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The Deep Core Warlords [Imperial Retcon Month!]

Discussion in 'Literature' started by Thrawn McEwok, Aug 22, 2006.

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  1. Thrawn McEwok

    Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare star 6 VIP

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    I'm pretty sure everyone knows who I mean when I say "the Deep Core warlords": Harrsk, Teradoc, Delvardus and the rest - the guys who're holed up in the Deep Core in Darksaber

    Now this has always been a bit of a continuity problem, because both before (Thrawn Trilogy, CotJ) and after (Planet of Twilight, Hand of Thrawn duology) the Imperials are supposed to have been forced out of the Core towards the Rim. In Children of the Jedi, Harrsk is even said to be active on Spuma, in Atravis Sector, and near Belsavis - all on the Outer Rim...

    Explaining how they were in the Core in Darksaber has tended to be one of the trickiest continuity issues in Star Wars...

    Except...

    ... we missed the obvious answer.

    The easy answer...

    They're not in the Deep Core.

    :oops: :oops: :oops:

    [face_whistling] [face_whistling] [face_whistling]

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    The only thing that's explicilty located in the Deep Core in Darksaber is Tsoss Beacon, surrounded by "the fiery soup of stars and gases near the heart of the deep core."

    What we have apart from that are repeated references to something called the "Core Systems", which are certainly an area of inhospitable and decidedly hard-to-navigate space near the Deep Core: "a mere island in what had been considered the backwater territories and formerly uninhabitable systems near the core of the galaxy"...


    [i]True night was impossible in the Core Systems. Stars clustered so closely together that even the blackest regions of space were a symphony of stellar flares and hot ionized gas clumped in regions once considered uninhabitable. In a navigational hell like this, remnants of the Empire hid among uncharted systems where they could wait and recover--and war upon each other.[/i][hr][/blockquote]

    But these "Core Systems" aren't necessarily the same place as the Deep Core. They're never [i]called[/i] "the Deep Core", capitalized or otherwise.

    True, the non-Imperial planet of Khomm is [i]toward the center of the galaxy, near the Core Systems[/i]; and when Kyp looks up at the sky, he sees Imperial territory - but look at how it's described: [i]the densely clustered stars that made a broad river of light across the night of space. The Core Systems.[/i]

    ... "a broad river of light across the night of space"? That sounds like a side-on view of the Galactic disk, rather than the bulge of the Core ...

    Looking at the map, I wonder if we shouldn't think of these "Core Systems" as fanning out [i]beyond[/i] the Deep Core - spreading out into the Galactic disk in the opposite direction from the "Slice", shading into the inhospitable and decidedly hard-to-navigate space known as the Unknown Regions.

    But wait! I'm not done yet! :D

    First, a quote from a Bothan:

    [blockquote][hr][i]Five years ago the Empire was in command of about one third of the charted galaxy. Today the Imperial Core and other fragments make up less than one quarter of Known Space, with the majority of that space in the heavily fortified Deep Core.[/i]
    -- Rear Admiral Kursk Mal'ia, [i]Cracken's Threat Dossier[/i], page 90[hr][/blockquote]

    Now this does locate the bulk of Imperial space in the "Deep Core", but it still gives the various Imperial fragments a reasonably large area on the map - more than could really fit in the astrophycical Deep Core, I think - someone like Jason Fry might answer that better than me.

    And more to the point, this must be dated to the end of the BFC, or 17 ABY: five years [b]after[/b] [i]Darksaber[/i]...

    [i]Five years ago the Empire was in command of about one third of the charted galaxy[/i]... :-oo

    [i]Cracken's Threat Dossier[/i] also gives us a political term, "Imperial Core", which ties in nicely with Darksaber's "Core Systems"; a political term, not an astrophysical one... :D

    And for my next trick, I'm going to lever these scattered pieces of random continuity out of their contexts and spin them high up in the air above the stage... and when I catch them again, they're going to have become a beautiful retcon...

