What if Anakin Skywalker was the same age as Queen Amidala in Episode 1? -- PART 2

I agree, enough is enough. I just emailed you and JediPadme, AF, about the story.... maybe now, we can resurrect this opus....

 

First off, I'm very sorry for being gone so long. I have had so much going on... as soon as i got back from Vegas, I was back in rehearsals, which have been nonstop since. Fiddler opens this Thursday, and I came down with a cold-cough thing thats had me down for the past few days. I got majorly p'od at my director too, but I won't even go there... anyway, the show goes on, and I've e-mailed our author-group about what I have gotten done (yes I did write another small bit).

On another personal note, as you may or may not have known I am a senior in high school, and I have just decided to attend USC (University of Southern California) next year. Whoohoo!

 

Congrats about college jedi-padme!

That's terrific! Great school!

 

Welcome back and congrats, JP! USC? Woohoo! That should be a very important school especially to us SW fans.... I thought about going there partly because I heard about the SW-centered class they had there, but I probably'll wind up going somewhere else in CA. (I'm waaaay behind in the college-selecting department...) Also, good luck on your play Thursday (you've obviously worked hard on it so far), and hope you get rid of the nasty sick bug soon.... RL can be a pain sometimes, and it's good to have you back.

 

Newcomer Alert! Newcomer Alert!

Actually I have been here for a while, and would like to contribute, but I am going to wait until JP finishes! *stares at the empty space where she must post* Let the shadowlurkers rise!

But it was so artistically done...
-Grand Admiral Mitth`raw`nurudo "Thrawn"

 

Newcomer Alert! Newcomer Alert!

Actually I have been here for a while, and would like to contribute, but I am going to wait until JP finishes! *stares at the empty space where she must post* Let the shadowlurkers rise!

But it was so artistically done...
-Grand Admiral Mitth`raw`nurudo "Thrawn"

 

Cool! Welcome to the newcomer!

 

Welcome, sedriss! If you'd like to contribute, just email me and the two other authors (JediPadme and Alpha_Ferdante) who work on this page, so you can be part of the planning group for this story. I've seen some of your work on the "What if in Episode I?" thread, and it's not bad.

 

Okay, here's a portion to wet your whistles, for now.

Thanks to jedi-padme for the framework of the next post. Please note, a portion of this post is hers.

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Theed, Royal Palace

Sabé quietly enters the Queen's throne room, noting immediately that Amidala is not busy at her desk, immersed in paperwork. She looks around and notices Amidala standing before the large window overlooking the main plaza. She is about to say something, teasingly to remind her of the work ahead of them, when she notices the sad countenance on Amidala's face.

Amidala is lost in thought, looking out at the beauty and tranquility of her world. The sky is infinitely blue, puffy clouds slowly moving across the expanse. Much of the damage wrought on the city is already well under repair, and many of the scars marking the occupation and battles are fading. The picture of Naboo before her is serene and practically perfect.

But Amidala sees none of the serenity around her. Her thoughts are lost amid the positive happenings around her.

She feels an emptiness within her. Her heart aches. She has not heard from Anakin. It has only been about a week, but she sorely misses him.

She envisions, in her mind's eye, that he is deep in training at the Jedi Temple. She recalls the look that would enter his eyes when he talked about becoming a Jedi. It's the reason he left Tatooine, afterall. She shakes her head, reminding herself of that fact.

Just doesn't doubt for a moment that he won't throw himself wholeheartedly into training. Anakin never does anything half-measure.

She's certain he's busy. Of course, she is too. Ruling a planet isn't child's play and demands a lot of time on a daily basis. Given the rebuilding of Naboo, the new relations with the Gungans and everything else that has arisen out of the Trade Federation battle, she has enough on her plate without worrying about receiving a message from Anakin.

Still, even a quick message right now is welcome relief to her. She cannot understand why she hasn't heard anything.

