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Saga Drabble fanfic Olympic Challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by SatineNaberrie, Sep 6, 2015.

  1. SatineNaberrie

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  2. NYCitygurl

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    Great start! This is a fascinating AU series :D I'm excited to see where these go!!
     
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    Wicked good stuff here...:)
     
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  4. Mira_Jade

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    Oooh, these are awesome so far! :D I especially enjoyed Temperance and Love. I'm a sucker for any such Vader and Luke AUs, and these were no exception. [face_love]

    =D=
     
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    Excellent character sketches & glimpses of an AU. :cool:
     
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    I agree with Mira! I'm such a sucker for Luke and Vader AUs, so Love and Temperance were my favourite, though they were all great!
     
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  12. Admiral Volshe

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    This part is very powerful!!!

    I love all your drabbles! :D
     
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    Great drabbles!! Powerful emotions in them all.

    I think my favorites so far are Love, Temperance, Farm and Breath.
     
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  21. Briannakin

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    These are some great drabbles. Incredible feelings are displayed in just 100 words. I think Time and Breathe were my favourites.
     
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    Woohoo! Terrific! Great tantalizing AU glimpses! Particularly of the different paths that Luke, Padme, Vader, and Obi/Satine could have taken. [face_thinking]
     
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  23. mavjade

    mavjade Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Another great set of drabbles!

    I really liked Blink, the mental image of Luke blinking a lot while his father looked on made me giggle. Hiccup also made me giggle.

    I also really liked Survival, that would be a scary thing!
     
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