Jedi (and Rukia and Renji) it looked like a coma, but Jushiro could tell that Ichigo was in his inner world.

    So he told the others, ?Don?t worry Ichigo is just in his inner world.?

    ?Inner World?? Anakin asked.

    ?Yes, it is where a Zanpaku-to resides in it?s owners soul.? Jushiro explained.

    ?So when will he come out?? Rukia asked.

    ?That I don?t know? Jushiro replied, ?it depends on what forced him into it.?

    ?Well is there anything we can do to help him?? Renji asked.

    ?Sadly no, it is up to Ichigo to resolve his issues.? Jushiro replied.

    Meanwhile back in his inner world Ichigo was asking Senna questions. ?How are you here?? he started,

    ?I sent you a call for help and this is that call.? Senna replied sadly.

    ?What happened to need this? Ichigo asked, to which Senna replied. ?I was being electrocuted badly.? Senna replied simply.

    ?Well you?re here now so we might as well take advantage of it.? Ichigo said.
    ?Don?t do anything bad over there King!? Shiro yelled from a different building.
    ?Shut up Shiro!!? Ichigo yelled throwing a rock at him.

    ?Who was that Ichigo?? Senna asked.

    ?That was my Inner Hollow.? Ichigo replied. ?And I will explain that later.? he added.

    And thus they walked to a different area to catch up on things. That amounted to a lot since both had a lot of stories, not the least of which was Senna?s capture by Palpatine.

    Meanwhile Shiro was talking to Zangetsu. ?Aww, come on ?Zangetsu let me interrupt them, it would be funny.?

    ?{No Shiro, give them some time alone.}?

    ?Man you?re no fun.? Shiro replied walking off humming again.

    {I really worry about him,} Zangetsu thought.

    Meanwhile Senna was describing her torture at Sidious? hands. ?You have no idea what I was going through Ichigo,? she started
     
  17. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Just to let anyone who is still reading know i will have the last chapter edited soon and another hopefully out in a couple weeks. Please review if you read your PM.[face_praying]
     
  18. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Even though I don't understand bleach I can really tell how the suspense is building. And Im definitely loving all the Obi/Siri moments. Keep up the great work!
     
  19. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Well here is the next chapter. Sorry it took so long but I have been busy lately with my other Bleach story and my new Gundam SEED story so I have not had much time to write this. In anycase in this chapter you will see that Obi-Wan has changed, for the better from Dooku's attack. Hope you enjoy and please review.
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    ?I love you, Ichigo.? And then she was gone. ?I love you too, Senna.? Ichigo whispered.

    Ichigo suddenly woke up from his inner world. Unfortunately it startled a certain red-haired Soul Reaper who was standing guard. Renji, in fact, was so shocked he fell over? right on top of Rukia. ?Ow!!? she yelled, ?watch where you?re going, Pineapple!!? Rukia emphasized her point by whacking said ?pineapple? on the head with her sketchbook. ?OW!!!? Renji yelped, ?Don?t blame me Rukia, blame Ichigo!!!? That surprised Rukia who looked past Renji to see Ichigo waking up. ?Ichigo!? She yelled, running up to see if her orange-haired friend was truly ok. ?Yes I?m ok Rukia, better than ever even.? Ichigo told Rukia guessing what her first question would be.

    Rukia then noticed the envelope in Ichigo?s hands? but before she could ask about it Obi-Wan, Siri, and Anakin ran up closely followed by the remaining Soul Reapers. ?So he finally woke up eh?? Kisuke asked. That surprised Ichigo who felt like he was out for twenty minutes at most. ?How long was I out?? he asked no one in particular. ?You were out for about a day and a half now, Ichigo.? Renji replied. ?WHAT!!!? Ichigo screamed, ?I thought I was only out for twenty minutes or so!?

    ?Sorry Ichigo, we didn?t want to pull you out of your Inner World and risk mental damage.? Jushiro said wearily. Rukia noticed that and asked, obviously concerned, ?Are you okay Captain?? Jushiro smiled, and replied, ?Yes, I?m okay Rukia, just very tir?? but before he could finish he started to cough up blood!!

    Oh no, not now!! All the other Soul Reapers thought. Obi-Wan, being the nearest person, moved to help Jushiro? only to suddenly find himself right next to him. Was that Shun-po?! Kisuke thought completely shocked. Meanwhile, Obi-Wan thought, what just happened, how did I get over here? But as he grabbed a collapsing Jushiro, Obi-Wan noticed something that shocked him even more than before.

    He was wearing a Soul Reaper uniform, and had a Zanpaku-to! Even his now ?dead? body was lying next to an equally shocked Siri. It turned out Obi-Wan had ?died? from Dooku?s stab, and the Soul Reapers, in attempting to heal him, had given him Soul Reaper powers and that had gotten his soul back in the body now lying on the ground. He handed an un-conscious Jushiro to a sobbing Rukia, who with Renji?s help, carried him to the nearest nurse. Obi-Wan then fell to his knees, only to have Kisuke?s comforting hand put on his shoulder.

    ?I?m sorry; I know this must be a shock for you, Mr. Kenobi.? Kisuke said soothingly. ?Now, that?s an understatement!!? Obi-Wan replied angrily. ?But it?s not a bad thing though,? Kisuke continued, ?you have your Jedi powers and the powers of a Soul Reaper now.?

