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Saga Ramblings: The Diary of Jorya Lank (07 Diary Challenge Fic) Drama/Angst/Humor-COMPLETE 1-1

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by LilyHobbitJedi, Jan 2, 2007.

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  1. Star_Angel

    Star_Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Taking care of children is never easy and if you aren?t used to it then it can be scary. And sick children?

    Amazing update and I?m looking forward to read more.
     
  2. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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    Great Chapter! :)

    Any chance we'll see Teran again!? [face_mischief]

     
  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    [face_laugh][face_laugh] [face_laugh][face_laugh]

    Poor Jorya! Her time in the creche is turning into quite the nightmare!!

    At least she is finally heading off on a mission.

    Great update

    =D==D==D==D=
     
  4. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Lea-El: Wow! Meet a new friend and diaper duty at the same time. Sounds like fun.

    Yes, definitely. [face_laugh]

    A mission so soon after being sick could be interesting.

    You can say that again.

    Look forward to more.

    More is on the way.

    PadawanKayla: Great update! So I hope we'll be seeing more of this friend soon!

    Thank you! Who knows, we might.

    VaderLVR64: It sounds like they had a busy day!

    That's for sure!

    Loved it.

    Thank you!!

    corellian_ale: This was so neat, my wife works in a daycare; so it's like listening to her talk about work. Great job Lily!

    To be quite honest my best friend works in a daycare too and she's ALWAYS complaining about her job. I think that did quite a bit to influence those last couple of chapters. Thank you!!

    Star_Angel: Taking care of children is never easy and if you aren?t used to it then it can be scary. And sick children?

    Yes, definitely not a fun job.

    Amazing update and I?m looking forward to read more.

    Thank you, more is coming soon.

    G__Anakin: Great Chapter!

    Thank you!!

    Any chance we'll see Teran again!?

    We might.

    KELIA: Poor Jorya! Her time in the creche is turning into quite the nightmare!!

    Yes, it was definitely a nightmare.

    At least she is finally heading off on a mission.

    Yup! :)

    Great update

    Thank you!!
     
  5. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Title: Ramblings: The Diary of Jorya Lank
    Author: LilyHobbitJedi
    Timeframe: The year leading up to Order 66
    Characters: OCs, some various canon characters
    Genre: Drama/Angst/Humor
    Summary: Jedi Padawan Jorya Lank muses about the life of a Jedi during the Clone Wars.
    AN: Well here's the next update, sorry that it's a bit on the short side. I hope to have another one up sometime later in the week.
    Here is the PM List, if anyone wants to be added/removed please pm me to let me know.

    Star_Angel
    G__Anakin
    VaderLVR64
    MsLanna
    PadwanKayla



    Ramblings: The Diary of Jorya Lank

    Entry 4


    Dear Diary,

    I have been on Boz Pity for nearly a week now, and to be quite honest I?m already eager to leave this place. It?s a dry desolate planet covered with many strange rocks that are supposedly the graves of some large extinct species. Which is why Boz Pity is called the graveyard planet, oh joy!

    The one good thing is that I?ve reunited with Master Ellia. I briefly told her about my ?fun? in the crèche before we had to get down to work. We?ve been busy patrolling the Separatist fortress as we prepare for the upcoming battle. Besides myself and Master Ellia, there are several other Jedi including five Council members, and thousands of clonetroopers.

    There is also a Republic blockade above the planet, stopping then from shipping and goods or battle droids. The Separatists will eventually be forced to fight us; the only thing is that none of us know exactly when that will be. I must be ready at any moment for if I am caught off guard then it could very well be my last one.

    There is one other reason to be concerned. There are reports that General Grievous and Count Dooku are here. Both are incredibly dangerous and have taken the lives of several Jedi in this war. People say that General Grievous is a machine with one goal: to rid the world of Jedi. This is kind of ironic if you think about because he serves Count Dooku; who was once a Jedi.

    I don?t understand how Count Dooku could totally turn his back on the Jedi and fall to the Dark Side. I was told that he was once a brilliant Jedi Master, on the Council even before he left. It shows how all of us can fall unless we listen to the Code. If only it wasn?t so hard to follow at times.

    My Mater is calling me now, so I must conclude this now. I hope I will return to write more later.
     
  6. MsLanna

    MsLanna Jedi Master star 6

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    Ha, she doesn't know what she wants. First she wants to be on a mssion and now that is too boring.
    Let's hope it stays that way and no unforseen events make this end in disaster.
     
  7. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    A great update! =D=
     
  8. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Boz Pity sounds like a nice place to leave? I hope Jorya stays safe.

    Good work
    =D==D==D=
     
  9. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Now how can anyone be bored when waiting for a battle to begin?

    Jorya, Jorya, Jorya

    [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you]

    You need to be alert and focused.

    Ah well, I hope she gets to write more too.

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  10. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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    Great Chapter=D=
     
  11. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    MsLanna: Ha, she doesn't know what she wants. First she wants to be on a mssion and now that is too boring.

