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The Enemy Beside You: Bane's Inception (AU - TPM| /Obi-Angst) ~*~COMPLT Post 21 - 1/30~*~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Arldetta, Aug 10, 2002.

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  1. Sabe126

    Sabe126 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I can wait! Just wanted to make sure that I hadn't missed something obvious! :)


    Sabe126
     
  2. Wild_Huntress

    Wild_Huntress Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Goody! A nice long and intriguing post! I can't wait for more.... Must find out what's gonna happen!
     
  3. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sabe126 - NP. ;) I didn't give you much to go on. :D

    Wild_Huntress - It might be a bit before the next post. I'm content for the moment and nothing is really demanding my attention, at least that I've posted thus far. ;)
     
  4. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I think I am going to take a break for a while. :( The flow is just dwindling at the moment. So, I think, this will just have to wait. Any upping would be most appreciated!! :D

    Thanks again to all those reading! ;) :D
     
  5. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  6. CalaisKenobi

    CalaisKenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    You're welcome Arldetta [face_blush] I think I read so much into stuff because of all those darn psychology and art symbolism classes ;)

    (AKA A cleverly (NOT) disguised up 8-} )
     
  7. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks!! Jacinta & CK!!! :D


    While I'm upping all the others, I may as well, up this too.

    So, UP! :D
     
  8. Jedi_Umm

    Jedi_Umm Jedi Youngling

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    Yikes how long a wait?

    up


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  9. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jedi_Umm - Not that long. Hopefully, in the next day or so. ;)


    Quick Note: Well, it looks like my weekend plans have been cancelled. And I will work on posting again sometime soon. And I humbly request that those who believe pray for my brother-in-law.
     
  10. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ** blast her dance music while her and obiwan and quigon shake they bootys to the music**
     
  11. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jenny - Luv ya. :D But if you bring 'Nsync in here I will have to kill you with my plastic lightsaber with bad sound effects. *glares* :mad:

    Like I mentioned in Iedos, I will work on these this weekend to get you guys a post. Thanks for the Ups!!! :D :D :D
     
  12. Sabe126

    Sabe126 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    My thoughts are with you Arldetta. I hope that everything is ok.


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  13. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sabe126 - Thank you. :) Please keep them on your mind, as we are not out of the woods yet and it will be a time before we know one way or the other. Trying times are on the horizon. [face_plain]

    Sorry folks, this isn't a long post, nor is it that revealing, but it is a post none the less. I will work on getting a better one up for you next time. :)

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    Journey Home

    When Qui-Gon found Obi-Wan, the boy was still playing with the water?s edge. ?It?s time to go.? He said gently. Obi-Wan rose from the ground to follow the tall Jedi out. Even now he was still sorting out the conversation he had with Master Yoda. The two met up with Anakin and took an air taxi to the Queen?s landing platform. While awaiting Queen Amidala?s arrival, Obi-Wan wandered around to inspect the ship and the passers-by, so engrossed in the array of cultures mixed in the large populace. However, he could still hear the distant voices arguing.

    ?It?s not disrespect, Master. The Council will not go along with you this time. He?s too old and that?s that.? fought Anakin. Qui-Gon tried to walk away, he did not want to have this fight, but his apprentice followed.

    ?He will be a Jedi, I promise you. And the Council will decide his fate, not you. Now get on board.? He finally stopped to confront the youth. The severity in his voice made Anakin cower for a brief moment before stomping off toward the ship. He gave Obi-Wan a quick grimace as he passed.

    The boy directed his eyes to the ground as not to see the anger behind the gaze. After Anakin had vanished inside the vessel, Obi-Wan made his way to the Jedi Knight. ?Master Qui-Gon, sir. I don?t want to cause any trouble.? He offered.

    ?You won?t Obi.? The large man smiled his assurance. ?I am not permitted to train you, but I am not denied to have you watch me and learn either. Stay close and do what I say, understood?? Obi-Wan nodded eagerly. A questioning glance swept his face.

    ?Master Qui-Gon, sir. I have a question.? The Jedi sighed. <How I wish he would stop using the sir.> He brought his attention back to the youth. A quick nod of acknowledgement prompted the boy to continue. ?What are midi-chlorians? I?ve heard them mentioned but I don?t know what they are.?

    ?They are microscopic creatures that give a Jedi their powers. The live in our cells and we are symbionts with them.? He explained. The boy still looked puzzled and so he continued, ?They speak to us and connect us to the will of the Force. If you quiet your mind, you will be able to hear them too.?

    ?I still don?t understand.? Obi-Wan apologized. He dropped his head down and diverted his eyes, since he didn?t want to see the Knight?s disappointment.

