Saga The Shadow of Vader - A ROTS AU - The Fall of Obi-Wan Kenobi UPDATED 3/14/09!

He thought he even heard his beloved former master, Qui-Gon Jinn, talking to him. A lesson, echoing Master Yoda, he had learned so long ago ? Death is but the next great adventure ?

The very words I try to live by...

Obi-Wan Kenobi is dead.

*bursts into tears* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

?A New Order,? Sidious said, ?is rising. Dedicated to the very ideals in which you and your friends believe. If we work together, I know that we can make it a reality.?

*shudders* He reminds me of Saruman now. *leaps on Sidious and repeatedly*

?The Force is strong with you,? he hissed. ?As it is in your friend Anakin. You will need to show him the true path. In doing this, a powerful Sith, you will become.?

*raises an eyebrow* Why do I have a feeling that this task will turn out to be less than pleasant for all concerned? And I'm not just talking about Obi-Wan and Anakin. This is going to come down hard on other people like Padmé and Sabé as well...

I wonder... could Anakin's vision stem from Obi-Wan trying to turn him to the dark side by threatening Padmé? Not a good idea, really, but it's possible...

He raised his hands to the ceiling and declared, ?Henceforth, you shall be known as Darth ? Vader.?

*falls off of chair* Holy... DUDE! [/surfer] That is so... so weird! Vader has taken on a new face... Though it looks like he's going to need some artificial life-support system, even if he doesn't need the full suit.

Vastor, that was an awesome post! I nearly screamed when Grievous stabbed Obi-Wan. I sat at my desk muttering, "This must not be, this cannot be... Sabé, Anakin, and Padmé still need him!"

Good riddence to that overblown droid. *snarls* Now, if only Pablo-Jill would follow his example and die at Obi-Wan's hand. *smirks*

Again, excellent job! Enjoy your holidays!

AQ

 

I am beyond embarressed that I missed the debut of Ch. 23 Part 2. I chalk it up to having too much fun this holiday season. But excuses don't cut it.

So, I'll be doing a combined review.

Ch. 23 part 2

Then he saw it. Halfway down the list. Jedi Master Pablo-Jill. Obi-Wan?s heart jumped ten beats per minute. No ...

Below that, Jedi Master Agen Kolar. Jedi Master Saesee Tiin. Jedi Master Shaak Ti. Jedi Master Cin Drallig. Jedi Master Mace Windu. The entire Council was listed. Only his own name and Anakin Skywalker were missing. Obi-Wan?s throat was dry. He couldn?t breathe. Grievous had told him he had been betrayed, and he had watched the Council exile him. But never this ...

At first glance this would make one's blood boil. But look again. Shaak Ti and Mace are on this list, which tells me that this so called 'list of traitors' is fabricated. Although Shaak voted 'against' Obi-Wan, she did so with reluctance. And Mace Had no intention to betray Obi. But Obi-Wan doesn't know this, so Sidious can easily get away with this.

?And they're still here.?

He turned back toward the terminal. ?Show yourself!?

Sorry. I always chukle when people do the 'jump around' as I call it, where they bounce back and forth looking for their opponent.

I couldn't help but feel sorry for that poor Twil'ek slave.

Obi-Wan turned away from the Dark Lord. True ... it was all true. Everything Grievous had told him was true. The Jedi Council had betrayed him.

He collapsed to his knees and screamed in sorrow and rage. ?WHY??

This only convinces me that the Darkside can act like a narcotic. Apart from being addicting, it can make someone lose their common sense.

Ch. 24

The two of them, Skywalker and Kenobi, seemed to have powers beyond any mortal Jedi or being he had ever met. The thought of them standing on either side of Lord Sidious, an invincible fighting force bound to the Darkside...Would Sidious choose his two apprentices over the superweapon he had commissioned?

If you were to sum it all up in one word, it would be: YES!

He cast a resigned hand in the direction of the door. ?Destroy him.?

Grievous rose to his feet and bowed, inwardly smiling in triumph. ?My Lord, with pleasure.?

Hehehe, oh this is gonna be gooooood.

The blade took Obi-Wan right through the chest.

Yang!

?Grievous!? he yelled. ?Maybe you should wait to insult me until after you?ve killed me!?