Maybe Anakin simply forgot, with all the excitement of Jedi training. Just the thought of him forgetting makes her feel a little hurt. She tries to dampen it, telling herself that she's acting foolish.

He's just busy. She says to herself. But she knows that isn't entirely true. She's thinking about him, despite all her work and she doubts that he is any busier than she is.

She shakes her head, trying to banish the sad thoughts.

It is then that she spies Sabé out of the corner of her eye.

"What is it Sabé?"

"Amidala, I thought you might wish some help in filing through your paperwork." (Sabé's relationship with Amidala is that of a close friend. When they are alone, it is understood that Sabé can drop the formal address of "Your Highness" when speaking with Amidala)

Amidala smiles sadly and takes a deep breath, "Yes, I certainly can. I swear I don't feel that I'll ever catch up with everything right now."

She moves away from the window to join Sabé at her desk.

Sabé reaches out and squeezes Amidala's hand gently, looking into her eyes, "We'll manage, Dala. With everything."

Amidala smiles and thanks Sabé.

She's thankful to have her close friend nearby to take her thoughts off of worrying. She pushes her thoughts of Anakin to the back of her mind. Right now, she has work to do.

 

YAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More post
Jedi Padme, Alpha_Ferdante great post !!!!!
awaiting more
*Snuggly bunnie mind whamie*
repeat after me
I will post more soon....

 

I will tell you that you won't hear anymore from me tonight. I have doggie agility practice (I compete with my 2 dogs in the cool sport) and won't be home until late.

But...we do have a tiny bit written (but not embellished) that hasn't been posted yet.

 

Woohoo! Update at last! Great job as always, AF & JP.

http://www.geocities.com/anakin_and_amidala/amiluvani2.gif

 

Again, a portion of this story is JediPadme's.

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Coruscant, Jedi Academy

Obi-Wan walks through the hallways of the Jedi Academy, searching for his Padawan. His stride is purposeful as he knows where to find him. Anakin loves the Academy's fountain garden. Obi-Wan always finds him there, choosing to practice his meditations outdoors around the large pool.

He probably loves it because it's so different from Tatooine. Obi-Wan thinks.

He shakes his head. No. That's only part of it. It probably reminds him of somewhere else, where he'd rather be.

Obi-Wan knows Anakin wants to send a message to Queen Amidala. He knows that Anakin's feelings for her are strong. He also knows that Queen Amidala returns those feelings. But romance is not part of a Jedi Padawan's life. Training for Knighthood requires complete concentration on the task at hand.

He smiles, recalling his own attraction to the opposite sex when he was younger.

Oh, you're so old now! He laughs to himself, just as he reaches his destination.

He looks out toward the garden and spies Anakin, sitting at the far end of the pond. He's too far to notice the look on his Padawan's face, but judging from his drooping posture, he can guess that Anakin's thoughts aren't light.

Obi-Wan moves to walk towards Anakin when he feels a gentle hand on his shoulder.

Mace Windu, Jedi Master and Jedi Council member, stands next to Obi-Wan, halting his progress into the garden.

Obi-Wan looks at the Jedi Master in surprise, "Master Windu. Is there a problem?"

Mace shakes his head, "No Obi-Wan. I simply want to stop you from interrupting your Padawan from his thoughts."

"But his thoughts dwell on matters that he needs to ignore." Obi-Wan argues.

"I know. Your exercises with him tomorrow will address this. But, for now, he needs to puzzle through his feelings alone."

Obi-Wan looks skeptical, "He does not understand how to refocus his thoughts yet, Master."

Mace's hand tightens slightly on Obi-Wan's shoulder with a reassuring squeeze, "He must learn a little on his own. Tomorrow you will show him that dwelling on matters beyond his control is pointless. But for now, he must learn alone."

Obi-Wan nods in agreement, albeit hesitantly.

He looks once more at Anakin before moving away to return to his quarters.

