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Beyond - Legends Here without you; songfic J/Tk (Finished, last part up 4/2!!)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Rose_Skywalker, Feb 28, 2004.

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  1. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    The Song "here without you" belongs to 3 doors down. All characters and places belong to George Lucas.

    This is set between Traitor and Destiny's way.


    Jacen waited in his cell. He waited for Vegere to give him his next task; to give him something to do besides let him torture himself. The embrace of pain held nothing to the memory of her.

    A hundred days have made me older
    Since the last time that I saw your pretty face
    A thousand lies have made me colder
    And I don't think I can look at this the same
    But all the miles that separate
    They disappear now when I'm dreaming of your face


    Jacen flopped down onto his bed, another day of confusion another day of trying to figure out what Vergere wanted. Jacen knew what he wanted. He wanted her. He wanted to leave Corsucant and fly to whatever ends of the galaxy she was at. He wanted to tell her he was alive and that he had come back for her. She has no idea I'm alive, and for all I know she?s dead. He shook his head, no, she wasn?t dead; she was stronger than that. His weariness grew and he tried to shake away his tiredness. He didn?t want another night full of dreams of her, of nightmares of the cinnamon haired princess.

    I'm here without you baby
    But you're still on my lonely mind
    I think about you baby
    And I dream about you all the time
    I'm here without you baby
    But you're still with me in my dreams
    And tonight, it's only you and me


    Tenel Ka waited in her throne room. Another boring day of mundane tasks, she thought to herself. The galaxy was in the middle of a war, and she was stuck in a throne signing documents rather than fighting for the cause. Did I spend all those years at the Jedi Temple to not fight? She asked herself. She tried to change her train of thoughts; she didn?t want to think about it, about him, but the memories flooded in anyways. She smiled softly of the two of them, splashing around in the water, sparring, of the one kiss that they had shared. She shook her head, he was gone and there was nothing she could do about it.

    ?Queen mother?? One of her aids startled her

    ?Yes??

    ?Your next appointment in here.?

    ?Send them in? send anyone in, she thought, anyone to get her mind off of Jacen,

    The miles just keep rolling as the people leave their way to say hello
    I've heard this life is overrated
    But I hope that it gets better as we go (oh yeah, yeah)

    I'm here without you baby
    But you're still on my lonely mind
    I think about you baby
    And I dream about you all the time
    I'm here without you baby
    But you're still with me in my dreams
    And tonight, girl, it's only you and me


    Jacen piloted the ship away from Yuuzhan?tar. He smiled at Vergere. He had learned his lessons and now he was going home to his parents, to his sister, to his friends, but mostly to her. He wanted to reach out to her, tell her that he was alive and well but he knew the moment wasn?t right yet. He didn?t know how her state of mind was; it might send her over the edge of insanity. He hadn?t had a chance to ask Ganner about her, about how she was, about what had happened to her.

    He sighed, I wonder if she has changed. I wonder if she will still want me. I wonder if she ever wanted me at all. He banished the thoughts from his head, I'm going home, and I'm going home to her. He smiled again.

    Everything I know, and anywhere I go
    It gets hard, but it won't take away my love
    And when the last one falls, when it's all said and done
    It gets hard, but it won't take away my love (whoa no)


    Jacen waited once again. Only a few more minutes, he kept telling himself. He was home and she was coming to him. He paced up and down the landing dock, stay clam, he told himself. After everything that?s happened, this is not the worst thing you have ever faced. She was a queen now, and he was just a Jedi knight. No, he told himself again, this was Tenel Ka; this was the girl you had grown up with.

    The ship softly landed and Jacen
     
  2. Captain_Kettch

    Captain_Kettch Jedi Youngling

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    Great, amazing, splendifourous, and remember Kettch saves Tahiri and Ganner in the end. ;)
     
  3. FamousAmos

    FamousAmos VIP star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Great story, Rose. I really liked this line:

    Staring at her aid, she wanted to kill her. How dare she ruin her moment with Jacen, but she was the Queen and killing aids was highly discouraged

    [face_laugh]

    A really nice songfic. I enjoyed it. :)
     
  4. -Tenel-Ka-

    -Tenel-Ka- Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    That was gorgeous! [face_love] Incredible job~ It fit with the song perfectly!

    I also loved the part about killing aids. LOL!

    Do you mind if I put it on the J/TK website I have? You'll get proper credit of course!