The General stiffened in shock, then slowly turned around.

Tis the folly of the vast majority of villians. They gloat before they finish the job, which inturn, leads them to their demise.

Gone were the steel blue eyes that had pierced through his metal skeleton and found the means to destroy him. Gone were the ice blue chips of determination that had haunted him for weeks. Replacing them were a pair of burning yellow orbs of rage, oddly similar to his own, that seared through his body to gaze at the tattered remains of Grievous?s soul.

It is done. He has finally and completely fallen.

And dare I say, I'm loving it!

He struggled to one knee. ?I pledge myself ... to your teachings.?

Sidious closed his eyes. ?Gooooood.?

To which all sane people reply: Nooooooo!

Sidious opened his eyes. ?The Force is strong with you,? he hissed. ?As it is in your friend Anakin. You will need to show him the true path. In doing this, a powerful Sith, you will become.?

He raised his hands to the ceiling and declared, ?Henceforth, you shall be known as Darth ... Vader.?

How very ironic and unexpected...the name that is. And it seems that Sidious is still interested in having two apprentices.

Masterful battle scenes, Vastor! Some of the very best I've ever read! You truly have a talent worthy of recognition. And now I'm anxious to see what happens next. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more!

P.S.

 

I never thought Obi Wan would be wounded in the fight with Grievous.... but does this mean he will end up in a suit?

Excellent update!

 

YAAAY! Awesome chapters, a perfect Day Before the Night Before Christmas present! Thanks for all the PMs, too.

*waves a "GO SIDIOUS" flag* Go Sidious!

He struggled to one knee. ?I pledge myself ... to your teachings.?

Sidious closed his eyes. ?Gooooood.?

The response an insane person would have: YESSS!!!!

*waves two "GO SIDIOUS" flags*

Excellent job!

 

Obi's Vader!!??? OMG What??

Awesome post man, that was just...whoa.

 

Favorite quote. And yes, the power those two could unleash if they wanted... scary.

As always, another wonderful post with fearful GG, snarky Obi, and manipulative Sids. There was a moment there when you really worried me though. When Grevious stabbed Obi-Wan through the chest I was like Oh jeez, that was unexpected, guess the story's over . In regards to giving Obi-Wan the name Darth Vader, I can understand your reasoning. If Anakin does fall, I wonder what name he will be graced with. Now the question is who will end up in the suit, if anyone does.

 

You know, I was thinking about how he said that "Obi-Wan Kenobi" was dead, and I really began to see a bit of symbolism in it. Grievous (stupid droid) ran him through with his own lightsaber, so that could be counted as the "death" of Obi-Wan Kenobi. Beyond that moment, "Darth Vader" takes over.

Here's hoping there's enough left of Obi-Wan for Anakin and Sabé to bring back.

Just a random thought.

AQ

 

OMG this story is a jaw dropper, and truly breathtaking. You've turned poor Obi into a yellow eyed sith lord, but I think those yellow eyes truly suit him His fall is totally believable, and Palpy is so fluidly evil. I wonder if Vader will succeed in turing Anakin to the darkside or if he'll end up fighting him and end up in that suit (but not before Sabe gets pregnant with his kids so there is some spark of hope left)? Merry Christmas.

 

Gone were the steel blue eyes that had pierced through his metal skeleton and found the means to destroy him. Gone were the ice blue chips of determination that had haunted him for weeks. Replacing them were a pair of burning yellow orbs of rage, oddly similar to his own, that seared through his body to gaze at the tattered remains of Grievous?s soul. And he knew he had never stood a chance. Fate was not to be denied, nor the will of the Force to be subverted. He was meant to die. The fight had been over before it had even begun.

Fantastic update!

I think that becoming Vader really, excuse me, suits Obi-Wan!

With that injury, he just might need the extra help to survive, and what better way to conceal his identity than to put him in the suit! Brilliant!

It all fits!

Now we can begin to see that everything is truly going according to your plan, DV! Good job!

Thanks for the PM!

Merry Christmas, Happy Hanukka, and Happy New Year!