    You're right, she doesn't really seem to know what she wants.

    Let's hope it stays that way and no unforseen events make this end in disaster.

    Yeah...[face_worried]

    VaderLVR64: A great update!

    I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

    Lea-El: Boz Pity sounds like a nice place to leave? I hope Jorya stays safe.

    Nice place to leave...yes you're right.

    Good work

    Thank you!

    KELIA: Now how can anyone be bored when waiting for a battle to begin?

    Jorya, Jorya, Jorya


    She's silly, isn't she?

    You need to be alert and focused.

    Yes she does!

    Ah well, I hope she gets to write more too.

    I think she might've been able to. ;)

    G__Anakin: Great Chapter

    Thank you so much!

     
  12. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Title: Ramblings: The Diary of Jorya Lank
    Author: LilyHobbitJedi
    Timeframe: The year leading up to Order 66
    Characters: OCs, some various canon characters
    Genre: Drama/Angst/Humor
    Summary: Jedi Padawan Jorya Lank muses about the life of a Jedi during the Clone Wars.
    AN: I apologize that this is a little late again, but I hope you enjoy the update.

    Here is the PM List, if anyone wants to be added/removed please pm me to let me know.

    Star_Angel
    G__Anakin
    VaderLVR64
    MsLanna
    PadwanKayla



    Ramblings: The Diary of Jorya Lank

    Entry 5


    Dear Diary,

    The war still hasn?t begun, but I?m beginning to worry. The Force is telling me that something?s not right, and that it won?t be long before tragedy strikes. I?ve told my master this and she agrees with me. She also said that I should dwell on the what ifs but rather concentrating on the present. Which is something that I don?t always do.

    Another reason for my concern is that I had a dream last night. Well I suppose it would be better to classify it as a nightmare. In it I saw a Star Destroyer crashing into Boz Pity during a great battle. It concerns me because I feel that it might be a prediction of the future, but I don?t want to jump to any conclusions.

    Just in the last week, however, I?ve not had much time to think and ponder these strange dreams or the warnings of the Force. There are several refugees here and we?ve had to keep watch over them. It?s such an incredibly sad scene seeing all these mothers comforting their children and wiping their tears, when at the same time they are working hard to hold in their own emotions.

    They will soon be escorted off the planet, but it will just take some time for the ships to arrive. At the same time the blockade is efficiently cutting off all communications off and on system making it harder for the people who have been out of contact with a loved one in a long time. It just makes me realize how lucky I am to be a Jedi, I?m trained to release worry and sorrow into the Force. They can?t do that.

    I vaguely wonder about my own family. I know that my parents and my two younger sisters are living on Corellia, but honestly I don?t even remember what they look like. At times I feel incredibly sad to never know those who gave me life, at the same time I would?ve never wanted a life as anything other than a Jedi. I live a life full of contradictions and it?s not going to change anytime soon.

    I will write more later, it?s time for me to make my rounds with Master Ellia.
     
  13. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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    Intresting [face_idea]

    Great job[:D]
     
  14. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Uh oh, Jorya has a worries and nightmares

    [face_worried][face_worried][face_worried]

    That cannot be a good thing.

    I'm glad to see she was able to help the refugees.

    Great update

    =D==D==D==D=
     
  15. PadwanKayla

    PadwanKayla Jedi Master star 4

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    I live a life full of contradictions and it?s not going to change anytime soon.

    This sure makes a statement about the Jedi life. Loved how you tied in the refugees and family with her own musing about her family.

    Great update.
     
  16. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I live a life full of contradictions and it?s not going to change anytime soon.

    I really liked that statement, too! :)

    A lovely update. =D=
     
  17. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    G__Anakin: Intresting

    Great job


    I'm so glad you liked it, thanks!

    KELIA: Uh oh, Jorya has a worries and nightmares

    That cannot be a good thing.


    Definitely not.

    I'm glad to see she was able to help the refugees.

    :)

    Great update

    Thank you!!

    PadawanKayla: This sure makes a statement about the Jedi life. Loved how you tied in the refugees and family with her own musing about her family.

    It's sad isn't it? That Jedi help so many, yet they don't get to experience a family's love.

    Great update.

    Thank you!

    VaderLVR64: I really liked that statement, too!

    I'm so glad you liked it.

    A lovely update.

    Thank you!!
     
  18. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Title: Ramblings: The Diary of Jorya Lank
    Author: LilyHobbitJedi
    Timeframe: The year leading up to Order 66
    Characters: OCs, some various canon characters
    Genre: Drama/Angst/Humor
    Summary: Jedi Padawan Jorya Lank muses about the life of a Jedi during the Clone Wars.


    Here is the PM List, if anyone wants to be added/removed please pm me to let me know.