    The "
     
  2. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Okay...after writing a vernerable essay of points and then countering them all myself, all I can do is bow to this magnificent retcon.

    Its makes so much sense!

    There's nothing to say the Empire didn't spiral around the Rim further more, from Bespin through the Kathol Sector to the Quence Sector through to link up with the rimward Imperials that struck up the Run to Ukio and Ando! It also explains how the Empire held onto Corellia and Kuat for so long, as well!

    In the North, the Empire more than likely spirals across the Hydian though, as the Corporate Sector is noted as hostile to the New Republic in 17 BBY, and the Kwymar Sector is Harrsks, after all, reaching to Makem Te and Antemeridia, and popping coreward at salients to Garos IV and from Chazwa to Carida during Thrawns time.

    I also love this quote, btw, thank you very much.

    100% in 4 ABY, 50% 7 ABY, 33% 8 BBY, 25% 9 BBY, 33% again 12 BBY, and then 25% 17 BBY, ending up with around 1% at the end of the war.

    Of course, those final two figures being more nebulous after massive casulties during Operation Shadow Hand....

    And its a given Grand Moff Gann came later - there was no centralised Empire in the Deep Core between Pellaeon's departure, and Daala's reunification of the new warlords in 13 BBY.
     
  3. AdmiralNick22

    AdmiralNick22 Retired Fleet Admiral star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    McEwok, this is one of the few retcons you have put forth that actually makes sense to me, minus a few points. I don't accept it 100%, but parts do seem to fit.

    The main one would be Harrsk having Bilbringi. We know that within months of the defeat of Thrawn that the New Republic had Bilbringi up and running. They have the Lusyanka undergoing refit there, plus a defense fleet that contained various warships, including Mon Cal cruisers, Neb-B's, corvettes, and at least a few VSD's.

    There is no way that Harrsk had Bilbringi. And there is no source that shows the NR temporarily lost control of it. In the aftermath of the reborn Emperor's campaign, the Imperial forces were as you suggest, locked in the Deep Core and in isolated pockets of the Outer Rim.

    --Adm. Nick
     
  4. CeiranHarmony

    CeiranHarmony Force Ghost star 5

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    *applauds amazed* McEwok...

    you are the second winner of my: GFFA Cartography Award

    this retcon is better than I expected and I love the empty spaces it would fill, and it would also solve many problems about the true deep core.
     
  5. Pelranius

    Pelranius Jedi Master star 5

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    It would explain how the NR managed to defeat the Deep Core warlords yet still needed Pellaeon's starcharts in Destiny's Way.
     
  6. GrandAdmiralJello

    GrandAdmiralJello Comms Admin ❉ Moderator Communitatis Litterarumque star 10 Staff Member Administrator

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    Except that the Darksaber passage makes it VERY clear that it's talking about the Galactic Core. In other words, the place where stars are clustered closely together. I'm unsure how much you know about astronomy, but galactic spiral arms do not have closely clustered stars.

    The empirical evidence outweighs your semantic word twisting, and all your efforts are for nought.
     
  7. SuperWatto

    SuperWatto Chosen One star 7

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    Ewok... I would never take so long to write a review of this horrendous book, let alone FIX it...
     
  8. FTeik

    FTeik Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    When and how did the NR defeat the DeepCore-warlords IN the deep core?
     
  9. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Well, they attacked Pakrith, and stole Empress Teta off of someone, assumedly, and there is Khomm, after all.

    I do agree that Bilgringi couldn't be Imperial, as we see its NR in Nightsaber, though it does work regardless.

    The two commands, Pellaeon and Daala, come apart when the NR secure Adumar as a powerhouse, and when NR member worlds dot around the Core Worlds to Galantos and Whettam.

    GrandAdmiralJello, yes, the spiral arms don't have clusters of stars...but they do have star clusters *points at Bright Jewel Cluster and Ssi-Ruuvi star cluster*
     
  10. Excellence

    Excellence Jedi Knight star 7

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    Darksaber is 8 months after Children of the Jedi; 8yrs after Endor.