Star

 

?Lord Sidious,? he said, fighting to stay conscious against the rising tide. ?Obi-Wan Kenobi is dead. He was betrayed into the hands of his enemies. He fought long and hard, but in the end he died when General Grievous killed him. But I would stay with you, my Lord.?



Indeed, Obi-Wan is gone. I missed a post since I was very busy with Christmas, but I had so much fun catching up!

I certainly do enjoy Obi-Wan as a Sith... and I am so curious to see if his injusries force him into the suit.

I simply can't tell you how much I enjoyed this!

I can't wait for the next part!

Ani-maniac

 

Wow! Wonderful fic! Took me a couple of days to get throught it but I'm glad I did! Very lovely. Those I wish you would have saved the 'Vader" for Ani but oh well....

Can't wait till an update!

 

Sorry about the delay in getting the next post up. I had basketball practice all week. It's taking a while because its one of the few parts of the story I hadn't planned out, but its coming along. Sometime in the next couple of days hopefully. Happy New Year!

Fat_Bird: I didn't think about where he got stabbed, but now that you mention it, that's very symbolic indeed. Who knew?

Master_Jedi_Singh: Thank you very much!

Zaphod_Kenobi: So I surprised you? Maybe you won't be so stunned if I happen to throw you for a loop again. And Obi-Wan in the suit? You'll see ...

Anakin_Heartbreaker: I am not worthy of such praise! If you can wait for it, the Mustafar showdown is going to be intense. But you might not have to wait that long for an Anakin/Vader confrontation.

Jazz_Skywalker: That was the reason I chose Vader as his Sith name. Thank you for your compliments.

AngelQueen: Your "random thought" is actually a very astute observation! Way to pick up on that! And thank you for your wonderful praise, as usual.

AP4EVER: Don't worry about it. I'm just happy you got to read it. I have the same problem with having too much fun when I should be working. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

jediprincess18: Possibly ...

Ladynaye: Thank you!

CherryLightsaber: It's been a while! Good to see that you're still reading!

Arwen-Jade_Kenobi: Whoa ...yeah.

MegumiFuu: Imtimidating thought, isn't it? As for the suit, you'll see.

Darth_Malvagio: Welcome to the story! Thank you for your compliments, and I hope you'll keep reading.

Star_Drifter: The topic of the suit seems popular! But don't get ahead of yourself. Remember that Anakin didn't end up in the suit right away. And that you, as usual, for your feedback!

Ani-Maniac: If you enjoy Obi-Wan as a Sith, then some Sithly actions are coming up for him.

Alley_Skywalker: Welcome! Thank you for checking out my story; I hope you'll keep reading.

 

Wow!! That was a terrific chapter.

I never imagined Obi would become Darth Vader--a Sith, yes, but not Vader. Great twist.

 

JediMaster_Jen: It seems to have thrown most people for a loop. Thanks for reviewing!

Chapter 25

?As far as I?m concerned, we have said everything that needs to be said on this issue,? stated Agen Kolar. ?As valuable as Kashyyyk is, it is not worth the staggering loss of life that our forces have endured to fight to a stalemate. They would be better served securing other worlds, while we reorganize our forces for a fresh assault.?

Mace Windu listened expressionlessly to Kolar?s argument, his face resting on his hand. The debate on this particular issue had gone on for so long that he almost didn?t need it to hear what his fellow masters were saying to know the next turn it would take. The battle on Kashyyyk had been dragging on for weeks now. At first a quick Republic victory had seemed inevitable, but things had taken a turn for the worse when the Separatists had launched a surprise attack and managed to capture an important Wookie city.

An exhausted Yoda had been forced to lead a long siege to recover it. That battle was currently at its peak, and Yoda?s empty seat was a constant reminder of how tenuous the situation was. Though the Republic Army was progressing and driving the Separatists back, they were doing it ?over bridges of their comrades? bodies,? as Commander Gree had described it. Now several of the Masters were arguing that rather than expend more troops in the deadly assault, they should pull off of Kashyyyk entirely and regroup. Mace didn?t even have to hear the battle statistics. He knew it was a serious mistake.

Several Masters nodded in approval as Agen Kolar finished. Others did not. Shaak Ti looked torn between a fervent desire to preserve life and a resolve to achieve the important victory that the clones were fighting for. Kit Fisto did not make his choice clear on his face, but Mace knew that he, as a warrior, wanted the fight to go on.

