Beyond - Legends Saga - Legends The Dark Forces Saga - 2023 Fanfiction Summer Olympics Entries (Kyle Katarn/Jan Ors)

I saw your post in the main challenge thread about not novelising missions, but seriously, you can't leave us hanging like that! You built all this action and all the suspense to have them captured, and we as readers are really invested in their fates, and we won't know what happens next?

Meanwhile, one titbit that really stood out to me was the moment Kyle was using the Force to aim without being aware of it. The whole idea of time slowing down and then speeding back up was a fantastic description of Kyle's sensation in that moment, and another follow-up to this story that I'd like to read is the moment when he finds out what he'd actually been doing.

Congrats on completing this pentathlon, it's been a great ride! Now get to work on sequels, or there will be riots

 

They certainly are in a pretty desperate spot, aren't they? Thanks for reading.

I seem to be getting a lot of requests like this... Appreciate the read and review!

Even though the bad guys just used the ramp, it's still good teamwork!

Yeah, I really love writing in him using The Force without knowing. From borrowing a scene from one of the novellas in this one for using it to aim and having him accidentally push a grenade away in another story, it's fun.

Okay, okay, okay. Y'all convinced me. I'll work on novelizing that mission!

 

Please tag me when you do!