    There were Deep Coreans as late as New Rebellion. Bel Iblis repulsed Daala's last known strike, remember, at that time.
     
  11. CeiranHarmony

    CeiranHarmony Force Ghost star 5

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    known cluster close to this region: THE REDOUBT.. where the chiss/empire of the Hand hid some secrets
     
  12. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    There were active Deep Core Imperials as late as 23 BBY, and maybe inactive ones as late as 28 BBY.
     
  13. AdmiralNick22

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    Right around the time Ackbar was pushing the Remnant back to eight sectors, Daala reunited the Deep Core warlords and attacked the NR. The New Republic Fourth Fleet was put under the command of Garm Bel Iblis, who thrashed Daala's forces, though she escaped.

    I think many assume the Deep Core was at least partially occupied by the NR.

    --Adm. Nick
     
  14. killfire

    killfire Jedi Master star 4

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    So Daala rules the redoubt now? [face_devil]
     
  15. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Nope. She vanished into hyperspace after Bel Iblis almost captured her, and we haven't heard from her since.

    Unless that was a joke I didn't get...
     
  16. Thrawn McEwok

    Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare star 6 VIP

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    :eek: [face_blush]...

    ... :D :cool: [face_dancing]

    Thank you!!

    (Unless you're joking, that is... :p ;))

    This is true, especially in the "south": looking again at Wookieepedia, Ord Trasi is said to be in the same sector as Ando, which puts it coreward of Tatooine on the Corellian Run and in the area of Thrawn's campaigns; it's also supposed to be near Trogan, which Wookieepedia places inside the Slice...

    NR territory here is perhaps best seen as leading Corewards from Bothawui, Sullust and Sluis Van, with the Empire in control rimwards - which is what CotJ describes, after all...? [face_thinking] Alternatively, the frontier could be far more fluid and irregular...

    In the "north", I'm still thinking more of a "linear" frontier area stretching from Core to Rim, defined approximately by Ord Mantell, Ithor and Bilbringi on the one side, and by Dathomir, Kwymar and Makem Te on the other... with a NR salient through Yavin to Ord Mantell and Ithor - didn't Wedge say in Specter of the Past that Ord Mantell had been the NR's forward base against the Empire for a long time?

    What's the source of the 50% figure for 7 ABY, out of interest? I thought that one of the X-wing books suggested an approximately even split between the NR, Zsinj, and other Imperials... [face_thinking]

    You're forgetting that the Warlords weren't in the Deep Core... :p [face_shame_on_you] [face_whistling] ;)

    And since the Inquisition had a major HQ on Prakith, I'm not sure whether Sector 5 was ever truly outwith nominal Imperial space in the way that the Warlords' territories were...

    But that said, I do rather like the idea that Gann represents a reassertion of Imperial control...

    That's okay... :D

    Actually, The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, page 111, says that the damage to the defences left Bilbringi too exposed, so the NR remove
     
  17. killfire

    killfire Jedi Master star 4

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    Kind of. Admiral Daala is my favorite character next to the boy who has been cloned. So I have a hard time accepting she vanished without leaving a body, also kind of offscreen. With this retcon (or a part of it) putting the redoubt next to the deep core I wonder who is in charge there. And hope it is Daala. Just for fun.
     
  18. Sinrebirth

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    It doesn't necessarily have to be included in the 'thousand days' - remember that the New Republic fought a pretty significant battle at Korriban, and had skirmished at Reborn Empire worlds throughout the Southern part of the galaxy.

    Nicely, they secured Kril'dor during that time, which is between Adumar and Reecee...helpful. And even then, if the Empire can't stop Galantos and Whettam joining the Republic, then there is no need to consider the Republic fought over the systems - the way in which the Empire drops from a third to a quarter suggests the Empire wasn't effectively holding these worlds anymore, especially considering Imperial sector groups seem to be around 3 Star Destroyers a group during this era, before the mass retreat to Bastion.