?Master Windu, shall we vote??

Mace looked up. ?Quite frankly, Master Kolar, I don?t think there?s anything to vote on.?

Kolar looked stunned. ?We have just made our case that the battle is a lost cause. In the best interest of our troops, we should pull back.?

?Master Kolar, the battle is far from lost. No, I do not need to hear the statistics. This is a world that we absolutely cannot afford to lose. Yes, we are taking losses. But pulling out now would be more dangerous than sticking it out. Many battalions are deep behind enemy lines. If we give the retreat signal now, their cover will be blown and a thousand more lives will be lost. The clones want to keep fighting. This is the right course for them and the right course for us.?

Master Kolar looked completely unconvinced. ?If Master Yoda were present, I?m sure he would agree with us that conserving life is more important that winning a military victory.?

Two seats away, Pablo-Jill made a noise that sounded like a gurgle of agreement. The Ongree Jedi Master?s neck was bruised and heavily bandaged. Though it had been several days since Anakin had choked him, he had not regained use of his voice yet. The Jedi healers had assured him that he would be fine in a few days, but thus far he had not improved, and the Council room was notably quieter and more peaceful.

?The entire reason that Master Yoda is not present,? Mace stated flatly, ?Is that the battle on Kashyyyk is so intense that he was unable to tear himself away even for something as crucial as this meeting. It is unlikely that he would be able to retreat if he wanted too, which I have a strong feeling he does not. Therefore, this issue is a moot point, and will not be discussed further. There will be no vote. Our troops have been successful thus far, and we are not going to place their lives at even greater risk by making impractical decisions.?

Master Kolar opened his mouth, then closed it. Uncomfortable silence reigned. Mace had a feeling, however, that it wouldn?t last very long.

Finally, Saesee Tiin spoke up. ?Master Windu, you have been in dozens of battles since this war began, and your knowledge

 

*lip trembles*

The time of reckoning is upon us. Anakin must return to the Temple and tell Mace. But what can Mace do at this point? He's at a point where he doesn't trust the other Council members that much, so I doubt he'll grab them to go take out Palpatine. I think he's gotten to a point where he trusts Anakin, but is worried for his mental health. Adding him to a team to go dispose of Palpatine might not be the best idea.

I really hope Mace doesn't go out the way he did in RotS. Anakin needs someone to confide in among the Jedi. The rest of the Council, save Yoda perhaps, is out, and aside from Siri, it sounds like he doesn't know anyone well enough to talk about his problems. Yoda's off on Kashyyyk, but Mace's there now.

The scene with Siri and the younglings was so adorable, Vastor. The younglings really do worship Anakin and he seems to like them as well, reveling in how innocent they are. Hopefully he'll remember that and not try to wipe them out.

Great post all around! Can't wait to see more!

Happy New Years!

AQ

 

Perhaps this isn't the most dignified response, but... that was sooo cool!!!



Your portrayal of Palpatine is perfect! I am so curious to see if this becomes the fall of obi-Wan Kenobi, and Anakin Skywalker.

Truly, this fic is a Sith paradise!

I can't wait for the next part!

Ani-maniac

 

"Vadren had progressed so much, I scarcely recognized him. As my brother and his wife said, I couldn?t have come at a better time. I actually got to be there for his graduation...What?s even better is that he will be able to visit very soon. When I mentioned you, he got very excited; he?s heard so much about you. I hope to introduce the two of you.? Oh boy! I can't wait till that scene.

Mace's musings are very ominous, wonderful bit of foreshadowing there. I was worried for a minute when Siri showed up due to a distinct dislike of that character (Siri = Mara Jade wannabe). Thank goodness Sabe was able to show up in this chapter and put all thoughts of Siriwan out of my poor suffering mind

Oh well, nothing more to say except that I can't wait till the confrontation between the Jedi and Palpatine. I do hope a certain dark apprentice will show up then!

