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The Meaning of Love (A/A) *COMPLETED 10/04*

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  1. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Anakin?s p.o.v.


    ?....................No matter where I go I always feel you so...................?


    I stand up, escaping that unpleasant torture known as tickling. I watch Padme as she stands, the sun rising behind her. It creates a yellow glow aroung her features. Her long curly hair flows freely around her shoulders, still highlighted by the sun. She brushes the creases from her clothes.

    She is an Angel.

    My heavenly spirit here to watch and protect me.

    How I love her so.

    I stroke her cheek with my hand, she leans into it, taking in it?s warmness. I gather my cloak from the ground while saying.?We should be heading back.? Wrapping my arm around her shoulder, she wraps her around my waist, resting her head on my chest and my head on hers.

    ***

    It took us about a half hour to reach the palace. No words had been said. We walked in silence, enjoying the time we spend alone. We know that we will have a lifetime of words to share, but sometimes words are not needed.

    Silence tells a great many things when you are with another. It?s then when you realize how much they mean to you, and that you can never let them go.

    We walk inside the palace, all is peaceful, no one is around. The sound of our footsteps echo down the hall. A robed figure stands silhouetted in the center of the hall, Obi Wan. He approaches us, giving me a questioning look.

    Did you ask her? He questions through our bond.

    I nod in response.

    He smiles a sincere smile.

    ?Congratulations Padme.? Obi Wan hugs my fiance, ?It seems like only yesterday Anakin was Knighted.? I then hug my former Master,
    grinning like a mad man.

    ?How do you know?? She inquires, crossing her arms.

    He let?s out a small chuckle,?Your ring.?

    ****
    I know it was short but I have plans for the wedding and the evil plot twister ahead [face_devil]

    Probably it will happen in about 4 or five more posts [face_devil]
     
  2. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Fantastic Update, I love how you portray them especially Anakin :)

    Am [face_love]

    ps: It's true what you said about silence. . .
     
  3. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks Am! I love your respnses! It really helps me when writing my story :)
     
  4. Ashamaphone

    Ashamaphone Jedi Padawan star 4

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  5. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Padme?s p.o.v.


    ?.................It?s funny how the simple things in life make us whole..............?


    A slight blush crept on my face. I looked down at the twinkling spectrum on my ring
    finger. The light streamed in through the hall windows, reflecting off my ring and
    into my eyes. It?s the same color. I looked up into Anakin eyes. The same
    color.


    I laugh faintly.

    ?Ah yes, my ring. Isn?t it beautiful Obi Wan?? I extend my arm and he takes my
    hand, examining the jewelry.

    ?It?s lovely Padme.? He says releasing my hand. ?But if you?ll please excuse me, I
    need to borrow your fiance for a bit.?

    Anakin gives him a disconcerted look, but is quickly washes over.

    ?Anything you need Obi Wan. Just don?t keep him too long.? Anakin blushed at my
    remark and bowed his head to hide his growing smile. Still that caring little boy
    with a crush.


    Master and Knight walk down the corridor, disappearing in the darkness. I must
    talk with Sabe. She will be delighted at this news.


    ***

    I still have a room at the Palace, although it is not as big as my Queen quarter?s
    were, it is still lavish and classic. The light pours down through the glass ceiling
    above me, illuminating my room. The walls an ivory cream color mirror off the sun,
    brighten the room even more. Small floral patterns run along the base of the wall,
    circling the entire room.

    Peach colored drapes suit the windows and the doors leading out to the terrace.
    Lavender carpet is laid out on top of the floor, giving the room a distinct, yet unique
    quality to it. The bed decor is a humble blue color, with bits of ivory, peach, and
    purple embroidery to tie the whole room in together. A dresser is at the north wall,
    just next to my closet. A few sentimental items scattered across the top. And a
    picture of my parents hold the center piece of the dresser.

    I plop myself down onto the comfertable bed, sinking into the covers. I reach over
    to the nightstand, grabbing my comm and saying,?Sabe??

    ?This is her.?

    ?I?ve got big news,? I can feel the smile on my face widen,?meet me in my room.?

    ?I?ll be there in five minutes.?

