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Saga Saga - PT Saga - OT Saga - ST Into the Drabble-Verse | UDC IX

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Raissa Baiard, May 5, 2020.

  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Superb details of the temple and the shrine and the creepy artifact that thankfully Ezra knows enough to avoid. Happy he is being helped on his way back home.
     
  2. Findswoman

    Findswoman The Tol Fanfic Mod (in Pink) star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Ooh, really interesting and different set here, and I love how you wove the prompts together into a unified story! Wonderful descriptions of the temple, its furnishings, its artifacts, and especially that strange Force-feeling that pervades it, of darkness and light just barely held in balance. (Which, in a way, is emblematic of where we last saw Ezra, as he and Thrawn are catapulted off into the unknown regions locked in conflict!) Very neat idea to bring in the Ashas-Ree temple from Resistance; I love all the lore you've come up with around it, which definitely suggests a deeper story lurking beneath the surface. It really does fit as a starting point of sorts for Ezra's journey home! Thanks so much for sharing, and do keep these coming; wonderful to see your Ezra touch at work again (which I know we'll see more of in the decathlon soon, too!). :ezra:
     
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