Saga Change of Fate [Luke, Leia, A/P, Obi-Wan] time-travel ROTS AU - *COMPLETED* + final replies 3.07.07

Great battle sequence! What now? Do Luke and Leia disappear?

 

Hello, my Dark Finnish friend! Oh my, you changed your icon?what am I going to call you now?! Father_Leia sounds a bit? perverse, if you understand what I mean.

Yes, please don't call me Father_Leia! I'll be so confused if you do that!

Hmm...First of all - as a whole, this story is getting more and more interesting. You started from the pre-RotS events, continued to RotS, now to post-RotS...Anakin has been lost, totally lost, completely lost and now redeemed. All characters have gone through emotional rollercoasters, learned new things about themselves and experienced the true nature of the Force! What a story, I must say! Ever considered writing a book?

Great action, I enjoyed the duel(s) very much. I'm so happy that Vader didn't kill the babies, he helped the others and fought Palpatine. And now Palpsy is dead and Anakin is back! At least...I hope he's back.

The first description of the Force...Oh dear, it was beyond amazing. I'm not the most religious person in this world, but I have always believed in some sort of God. Your description touched me, because it reminded me of the God I have always believed in.

Then again, the descriptions of the light side of the Force...Now I'm so angry! I was actually in tears here (no, not 'almost in tears' as I've said many times before) but actually crying! Don't know why, but you just wrote so beautifully...And I'm so tired right now. Maybe it's the mixture of the beauty of your words and my tiredness that made me cry.

A weird reply this time...But at least a reply! I have nothing bad to say about this story right now, nor anything bad to say about you, so I'll end this here. Excellent work, my friend - and I hope DRL is kind with you.

 

.........YEAHHH! He did it!

Oh, that was wonderful. An great chapter and an intense duel.
Though I must confess that I were a bit worried that the babies was going to be harmed in that burning hangar. Nothing is more heart-crushing than a scared terrified baby scream especially when surrounded by enemies.

Now it's time to see if Anakin can come back!

By the way, will the Stormtroopers stop shooting when their Emperor died?

 

YES!

Finally, Anakin is back! and Palpatine got what he desserved ... seems Anakin was badly hurt though but i hope he makes it

This was a fantastic update... ur best yet!

Sorry to hear about the Sith that attack u but dont worry, we shall wait for ur next update, it's too late for us to escape now

Tnx a lot for the pm

 

Thank God Sidious is dead I mean about time he kicked the bucket .

Yeah Anakin's back I'm so glad he decided to choose the light !!

 

Wow, wondeful last two chapters. The way you described Anakin's selfless love for his children, and how it transcends mistrust and hatred, was very moving. I wonder what awaits Anakin now: death, prison, forgiveness, hatred...

 

Oh CraziAni... Anakin has fulfilled the prophecy of the chosen one and defeated Palpy.. yaay!! It will be interesting to see what happens once he regains consciousness. Great chapter- very enthralling.

 

Palpatine was dead, and he was finally free.

The monster in his chest laughed shrilly, demanding him to take over the throne. Strangely, its orders had never seemed so unconvincing, so feeble before. The Force swirled around him once again, as though hearing the monster, and its clear, sparkling waters unleashed upon the beast, pulling it under. Light and darkness became one and the same. The monster?s agonised, dying screams were a feeble sound in his head midst the beautiful, glowing ocean of the Force. It could finally be itself, unpolluted by the dark anymore.

I would definently say that this was the turning point of the story. These few lines outline it perfectly and show exactly how he's grown through the story.

Wonderful job!

 

Yay, they killed Palpatine! I was not expecting that at all!

I wonder, though, what will happen when Anakin wakes up...

jazz

 

Ding dong the sith is dead, witch old sith, the wicked sith. Ding Dong the wicked sith is deeeaaad.

YAY Sidious is gone, vamoose, defeated and all that jazz. It wont be long before we find out what kind of a future Luke and Leia go home to.

LOL when I read that the first thing that flew through my head was he should have stuck with pod racing.

I hope you aren?t going to kill off Anakin just when he got he?s good senses back .

