ENDED "The Sacred Silence" a NJO, SBS, Han/Leia, Anakin/Tahiri, Jania/Kyp AU; Han can use the Force

Nooooo!!! Please be all right Jaina!!!

 

YooooooHoooo! Han? Leia? Where are you?

 

Mores comming, not tonight, but tomarrow.

LovelyLea: Don't worry, Han and Leia are in tomarrow's post.

 

No no no, don't go skipping to Han and Leia... I want to know what happends next with Kyp and Jaina...

 

shadow: Lol, don't worry, I'm not skipping to Han and Leia, I'm doing both!

HanSolo: I tottaly agree.

the jedi princess: Its alright! She'll be okay, pretty much anyway.....

Dantana: Lol, I get it! (sheepish look) I'm so blonde, I tottaly didn't catch what I did, a cliff hanger about falling off a cliff. lol....Creepy? Which part?

Trickster Jaina Fel: (hands trickster a peice of redish hair) Is this yours? Lol,be carefu. That many cliff hangers in a row!??!!? Yikes! Thats alot, I don't think I'll do that, but you never know. I wouldn't dare torture you to much, you wouldn't have any hair left!

Jez: She might be, or she might not.....

Jaina Solo Durron: They have to get married? Really? Lol, j/k, I know, but we'll just have to see if she's alive first.

AnotherAgentSmith: Thanks. Kyp is definitly very upset,a horrorably experience for him. But he is a very strong person, he'll be okay, he's been through alot before. I'm glad you liked that scene with the little girl, that was a bit of last minute insperation. By the way, I'll have finished reading the last of that bit of your story you sent me by tomarrow, I'll e-mail you then.

Heres more everyone!

*****

The little boy stared at the woman on the shore with the mixture of horror and fascination only a little boy can have.

Whoa, he'd never seen a dead person before.

"Sh- sh- she's dead!" wailed his sister,her big blue eyes wide and frightend,, almost white blonde braids hanging in her face.

"Lizza, be quiet!" he snapped.

She was so silly, he had to watch out for her since he was the oldest. He was eight years old, she was only four.

He walked cautiously over to the woman's body on the shore and poked it with a stick.

Nothing happend. He poked it again. Still nothing.

Then, unable to restrain his curosity, he came closer, peering at her face pale face.

Was this what a dead person looked like? She didn't look like how he imagined a dead person to. Weren't dead people supposed to have blood all over and stuff?

He poked her again.

She gave a slight moan.

He jumped back. Uh oh, what now?

Lizza looked like she would start to cry again. "Estus, whats happening?" she asked in a trembling little voice.

He stared for a moment at the woman who's lips had started to move silently, and she moaned again.

"Go get dad, Lizza, go!"

She nodded wide eye'd and ran, as fast as her little four year old legs could carry her.

Estus stood a good distance away from the woman, afraid she would wake up before his father came, but yet almost hoping she would.

Who was she? The only place you could possibly drown on this river was by the waterfall. And no one was that stupid.

But then he heard his fathers heavy foot steps comming up behind him.

"Daddy, look, a drowned lady!" cried Lizza from their fathers arms, pointing.

Their father emeadilty put Lizza down and knelt beside the woman.

"Yea,she nearly drowned alright."he murmered, focusing his blue eyes, just like his childrens on her.

He took her by the shoulders as the children watched from a little ways away.

"Hello, hello?" he asked.

But she only gave a incohearant moan.

He gathered her up in his arms to carry her.

Then he turned to Lizza and Estus. "You two have done good."he said,"Go run and tell your mother now."

And they both took off, little feet scrambeling along the shore, well he came behind, carrying the very wet, and as Lizza said, "almost drowned" woman.

****

That morning, Tahiri woke up to light pouring into her room as Leia flipped open the curtains.


"What is it?" she mumbled sleeply.

"We're leaving, now." said Leia, and Tahiri opened her eyes and stared suprised at Leia's grim face.

