CREEPY - AU Anakin & Padme - Haunted Hotel

That was ishly good!

I loved Anakin chasticizing himself for using his real hand.

Great ending. Too bad it's over. Reminded me a little bit of Mulder and Scully. Mulder (Anakin) gets to see everything and Scully (Padme) doesn't.

Very good and creepy!

<<Bravo! Bravo!>>

 

Sorry JWY - it was just a vignette.That's all there is.

<bows to the Nubian Queen> Thank you m'lady. That's high praise from you!!!

 

UP! UP! UP!

 

Thank you for the UP PLJ!! I won't have much time tonite to check in & see how everyone liked/disliked my little story.

 

Ooooh, good one! I also appreciate the irony of A/P's situation.

--MissPadme

 

I liked it.

 

I liked it, and I normally don't go for the creepy kind of stories.

 

Boy, mom, you really packed it in there in part 2!

Great story, very fun, a little scary and a beautiful beginning to your career on here as a fanfiction writer.

Can't wait for your "bigger" project.

Very well done.

 

Holy Smokes Arriss!

I thought Anakin was the one with the bad dreams. No more brownies for Padme!

Great story. Creepy and fun. Its interesting how that suffocation theme tends to follow Anakin wherever he goes. In your story, however, when surrounded by the darkness of the water, he defeats it and returns to the light with his beloved in his arms.

No way some old dead battleaxe is going to break these two apart.

You?re a true Defender Arriss. Well done!

 

Uppity uppity UP UP UP!!!

 

Well I finally got through my daughter's party. What a night <wipes brow>!

Miss Padme - Thanks. Just one of those ideas that enters the mind & begs to be told.

Ani -

AnakinPadme_Fan - It did turn out differently that I first envisioned but once the fingers get to typing, there's no stopping them. Glad you enjoyed it.

Son - <giggle> <there's a scratching outside your window> heehee. I just wanted it to really make an impression - I hope I succeeded. Your support has been fabulous!! And yes, my story will begin posting next month. That's a long one (should make JWY )

Boba - Did I scare you? Padme almost lost it but Anakin refused to give up. I can see him like that with her always... But Padme's going to be depressed if she can't have any more brownies . I'm glad you liked it, thank you!

PLJ - Thank you sooooo much for the UP's. I appreciate it!

 

Hey, Arriss! That was a great conclusion to your Halloween short story. It sure was spooky! I hope my dreams will be more pleasant than Padme's when my head hits the pillow tonight. LOL

Anyhow, I enjoyed your writing style. The sentences and the action you described with them seemed to flow very naturally. Good job! Can't wait to read your future projects.

 

Uppity up UP!

 

Thanks Slowlearner.

I don't want to have a dream like Padme's either. <shiver>

My next project will start the middle of next month, course I'll shamelessly plug it wherever possible That one is no shorty though.

Thank you again for the UP PLJ - are the kitties gone now?

 

Ok this Halloweeny gem needs to be on page 1- NOT 8!

 

Thanks for the UP PLJ!!

Maybe since this is halloween week, more readers will be able to enjoy my little vignette (I hope so anyway )

 

Shameless UP!

 

UP for the afternoon crowd

 

Halloween UP (ok, day before )

 

Creeeeeeepy! I am sorry it's over. Hope you keep writing!3

 

Most disturbing! Just like a good ghost story should be!

Well done... Master Arriss!

 

Thank you Dally. Be sure to watch for my AU story coming in a few weeks. It's a reallllly long one.

Scruffy!! - You made it over! Glad you liked it. I wanted to make it pretty creepy & I'm glad I succeeded! Master indeed! Just remember who dubbed me that

 

UP! you go!

 

Thanks for the lift APF Happy Halloween