I hope to see your next update soon, I?m really looking forward to it .

oooo before I signature, I got the PM for the last chapter but it was a day after I read it. But I got the PM for this chapter so all is well in the land of internet fandom.

Zozobozo

 

Wow, that was awsome!

The action was great, the drama was excellent, the emotions were riviting. But, you made a mention to everyone except the adult Leia. What happened to her during the battle?

Getting on to what you told me, I am currently writing a story. Its called SECOND CHANCES. Its only three chapters in, but if you care to check it out, you may. It basically follows your story (don't worry, I didn't plagerize it) and many others: Time travel and the Skywalker Family; all four of them.

Like I said, College sucks, I didn't do it. But you stay strong and don't worry, the Siths of higher education will eventually be dominated like Palpatine was.

Darth-Semians

 

Awwww, I hope Anakin doesn't die!

 

XV-XVII

Ah, sometimes the Master is as absent-minded as the student! [face_ tongue] Wow, great decription of Ani?s anger and frustration. Hope the boys are okay! Whoa, Liea shook hands with Palpy

Uh oh, Sidious knows about Liea! Oh, Papa may have finally found the truth out! What?s next? The description of Ben?s sadness is heartrending. The bits with mother and daughter are superb. You better fix this fine mess Luke has caused! He?s unintentionally tearing his father and mentor apart! !

I don?t want Ani and Obi?s brotherhood to shatter! *huggles the boys*

Well done.

 

Happy ending, happy ending, happy ending, HAPPY ENDING!!! (It's called positive thinking, another of my more ingeneous inventions! )

Awesome imagery there! I loved it! ... He just has to survive.... Great.

Cheers_Cazza

 

Hey dude

Awesome story! I love the way you wrote the battle between Sidious and Anakin. And Obi-Wan helping out his former padawan!

Sheer joy and poetry

EG

 

Fantastic.

post soon pleeeeeease...

 

Ah...what an incredibly satisfying post. YEAH!

I hope everyone survived!

 

No, it isn?t,? another voice said by his ear.

A shimmering, blue blade drifted into his field of vision. It belonged to Obi-Wan.

I lovewhen Anakinand Obi-Wan have each others back!

Wonderful post YOur descriptions always mesmorize me!

Please let Anakin live!

 

Wow

That was a great chapter, I loved the way that you showed the battle through Anakin/Vader's eyes it made it a bit different from the way battles are usually portrayed.

I am absolutely sure that Anakin cannot be dead because I know that even you could not be that cruel to us all! I can't wait for the next chapter though I know I have to! Good luck with the finals!

 

That was beautiful; I can?t find a better word to describe it. I mean it haunting and creepy but the small parts, like Vaderkin?s love for his children was beautiful.

Amazing update and thanks for the pm.

 

yah!!! he is free free free

great update and so soon that was great

thanks

 

First of all, my apologies for taking so long. I decided to save this story to be a treat at the end of a particularly busy and rough week.

Secondly...



Your action is stunning, my niece. Absolutely stunning and enthralling and overwhelming. I'm still...panting...for breath. I don't think I'll be able to give you an adequate review to describe how much I enjoyed the flashbacks, and the elegance of your descriptive language. It always blows me away. What is even more incredible, though, is knowing that English is not your first language. You are incredibly gifted.

Yes. I do believe that I should give up on giving a good and expressive reply. Just know that I loved your Anakin turn and the power it brought with it. I can't wait for your next update.

You startle me sometimes with how good you really are.

Much , my niece. If Ani-maniac were here to see you, I'm sure she'd be very proud. I'll be proud of you for her.

 

Ahhh! How did I get behind?!

Amazing last two chapters -- what a rollercoaster! Psycho chapters indeed... The duel with Palpatine was brilliantly done. I'm so glad that Anakin was finally redeemed.

Do you have any idea what a psychotically brilliant fic this is? Amazing read... I can't wait for more.

 

Nice chapter.

I like how you described the Dark and Light sides of the Force- it really suited the moond of the piece and showed the conflict in Vader. I'm glad his children pulled him into the Light enough for him to start to rectify his mistakes, starting with killing Palpatine.

I look forward to the next post.

 

fantastic post!!!

*falls off edge of her seat*