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Where Shadows Lie - Vampire Obi-Wan [ 11.17.02 ] Forsaken and Forgotten [Finis]

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by TheFallen, Oct 27, 2002.

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  1. JediClare

    JediClare Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Obi-Wan can't die so easily, can he?

    [face_laugh] @ 'Clowncil'!
     
  2. Master_Comedy_Kitty

    Master_Comedy_Kitty Jedi Padawan star 4

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    HEY! WE NEVER DISCUSSED THE SORT-OF STABING OF THE OBI-WAN!!! All well...nice touch Master. :) BACK TO PLOTTING!!! [face_devil]
     
  3. Flashbacca

    Flashbacca Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ohhhhhhhh very very good post. The imagery was nice and vivid and the emotions very well wrought.. :D

    [face_laugh] also at the Clowncil hehe truer words were never written.

    Poor Mace, to have that type of a burden put upon him...to kill a friend. Very sad.

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    v_i ;) gotcha will wait for PM [face_devil] this is gonna be FUN!

    Maeve one may always request. No garuantees though. Never know when inspiration will hit. :D

    dp awwwwwwwwww, [face_blush] I am? Thank you!

    gotta go. late for class :( [face_barf]
     
  4. The_Chosen_One_41981

    The_Chosen_One_41981 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    :eek: That right there is the easiest way to give your intire thread a HEART ATTACK !!!

    *tries to stop Hyperventilating*

    :D And Anakin slept right through the entire battle!?!?! LMAO!!!

    Terrifying but, a good post all the same. :D
     
  5. Obis-Grl

    Obis-Grl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    v_i: The Empress can't wait!


    Flashbacca: Hehehe! Well would you maybe sing some more beatles?


    I can't wait for more story!


    Maeve
     
  6. Sugar_Bear

    Sugar_Bear Jedi Master star 3

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    A nicely written and very entertaining post!

    I enjoyed how protective Obi was to his apprentice. For all intents and purposes, Anakin was undead, but the Vamp Jedi refused to allow Ryo and Adrius to make the young man "dead" dead.

     
  7. Psycho-Freak

    Psycho-Freak Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :eek: You almost gave me a heart attack there!

    Mace what did I tell you about trying to kill Obi-Wan!!! :mad:

    ?An eternity with the split ends I had when I was bitten will do that to a girl.? [face_laugh]

    Poor, poor Obi-Wan :(

    v_i :D This is going to be fun!
     
  8. Master_Dar_Sala-at

    Master_Dar_Sala-at Jedi Youngling star 1

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    LMAO! I'd like to see Mace try and kill Obi again, little mofo. We'd be on him in a flash. Good post ladies! Next one comming soon????? *moves closer to fire without Jess noticing*
     
  9. Master_Comedy_Kitty

    Master_Comedy_Kitty Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *glares at Lindsey* I SAID AWAY FROM THE FIRE!!! Away does NOT mean closer!!!
     
  10. Jedi_Knight_Hunter

    Jedi_Knight_Hunter Jedi Padawan star 4

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    NNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! You stabbed Obi...

    *bawls*

    Wait a minute he's alive!!!

    *tries to get heart to beat again*

    Well, at least Mace missed...

    Ok, that was way too cruel to us readers...of course I loved it!

    ROTFLMAO at Ani sleeping through the fight and the thought of the clowncil and Mace and Yoda being turned.
     
  11. kikeriki

    kikeriki Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Yes, I believe that I nearly had a heart attack in that last post. And yes, I'm nearly suffering coronary failure because of a fanfiction story. Hmmmm... better not mention hearts on this thread, come to think of it. Vampire-Obi might find it too appealing.

    Freakishly frightening story!! Although I might just be saying that 'cause I've been scared stiff of vampires since I was a wee tyke... yes, all ten years. And yes, I still am. Vampire movies and stories give me the creeps... which might be a clue that it wasn't quite the smartest thing for me to go reading this before bed - oh well, it was too much to resist.

    Awesomely done! :D
     
  12. vader_incarnate

    vader_incarnate Force Ghost star 4

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    Eh... I don't have anything to say, for once. [face_plain]

    Oh! *brightens* The boards are yellow!
     
  13. TheFallen

    TheFallen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Is that a good or a bad thing, VI?
     
  14. Chaos_Rose

    Chaos_Rose Jedi Youngling star 3

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  15. vader_incarnate

    vader_incarnate Force Ghost star 4

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    Good thing, presumably. I just needed an excuse to up this. ;)
     
  16. Master_Comedy_Kitty

    Master_Comedy_Kitty Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm afraid of the color yellow... [face_plain]
     
  17. Arwyn_Whitesun

    Arwyn_Whitesun Jedi Padawan star 4

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    A very chilling, and startling post! [face_shocked] Never imagined Mace as the Van Helsing type, but he's trying his best. And Anakin is still on the loose. Excellent! [face_devil]
     
  18. The_Chosen_One_41981

    The_Chosen_One_41981 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Now ain't Mace gonna piss his pants when Obi shows again!!! [face_laugh] I wouldn't miss that for the world!!!

