main
side
curve
  1. In Memory of LAJ_FETT: Please share your remembrances and condolences HERE

Saga *Enslaved* Anakin/Padme AU

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Anakin_heart_Padme, May 1, 2007.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    *ENSLAVED*


    RATING:pG13
    COUPLE: ANAKIN/PADME (They are the same age as in AOTC, Padme is still Queen)
    SUMMARY: Anakin has left the Jedi after an attack on Naboo. Everyone thinks Queen Amidala has been killed, but she has been sold into slavery. Anakin has only met Padme as the Queen and they do not recognise each other when they meet again. Anakin buys Padme and takes her as his slave

    1/

    Padme shivers as she looks around, gleaming metal reflecting in the sun
    ?Ey, you going to be of some use eh??
    Padme swallows flinching as Watto buzzes around her. She huddles closer into her cape, sighing as she looks at their raggedy sleeves
    ?Ey, you are useless....? Watto mutters buzzing around her head ?I shall sell you make big profit eh?? he chuckles ?Pretty girl like you...?
    Padme swallows, fighting her revulsion, as he tries to touch her face
    ?Please....?
    ?Now Shmi...she could work...? Watto breathes ?But you....ah...? he shakes his head, looking at her ruefully
    He would sell her he decided, make a big profit, he really had no use for her after all
    Padme peers out as Watto rushes towards the front of the shop eagerly
    She sighs, another customer she supposed, blinking in surprise as Watto comes flying back
    ?Quick, quick....? he buzzes
    ?What?? she breathes,
    ?Someone wants to see you...?
    Padme swallows, stomach tightening with tension, peering into the front of the shop, biting her lip as she sees a shadowy figure
    ?Quick?
    Holding her head high, knowing there is nothing she can do, she walks into the front of the shop, meeting the stranger?s eyes with bravado. He looks her over
    ?Mm? is all he murmurs
    Padme holds her head regally, showing no fear not giving the man an inch
    Suddenly he smiles, and Padme shudders as she sees the yellow cracked teeth, eyes suddenly lascivious at they peer at her
    ?Step into the light?
    Padme stands her ground not moving an inch
    ?Step into the light? the man growls, still Padme will not move, suddenly Watto pushes her forward, she gasps stumbling into the mans arms, he laughs as she tries to get her balance.
    She tries to struggle free, the cloak ripping from her shoulders, the man laughs as he peers at her golden skin
    ?Nice very nice....?
    Watto flutters uncomfortably
    ?You like eh??
    The man nods, tearing more of her cloak
    ?No? Padme gasps, trying to free herself
    ?You don?t say no to me? the man growls, growling with outrage as she kicks him
    ?Ey? Watto gasps as she stumbles into the sunshine
    ?Stop her? the man bellows, Padme gasps as she feels strong arms grab her, hauling her backwards, she punches and kicks with all her might, biting and scratching at the arm that is choking her
    She wheezes, vision growing blurry and dim
    ?Let her go?
    Padme wheezes, as there is a sudden buzz and a flash of light, Padme slumps to the ground clutching her throat, gasping, she turns as her attackers begin to back away, sand kicking up behind them as they run . Padme swallow throat aching, she tries to stand tensing as she hears Watto behind her chuckling
    ?Ey you want her for yourself eh? I give you good price?
    Padme peers up at the young man, blinking in the harsh light of the sun, all she can see is his profile, and a halo of golden hair
    ?Thank you...? she croaks
    Her ?saviour? ignores her, peering at Watto
    ?So eh?? Watto laughs as Padme tries to pull herself upwards
    The man sheathes his lightsaber
    ?A Jedi eh?? Watto laughs
    ?Hello Watto? the man breathes, Padme looks between the two of them, they knew each other she thinks aghast
    ?Ani?? Watto wheezes in shock ?Is that you....?
    Padme looks up at the man, who peers back at her.
    She shivers as she stares into their blue depths, they were so flat, so cold...almost soulless, he smirks, and a shiver runs down her back
    ?How much do you want for her?? he asks
    ?No...? she breathes shaking her head, clutching her robe around herself. He just looks at her with disdain
    ?You think highly of yourself? he sneers
    She bites her lip, too relieved to be insulted
    ?Oh? she breathes, mis
     
  2. Handmaiden_Azul

    Handmaiden_Azul Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Dec 29, 2005
    Interesting, very interesting. PM me when you update!
     