    :D
     
  5. Jedi_Whispers

    Jedi_Whispers Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Beautiful! Are there going to be more moments like this between them? Pretty please?

    ~*Whisper*~
     
  6. RK_Striker_JK_5

    RK_Striker_JK_5 Force Ghost star 7

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    Stupid aide...this one's a little happier than Addicted, so that's good.
     
  7. Jaina525

    Jaina525 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I promise to read this.....but I don't have time right now!!

    Corey
     
  8. Jaina525

    Jaina525 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    AAWWWW!!! That was so good. Very short, but O so good!!!
     
  9. Eowyn_Jade

    Eowyn_Jade Jedi Master star 4

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    awww... [face_love] beautiful! But WAY too short! [face_shocked] you SO have to continue this! Please?

    EJ
     
  10. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I have some ideas for the next enstallment of this story. But they won't get up till i get back from spring break, unless i have time to write them tomorrow. We'll see :D
     
  11. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Captain_Kettch-reat, amazing, splendifourous, and remember Kettch saves Tahiri and Ganner in the end.

    thank ya thank ya! but i think thats the wrong story sweetie ;)

    FamousAmos- Great story, Rose. I really liked this line:

    Staring at her aid, she wanted to kill her. How dare she ruin her moment with Jacen, but she was the Queen and killing aids was highly discouraged


    Yeah i love that line too. I can't have a story of any sort without some stupid funny line in there or it wouldn't be right.

    A really nice songfic. I enjoyed it.

    thanks! i really hope you like the update too :D

    -Tenel-Ka--that was gorgeous! Incredible job~ It fit with the song perfectly!

    aww thank you. When i thought of this song, it just fit those two so well i couldn't pass it up.

    I also loved the part about killing aids. LOL!

    hey we've all wanted to kill an aid or a sibling at one point in time or another ;)

    Do you mind if I put it on the J/TK website I have? You'll get proper credit of course!

    As soon as i finish this, (because i'm thinking of turning it into a 3-song story) its all yours! :D

    Jedi_Whispers- Beautiful! Are there going to be more moments like this between them? Pretty please?

    I'm sure hoping so. I just tend to find that my follow ups aren't as good as the originals. I guess i'll have to see how y'all like the second part. :D


    RK_Striker_JK_5- Stupid aide...this one's a little happier than Addicted, so that's good.

    the aids just doing her job. But yeah this is alot happier than Addicted by a long shot. I just sort of feel that After everything Jacen's been through he needs a happy ending :p

    Jaina525- AAWWWW!!! That was so good. Very short, but O so good!!!

    thank ya. Don't ya know everything i write is short. I have a short attention span and not much free time [face_blush]

    Eowyn_Jade- beautiful! But WAY too short! you SO have to continue this! Please?

    thanks! :D yep its getting continued, i think i'm going to do three installments. Because so far that as many songs as i have for it. :p
     
  12. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Part Two:
    the song Right here waiting for you belongs to Richard marx.


    Jacen unfroze as he watched Tenel ka walk out the door. ?Tenel Ka? He yelled after her. Running he swung the door open and grabbed her hand and twirled her to face him. Looking into her pale green eyes he lost his nerve for a moment.

    ?What is it Jacen?? she asked politely

    ?I?ll be waiting for you,? He told her a halfhearted smile on his face

    She nodded and headed towards the council

    Oceans apart day after day
    And I slowly go insane
    I hear your voice on the line
    But it doesn't stop the pain

    If I see you next to never
    How can we say forever


    Jacen walked on eggshells for the next three days. She had left again to go back to Hapes. All she had left him was a short note saying her kingdom needed her. But I need her, he though to himself.

    Spending his days with Danni Quee was simply to bide his time, doing anything he could to keep his mind off his princess.

    ?She?s coming back you know?

    Jacen looked up at the brown eyes of his sister. ?Yeah, I know for the knighting ceremony.? He said feebly

    ?She loves you, you know.? Jaina flopped down on the bed next to him. ?No one was more distraught than she was when we thought you were dead.?

    Jacen tried to smile at his sister ?Its not that she doesn?t love me, its that she?s a queen now and I?ve changed. I think it?s the change that scares her.?