    Oh and that?s supposed to make me feel better about being DEAD?! Obi-Wan thought bitterly. Like he was reading his mind, Kisuke then said, ?And even if you are a Spirit now, you can still be with whoever you want so long as they go to the Soul Society.? That cheered up Obi-Wan (and Siri). ?I think we should go see how Captain Ukitake is doing Hat-boy.? Yuki said speaking for the first time. So after putting Obi-Wan back in his body the Soul Reapers and Jedi went to check on their mutual friend. When they got there Rukia told the Jedi about Jushiro?s sickness. ?Ok, what you just saw was one of his coughing fits, and they are sometimes even worse than that.?

    Obi-Wan then asked the (seemingly) obvious question, ?Why can?t you heal him, you healed us fine after the attack, just a bit late in my case?? Rukia sadly answered, ?Our Kido doe
     
  20. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Nov 19, 2009
    Well as you can tell this was a double post. I decided since I made you guys wait almost two whole months for an update the least I could do was put both of my chapters in. And just to let you know Obi-Wan gets a chance to try out his new powers. I hope you enjoy, and please reply to each chapter.
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    As the group walked to the training room, Obi-Wan thought about his new powers. Hmm, so I have the powers of a Soul Reaper now. Maybe I can even learn the name of my Zanpaku-to! As he thought that, Obi-Wan heard a female voice in his head. ?Maybe you will learn my name soon, maybe not. You need to prove your worthy first.? All Obi-Wan could think was, Wait was that my Zanpaku-to? And why do I need to prove myself to her? He then shuddered when he realized that he had a female Zanpaku-to (not knowing that Kisuke, and Renji did too). The group then reached the training room. As Obi-Wan turned around to tell Anakin and Siri to follow him to the observation room he saw the end of Kisuke?s cane coming right at him. When it hit Obi-Wan was knocked back into his new Soul Reaper form.

    ?What was that for?!!? he yelled angrily at the hat wearing shop keeper who was smirking behind his fan. ?Well Mr. Kenobi, we need to find out the extent of your Soul Reaper powers and this is the easiest way to do so.? But as he finished Kisuke collapsed to the ground moaning in pain, courtesy of a kick from Yuki to his ?manhood? as he called it. ?Come on hat-boy we need to get started already!!? Yuki yelled at the crumpled heap of an ex-captain. Meanwhile, all the other Soul Reapers had gotten ready to demonstrate more powers.

    ?Oh yeah King,? Shiro said, ?Now we can really get down to business!!? and for once Ichigo found himself in complete agreement with his hollow. ?Ok what?s first Hat n? Clogs?? Ichigo asked Kisuke, ?Bankai or Kido?!? To which Kisuke replied (loudly), ?Kido! So you might want to leave this time Ichigo!? At the blank looks from the Jedi (and Obi-Wan) an angry looking Ichigo explained, ?Look, Kido is the main power a Soul Reaper has, aside from their Zanpaku-to, and I suck at it which is why me and Renji, who is just as bad, are over here, since we don?t want to blow up.? Siri then asked, ?What?s Bankai you didn?t explain that you idiot?? Looking even angrier, Ichigo replied, ?Well, if you have to know, Bankai is the ultimate ability of a Soul Reaper. You saw our Shikai?s before; well a Bankai is five to ten times more powerful than even that.? Ichigo finished with a smug look.

    After they had finished picking their collective jaws off the floor the Jedi watched the Kido demonstration. Kisuke and Jushiro went first to demonstrate the Bakudo?s. Since Anakin had volunteered to help, he was turned into something of a guinea pig. ?Bakudo #1 Sai!? Kisuke said waving his fingers at Anakin, who collapsed to the floor arms behind his back. ?Now that was the weakest ?Bakudo? or binding spell, which are used to bind, or heal, some are even used for communication. There are 99 in all increasing in power as you go up in number.? Jushiro explained. After Kisuke had released Anakin, Jushiro used number four on him.

    ?Bakudo# 4: Hanihawa.? And golden ropes of energy once again knocked a hapless Anakin to the floor. After that, Obi-Wan decided to take over for him. ?Okay, Mr. Kenobi, I am going to use number sixty-one on you so prepare yourself.? Kisuke said as Obi-Wan nodded. ?Bakudo#61: Rykuu Jokoro!? Kisuke said as a group of golden energy beams pierced Obi-Wan who surprisingly (to him) felt no pain at all. ?Hmm, can I break out of this?? he thought. ?Just focus all your Spirit Energy then push it out.? His Zanpaku-to said suddenly appearing in front of him, Wow she?s beautiful. Obi-wan thought, not without reason. His Zanpaku-to was a tall beautiful women with long light brown hair, eyes the same shade of blue as the ocean and a beautiful face. ?Hello Obi-Wan.?[/b
     
  21. HelloKelly

    HelloKelly Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Nov 12, 2009
    Loved the Inner world scene!

    Also I feel really bad for Ichigo.

    Plus the concept of Obi-wan being healed by Reapers and becoming one of them was really cool.

    Question tho. What's Obi-wan's Bankai?
     
  22. Skywalker_T-65

    Skywalker_T-65 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Nov 19, 2009
    Wow, someone actually reviewed.:eek: Thanks for that. I feel sorry for Ichigo too, but I can't rush things can I? Admittedly I was going to make the next chapter the last one, but now maybe I won't, I don't know. Obi-Wan's Bankai huh? Well I can't put that in the reply here (for obvious reasons) but if you want to know just PM me or put it in another review and I will PM you about it. I honestly don't know when I will update again but I am working on it (along with my other 3 stories).
     
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