    Actually, its my personal opinion that the Bilgringi shipyards and the Lusankya were re-captured by the Empire - note this comment during Crimson Empire by a lowly Imperial

    "I heard the Rebels captured a Super Star Destroyer - the Lusankya, - in the Vanik System"

    Stress mine on 'a', which may gives us some knowledge to the activity of the Sovereign, as well.

    :)

    When the New Republic studies Pellaeon's map, the route to Ebaq 9 gives us one planet, and its a dead-end. When they overlay Pellaeon's routes, they suddenly have 4 other systems pop up on the map.

    Ackbar mentions that there is an abandoned Imperial starbase, Tarkins Fang, in this area, that the Empire intended to use in the case of renewed hostilities. This is a sincerely difficulty feat if the Empire intended to move elements from Bastion all the way to the Deep Core - so perhaps Ackbar was referring to another element of the Empire.

    Now, if its a fact that the New Republic merely secured 1 out of 5 systems in the Deep Core, then there could easily be dozens of inactive Imperial worlds in the Deep Core, struggling alone in-between the stars - we saw how well several Imperial worlds survived alone in the Koornacht Cluster, after all.

    And we have no recorded effort of the New Republic pushing into the Deep Core after the Second Imperium affair, anyway.

    6.5-7 ABY territory...

     
  19. CeiranHarmony

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    see f.e. the Cron Cluster or Hapes Cluster... tight clusters. Cron cluster was as tight, when it went supernova nearby systems also went nova and were devastated. Hapes Cluster is tight, difficult to navigate and enclosed by nebulae.. all these descriptions fit and resemble deep core navigational and density, like the Chiss Redoubt or others.

    even if the deep core warlords are in the galactic deep core, they are not INSIDE it but above or below it, and not too deep into the galactic core. maybe 2D viewed they are in it but in 3D they are on top.

    though with the classification of imperial deep core, core systems etc. dividing imperial space into new regions, and with Bastion being moved in name and role, from coruscant to byss and from byss into the rim.. these new territorial classifications could be also moved with bastion. bastion is imperial deep core.. wherever it goes, the names follow. etc. so bastion moved several times before SOTP and VOTF maybe it was in the "deep core" mcewok is suggesting.

    ps: the hyperspacial anomalia around the Unknown Regions are gravitational, so DENSITY of masses has to be there, maybe lots of starclusters and stars and planets and rocks in space. many nebula, dark matter and clusters would qualify to make this hyperspace barrier plausible.. and it too would fit the description of imperial deep core, right?

    thoughts?
     
  20. SephyCloneNo15

    SephyCloneNo15 Jedi Knight star 5

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    Oy! This is a long retcon, with lots of really wordy replies. Needless to say, I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I did notice something interesting: The title of the thread!

    "[Imperial Retcon Month]" Is this your attempt to make NRM last even longer after RF announced in Cooper's thread about gay characters that NRM would be officially over on the 26th?
     
  21. modi

    modi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    So...
    This would explain how the Pentastar Alignment/Oversector Outer contains the territories near Dantooine and also Sullust and Seswenna in the south.

    I really like the Koornacht retcon, I was thinking about something similar to this (Rim being west of the Core near the UR, but not as part of the "Deep Core" :rolleyes: )

    The Empire's territory post-Endor (Empire+warlords):
    (x% of the Known Galaxy, so no western disk)

    7 ABY - 50% (X-wing)
    8 ABY - 50% (Dark Empire Sourcebook?) (33% Zsinj)
    9 ABY - 25% (NEC)
    9 ABY - 50% (NEC) after Thrawn

    12 ABY- 33% (Crackens Threat Dossier)

    17 ABY- 25% (Crackens Threat Dossier)
    18 ABY- 1% (NEC) 8 Sectors and some Deep Core worlds, before the Corellian Insurrection

    Any info about the "Dark Empire"?

    The problem is: how de we define territory in space? 50% means every second inhabited system (There were 50 million of them) ? Or 50% of the star systems? About 10% of the star systems are in the bulge (Deep Core), and even the uninhabited systems count as part of the Empire/NR. (SOTE sourcebook mentions that the Empire contained billions of stars.)
     