    ?Well then show her that you?re not all that different? she told him

    Wherever you go
    Whatever you do
    I will be right here waiting for you
    Whatever it takes
    Or how my heart breaks
    I will be right here waiting for you


    He waited, hoping for the right chance. She was back on Mon Cal but he hadn?t been able to get near her. Every time he visited her suite four bodyguards would say she was busy and couldn?t be interrupted. This time she was in a meeting with the council again. Jacen shook his head, you?d think being the son of princess Leia and Han solo would get you some sort of leeway with seeing people, he thought to himself. But not my princess, she?s more kept away than an exotic pet.

    Jacen sulked back to his room again. Keying the entrance he walked inside to see a holomessage beeping at him.

    Turning it on, His red head angel popped up onto the screen. ?I am sorry I have not been able to see you Jacen. Work has kept me busy, but I hope to see you at the Knighting ceremony. I shall be leaving the next day.? She gave a worrisome smile. ?Goodbye Friend Jacen?

    The message fizzled out in front of his eyes.

    I took for granted, all the times
    That I though would last somehow
    I hear the laughter, I taste the tears
    But I can't get near you now

    Oh, can't you see it baby
    You've got me going Crazy


    Tenel Ka sulked in her suite. She was queen know and hating it more than ever. Stuck in meetings all day and busy preparing for her official inauguration, she sighed. All she wanted to do was spend time with Jacen and her friends. Oh Jacen, she thought, I wish I could be with you swimming in the lake on Yavin 4. She was avoiding him, but she didn?t have the heart to tell him why. She didn?t know how he would react if he found out that Hapes was trying to marry her off. She didn?t want to admit it to him either. Secretly she was hoping she could persuade the council into letting her marry on her own when she was ready and to whom she wished. But she knew she had little more than a fool?s hope for that. Why would he want to marry you anyways, the nagging voice in her head told her. You?re a queen why would he want all that responsibility for you. Plus have you seen the Holonews, he?s been with that pretty scientist Danni Quee, what would he ever want you for?

    Tenel ka forced the thoughts out of her head; Jacen did love her, and had always loved her. She sighed into her bed and let the void of exhaustion take her

    Wherever you go
    Whatever you do
    I will be right here waiting for you
     
  13. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *pokes up*

    *Hopes someone will read* :D [face_blush]
     
  14. Marai_Jade

    Marai_Jade Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I'm reading!! I just, y'know, haven't posted yet... [face_blush] Sorry... Hey, it looks good! But kinda sad seeing everything that stands in their way.

    But I am here reading! :D


    Here, I'll give you an UP!!!

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    (Don't remember where I saw that, but it looked funky, so I thought I'd give one to you) :D
     
  15. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YAY someone did read :D

    *pokes up hoping others might too* [face_hopeful]
     
  16. Jedi_Whispers

    Jedi_Whispers Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Spending his days with Danni Quee was simply to bide his time, doing anything he could to keep his mind off his princess. Gods! I love that!!!! I'm not all to terribly fond on Danni Quee. Jacen deserves someone so much better than that...i.e. Tenel Ka!!


    You are doing a fabulous job, keep it up!!

    ~*Whisper*~
     
  17. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    it's great Rose, just like everything else. Are you going to write more to it or is this it? Great job.

    Fireyforce
     
  18. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    there is one more part to this. It hasn't been written yet. But i already have the song picked out. :D
     
  19. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Marai_Jade- I'm reading!! I just, y'know, haven't posted yet... Sorry... Hey, it looks good! But kinda sad seeing everything that stands in their way.

    Thanks for reading! Yeah it is sad everything stands in thier way but thats love sometimes. I promise it has a happy ending :D

    Jedi_Whispers-Spending his days with Danni Quee was simply to bide his time, doing anything he could to keep his mind off his princess. Gods! I love that!!!! I'm not all to terribly fond on Danni Quee.

    Thanks! I agre, danni quee is just a worthless character. So i had to find a way to justify what happens in DW with those two. ;)

    Jacen deserves someone so much better than that...i.e. Tenel Ka!!
    You are doing a fabulous job, keep it up!!