 

I really hope that anakin doesn't fall, cus obiwan already has.
And you need an opposing force to that.
While i do understand that the descruction of the jedi-order is needed. I hope you will let the younglings survive and a couple of jedi's. Maybe does who have faith in anakin.

seeya

 

?As valuable as Kashyyyk is, it is not worth the staggering loss of life that our forces have endured to fight to a stalemate. They would be better served securing other worlds, while we reorganize our forces for a fresh assault.?

Mace didn?t even have to hear the battle statistics. He knew it was a serious mistake.

Further proof that the Jedi Council is no where near what it used to be. It has become a clone of the Galactic Senate.

?Master Kolar, the battle is far from lost. No, I do not need to hear the statistics. This is a world that we absolutely cannot afford to lose. Yes, we are taking losses. But pulling out now would be more dangerous than sticking it out. Many battalions are deep behind enemy lines. If we give the retreat signal now, their cover will be blown and a thousand more lives will be lost. The clones want to keep fighting. This is the right course for them and the right course for us.?

As much as I agree with you, Mace (100%). You might as well be having a conversation with goldfish. Just like the politicians of our universe and yours, they're only concerned with beuacracy and maintaining power...all under the guise of 'caring'.

?If Master Yoda were present, I?m sure he would agree with us that conserving life is more important that winning a military victory.?

I rest my case, your Honor.

Two seats away, Pablo-Jill made a noise that sounded like a gurgle of agreement. The Ongree Jedi Master?s neck was bruised and heavily bandaged. Though it had been several days since Anakin had choked him, he had not regained use of his voice yet.

Serves him right!

"We are worried that you have ... lost sight of that.?

Will the audacity never end?

Mace didn?t know how he couldn?t have seen it before. The Force was swirling around him like a hurricane, threatening to tear him from his high perch and sending him hurtling to the dark streets far below.

If that isn't dark foreshadowing, I don't know what is...Though, I have been fooled before.

Mace closed his eyes and touched his forehead lightly, the symbol of universal honor and respect.

?Rest in peace, old friend.?

Things have really turned bad if now Mace thinks Obi-Wan is dead. But at least he believed his comrade died honorable and by taking Grievous with him...ohhh if he only knew.

The normally reserved younglings had gone crazy at the sight of Anakin, and Siri, recognizing the futility of keeping their minds focused, had suggested that she and Anakin give an exhibition for the children?s benefit.

And judging by the younglings' reactions, it was quite an exhibition.

For a while, Anakin had suspected the two of harboring feelings for each other. Of course, neither had said anything, and now that Anakin knew about Obi-Wan?s attachment to Sabé, he doubted that there had ever been anything between him and Siri but a deep friendship.

Considering how long Obi's been around Siri, and how relatively quick he and Sabe fell for eachother. I doubt there'll be a clash.

But I am glad to see they've maintained their friednship throughout the years.

?Grievous. We haven?t heard from him for months. If Obi-Wan still had breath in his body, then the scum is dead. He probably died a coward, begging Obi-Wan for mercy.

...You have no idea how accurate that assumption is.

The younglings were marched in, looking guilty and chastened. Behind them came three Jedi Masters: Kolar, Drallig, and Pablo-Jill.

Gather 'round kids. Master Skywalker is about to demonstrate the definition of whoop ass!

Honestly, these guys are just asking for it...and I think Pablo is a masochist.

?Ah, Master Jill. How?s your neck feeling? Not too well, I hope.?

I'm loving it!

The three Jedi Masters stood in the sparring room for a moment, looking as though they had been turned to stone. Then, without another glance at Siri or the younglings, they

 

YEEESSSSS!! Let Anakin fall!! Then he and Obi-Wan could be Sith Lords.........oooh that would rule!

 

Oh. My. GOD!

It seems things are speeding up. Palpatine's revealed. But, who will face him?

 

Uh-oh. Something tells me that he's going to choose the Dark Side, especially after what the Council's done. Nice twist on Palpatine's words from RotS, though!

jazz

 

So, Anakin's moment of truth is nearly upon him. I think he'll find some way to do the right thing, to see through Palpatine's lies, despite his extreme distrust of the Council.


Terrific writing, as always.

I liked the scene between Anakin and Siri. Maybe she's someone he can trust. She was a good friend to Obi-Wan, perhaps she will be the same for Anakin now.

 

Interesting update.

Thanks for the PM.

Star