    I don?t even have to tell her who I am, she knows it?s me. She?s my best friend-
    ofcorse she knows it?s me! We have been through so many events together, so
    many frightful times, so many good times. I toss the comm back on the nightstand,
    leaning upright in my bed. The breeze plays with the curtains, dancing with them in
    the air.

    A knock at the door interrupts my thoughts. ?Come in.?

    It is Sabe. Sure enough she is in my room in the five minuted like she had said.
    She runs towards the bed, jumping a few feet before it, landing right next to me.
    ?So, what?s the bi-? She trails off, noticing the ring on my finger. She embraces me
    in an over joyed hug. ?It really is big news! When did he ask you? Was is romantic?
    Did he sweep you off your feet? Oooh, come on- spill it.? With every questions
    comes a different hand motion and facial expression.

    I take her hands, smiling like crazy, ?Well, it was very romantic. We walked on the
    beach in the moonlight, saying words that needed to be said holding onto eachother
    for dear life. It was like we just wanted to be in eachother?s presence. Oh Sabe, it
    was magical. I remember saying something like,?I wish we could be this way
    forever?, and that?s when he got down on one knee. We spent the night sleeping on
    the beach laying, me in his arms. When I woke up, all I saw was his eyes. Those
    beautiful sky blue eyes.? I closed my eyes, remember the events from the night
    before. Remembering the sweet kisses on my lips and the strong arms around my
    waist.

    I opened my eyes, seeing tears ran down Sabe?s cheeks,?Oh that?s more than
    romantic Padme. That?s love.?

    ?I know it is Sabe. I know.?

    *****

    Feedback is greatly appriciated! ;)

    [face_love] TJG [face_love]
     
  6. Ashamaphone

    Ashamaphone Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *contented sigh*

    I wish I could wake up to that...

    [face_devil] / ;)
     
  7. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Don't we all Ashamaphone, don't we all. Waking up to Anakin would be nice. But fallin asleep next to him would be like heaven [face_love]
     
  8. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I am working on my next post and will probably have it up later tonight- maybe tomorrow! So, the sooner you reply- the sooner the next postie comes! [face_love]
     
  9. Rennati

    Rennati Jedi Youngling star 2

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    As usual, great job. Love the whole scene with Padme and Sabe.. very female! Love it love it love it!

    Later
    Rennati
     
  10. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Wonderful post, TJG!!!!!

    How sweet and romantic I agree with the others shesh, I so wish I could do that and wake up in the man I loved arms. . . .first I need to get a man to love ;)

    Am
     
  11. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thank you all so much! I hope everyone is allright in America [face_love] :_|

    I won't post tonight because of what has happend, but I will post tomorrow.

    And again I send my love to all of the victims.

    UP!
     
  12. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I will post later tonight! So be on the look out [face_love]

    Americans.... :_| Me... :_|
     
  13. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    The long awaited post!

    I just want to say that I saw a clip of Hayden on Entertainment Tonight, tonight! He
    is sooooo hot! (9-10-01)


    I made this post as long as I could for all you guys. Something to help take your
    mind off the horrible event that have been occurring in our society in recent times.
    I send my love to you and most of all to the innocent victims hurt in these deadly
    occurrences. May the force be with you all through this time of grief and
    depression.




    Anakin?s p.o.v.

    ?.............. life is the best when you are with another .................?


    I walk down the hall with my Master still the honorable step behind him. We don?t
    say anything the first few minutes until we turn down a more private passage. ?You
    made a wise choice choosing the ring you did. You captured her heart and now that
    is something you will hold for forever.?

    ?And she will forever hold mine.? I run a hand through my golden locks,?I?m getting
    married Obi Wan! Married! Me married!?

    ?And I am happy that you are my friend.?

    ?Obi Wan...? I trail off.

    ?Yes.?

    ?Thank you.?

    ?For what?? He asks, scratching at his beard, a habit he picked up from long
    meeting with the Jedi Council.

    ?Just being here for me. You were, and still are, the best Master a Padawan could?ve
    hoped for.? I look at the floor, saying above a whisper,?And you are like a Father to
    me. And I thank you for that.?

    Obi Wan puts a hand on my shoulder,?And you are like a son.?

    ?There is one more thing. Would you be my best man??

    ?I would be honored.?

