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Shattered Dreams (Anakin, Gay story)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by RylorTaduri, Jan 14, 2003.

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  1. RylorTaduri

    RylorTaduri Jedi Master star 2

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    Hey guys. Here's my first fanfic, inspired by Star Wars and events from my life. Please write comments! Thanks!

    Star Wars: Shattered Dreams

    Part One (-27 BBY)

    ?Everything and everyone around him a Jedi must love, but fall in love, he must not.? said Master Yoda, in the soft darkness of his teaching room, projecting a beautiful holographic reproduction of the galaxy.

    Why? asked the young Padawan learner Den Bissari to himself.

    ?Clouds judgement, makes a Jedi irrational, love does. Makes you fear for the future, love does. When a Jedi loses his judgement, weak he becomes. An easy prey for the Dark Side of the Force.?

    That?s so unfair.

    Den Bissari was fourteen years old, with short brown hair and eyes, a little bit of freckles and a light skin. He was listening to Master Yoda?s teachings with the other kids his age. He did not share the small but powerful Master?s opinions on love. Because he had experienced love at first hand.

    Den was a rare exception to the Jedi. His parents and all his relatives having died during the shallantiir epidemy in Draxus III, he was taken under the custody of the Jedi Order when he was nine years old. The Council had reluctance accepting him at first, but his quick adaptation to new environments and natural talent to use the Force to help others around him quieted all fears coming from the senior members of the Jedi Order.

    He was not sad about the loss of his family.

    What happened is what happened, and you cannot change anything about it. Accept it. Don?t mourn the dead. Celebrate life. Trust the Force.

    The door to the classroom opened up, giving way to an intense light. A teenage silhouette appeared.

    ?Now, a new member to our group we have. Obi-Wan Kenobi?s apprentice, Anakin Skywalker will now join us.? said Yoda.

    Rather that greeting Anakin, the class stood pretty much silent. They knew who Anakin Skywalker was. Some said he was the Chosen One. Some said he had too much fear and that is why he did not join the group like all others.

    Anakin took a seat next to Den. He remembered seeing him a few times in the Temple?s corridors.

    ?Hi? said Anakin quietly, smiling to Den.

    His colleague did not reply. He was staring at him. Anakin felt awkward and turned his attention to Yoda instead. Den just realized how he made Anakin feel, but did not try to talk to him for the rest of the class.

    Later on in the afternoon, the students had some free time. Anakin was practicing his lightsaber skills against multiple training laser droids in the gym. Den entered the room, but since Anakin was so concentrated he did not feel him coming.

    Skywalker?s mind was focused on the droids. They were coming towards him in a triangle formation. They would try to surround him. He hat set their charge on maximum intensity. The first one, the tip of the triangle fired, and Anakin blocked it, sending the laser ray bouncing off the wall. It fired a burst, and the Padawan deflected the shots once again and they hit their source, putting the droid of action. The left corner of the former triangle rushed passed Anakin head and he followed it. It fired a burst in the young Jedi?s direction but he ducked and sent the sphere crashing into the wall. But Anakin was so in the moment that he forgot about the third one that was ready to shoot him from behind. Suddenly he heard the familiar sound of a lightsaber activation, a slash and metal pieces hitting the ground.

    Den had destroyed the third sphere. He shut down his blue-bladed lightsaber.

    ?Thanks for the hand? said Ani.

    ?You better watch out with those my friend, they could have killed you.?

    ?I know there?s always something watching my back? replied Anakin with a smile.

    ?Oh? my name?s Den Bissari.?

    ?Den Bissari huh??

    ?Yeah. Sorry for earlier on??

    ?What are you sorry for??

    ?Well, not answering to you and all.?

    ?That?s allright. No problem. But what was up with you??

    ?Uh? Well you know, a lot of people talk about you. Especially the Masters. They say you have so much potential. Some say you may be the
     
  2. Jez_3-14159265358979

    Jez_3-14159265358979 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aug 13, 2001
    Hey this is something new. it's a very interesting twist to the normal plot.

    Jez
     
  3. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 18, 2002
    I'm fairly certain that you can't post gay fanfic here, RylorTaduri. I've contacted a mod, JediGaladriel. I would ask her.

    I would suggest posting at FF.N (www.fanfiction.net). I'm sure you could find an audience there.

    Good luck. :)
     
  4. JediGaladriel

    JediGaladriel Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Sep 3, 1999
    oba's right. That comes down from admin--slash isn't permitted.

    There are plenty of slash sites around, and I'm sorry this is your first experience here, but I have to lock this.
     
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