"Is something wrong?" she asked Leia gently.

Leia sighed, a infinitly weary sigh,"No Tahiri, nothings wrong, nothing you can do anything about."

And with that she left the room, leaving Tahiri to stare puzzledly at her back.

What in the galaxy had happend between last night and this morning to make Leia so

 

Hmmmmmmm!

 

You are evil!

 

shadow: Why am I evil?

More comming tonight everyone, I'm leaving to visit my grandma tomarrow who has cancer, so it will be two or three days till I can get to a computer, okay, sorry about that. So tonight will be my last post for a few days, but then I'll be back.

 

<takes the piece of reddish hair princess found> thanks! i was wondering why my head looked kinda lopsided...oh, and yes, that many cliffies...so don't you dare take a page out of my book!

Leia came back to find Han had already packed his own bags.
Not suprising, since it was merely a simple task of throwing in a few shirts, pants, and the extra blaster.
Okay, well,maybe a little more then that, but not much.

i liked that part...

very well done!

~TJF

 

Nice post, Princess....what's up with Leia? And Jaina's alive...yay!

more soon please?

 

Okay everyone, I'm posting again tonight, and then it will be a few days, because I'm going on a trip till the 2nd, but I should be able to get to a computer between now and then. Thanks soooo much. And don't worry, I won't do that many cliff hangers in a row, now its not a cliffie, just a semi-cliffie.

LovelyLea: Thanks! There will be more Han and Leia next post.

HanSolo: Thanks!

Jaina Solo Durron: Thanks! Yep, Jaina's alive! Leia and Han had a fight like two post ago, they are still kinda being grumpy about it.

Trickster Jaina Fel:Lol, your welcome. Its not fun to be lopsided.
Thanks, yea, I like that line to, I couldn't resist putting it in there, it just sound way to much like Han. Thanks soooo much. And don't worry, I won't do that many cliff hangers in a row, now its not a cliffie, just a semi-cliffie.

Shadow: Evil? Why am I evil? Does it have something to do with a cliffie?




******

The minute they entered the house with his father carrying the woman, Estus's mother ran out looking distraught.

"Oh my, whats this?"

She asked, and when she saw the wet woman with dark hair, she gasped slightly and her eyes widend in her plump face.

But she emeaditly recovered, and motioned them to carry the woman into a bed room. "Right in here."she said, opening the door.

They layed her down on the bead, while Estus watched intently.

This was all very strange, and very exciting. How had she ended up in the river. Who was she anyway?

The woman was moaning again,making little frightend sounds, her eyelids fluttered.

Lizza sqealed and dived out of the room, peaking around the door way.

Estus glared at her. Four year old sisters were so dumb. Especially his.

"She's saying something!"said his mother in a loud whisper.

Estus stepped closer to the bed. What was she saying? It sounded like "Kyp".But what was that?

They all stepped a little closer, even Lizza emerged from the doorway.

The woman's arms and legs were twitching, and she started coughing, retching. She was choking!

******

Falling, falling.... Reaching, grabbing for something....But there was nothing to grab.

A flash of pain, hitting the water, sinking... A scream, water filling her her mouth and eyes.

There was no light, no sound, nothing but the roaring in her ears.

Up! Up! She had to go up, the breath, to get air.

She saw light, inhaled......To soon.

Gone.

Breath.... must...breath...

Jaina's eyes snapped open and she was coughing vilontly, and retched forward, half sitting up, aware of only the need to breath.

She coughed and gagged, water spilling from her mouth.

Then she stopped. She could breath.

She fell back, utterly limp with exhaustion.

Then she became aware that she had fallen back on a bed, and there were people peering down at her.

"What happend? Who are you?"

The questions came in a rush, and she couldn't sort out which came from who.

She shook her head in confusion. "I, I don't know....."

*****



Sorry this is so short. Longer next time.

