Destiny's Heartache -AU -(JA) (Obi Angst) updated!

Title: Destiny's Heartache.

Age: Obi-Wan is fifteen.

Disclaimer: All recognizable characters don't belong to me.

AN- This is my first posted fic. I am still writing it, but this is the prologue. Enjoy.
I also have many stories written that I am not sure if I want to post or not because they are really bad, but if anyone wants to read them let me know.


Destiny's Heartache


Prologue:
The galaxy was in utter chaos, or at least that's what Obi-Wan thought. Ever since the announcement that the galaxy that has a history dating back millenium after millenium would soon cease to exsist, lifeforms from all ends of the galaxy have been picking up what little they can carry, and they are leaving this galaxy in hopes of finding a new one to live in.

Obi-Wan and his master, Qui-Gon Jinn were on a mission to Nekrot VII when the announcement came from Coruscant that the galaxy only has about six months left before it is gone forever. Qui-Gon made the decision that they should stay and help the people of Nekrot VII get out of the galaxy.

Obi-Wan himself had already evacuated three cities including the second largest city on the planet, Galmuster. When the call came that the planet was fully empty, Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon boarded the ship that they came on. Qui-Gon wanted to head back to Coruscant, but there was traffic headed the other way out of the galaxy. Qui-Gon quickly turned the ship around, and went in with the flow of traffic.

'There was no way that all of these lifeforms could find a home in another galaxy,' thought Obi-Wan. When Qui-Gon announced that they had reached the edge of the galaxy Obi-Wan looked out the window. Just before Qui-Gon hit the lightspeed handle, the galaxy reached its end...


So what do you think? Should I continue, or should I trash it? Please be kind to me, I am just starting to post my fics.

 

i like it! that sounds very interesting...

please do post more!

 

Actually I was about to post a reply anyway, but...

It sounds very interesting to me! Definently different... seems to be a very intriguing plot! Waiting for more!

 

Chapter 1

Obi-Wan awoke with a gasp. The annoying red lights of his alarm clock read 2:12. He sighed. It had been three years, three whole years since he and Qui-Gon ended up on the planet called Earth. One would think that the nightmares would end. But, as time progressed, he only felt sadder and sadder. Back home the whole Jedi Order was his family, but here his only family was Qui-Gon. He went from having a family of thousands to a family of just one other. He didn't realize the tears coming from his eyes as he leaned back against his pillow.

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Qui-Gon Jinn sat up in bed when he heard the boy in the next room gasp. He didn't need the Force to know why Obi-Wan was up at this hour of the night. He knew about his nightmares. He knew about every single one of them that Obi-Wan has had since they arrived in New York three years ago. He remembered Obi-Wan's screaming as both of them saw the only home that they had ever known begin to vanish into eternal oblivion taking everyone that didn't escape with it. NO! He wouldn't think that. He had to live in the present not the past. His life and Obi-Wan's life as Master and Apprentice Jedi are now over. Their new lives Father and Son are the now. Not the past. He could only hope that Obi-Wan would accept this too. He fell asleep just as a siren pireced the late night sky.


Should I continue?

 

New York? Father and Son? The plot thickens... definently continue!

 

Very interesting so far. Please do continue.

 

Chapter 2- Later the same day
Disclaimer: See prologue.

"Why now?" Obi-Wan asked.

"Why not?" said his best friend Kellie Johnson, as the two of them walked or rather rode on the sidewalk.

"I don't know, I really don't." Obi-Wan said.

"When are you going to seek help on this? It has been three years since the fire."

"I'll tell my father when he comes home."

Kellie could not believe that her friend was still having nightmares. It has been three years since Ben and his father moved to New York from Chicago. Ben's father did something with the Chicago Police Department, before their house caught on fire. Ben's father couldn't stand the Windy City anymore and moved the two of them to New York. She threw him a look that could make a person mad.

Obi-Wan hated the decpetion that he was forced to put on. He hated that word deception. Kellie and her two brothers were told that he and his Master were from a city called Chicago, and that their house caught fire. It was Kellie's father who found the two of them drifting in space near a planet called Jupiter. It aparently is the largest planet in this solar system that they were in. Kellie's father worked for the Interplanetary Secrurity Safety for the Planets. ISSP for short. He was patrolling Jupiter and its moons that day, when he came across their ship which had blown the Hyperdrive. According to Qui-Gon the life support systems were also dying, if it wasn't for Mr. Johnson they wouldn't be alive right now.

"Ben, Ben, BENJAMIN JINN! Snap out of it," Kellie screamed knocking him out of his reverie. They had reached their destination, school.

"Another day, another test," Ben thought to himself.

"Yea, but look on the bright side, a whole week without them coming up in two days," Kellie added.

Obi-Wan Kenobi just stood there looking at his friend in absokute horror. How did she his private thoughts? Qui-Gon had personally told him that earth people cannot feel the force, but somehow, someway Kellie Johnson was able to look into the mind of a former Jedi Padawan.

