The Rise Of A Sith

Jinn Goan: 20
Arian Ratin: 41
Luke Skywaker: 54
Asha: 20
everyone else is in that age area unless mentioned

Star Wars
The Beginning Of a Sith

A long time ago in a galaxy far far away. Luke Skywalker being 50-60 years old has trained many jedi and they have become protecters of the galaxy.Yoda was cloned because he felt Jedi still needed him. The death star was rebuilt and renamed Planet Protecter and is used only agaist bad guys. Stormtroopers are now on the good side and when Palaptine was wiped out the sith were destroyed. or were they? Luke skywalker has senced a disterbence in the force and it told him "Death Star" Luke thought it was unusual because it hasn't been called Death Star in years.

Luke:hey Jinn Goan, go with you master Arian Ratin to investigate the Planet Protecter.

Jinn: why do you ask?

Luke: No questions, only answers.

Jinn: yes sir
Jinn and Arianr board there ships and get a captian to pilot it. They sit in the cockpit and see the deathstar. as they are flying they see the cannons move
Captian: they proabably see something on the radar.
The Captian walks to the radio
Captian: This is Captian Ramar, do not shoot
You can hear stormtroopers in the back telling someone something
Stormtrooper: ok
Jinn: I have a bad feeling about this...
Arian: me to, get into the emergency ships
Jinn and Arian go in and take off. they see a laser fire right out of the death star and blow up the ship they have just escaped from.
Arian: we must find out what is going on.
Jinn and Arian speed into the death star and somehow the shields went down and allowed the ship to go in.
Stormtrooper: The jedi have come! kill them!
Jinn whispers: kill us? what happened to them? just get to the controls and shoot everything in site, it wil blow this thing up
Arian: there are civilians
The stormtrooper runs into the ship and then his body rolls out of the ship in half.
Stormtrooper 2: what the?
The stormtroopers go in and see a hole teared right through the back. They follow it and no one is there.
Jinn and Arian run into a hallway and talk
Arian: it will be better if we split up. You find out what is going on and I will rescue the civilians.
Jinn: yes master.
Jinn goes into one door and Arian goes into another
Jinn sees stormtroopers shooting at a women around 20 years old
Jinn deflects a shot and spins around and slashes through 2 of the stormtroopers bodys at one time.
Girl: thank you Jedi My name is Asha
Jinn: I am acctually just a padawan
Asha: a what?
Jinn: nevermind, My name is Jinn Goan
Asha: thank you for saving me are you the jedi that broke through the shields?
Jinn: yes, how did the shields go down
Asha: don't you think the troopers were chasing me for a reason?
Asha smiles
Jinn: thank you but what happened here
Asha: I am one of the guards here and then I was passing a door when suddenly I saw a red line going around the door then it exploded. a laser was circling the door from the other side and they put a bomb next to it. I was knocked off my feet and I saw a glimps of a person with a black robe and a hood. He had a red face with marking all over it, and his saber handle was extended, as if he had a double bladed one. He was followed by 5 people that looked like Jedi's that walked over each trooper with thier hand in there face as if he was doing a mind trick. The stormtroopers rounded up all the humans and put them in the dungeons, there was no stopping them. I was still woozy from the explosion and hid behind some crates. then when everything was safe I got up and tried to run and got to the control bridge, I knocked the stormtrooper of the bridge and opened the shields before he could shoot you. That was when a stormtrooper chased me and now I am here.
Jinn: so the civilians are in a dungeon?
Asha: yes, but some are still alive hiding, waiting for there chance to attack
Jinn: My master told me to figure out what is going on and he

 

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Jinn Goan: 20
Arian Ratin: 41
Luke Skywaker: 54
Asha: 20
everyone else is in that age area unless mentioned

Star Wars
The Beginning Of a Sith

A long time ago in a galaxy far far away. Luke Skywalker being 50-60 years old has trained many jedi and they have become protectors of the galaxy. Yoda was cloned because he felt Jedi still needed him. The death star was rebuilt and renamed Planet Protector and is used only against bad guys. Stormtroopers are now on the good side and when Palpatine was wiped out the sith were destroyed. Or were they? Luke Skywalker has sensed a disturbance in the force and it told him "Death Star" Luke thought it was unusual because it hasn't been called Death Star in years.

Luke: hey Jinn Goan, go with you master Arian Ratin to investigate the Planet Protector.

Jinn: why do you ask?

Luke: No questions, only answers.

Jinn: yes sir
Jinn and Arian board there ships and get a captain to pilot it. They sit in the cockpit and see the death star. As they are flying they see the cannons move
Captain: they probably see something on the radar.
The Captain walks to the radio
Captain: This is Captain Ramar, do not shoot
You can hear stormtroopers in the back telling someone something
Stormtrooper: ok
Jinn: I have a bad feeling about this...
Arian: me to, get into the emergency ships
Jinn and Arian go in and take off. They see a laser fire right out of the death star and blow up the ship they have just escaped from.
Arian: we must find out what is going on.
Jinn and Arian speed into the death star and somehow the shields went down and allowed the ship to go in.
Stormtrooper: The jedi have come! Kill them!
Jinn whispers: kill us? What happened to them? Just get to the controls and shoot everything in site, it will blow this thing up
Arian: there are civilians
The stormtrooper runs into the ship and then his body rolls out of the ship in half.
Stormtrooper 2: what the?
The stormtroopers go in and see a hole teared right through the back. They follow it and no one is there.
Jinn and Arian run into a hallway and talk
Arian: it will be better if we split up. You find out what is going on and I will rescue the civilians.
Jinn: yes master.
Jinn goes into one door and Arian goes into another
Jinn sees stormtroopers shooting at a women around 20 years old
Jinn deflects a shot and spins around and slashes through 2 of the stormtroopers bodies at one time.
Girl: thank you Jedi My name is Asha
Jinn: I am actually just a padawan
Asha: a what?
Jinn: never mind, my name is Jinn Goan
Asha: thank you for saving me are you the jedi that broke through the shields?
Jinn: yes, how did the shields go down?
Asha: don't you think the troopers were chasing me for a reason?
Asha smiles
Jinn: thank you but what happened here
Asha: I am one of the guards here and then I was passing a door when suddenly I saw a red line going around the door then it exploded. A laser was circling the door from the other side and they put a bomb next to it. I was knocked off my feet and I saw a glimpse of a person with a black robe and a hood. He had a red face with marking all over it, and his saber handle was extended, as if he had a double bladed one. 5 people that looked like jedi's that walked over each trooper with their hand in their face as if he was doing a mind trick followed him The stormtroopers rounded up all the humans and put them in the dungeons, there was no stopping them. I was still woozy from the explosion and hid behind some crates. Then when everything was safe I got up and tried to run and got to the control bridge, I knocked the stormtrooper of the bridge and opened the shields before he could shoot you. That was when a stormtrooper chased me and now I am here.
Jinn: so the civilians are in a dungeon?
Asha: yes, but some are still alive hiding, waiting fo