    I totally agree, thats why he gets her in this story. and thank you soo much [face_blush]

    Fireyforce- it's great Rose, just like everything else. Are you going to write more to it or is this it? Great job.

    thank ya thank ya :D The final part of this song fic is going up in a minute. I hope you like it ;)


    Part Three:
    Edwin McCain
    I could not ask for more


    Lying here with you
    Listening to the rain
    Smiling just to see the smile upon your face
    These are the moments I thank God that I`m alive
    These are the moments
    I`ll remember all my life
    I found all I`ve waited for
    And I could not ask for more


    Jacen rolled over and looked at the sheer beauty of Tenel ka. It had been two weeks since he had rescued her from the senate and taken off with her to some remote planet outside the Hapes Cluster. They had obtained a marriage license their and had choose to take a honeymoon. The water lapped at Jacen?s feet as he propped himself up on his elbows.

    Staring at Tenel ka?s stunning face, he sighed, looking at the blue sky of this remote planet, he thanked the Force for her and for this all working out so well. Well this was the easy part, he told himself, but eventually we have to get back to the hard part. ?Hey beautiful.? He whispered in her ear

    Her eyes fluttered open and she smiled broadly for him.

    ?We need to go.? He told her

    ?This is a fact.? She sighed

    Looking in your eyes
    Seeing all I need
    Everything you are is everything to me

    These are the moments
    I know heaven must exist
    These are the moments I know all I need is this
    I have all I`ve waited for
    And I could not ask for more


    Tenel ka rolled into Jacen?s chest and he put her arms around her. She laid her head on his shoulder. She knew Jacen was right; she needed to get back to Hapes. I am Queen mother that is my Job and my responsibility, she told herself. She had yelled instructions that she was going on holiday and that Ta? Chume was in charge until she got back as Jacen had rushed her out of the Senate room.I doubt anyone even heard me over the commotion, she thought to herself. It?s going to be a madhouse there. I'm going to have to announce my marriage and defend it. I fear the person I?ll have to defend it most to is Ta?chume. Tenel Ka smiled at the though, she loved to aggravate her grandmother.

    ?Tenel Ka?? Jacen inquired

    ?Hrmm??

    ?We need to get ready to leave.?

    ?This is a fact, but just a few more minutes. I don?t want to forget this.? She told him

    Jacen just smiled

    I could not ask for more than this time together
    I could not ask for more than this time with you
    Every prayer has been answered
    Every dream I have`s come true
    And right here in this moment is right where I`m meant to be
    Here with you here with me


    Jacen watched as Tenel Ka defended her marriage to the Hapes senate. He flinched slightly at being called a Jedi manipulator and a Vong supporter. But Tenel Ka stood firm and he was proud of her.

    ?I will not subject my personal life to the whims of a senate that only has their best interests in mind. My duty is to my people, but my life is my own and I will not be stripped of it.? she said defiantly

    Another senator
     
  20. Wes_Janson

    Wes_Janson Jedi Youngling star 5

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    Good fic.

    Course I might be biased having betaread it :D
     
  21. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    That was cute. I really liked it. Yay! They are married and are having twins :D
     
  22. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I loved it Rose! The Senate scene where Tenel Ka is telling the Senate about her marriage was great!! You couldn't have finished it off any better!!!

    Fireyforce
     
  23. Flaming_Sword

    Flaming_Sword Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Awesome Rose! Twins, eh? Jacen's sure going to have his hands full! Between Tenel Ka and twins!

    ~Flame~
     
  24. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wes_Janson- Good fic.

    Course I might be biased having betaread it


    Yeah, you could be a little partial. But thanks anyways! I know you liked it because of the reaction i got when you beta-read it :p

    J_M_Bulldog- That was cute. I really liked it. Yay! They are married and are having twins

    Thank you! Cute is what i do [face_blush] I had to give the story a happy ending, the beginning and the middle are sort of depressing. Yeah i thought it would just be fitting for Jacen to have twins. I'm glad you liked :D

    Fireyforce- I loved it Rose! The Senate scene where Tenel Ka is telling the Senate about her marriage was great!!

    Thank you! I felt that scene was the most correct interpretation of Tenel Ka i've ever done. I have a hard time writing her

    You couldn't have finished it off any better!!!

    Thanks! I'm sure i could have found a better way to end it but, why bother :p

    Flaming_Sword- Awesome Rose! Twins, eh? Jacen's sure going to have his hands full! Between Tenel Ka and twins!

    [face_laugh] thats the idea. Jacen manages to get in over his head all the time. He's definitly a Solo. Thanks for reading! :D
     
  25. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    *giggles* You must be Force-sensitive. My favorite color is yellow and that's what you used to highlight my name. :p
     
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