  3. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    Glad you like it, you are on the PM list
     
  4. Mirik

    Mirik Jedi Youngling star 1

    Registered:
    Dec 13, 2005
    sounds interesting
    please, put me on the PM list
     
  5. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    2/

    "NO!" Padme wails as Anakin hauls her along, she tries to wrestle free, but he is too strong for her, he looks at her from the corner of his eye, a small smirk curving his mouth as she tries to free herself
    "No" she growls again
    Anakin just smirks, she was feisty that was for sure, he couldn't help but be impressed
    "Oh but yes" he breathes, tightening his grip on her
    She grits her teeth, glaring at him balefully. He turns amused eyes to her as he senses her seething anger
    "There is no point fighting" he murmurs smoothly
    "I'll be the judge of that...." she mutters. He laughs, the sound quickly cut short as she kicks him viciously in the leg
    "You...." he growls, she pants, rubbing her wrists as his bruising hands release her, taking a gasping breath, she is about to run, when a blow sends her flying. She lays in the dust, gasping for breath. She strokes trembling fingers over her stinging cheek, looking up at him in shocked bewilderment
    He just stares at the ground, fists, clenching and unclenching, breathing deep and shallow. Padme takes a deep breath, blinking back weak tears as she stares at him. She tries to scramble upwards but the cloak slips and she rushes to cover herself, lowering her head she whispers brokenly
    "What kind of Jedi are you?"
    Anakin inhales sharply, fingers unconsciously stroking the hilt of his lightsaber. His next words stun her
    "I am no longer a Jedi..." he sneers, she turns bewildered eyes to his
    "B..But..."
    His mouth twists, eyes sparking with suppressed rage
    "They were holding me back...."
    She swallows, licking her lips. When she doesn't answer, he continues
    "They were jealous of my powers...." he boasts proudly, head tilting with satisfied pride
    "But isn't jealousy against the Jedi Co..."
    "And what would you know about the Jedi code?" he roars, mouth quivering. She shakes her head, unwittingly flinching from him as he kicks the dirt in his rage, she coughs as the grit stings her eyes
    "One day, I will show them, I will be stronger than any of them ever imagine..."
    Padme is struck silent by his overwhelming conviction, she bites her lip, trying to shield her thoughts, she contemplates making a run for it
    "What are you thinking?" he demands suddenly
    She just looks at him
    "Look at you" he whispers, she tenses as he walks towards her, hating herself as she feels her body tremble as he cups her head
    "Like an angel" he whispers
    She shakes her head,
    "What?"
    He just smiles
    "Not quite as innocent as one though are you?" he teases, although she is shielding her thoughts, he senses she must be plotting something
    "It's no use"
    She looks up at him, their gazes locked, heart pounding in trepidation at his soft tone,
    "What?"
    "You are mine now"
    He sighs as her lips quiver, she blinks, eyes fluttering closed as his fingers glide against her cheek
    "I..." she breathes, gaping at him as the stinging pain in her cheek disappears
    "Come on..." he murmurs, easing off his cloak wrapping it round her, laughing as it swamps her body
    "No..."
    "I will drag you if I have too" his eyes spark, the steel back in his tone
    "Fine...."
    He gives a growl, grasping her arms, hauling her along for a few yards, she whimpers trying to regain her footing
    "Let me GO"
    "No" he murmurs simply
    "Who are you....?"
    He doesn't reply, she punches his shoulder angrily
    "Answer me"
    He turns grasping her by the throat,just a soft pressure, thumbs stroking across her fluttering pulse
    "I am your Master.."
     
  6. FitJedi

    FitJedi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Jan 14, 2006
    Please add me to the pm list please, this is quite intriguing where you are going with this one.
     
  7. dtdang2

    dtdang2 Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Jun 6, 2005
    This story looks promising! I'd like to read the rest of it. Please put me on your PM list!
     