He had to know what was going on. Kellie told him that her older brother Roger, herself, and her younger brother Jake were born in a city called Los Angeles and they moved to New York when Jake was born, Kellie was four at the time, and Roger was eight. Kellie did tell him that she remembers being in Los Angeles. It was impossible for her to have done that, unless she had decepted him as well...






AN: So what do you think? Getting better? Worse?

 

This looks cool, keep it up I say!

 

it's getting awesome!

 

Hmmm, I like Kellie! So does she know about Jinn and Kenobi, or does she just believe the Chicago story? Or is her father with the ISSP? I was a little confused... I take it Darth Homework has been plaguing you as well... teachers just don't let down! Anyway, I like this psychological angst part of Obi-Wan... can't wait to see what happens!

 

I won't have chapter 3 up until tomorrow. There is going to be a familiar face for Obi-Wan coming into the picture. Sorry if I confused anybody. Kellie and her brothers were told the Chicago story by their father. Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon never told anyone about their true identies. To everyone on earth Obi-Wan is Benjamin Jinn from Chicago. Everything I hope will become clearer in later chapters.

 

should i just trash this? No one out there seems to want to read this.

 

Chapter 3

All throughout the day, the only thing on Obi-Wan's mind was his friend Kellie. How did she do that? Was he just overreacting to a mere coincedence? Or was Kellie somehow force sensative? He had to know, but everytime he went to ask her in-between classes, someone or something always interprupted. One time it was Mrs. Lave, their Physics teacher. Another time it was Jace Parker, Kellie's long-time friend. It was so annoying, that in History Obi-Wan did something that he had never done before, he talked during class.

"Kellie, Kellie," he whispered.

"What?" she whispered, a little too loudly.

"Miss Johnson, Mr. Jinn, do I need to separate you two?" Mr. Smith, the teacher said.

"No, Mr. Smith," the two of them said in unison.

Kellie, getting rather suspicious of her friend's motives flashed him another look that could drive one mad. Obi-Wan catching this, flashed her a mournful smile. Obi-Wan was getting anxious, he had to find out

He planned on asking her during gym, the last period of the day, but that day the teacher decided that that day was volleyball day, a sport that Obi-Wan was one of the best in.

"Finally, volleyball," Obi-Wan thought, "I can get Kellie off of my mind."

Ususally the two of them were placed on opposite teams. They always want to be together, but there is always someone who picks the other for their team. Today, was different, however. The teacher allowed them to pick their own teams. Kellie went over to join Obi-Wan, a few other people followed her. It was their usual crowd. The ones that they always eat lunch with. Obi-Wan went to set everyone up, when he saw a new dark-haired boy that he had never seen at the school before. Obi-Wan went over to talk to him, when the boy lifted his head, and stared right at him. Obi-Wan froze in midstride when he saw who it was...


Is this getting bad? Let me know please.

 

No, definatly not bad! I for one is very curious on this new charector! Don't trash it, especially cuz of no readers. It just takes time for people to notice you.

 

should i just trash this?

NO!

lordmaul13

 

I am not sure when ill have the next capter up, either later tonight, or sometime tomorrow, i just had darth finals, and they weren't easy. it may be a double post too. I have the next two parts written, and im not sure if i should post one then the other, or post them together.

 

Don't trash it, I think it's going fine. Don't worry if you can't get readers your first time, it takes a bit of patience.

I'm looking forward to a new post.

 

No trashing!!!

Especially after that, I need to find out who that kid is. MORE darn it!

 

Chapter 4

There were many thoughts that ran through Obi-Wan's mind. How, and why. Why of all people did it have to be him. I thought he died, because of me. But, there was no mistaken that familiar face. One just had to take the dark hair and dye it and there he was. Why out of all the people from home did he have to be the one to show up. He could ruin everything. I guess once I get home I should start packing. Maybe I could go to Chicago. I heard it is very nice. After all that is where I am supposedly from. I can tell Qui-Gon that our secret has been revealed, and we can't stay here anymore.

It was at that moment that Kellie saw the boy, and walked up to him. "Hi."

"Hi," was all the boy said.

"Want to join our team? You seem to be lost."

"Yea, I guess."

Kellie just looked at Ben. "Why was he acting this way?" she thought. "How could he treat the boy that way? He is kind of cute, but so is every dark haired boy that comes my way."

Ben just stood there looking at the boy. He was almost paralyzed. Kellie would have thought so, if he didn't make a sudden fist with his hand. "What is wrong with him? Has he already met the boy, but they didn't get along? I wish he would move, he is really starting to scare me.

"By the way, I'm Kellie Johnson, and this is my best friend, Benjamin Jinn, but he goes by Ben."

The boy smiled. He wouldn't tell her his name until 'Ben' made the first move.

Kellie turned around and went back to the game that had already started without them. The boy followed suit. Kellie turned her head to see that Ben still hadn't moved. She sighed, and went back and pulled him by the arm. She gave him her the third look of the day...