    ?I think you will get to walk down the isle with the Lady Sabe,? I nudge him in the
    stomach and I see a hint of pink sneak upon his face, ?I think she has taken quiet
    an liking to you over the years Obi Wan.?

    Obi Wan keeps his eyes glued to the floor, there must be something fascinating
    about the marble it is made of. ?Yes, that may be true.?

    ?You like, her don?t you?? It?s a rhetorical question, but I know it will get me
    answers. ?Obi Wannnn.?

    ?I- well- what I mean is, yes I do like her. She is a very attractive young lady.?
    He replies, the pink turning into deep red. Changing the subject he asks, ?So when
    is the wedding going to be??

    ?We have decided that the wedding will be tomorrow night. I know it?s really soon,
    but we couldn?t wait any longer.? I say, clasping my hands together in front of me.

    ?You are a fine Jedi Knight. And a wise man Anakin. I foresee you will have a great
    life, and children.?

    My eyes darted up to my Master, my voice caught slightly in my throat, but I
    manage,?Well, that?s obvious.?

    He laughs. ?Perhaps you could name one after me. Little Obi. I can see it now!?

    I roll my eyes. My Master and his delusions of grandeur. ?Ahh, I love you
    Master. I don?t know what I would do without you.?

    ?Let?s hope we won?t have to find out for a long time.? He sighs, tucking his arms
    into the fold of his tunic.

    ?Indeed Master.?

    Little Obi.... it can grow on you.... a child....




    Padme?s p.o.v.

    ?.............. hey I think I love you, so what am I so afraid of, I?m afraid that I
    have found my love .................?



    I twirled my loose strands of hair with my index finger and thumb while listening to
    Sabe rant on about fantasies, love, and romance. She talked about what a big deal
    this is and her precious Obi. How much she loves him, but is too afraid to tell him.
    Maybe I could tell Anakin, and Anakin could tell Obi Wan... I let my mind
    wander.

    And wander.

    And wander.

    Anakin and I walk close to eachother, a small boy child, curly blonde hair,
    eyes as blue as the morning sky, joining us with our hands in the center. We smile
    and laugh. The suns bounces between the afternoon clouds in the sky and the wind
    blows through my hair, letting it flow in the breeze. I kiss Anakin and the child
    giggles at my gesture. Anakin lifts the boy up, letting him rest on his hip. A perfect
    daydream. Anakin, Myself, and our future child.


    I hear a voice, no
     
  14. Rennati

    Rennati Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Once again, a great post!

    Bravo!

    Later
    Rennati
     
  15. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awwwww [face_love] Thank you Rennati!!

    Thank you so much! I feel loved [face_love]
     
  16. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    So cute! So sweet! So mushy! I need to kill someone to compensate. Luckily, I'm about to post another installment of ATWP.
     
  17. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oh TJG!! You have got me so interested especially with how wrote Padme's P.O.V more please - I love this fic

    Am [face_love]
     
  18. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Who's character p.o.v. do you like better,

    Anakin's

    or

    Padme's?
     
  19. ThePodSquad

    ThePodSquad Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Both. They're different so you should just keep both. :) I know I haven't responded before but I'm not at all good with feedback. Just wanted to say this is really cute and sweet.

    Peace,
    Pothole
     
  20. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks PodSquad! I can't believe I have 6 readers! I feel so happy! I am writing my next post, and PodSquad, any feedback is welcome, just to know that you are here warms my heart [face_love]


    The question was only to see which p.o.v. you guys like the best ;)
     
  21. ThePodSquad

    ThePodSquad Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I've read most of your fanfics I think. And they're all good. Aren't you doing Serenade by Moonlight?

    Peace,
    Pothole

    P.S. If you ever get tired of typing my whole screen name yopu can cal me Pothole.
     
  22. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh, I don't mind typing your whole screen name PodSquad! It's unique ;)

    And yes, I do write Serenade of Moonlight, but I co-author it with Darklady27.

    I am also writing in Dark Angels in Heaven, which I am about to go and Up! :)
     
  23. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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  24. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Padme, for sure :)
     
  25. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hmmm, well then.... I might have to change who get's hurt!

    Padme or Ani..........

    So many possibilities....
     
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