  8. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    3/

    "In..." he pushes her inside
    She looks around, shivering in the cold room. She looks at him fearfully as he follows her.
    He just smiles coolly watching her with interest
    She looks around the sparse room, then back at him, waiting for him to say something, anything...
    He motions for her to sit on a small chair
    "Make yourself at home..."
    She licks her lips, peering at him through narrowed eyes
    "You are mocking me..." she whispers, flushing with anger
    He just laughs raising an eyebrow at her, then shakes his head
    "Sit..."
    She just glares at him
    "Your choice" he murmurs, walking to the refresher splashing cold water onto his face "Don't even think about it"
    Padme jumps at the sound of his voice, peering at his back at the stony voice
    "I...."
    He turns; eyes like ice chips
    "You can not leave..."
    She swallows
    "You can not keep me here" she murmurs with bravado
    "Yes I can" he murmurs with cool confidence "I bought you..." he smiles, looking her over "I own you..."
    "Nobody owns me..." she hisses
    She stands toe to toe with him as he stalks over to her, he pats her cheek
    "You'll learn..."
    He laughs as he sees her eyes flash with rage, his amusement melting as she slaps him. He gives a growl, grabbing her.
    She shakes her hair out of her face standing her ground
    "You..." he breathes "No..." he shakes his head, lowering his eyes "No..."
    "You can't keep me..." she screams as he grabs her as she goes for the door
    "I told you NO!" he roars, she trembles as she feels his body tremble against hers, only his she sensed was with pure rage
    "Why are you doing this?" she whispers
    He opens his mouth, then closes it quickly blinking in bewilderment as he looks into her wide eyes
    She shakes her head
    "Why did you take me?" she asks in confusion "I...."
    He grips her chin
    "Would you rather I'd left you there?" he whispers
    She licks her lips
    "With them, to be ravaged..." she winces looking away, he grips her chin tighter making her look at him "Again and again...?"
    "Don't" she pleads
    "I saved you..."
    "But why...?"
    He pushes her further into the room
    "No more questions" he snaps, walking towards the refresher again
    "Please"
    She tenses as she grabs his arm, he turns eyes locking with hers, then looking at her trembling fingers on his arm
    "Why won't you tell me?"
    His jaw locks,
    "Because I don't know" he roars shaking her off
    She just stares at him in shock,
    "I don't know why I took you...but take you I did" he smiles mirthlessly "So we just have to make the best of it...don't we..."
    "You could let me go" she murmurs quietly
    "Well that would be a waste of my money now wouldn't it" she sighs as she senses he is mocking her again
    "Sit down" he mutters, "We will eat soon"
    She sighs as he pushes her down, eyeing her to make sure she doesn't move. She just watches him balefully as he washes and changes
    "Come here" he whispers
    She shakes her head, biting her lip
    Sighing he walks towards her, hands surprisingly gentle as he pushes her into a plain room
    "What are you doing?" she squeaks
    He sighs, pointing to a bed
    "What?" she croaks fearfully
    "Leave your things there..."
    She turns to him, mouth agape but he is gone
    "I..."
    She walks to the door, jumping as he suddenly appears again. He clears his throat, shoving some clothes into her hands
    "Here" he barks
    "I..."
    "These should do...until...Um..." he clears his throat waving his hand "We can get something..."
    She bites her lip, looking at the simple garments, stroking her thumb over the rough spun cloth
    "They are nothing..." his lips twist "But they will..."
    She blinks as she looks at his flushed cheeks, he is seemingly unable to meet her gaze
    "They're fine" she assures him, at this moment in time she would take anything, just to be clean, "Thank you..."
    She blushes as the seemingly first genuine smile breaks across his face
    "I'll..." he motions to the door "Leave you..."
    "Th..."
    "Don't try anything" she sighs, her gratitude slowly dissipating as she sees the coldness return to his face
    "I will try and find something fo
     
  9. FitJedi

    FitJedi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Jan 14, 2006
    Very interesting, especially Anakins coldness towards Padme- it's something out of the ordinary. Well done
     
  10. Darth-Semians

    Darth-Semians Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Sep 22, 2006
    Yes!!! Anakin is a ruthless slave owner - and a slave owner of Padme no doubt. Yes!!! [face_devil]

    This is a cool idea, I wish I had the forsight to think of his story. I will read your story to it's ultimate conclusion: death, chaos, murder, and destruction. [face_skull] Um... that is what is going to happen right? [face_batting]

    Anyway, add me to the PM listing please... [face_praying]

    Darth-Semians

    [face_peace]
     
  11. dtdang2

    dtdang2 Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Jun 6, 2005
    Poor Padme! Can't imagine ruling a planet one day and becoming a slave the next!

    She should be a little thankful that nasty other guy didn't buy her. {I'll take Anakin as my master any day!) Just kidding.:D
     
  12. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    Thanks guys, glad you're enjoying it, You've been added to the PM list Darth-Semians [face_peace]
     
  13. Handmaiden_Azul

    Handmaiden_Azul Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Dec 29, 2005
    I'm a bit confused about the plot so far, but am likeing it mostly.
     
  14. naadi

    naadi Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Mar 20, 2005
    A very interesting story,a great start,can't wait to read more!!=D= [face_peace]

    Could you please [face_praying] add me to the pm list if there is one,thnxx
     
  15. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    You've been added to the list naadi, thanks for reading guys
     