Meanwhile, Anakin sits on a large stone, staring at the smooth surface of the artificial pond. He likes this place. Small ripples mar the surface only slightly, coming from an ornate fountain at the other end. Small trees and bushes surround the area, giving the appearance of a natural landscape amidst Coruscant's endless cityscape. Anakin finds this place peaceful for him. He finds that he enjoys the quiet, with only the sounds of the fountain to listen to.

Anakin's face, however, is not a mirror of peacefulness. His expression is glum as he gazes into the pool. The garden makes him think of Naboo, with all it's natural beauty, it's trees and hills. It's waterfalls and natural ponds. But the most beautiful part of Naboo, for him anyway, is Amidala. He recalls their conversation by the water's edge, back on Naboo and smiles. If he concentrates, he can see her sitting beside him, her face radiant, her voice gentle, her hands soft.

Soon, the mental images fade and he broods again.

He knows he should turn his attention to contemplative meditation. He is an initiate in the Academy, already learning the fundamental training courses. He finds the whole process fascinating and learns rapidly, absorbing the information and teachings like a sponge. Jedi training is solid and real, something he eagerly throws himself into. But he also knows that not all Jedi training involves heroic activities at every opportunity. He knows that a primary activity of any Jedi in contemplative thought. He must focus his feelings and center himself.

But all the time for meditation allows him more time to think of Amidala and the fact that they're not together. The fact that they didn't even say goodbye to each other the day he left.

Oh, they said t

 

Since it's so unusually silent here, I thought I'd add that even negative comments about this story are appreciated.

 

No,its really good no negative vibes from me

I wonder howAni is going to do it? break into Yodas study....enlist Palpatines help???
so many ways to do it, only one post anyway great stuff Alpha and JP

 

Thanks!

Sorry I'm feeding you with one post at a time, but I wanted to put something down in the meantime.

We have the idea planned as to what we want to do with Anakin and Amidala. I just have to manufacture it.

I'll be the solo storyteller for the rest of this week as JediPadme and Alderaan21 have school committments.

 

Hey everyone! Bleh...I HATE school! Anyway I'm glad I'm back in the fan fiction section finally. I'm also happy there's more story but I've got a question...when did the story change tenses? Sorry..that weirded me out a bit and caused me great consternation when I frist started reading it. Anyway I'm going to retire to my little hut high on a hill now to be a recluse and pour over my homework. Buh-bye!

 

Just running in to say hi! I am soooooooo tired, I've been doing late-night full rehearsals all week... but AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! tomorrow is opening night!!!! I can't believe it! Well, technically its TODAY since its after midnight... but you know. I'm totally excited about it, but kinda bummed too, because after Sat. I won't be seeing my cast anymore... and I love them! :: No one besides JediSpeewwy's in Cali, huh? Too bad, its come out to be a great show...

But don't think I've forgotten this story! As it is, i have a future installment percolating in my half-dead brain... You know which part I'm talking about Alpha and A21, dibs on that

 

I hear ya JediPadme!

I'll try to fill in this story until you two can join back in.

Yesterday and today are hectic. I'm swamped at work and am not home in the evenings so hopefully can get back on track Friday and Saturday.

We'll take Anakin through his little plot. Stay tuned...

 

Uppers....

(yes, I'm taking a little break for my paper... you would too! )

 

Well, since I don't see a plug for his here yet...

Vee started an Ani/Ami eGroup list. Anyone in this thread who hasn't checked it out definitely should.

It's called http://www.egroups.com/group/skywalkingskywalking .

Just say NO to the triangle!

 

Always good to plug the list.

I've been negligent folks.

I was hoping to dedicate some time this past Friday evening or Saturday to write on the story and ended up putting in some overtime at work instead (sucks being gainfully employeed sometimes).

Today was a day for me to catch up on sleep and housework.

So, the ideas for the next part are still in my head but they still need to be organized and put together before I post them here.

 

What happened to this insanely incredible thread? Up, up and away!

 

Top guy's !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Post soon!!!!!!!

 

ohhh...i just came across this (i think) and love it. can't wait for more. :-D