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Well there aren't many official stories on Teneniel Djo so let's write one!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Teniel Djo, May 4, 2000.

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  1. Teniel Djo

    Teniel Djo Jedi Master star 5

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    C'mon, don't you wonder what happened to her.
    I just know there's life after marriage just look at Han adn Leia and Luke and Mara. So let's make a story of our own and see what are Teneniel and Isolder up to...

    Teneneil practices fighting skills with a wooden staff, intently concentrated on the force she does not notice when Isolder trots into the room...
    (you continue)
     
  2. Lelila Jade

    Lelila Jade Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Ooooooooh, great idea, Teniel Djo. Mind if I give this story a go?

    BTW, this story takes place sometime during the Shadow Academy story arc...

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    Teneniel Djo turned to look at her husband entering the room in their personal ship. After weeks of negotiations, they were no closer to getting the Barabels to agree to not try to eat the Verpines. Their feud had lasted over fifteen years, and still nothing had changed. It was hard to remember what the real conflict even was.

    But she would be going home now, to the sparkling palaces of Hapes. Even after ruling the sixty-three planet monarchy for so long, Teneniel still wasn't used to all the splendor. She still had a hard time believing that her husband, still called Prince Isolder, as opposed to King, even though she was referred to as a Queen, had spent most of his life in such places.

    "Almost home, sweetheart," Isolder said, kissing her hand. "Maybe we can ask Tenel Ka to come visit her parents in our boring old house. It's been a while since we've seen her."

    Teneniel Djo managed a small smile. She missed her daughter, so like herself and yet she could see so much of her husband in the girl. Gone away to her old friend Luke Skywalker's Jedi Academy, they seldom heard from her. The child was having her own adventures now; it had something to do with a new batch of Nightsisters and the Empire. Not a pleasant situation, but Teneniel knew her daughter would be safe. "Think we could tear her away? She loves it there; no royal court, no assassination attempts, no dressing up, and she can spend time with people her own age."

    "Only for a few days, and then she can go back. It's been months; aren't we allowed to see her?"

    "Can't you remember what she looks like? I talked to her on holovid a few weeks ago; she's doing fine."

    "Well, she dresses the way you want to," Isolder started. "She's already taller than you are."

    Teneniel smiled at him again. "Are you calling me short?"

    "You? Short? I said no such thing!" he said, in mock-indignation. "I'm only saying that she's got my height and your style."

    "Don't forget the eyes, the gray eyes. And the leadership, and she got her hair from your mother."

    "Yes, my mother. They look alike, too; good thing that's where the resemblance ends," Isolder said, frowning.

    "She's gotten better," Teneniel said.

    "I hadn't noticed. But anyway, at least we're almost--"

    Isolder was cut off by the shriek of the alarms; the ship had fallen out of hyperspace, unprovoked. He swore under his breath as he and Teneniel went to see what was going on.

    "Pilot? What seems to be the--" Isolder stopped when he felt the blaster barrel against his back.

    "And I thought you'd never give me a chance to do this." The voice was familiar; Isolder recognized it as belonging to one of the newer guards. "But now, you die." As she said this, the renegade guard pulled the trigger.

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    Uh oh--what's gonna happen next?
     
  3. Teniel Djo

    Teniel Djo Jedi Master star 5

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    Teneniel Djo let out an old battle cry and kicked the gaurd. But she was a moment too late and a stun net burst from the blaster barrel, enveloping her and Isolder...
     
  4. Lelila Jade

    Lelila Jade Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Teneniel narrowly dodged the stun beam, and she watched her husband fall to the ground with a heavy thud. She struck out with her foot, catching the assassin in the back of her knee, shattering the bone. Teneniel used the Force to yank the guard up, but before she could hit her again, she felt a burning sensation on her back, and then explosive pain. She had been betrayed too, Teneniel realized, and she tried to get a message to her daughter, to anyone with the Force, but it was too late.

    The guards that were still loyal were shouting and attacking the others, but the pilot had other things in mind. She turned the ship, changing the course to one directly in the path of a comet that had been streaking by. One of the guards who had been with the royal family for years managed to send out a distress signal before she was taken out. The pilot turned the sublight engines to full, and gave a maniacal laugh as they headed for the incoming comet...
     
  5. Teniel Djo

    Teniel Djo Jedi Master star 5

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    Suddenly to Comm fizzled to life, "Hapen ship, stop immediatly," spoke a menacing voice...
     
  6. JediBri17

    JediBri17 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    How's it going all i am new to fanfilm making, i was experimenting with my camera filming a model ship in front of a blue screen and trying to transpose the image in front of a picture of outer space ( using adobe premiere) it looks realy CHEEZY like i'm talking "Far out space nuts " CHEEZY. Does anyone have any hints for creating a more realistic looking backround.
    PS you guys do a great job i have already learned alot from you
     
  7. lokmer

    lokmer Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Do you have a pic you can post, so we can see why it's cheesy?

    Sight unseen, I would guess that the lighting on your model is a little off. If it's too bright or too even it can look a bit artificial, same goes if it's too dark or too uneven, of if there's blue in the light that's causing part of the ship to go translucent.
    -Lokmer
     
  8. Darth Kreel

    Darth Kreel Jedi Youngling

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    Hi Brian, it's Brian, I hope you didn't use a CHEEZY model like the Princess Laea space ship. We will get to work on that right away. I also have a question for all of you out there (I'm doing the movie with JediBri).
    Does anyone have any good ideas for a post to mount a ship on that will move nicely?
     
  9. lokmer

    lokmer Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well, something versatile would be as follows: Drill 4 holes in your model :front back top bottom, maybe an extra two on either side. fill the holes with a threadded sleeve and use a bolt (covered with tape the same color as your background screen) to move it around. You can thread the bolt into any of the threaded sleeves.
    -Lokmer
     
  10. Mithrander

    Mithrander Jedi Youngling

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    I agree with lokmer...
    One word: lighting
     
  11. Teniel Djo

    Teniel Djo Jedi Master star 5

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    Okay...I'd just like to point out how EXTREMLY demented this thread got in the move. It's like a freak show! I'm gonna guess another thread merged with it or something...All right. That's all. Move along. Move along.
     
  12. Zaz

    Zaz Jedi Knight star 9

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    It's not the only thread that ended up a little weirder than it started.

    I always liked T. Djo. If you want a guy, whack him over the head with a log and hog-tie him. The perfect engagement. You could have a lot of fun with her adjustment to Hapes, her mom-in-law, and the court. I see her winning every battle, and not even breathing hard...
     
  13. Teniel Djo

    Teniel Djo Jedi Master star 5

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    Thanks Zaz. :D
     
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