  16. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    4/

    Padme gives a soft moan, instinctively moving away from the hands that are trying to grasp her
    "No..." she mumbles, eyelids fluttering open for a moment
    "Ssh" she shivers at the soft whisper, giving a soft moan she falls back into unconsciousness
    Anakin sighs even in the dim light he can see the bruises along her jaw. He glides his fingertips across them wincing as she unwittingly gives a soft mumble. He murmurs soft soothing words to her as he heals the tender bruises.
    He shakes his head softly, sighing heavily, he strokes back her hair to look at her, she looked so young, so vulnerable like this, not the wildcat he had to fight every step of the way here.
    Cradling her head, he just looks at her for a moment, jumping as she suddenly awakens limbs flailing
    "Wow..." he breathes, trying to catch her
    "NO!" she growls as she sees him, her eyes grow wide, she scrambles backwards, back pressing against the wall, legs still trying to move, like she would try to get even further away.
    He lowers his eyes shamefully as the torn robe slips free, and her naked torso is exposed. Blushing her clears his throat, She looks down giving a sharp squeak of horror she clutches the robe to her body, pressing her cheek to the wall unable to look at him
    "I..." he murmurs, frowning as she turns her body away and he is faced with her trembling back
    "Hungry yet?" he murmurs. He stifles a laugh as her stomach rumbles loudly
    "I..."
    She turns her head, inching her chin in the air, looking him square in the eye she whispers
    "No"
    Anakin gapes at her a red mist clouding his vision. How dare she? Who did she think she was, he owned her, she should be grateful
    He laughs cruelly as he stomach rumbles again
    "Fine..." he murmurs giving a soft nod, he stands giving a soft yawn
    "W..What are you doing?" she whispers, swallowing fearfully as he begins to strip
    He smirks
    "It is late" he murmurs, she bites her lip, peering at the bed
    She flinches away as he walks towards her, skin gleaming pearlescent in the blue light of the moon
    "Come on"
    "What?" she squeals
    "Well there is nowhere else for you to sleep"
    She gazes at him, horror dawning on her face, he laughs as her eyes bug, and her mouth gapes. She clutches the torn robe to herself even tighter than before
    "I am not staying in the same bed as you"
    Anakin laughs
    "The way I see it, you don't have much choice do you?" he murmurs
    She just glares at him
    "Hurry up"
    She refuses to move. He gives a growl of frustration, grabbing her
    "NO!!!!" she wails, wriggling in horrified protest
    Anakin shakes her with frustration, the robe falling from her body in the struggle. She shrieks with horror, as her naked skin brushes against his
    "No" she whispers aghast
    Anakin blinks, eyes widening at the soft touch, she had such soft skin he thought, like silk. Then a consuming feeling of guilty self disgust swarms in his belly,
    "Stop struggling" Anakin grits, dropping her unceremoniously on the floor "Cover yourself" he snaps, body trembling
    She scrambles for the robe, soft whimpery sobs emitting from her throat
    He gives a growl of anger as her stomach rumbles again, she looks after him with tear soaked eyes as he leaves the room
    She strokes the tears away from her cheeks with a trembling hand, body quivering as he returns
    "Here!" he throws a bowl at her. She doesn't even look at it. She cries out as he grabs her by the hair slapping her
    "Eat"
    She swallows, just looking at him with wounded eyes as she tastes her own blood
    "EAT"
    She lowers her eyes, giving a soft whimpery sob. Anakin's patience runs out, grabbing the bowl, he begins to force the food into her mouth. She gives a choking protest as her lip stings, making her eyes water
    "N..No..." she tries to raise a quivering hand to stop him, but he just takes it as more protests against him
    "Yes!" he snaps forcing more of the food into her mouth, she sobs breath hitching as she desperately tries not to gag, fingers clutching his arm pleadingly, he shakes her off
    "Eat..."
    She gargles as she begins t
     
  17. naadi

    naadi Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Mar 20, 2005
    Wow that was a very different and powerful take on their relationship so far.I love anakins dark evil side,it's facinatiing stuff to read.Can't wait for more and thnx fr adding me to ure pm list!!=D= [face_peace]
     
  18. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    Glad you're enjoying it
     
  19. Handmaiden_Azul

    Handmaiden_Azul Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Dec 29, 2005
    Oh, I feel sorry for both!
     
  20. Mirik

    Mirik Jedi Youngling star 1

    Registered:
    Dec 13, 2005
    I feel sorry for Padme, hope Anakin will make up for her later on:_|
     
  21. Darth-Semians

    Darth-Semians Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Sep 22, 2006
    I love it! He's a bastard. Somehow, I feel that his conscious will come around and make everything right.

    Darth-Semians

    [face_peace]
     
  22. FitJedi

    FitJedi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Jan 14, 2006
    You know I don't know who to feel for more, Anakin of Padme. They're both being so stubborn! I can understand Padme being stand offish and afraid, and Anakin being frustrated but wow, he kind of needs to lighten up a bit. Very well done, I'm very intrigued to see how everything evolves with this story.
     
  23. dtdang2

    dtdang2 Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Jun 6, 2005
    Poor Padme! Anakin's got a mean streak going there!
     
  24. Farra_Sti

    Farra_Sti Jedi Master star 2

    Registered:
    Jul 27, 2005
    Great first few chapters. I like Ani's mean streak.
     
  25. Anakin_heart_Padme

    Anakin_heart_Padme Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Nov 8, 2005
    Glad you're all enjoying it more soon :)
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.