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Saga Star Wars: Infinities: Revenge of The Sith

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by masterofmagnetism, Apr 17, 2010.

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  1. masterofmagnetism

    masterofmagnetism Jedi Youngling

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    Hello, my name is Luis and after reading the Star Wars: Infinities series that takes a look at an altered Star Wars Universe, especially that of the original trilogy, it gave me the idea to do one for Revenge of the Sith, but the one point of divergence happens when Mace Windu is about to confront Supreme Chancellor Palaptaine, aka Darth Sideous. I do hope you enjoy!

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    "Mace Windu, I take it that General Grievous as been dealt with, I must admit that I didn't expect you to arrive so soon. What brings you here? Darth Sideous says as he turns around in his chair and faces Mace Windu.

    "In the name of the Galactic Senate of the Republic, you are under arrest Chancellor!" says Mace Windu as he, the other Jedi Masters, take out their lightsabers.

    "Are you threatening me Master Jedi?" says Palpatine, staring coldly at Mace.

    "The Senate will decide your fate!" says Mace Windu.

    "I am the Senate!" says Darth Sideous as he slowly gets up, still glaring at Mace Windu.

    "Not yet," says Mace Windu, matter-of-factly.

    "It's treason, then," says Darth Sideous as suddenly a lightsaber appears in his hand. Suddenly, he ignites his lightsaber and leaps through the air, and kills the three Jedi Masters, that have came to Mace Windu's aid. Mace Windu and Darth Sideous are now fighting, evenly matched, saber against saber.

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    Meanwhile, Anakin sits alone in the Jedi Council chamber, thinking about Padme, and feeling hopeless that he can't do anything to try to save her from destruction. Palpatine's words echo through his mind, and numb him clear down to this very soul. He once again sees the image of Padme dying while giving birth to his child, then he sees a different part of the image he didn't see before, he sees Obi-Wan! What does he have to do with this, is he there to save Padme? Could the Chancellor had been wrong, could he have lied about being able to save Pademe? Will Padme be able to be saved? Or should he give up everything for the sake of love and save her? Should he dissolve his partnership with Sideous and turn him over to the Jedi?

    "I can't deal with this waiting any longer, I am going to help!" he says to himself and rushes outside to his Coruscant airspeeder. He rushes over to 500 Republica and gets out of his airspeeder and runs into the Chancellor's chambers, but before he does so, he is again assaulted by the image of Obi-Wan helping Padme. What does this mean? Is this a sign?
    He thinks to himself as he goes inside the turbolift elevator, he runs inside the chambers and trips over something and falls, he looks up and it frightens him, its the body of a dead Jedi!, he feels for a pulse, but can't find anything, the he finds deep saber burns and gashes left on the body. He looks around the other room, and he sees two other dead Jedi Masters, also from saber burns, he goes over to check their pulse, but he can't find anything.

    "He lied to me!" he says to himself, "He lied about everything!" he says to himself.

    He looks up and he sees Mace Windu backing a beaten and defeated Chancellor Palpatine into a corner.

    "Anakin, I am glad you're here, I told you the Jedi couldn't be trusted, please help me and I will help you save your wife!" pleads Palpatine!"

    "No, you won't! You lied! You have been lying from the very start, why should I believe you?" Anakin says tearfully, as he is unimaginably hurt!

    "But Anakin, don't you see what is-" interjects Palpatine. "Don't let the Jedi tell you what to do, be your own man, make your own decisions, choose smartly, save me, and you will save your wife and child!"

    "Don't listen to him Anakin, he is a Sith Lord, and they are not be trusted, now help me Anakin! We will dispose of forever!" says Mace Windu.

    "No Master Windu, killing is not the Jedi way, we will make him stand at a trial for his crimes against the R
     
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    masterofmagnetism Jedi Youngling

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    "I looked up to this man for support and guidance, he filled a gap that Obi-Wan tried to fill and couldn't. Everything that he told me was a lie. I just want you to know that in case we can't save you, I will always love you no matter what happens and I will always be there for our child no matter no what!" says Anakin as he looks at Padme and hugs her.

    "Now, I have to contact Obi-Wan, is Artoo still here?" he asks.

    "No, he's with Obi-Wan on Utapau!" says Padme. "However, I think there's an extra astromech unit on the upper level of this apartment though, says Padme!:
     
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    masterofmagnetism Jedi Youngling

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    "I guess I better go and try to find it then," says Anakin. "Hopefully Obi-Wan is doing ok on Utapau, I may try to contact Yoda, too while I am at it, I think the two of them need to be aware of what's going on," Anakin says.

    "Let me go with you and help you, Anakin," says Padme.

    "No Padme, it could be really dangerous, especially since Palpatine has been revealed as being the Sith Lord that is behind everything, of which again raises another issue that you can't really stay here because of that either. He knows everything about me and you, and also about our baby. I am so sorry Padme, this is all my fault that you're in danger in the first place. Maybe Bail Organa can help us find that missing astromech droid," he says thoughtfully.

    "Yes, let me go and bring him in, he needs to be briefed on what's going on anyway, she says. Padme walks to the transmitting device on the door and calls for Senator Bail Organa of Alderaan to enter. "Senator Organa, do you copy?" "Senator Organa? "Senator Organa, do you copy? It's no use, he must be offplanet.






     
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