    Instead, Qui-Gon grabbed his shoulders and sympathized, ?You will with time and training.? Obi-Wan glanced up to smile thoughtfully at Qui-Gon. A noise behind them announced the arrival of the Queen?s entourage. Qui-Gon turned to receive the Matriarch, ?It is our pleasure to continue to serve and protect you, your highness.?

    ?We are glad to have you with us, Master Jedi, as we have much to discuss.? The group followed the ruler into the waiting vessel and they quickly departed.

    ***

    During the intersteller flight, Obi-Wan noticed the distance between the two Jedi, and was fully aware as to the reason for the division. He had tried to reconcile the rift by approaching Anakin and offering his apologies. Instead, the Padawan refused to listen to such dribble and even went as far as to say, ?I don?t need you to make excuses for him. Or your pity.? Anakin could be found most often with Padmé or the Queen.

    After the failed confrontation with Anakin, Obi-Wan stayed by Qui-Gon?s side whenever he could. He hoped that there was some way that the separation between the Jedi could be fixed. At one point the group had been called to a meeting by the Queen to discuss the plans for their arrival on Naboo. She implored the Jedi to offer what guidance they could. Qui-Gon de
     
  14. Padawan_Travina

    Padawan_Travina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    [face_shocked]

    Junk!! You think your work is JUNK!!

    :mad:

    Arldetta

    Do not make me come over there and wash your mouth out with soap..I'll do it young lady..

    This is an excellent piece of writting, and I am loving what you are doing with. I cant wait to read more..so please dont keep us waiting for to long ok?

    And no more speaking nonsense...

    PT

    **heads of to watch Backstreet Boys on Arthur on PBSkids...at 5 am**


     
  15. Sabe126

    Sabe126 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    In no circumstance could this be described as junk!

    Poor Obi-Wan, Anakin didn't have to be so mean.


    Looking forward to more.


    Sabe126
     
  16. sheleigh

    sheleigh Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Arldetta! This is not junk! This is a fantastic piece of writing!!

    Another excellent addition!

    Definite tension between Anakin and Obi-Wan... I wonder, will it be resolved?

    Hmm... Obi-Wan is so cute... with his little "Master Qui-Gon, sir." He makes it sound cute.... In episode I Anakin just annoyed me with it. 8-}

    Definitely can't wait to see what twist you will throw in to surprise us all. :)
     
  17. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    PT, Sabe126 & sheleigh - LOL. It's not nice to lie. ;) But don't worry this is drawing to a close. Probably 4 more posts at least.

    PT - call me the mad hatter, I like nonsense. [face_devil]

    Sabe - Anakin's a bit resentful right now. It's something I think they will have to work out.

    Sheleigh - Tension that will have to be worked out. But not here. ;) [face_devil] Ani annoyed me too during the movie. That's why I had to change it. :) And I don't think you'll be too disappointed with the later twists. ;) At least I hope not.
     
  18. Master_Comedy_Kitty

    Master_Comedy_Kitty Jedi Padawan star 4

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    IT'S NOT JAR JAR!!! Am I the only one who didn't notice that? :p All well, if this is an AU, are the gungan's gonna die?! Or just draw out the battle enough so that the droids got them in cages and begain poking them with sticks. Later on the Naboo people can come by and laugh at them.

    Gungans: Wesa yousa's friends!

    Naboo: No, yousa a loser!

    That would make my day... :p
     
  19. sabercrazy

    sabercrazy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ::wimpers::

    I cannot believe that I lost track of this story! Just finally caught up with it.

    I love it even more!
     
  20. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    MCK ROFLMAO [face_laugh] :_|that was too funny!! But yes, No Jar Jar! I didn't hate him in the movie, I just felt he was pointless.


    Sabercrazy - That's ok. Haven't been updating much recently. Thanks!! :D

     
  21. Wild_Huntress

    Wild_Huntress Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ahhh..... JJ free's always good for me. He he. Great post Arldetta, honest this isn't junk at all!
     
  22. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wild Huntress - Thanks! :) I'm used to call it junk. ;)


    Anyway, I will be working on this one again next, hopefully, I'll have the next chap done soon for posting!! ;) :D


    UP!!
     
  23. Sabe126

    Sabe126 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Can't wait for the next installment, will catch up when I get back from holiday.

    Sabe126
     
  24. Arldetta

    Arldetta Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sabe126 - NP. Hopefully, I'll post before then. ;) :D


    And yes, this is another shameless UP!!

    :D
     
  25. CalaisKenobi

    CalaisKenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I missed a post [face_shocked] Ahh!!!! :mad: Arldetta This is not junk. It is quite good, especially since there is no Jar Jar ;)

    CK
     
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