Sorry its so short, the next one is much longer.

 

just trying to keep this on the front page

 

Once again, nice post. I can't wait to see what Kellie has to say

 

Chapter 5-


Ben was doing his best not to let his dislike of the boy show through. He couldn't use his real name, because that would spark too many questions by his all-observant friend. He tried to play his best, but he knew that he couldn't.

"Do, or do not. There is no try," a voice out-of-nowhere said.

"Another one of Master Yoda's lessons remembered," Ben mumbled.

"Yea, but at least it wasn't him and his gimmer stick;" a voice in mind said.

Ben looked around for the speaker. He turned around and saw the boy standing there smiling at him. Ben was about to say something when the volleyball hit him on his head, knocking him out...

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Ben awoke in an unfamiliar room. Everything was a little blurry, but he could just barely make out the outline of a person sitting on the side of the couch that he was on.

"Kellie, is that you?" Ben said groggerily.

"Yea, of course its me, who else could it be? The President?"

"Don't remind me."

Ben tried to sit up, but was met with the world's worst headache. Kellie pushed him down.

"Don't try to sit up. Your father is coming."

"He got out of..." Ben couldn't finish the rest of the sentence before the man in question walked through the door.

Qui-Gon Jinn walked right over to his padawan, and sat down on a chair that was next to the couch.

"Ben, are you alright?"

"I could be better, but..."

"Miss Johnson," the nurse rudely interputed, "go and get Mr. Jinn's books out of his locker."

Kellie, taking the hint, left. She had to go and find the janitor to get the master key for the lockers.

"Mr. Jinn, I presume," the nurse asked.

"Yes, Quentin Jinn, what happened to my son?"

"He got hit in the head with a volleyball. Quite hard I must say."

"Ben, how did this happen?" Qui-Gon asked, hoping to get some answers.

"I'll tell you later," Obi-Wan all but whispered.

"He has a concussion, and a bruise on his forehead. Just keep some ice on it and he'll be fine in a few days," the nurse said to no one in particular.

"Did you hear what she said, Padawan," Qui-Gon whispered.

"No, did you," Obi-Wan replied.

Kellie picked that moment to return with two sets of books, Ben's and her own. She handed Qui-Gon Ben's and turned to leave to walk home.

"Kellie, just where do you think your going," Qui-Gon asked in his tough 'Master voice.'

"Home," she replied.

"No, your not. At least not the way you were about to."

Kellie again gave a look.

"Help me support him," Qui-Gon said.

Kellie obeyed without question. It was almost like she was hypnotised. Qui-Gon and her each took one of Ben's arms and lifted him up. Luckily, they were able to get him to the car just in the nick of time, before the bell rang. If Kellie Johnson would have turned around, she would have seen the boy looking at them from a third story window with a look of evil on his face...


So what do you think? Good? Bad? Evil?

 

Poor Obi-wan! Hit on the head by a volleyball? Happened to me once... ouch! So who's this mysterious guy? Bruck? Anakin?

 

Oh I can realate, except I got hit with a basketball OW!!

I wanna find out what is going on, now more!!

 

Sorry about not posting in a few days. I had Darth Finals and a toe surgery on Saturday. I wrote a long post though.

Chapter 6-

By the time Mr. Jinn pulled up into the driveway, Ben was looking a little better. He didn't have that groggy look anymore. But he still couldn't move on his own.

"A little weird," thought Kellie.

She helped Ben's father carry him into his bedroom. Looking in Ben's bedroom was like walking into pigsty. There was everything everywhere. He had funiture, but it wasn't used. His clothes were all over the place. Books were left binding side up all over the floor, pictures of the two of them were folded in half were scattered around the room. The only thing that was neat in his room, was the top of a table. On the table was a long, cylindarical object that was gray and had a button. Kellie had always wondered what that was. She had always meant to ask but never did.

"Let's move him to his bed," Quentin Jinn said.

Ben jumped in, "Dad, I can walk. See?"

He pulled away from his father and best friend. Ben was able to take two steps before staggereing, and fell over into Kellie's arms. The two of them fell down.

"SITH," Ben shouted.

Kellie was about to say something but thought twice. What kind of word was Sith? Was it some sort of Chicagoan curse word, that had yetto reach New York? She quickly ruled that out. Ben has been living here long enough. Was it some sort of gang that rules the street? Probably, but they would have his head if they found out that someone shouted their name in vain.

Qui-Gon picked Obi-Wan off of Kellie and gently placed him on his bed. He pulled off his son's shoes for him, and turned to Kellie. Taking a hint she left the room, and out the door. She began the block journey to her house when she heard a small voice.

"Psst."

Kellie froze,in front of an alley, who or what could have made that noise?

"Psst," the voice said again.

Kellie looked around. She turned when something jumped out of the shadows...

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To much to post in one sitting. Will post second half and next chapter tomorrow.