    Star_Angel
    G__Anakin
    VaderLVR64
    MsLanna
    PadwanKayla


    Ramblings: The Diary of Jorya Lank

    Entry 6


    Dear Diary,

    I hate to say this but?the War has begun! It all began four days ago when there was a surprise Separatist attack without warning during the middle of the night. It seems that they learned about refugees here who still haven?t been escorted off system. They knew that we would do all in our power to protect the innocent civilians, and they used it to their advantage.

    After that first skirmish we lost nearly a third of the clonetroopers and a hundred of the refugees were killed. Tragically Master Adi Gallia was killed as well by none other than General Grievous. Master Windu saw it happen; and has impressed upon us all to avoid the droid general at all costs. If we do encounter him in a battle chances are good that we won?t survive the ordeal. And I definitely wouldn?t want my lightsaber added to his collection.

    The death of Master Gallia has certainly unnerved me. If a master who serves on the High Council can be killed so easily then what does that mean for the rest of us. Granted Grievous is a cold blooded killer who has taken the lives of more than one gift Jedi, but can he be stopped? All of us hope that he will be killed someday, but it?s beginning to look like he is unstoppable.

    Snap out of it Jorya! I?m really such a negative person by nature, and I know that won?t help me in the long run. I may be a klutz, and I may be a stressed out teenage girl, but I?m also a Jedi. If I do end up dying it will be for the Republic and for the Jedi ideals of peace and justice. I?ve trained my whole life for moments like these where I jump in the line of fire and this is no different.

    Evening is drawing near and my time is growing short. By unspoken agreement we only fight by night and rest during the day. I do not know how long this will last, but it at least gives us somewhat of a heads up. It won?t be long before I join Master Ellia?s side once more and hopefully this won?t be my last entry. I will write more later if I can.
     
  19. PadwanKayla

    PadwanKayla Jedi Master star 4

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    ...hopefully this won?t be my last entry.

    Hopefully, indeed. Great tie in to the canon characters. I liked her admission that the death of a Council member had her unnerved.
     
  20. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Hey! I'm caught up.

    Poor Jorya having to go to war so young. The loss of a Master even though not her own could be devastating to a Padawan.

    Could I get on the Pm List so I won't get lost again.@};-

    Good work
    =D==D==D=
     
  21. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Poor Jorya - Experiencing the reality of war at such a young age. Very tragic.

    I'm impressed with her strength.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  22. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Evening is drawing near and my time is growing short. By unspoken agreement we only fight by night and rest during the day. I do not know how long this will last, but it at least gives us somewhat of a heads up. It won?t be long before I join Master Ellia?s side once more and hopefully this won?t be my last entry. I will write more later if I can.

    Very touching post. =D=
     
  23. BrentusofGath

    BrentusofGath Jedi Master star 4

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    Well, I'm finally here. Interesting to hear about her runins with the Council members, sometimes literally, lol.

    The general would make short work of her. [face_devil]

    So I guess Mace has a yellow stripe down his back, lol. He didn't say, "If you run into Grievous, call me and run away," he simply said, "run away!" [face_laugh]

    Good job. =D= Please add me to your pm list.
     
  24. Star_Angel

    Star_Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I?ve missed tree updates and I?m sorry about that, they have been amazing and fun to read. In the Star Wars Universe, you never know if it?s a dream/nightmare or a vision, it can?t be easy to be a Jedi on that part, well, I guess that it?s never easy to be a Jedi. I can understand her fears.
     
  25. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    PadawanKayla: Hopefully, indeed. Great tie in to the canon characters. I liked her admission that the death of a Council member had her unnerved.

    I'm so glad you liked it. I've been researching the Clone Wars to try and tie in with canon whenever possible.

    Lea-El: Hey! I'm caught up.

    :D

    Poor Jorya having to go to war so young. The loss of a Master even though not her own could be devastating to a Padawan.

    Most definitely. :(

    Could I get on the Pm List so I won't get lost again.

    Of course.

    Good work

    Thank you!!

    KELIA: Poor Jorya - Experiencing the reality of war at such a young age. Very tragic.

    Yes it is.

    I'm impressed with her strength.

    :)

    Great update

    Thank you!!

    VaderLVR64: Very touching post.

    I'm so glad you thought so, thank you!

    BrentusofGath: Well, I'm finally here. Interesting to hear about her runins with the Council members, sometimes literally, lol.

    Glad you liked it.

    The general would make short work of her.

    He probably would.

    So I guess Mace has a yellow stripe down his back, lol. He didn't say, "If you run into Grievous, call me and run away," he simply said, "run away!"

    Well for the record Mace wasn't the one who defeated him. :)

    Good job. Please add me to your pm list.

    Thank you, I'll be happy to add you.

    Star_Angel: I?ve missed tree updates and I?m sorry about that, they have been amazing and fun to read. In the Star Wars Universe, you never know if it?s a dream/nightmare or a vision, it can?t be easy to be a Jedi on that part, well, I guess that it?s never easy to be a Jedi. I can understand her fears.

    I'm so glad that you are continuing to enjoy this story. Jorya does have it tough to try and sort through all that and be a Jedi too.
     
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