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Before - Legends In the Shadow of a Starless Night - Shmi Skywalker vignette series, updated 6/9

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Feb 27, 2007.

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  1. karebear214

    karebear214 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I'm a sucker for Shmi stories. She's got so much potential and doesn't get nearly enough play. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
     
  2. BrentusofGath

    BrentusofGath Jedi Master star 4

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    Immediately she thought of cool gardens where flowers bloomed and birds sang.

    LOL! Somehow I don't think it will be quite that pleasant.


    No field work then. Shmi felt relieved.

    LOL! It's good to be small and wiry. :p


    "And then later I'll take you to meet the Master," Esmy said casually.

    Shmi tried to ignore the painful hammering of her heart.


    Something tells me it won't be quite as bad as she's imagining.
     
  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    ?And then later I?ll take you to meet the Master,? Esmy said casually.

    :eek: :eek: :eek:

    I thought she was the Master!!

    Aaaggghhh. I'm glad to see Esmy, at least, is being very kind to Shmi and the other woman.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  4. Tatooine_Ghost

    Tatooine_Ghost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    loved it. can not wait for the next one.
     
  5. Darth Muis

    Darth Muis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I am terribly sorry I couldn't read up on this sooner, real life is keeping me busy. In good ways, so I have nothing to complain about. But, on with what we all came here for:

    Great writing, but I guess there's no suprise there. It's really developing into something nice. It's kind of heart warming to see Esmy take care of Shmi. Poor Shmi. Thanks for the PM(s)...:)
     
  6. Ulic_Starwalker

    Ulic_Starwalker Jedi Youngling star 2

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    =D= I love it thus far. :) They're a bit sad, but very interesting. I liked the Esmy character.

    Please, add me to the PM list. :)
     
  7. Lauren_Solo

    Lauren_Solo Jedi Youngling star 1

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    please Please PLEASE add me to your pm list! I love Shmi stories. Plesae send me any links to other Shmi stories you wrote. [face_praying]

    This is so sad. She's been made a slave, but maybe there's hope with this master, unless it's just the servants who are nice. [face_worried]
     
  8. EmpressJade

    EmpressJade Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Hi, thankyou for the PM. I was quite relieved to learn that the people at this farm that Shmi has been sent to seemed friendly and a more lightened chapter after what the young girl has been through at the slave market.
    Wonderful writing, :) liked how Esmy took care of Shmi, to tell you the truth you had me fooled in which I thought Esmy was a master of sorts who runs the farm. :oops: Guess that leaves us wondering what the acctual Master is like. [face_worried]
    Great update Vader as always your works are brilliant! :)
     
  9. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    NYCitygurl Glad you liked it. We'll meet the Master in the next update. Which isn't long in coming! It's written, I just need to "tweak" it. :p

    earlybird-obi-wan Let's hope so. [face_praying]

    Maeti Shmi is one of my very favorite characters! I'm glad I've got a chance to write her. :)

    palpyisgod2
    I promise to PM you THIS time!

    karebear214 She's such a great character, isn't she! :D

    BrentusofGath Hopefully not! :p

    KELIA Nope, Esmy isn't her Master. Uh oh... [face_worried]

    Tatooine_Ghost As soon as I'm done editing, I'll udpate!

    Darth Muis Esmy has a warm heart that's for sure

    Ulic_Starwalker Will do and thanks for reading!

    Lauren_Solo I'll see what I've got and PM them to you! :p

    EmpressJade
    The Master is in the upcoming update! ;)


     
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