  22. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Actually, Modi, 8 ABY looks more like this

    33% -Zsinj, 1% Empire

    Zsinj and the Empire and Warlords rule 33% after Zsinj loses 4% of his territory to the NR, and another 4% to the Empire.

    The general terminolgy is that the Empire ruled 'half of known space' or some such...so yes, every one in two systems, though usually clumped together or linked.
     
  23. modi

    modi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    :eek: Which source gives us so specific infos about Zsinj's territory? (like 4% to the NR, 4% to the Empire) And what do you mean by "1% Empire"? :confused:

    My 8 ABY number is from DE sourcebook:
    Also I found another qoute there:
    This is 10 ABY, after Coruscant, before Operation Shadow Hand

    Also I missed the 8.5 ABY info from NEC



    The Empire's territory post-Endor (Empire+warlords):
    (x% of the Known Galaxy, so no western disk)

    7 ABY____50% (X-wing)
    8 ABY____50% (Dark Empire Sourcebook) (33% Zsinj (Rebellion Era Sourcebook))
    8.5 ABY__25% (NEC)
    9 ABY____25% (NEC) before Thrawn
    9 ABY____50% (NEC) after Thrawn
    10 ABY___50% (Dark Empire sourcebook) this is after the Imperials recaptured Coruscant and most of the Core Worlds, but before Operation Shadow Hand

    12 ABY___33% (Crackens Threat Dossier)

    17 ABY___25% (Crackens Threat Dossier)
    18 ABY___"1%"(NEC) 8 Sectors and some Deep Core worlds, before the Corellian Insurrection

     
  24. Sinrebirth

    Sinrebirth Mod-Emperor of the EUC, Lit, RPF and SWC star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Does it say how much the Empire owned? As a lot the galaxy seeems to have been apart of the nebulous 'free systems' mentioned in Courtship - neutral, but nominally supporting Coruscant.

    Note, the Empire may own 50% in 6.5 ABY, but the Rebels own merely 30%, and the remainder 20% is nominally rebel. Its not clear-cut until 9 ABY, where the Alliance owns 75% and the Empire 25%.

    Quoting something I've wrote three times now about Zsinj's Domain.

    So

    7 ABY____50% Empire, 30% Rebel, 20% Neutral (X-wing)
    7.5 ABY__Less than 50% New Republic, 33% Zsinj, 2% to other Imperials, rest Nominal
    8 ABY____50% New Republic (Dark Empire Sourcebook) 33% Zsinj and Warlords and Empire (Courtship of Princess Leia), rest nominal
    8.5 ABY__25% (NEC), 75% NR
    9 ABY____25% (NEC) before Thrawn
    9 ABY____50% (NEC) after Thrawn
    10 ABY___50% (Dark Empire sourcebook) this is after the Imperials recaptured Coruscant and most of the Core Worlds, but before Operation Shadow Hand

    12 ABY___33% (Crackens Threat Dossier)

    17 ABY___25% (Crackens Threat Dossier)
    18 ABY___"1%"(NEC) 8 Sectors and some Deep Core worlds, before the Corellian Insurrection

    And, note between Thrawn's death and the Imperials recapturing Coruscant, the Mew Republic fleet stormed into the Outer Rim in their own version of the Outer Rim Sieges, so the Empire mainstream could have numbered as little as a few percent as the Imperial fleet vanished into the Deep Core, which isn't counted in the normal Known Galaxy equation.
     
  25. modi

    modi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    WHAT? Zsinj lost 8% of his INCOME, not his territory.
    You assume it based on what? (50-50) But it doesn't really matter...

    Source?
    Since when was the Imperial Ruling Council a lesser warlord? :confused: You really think that the Galactic Empire between Ysanne and Thrawn controlled a territory as small as the Remnant during the NJO? [face_hypnotized]

    This whole thing is based on a non-existing information. Isn't it?
     
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