Saga - OT REBEL TRANSPORT- "Fates at Junction" (OCs, short story) COMPLETED

kk

 

Very enjoyable story, and well crated characters besides! Thanks for sharing it.

 

gg

 

Hi there! I finally got a chance to read the rest of the story and I liked it. You've got a great mix of the movies going on here - the quadjumper from TFA, the insanely creepy Bor Gullet from R1, you have Cal Sunrider who is right out of the Han Solo School of Piloting and General Scoundrel-isms. I like Keia; she winds up swept awar by everything but you can see her start to come into her own and take her own actions.

Torment is really cool. I love the idea of these other droids circling him like little satellites. I'd like to read about him again for sure. He's a good foil for the Fates.

Good story, Kurisan, and I apologize for taking so long to get back to you.

 

gg