 

she can't remember who she is! i like...

great post princess! glad i didn't have to wait until after december the 2nd for the end of the cliffies...see, this "semi-cliffie" i can live through...i'll go crazy with my theories and my lip will disappear from chewing on it all the time but i'll be ok.

UP!

~TJF

 

Hehehehe, I know that problem about not remembering... I have it all the time


Wait, who am I again?

 

oooooh....nice post, Princess! hope jaya remembers soon...

more soon please?

-JSD

 

Princess1, those were some awesome chapters!

Excellent writing, especially the parts where Jaina is found by those little children. I also liked how you rendered the argument between Han and Leia, very much like them in the movies and better books.
The best part I thought was the mental image and flashback from where Jaina was drowning, just outstanding. Seemingly very true to life as well in the description.

Looking forward to the rest!

(Have a safe journey by the way.)

 

i'm sick for a week and look what happens now i've got heaps of post to read on heaps of stories, I'M NOT COMPLANING I LOTS OF POST SO FEEP THEM COMMING go to finishing reading this story.

 

UP More!

 

Thank you so much everyone, here's a post. FINNALY! Sorry its taken so long, my grandma's computer wouldn't let me on the internet, it keeps disconnecting. So anyway, I'll give you all exact replies later, I'm going to post before it decieds to disconnect again...

And yes, Jaina does have amnesia. She can't really remember much of anything.

Glad you guys liked it.




****


The minute Kyp got into town, he tried to find the information center.

Tried being the operative word. He tried, but he couldn't find it.

He looked everywhere, but the entire city was like a maze, twisting this way and that with no apparent pattern.

It was as if the city had started out with a plan, and then slowly been added unto, with the plan changing every time, making it a encomprehensible mass of confusion.

So in the end, he gave in and tried to ask for directions.

He stopped in the middle of one of the hundreds of dirty ally ways and looked around for a likely person to ask.

All he saw were street vagrants and such.


He sighed irritably and ran a hand through his dark hair.


As if they could help. They were probably to drunk or drugged to know where they were, let alone help him.

Abrubtly he strode out of the ally, his boots squishing the garbage as he walked.

He payed absolutly no attention to that fact. To that or the fact that everyone in the ally scurried out of the way as he came.

He hadn't found a thing, he was failing Jaina. He couldn't save her life, and he couldn't even finish the misson for her. Useless. He was useless.

The grim look on his face would have been enough to scaire anybody.

Then, as he left the ally, he saw a little man with gray hair standing at the corner, reading a data pad.

Well, there was one person who didn't appear to be drunk, thought Kyp wryly.

"Hey, hello!" He said to the man with the data pad, raising his voice when the man didn't respond.

Then the man finnaly looked up to see Kyp's glowering face, dark cape trailing behind him.

The man took a few steps back.

"Ye-- Yes?". Asked the man in a hesitant voice.

"Yea, you."said Kyp. "You know where a information center is?"

The man gulped,"Uh yea, that way." He pointed.

Kyp nodded,"Thanks." his expression lightend slightly and he turned on his heel and left.

Finnaly. Things were certainly taking long enough in cursed town. He just wanted to get the information and get out of here.

He wanted to find those ruins and then leave there as well. Then,perhaps, he would have time to greive for Jaina, to truely come to turns with the fact she was gone, to allow himself to be weak. But for now he couldn't do that, he had to finish what she started.

He had to.

But he only wished he could have finished it with her along.....


*****

 

<squeals> an unexpected postie! yay! great job princess! poor kyp...

~TJF

 

I'll up this fiction, and we'll see how much prettier it gets on page 1.

 

Cool post Princess1!

Very nice writing, I like how Kyp is protrayed, how he mourns of Jaina's loss. (Well he still thinks that since he doesn't know she survived, I hope he'll find her.) How he tries to get along with the mission for her sake and all. Well done.
I wonder why the villagers seemed frightened of him?

 

Poor, poor Kyp...

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