    *rubs forehead* Why Anakin??? You think you could have pulled yourself out of your coma like state to help just a little??? *rolls eyes*

    *slaps Dar's hand* AWAY FROM THE FIRE YOU GO!!! :mad: There'll be no incineration of THIS thread!!!
     
  19. Master_Comedy_Kitty

    Master_Comedy_Kitty Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Dana: I'm surprised your fingers had thawed enough for you to type. :p Mine are still a bit iffy. *huddles closer to blanket* No more football games at night in the freezing cold...NO MORE!
     
  20. TheFallen

    TheFallen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm very sorry that we haven't updated. I'm trying to get a chapter out, though. :(
     
  21. Flashbacca

    Flashbacca Jedi Padawan star 4

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    frozen fingers??!! yep, been there, done that, not fun. Next time take some of those battery powered heated socks. Can put them anywhere, even on feet. Used to wrap my instruments up in them. French horn was a tight fit, but the flute and trumpet work pretty well. [face_laugh]

    TW
     
  22. TheFallen

    TheFallen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Chapter Ten
    A Rather Odd Farewell Party




    Needless to say, when Mace Windu called an emergency meeting of Counselors at the middle stages of the night, the frazzled, bedraggled masters were soon on the scene in no time flat. Mace Windu didn?t call meetings for just anything, this I knew.

    It was Adi Gallia, a rather levelheaded master that I like amongst the other jerks that finally decided that after the fourth yawning marathon; it was time to spill the information.

    ?Just what exactly are we all doing here, Mace?? she asked respectfully. The last thing she needed, I felt her think, was a rampaging Counselor at this hour.

    ?I call you together with the gravest of news.? He began solemnly. Oh cut the crap, Mace. Really, I realize that it?s not every day that one gets to announce to his fellow windbags that a Jedi within this very Temple is an undead bloodsucker, but must we be so dramatic?

    I knew everything that he would say already, just by brushing up against him just a little. It wasn?t until I felt a null surge in the area of their haphazard meeting that I became worried for the well being of the collective group.

    Mace threw down the book of compiled lore and, supposedly, facts for all of the Jedi present to see. ?We have the traitors among us. I regret to say that those people are Anakin Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi.?

    A collective silence went through them.

    ?Are you sure,? Ki-Adi-Mundi, a known skeptic, began, ?that this is true??

    ?I saw with my own eyes the killing of one of his kindred.? Windu said darkly, ?He murdered one of them ? with a splinter of wood through the heart, no less.?

    ?Then we must take action immediately.? Depa Billaba announced with authority.

    ?I have already taken most unfortunate action,? Mace began, bowing his head, ?I regret to have to tell you all that I had to slay the one with the form of Obi-Wan.?

    I think believe that the shocking truth of the matter hit everyone, then. The facts that these two prominent Jedi were indeed Vampires were so much easier for them to accept when they were just thoughts and idle musings ? perhaps not even true. But when a respected and noble man such as Windu admits openly that he killed on of their kinsmen? it is harder for them to believe it a myth.

    It was settled then and there, and soon Mace was entailing just what ?taking action? meant. It would be a horrible and grisly task. No doubt it would break more than a few of their ideals. I?m sure this was the first time in at least the last few centuries that there was a Vampire in the midst of the Temple. Leave it to Obi-Wan to pull this off.

    The band of supposed slayers would have looked oh so comical, had the situation not have been so dire. I was thinking quickly and if I had a body, I?m sure if would have been throbbing with a headache. Obi-Wan was standing in the middle of his apartment staring down at the lightsaber wound that was still slowly regenerating. I suppose it is quite a shock, the first time you?re killed, only to live again.

    Each of the Council members was equipped with a lightsaber and a dream as they slunk down the hallways towards the Kenobi/Skywalker quarters. They looked quite a team, almost filling the wide hallway with their width and long, striding steps. All Council members on planet were in attendance for this. By the end of the night, they would wish they?d have stayed in bed.
    The null void, like a black hole in my senses, was coming closer to them. It was as though it were racing with the armed beings to the apartment. Was their a race going on for the prize within?

    I should?ve known that it could only be Adrius who would lunge down upon them and part them in a streaking blur of color. They jarred and were cut in half, each side taking a wall. They were so close to reaching Obi-Wan?s door?

    ?What was that?? Adi shrieked. Talking and charging towards a caged, known Vampire was one thing. Being attacked by a blurring, dark clothed figure in the middle of a well-lit hallway was another to these Jedi. Sitting in
     
  23. Chaos_Rose

    Chaos_Rose Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Adrius... he reminds me of Lestat!

    And you, My Apprentice, are an evil cliffhanging wench to leave your loyal, loving , homicidal, pyromaniacal, readers THERE!

    I'm <sniff > so proud!

    Now hurry with that next post!

     
  24. ForceAchtungBaby

    ForceAchtungBaby Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh cut the crap, Mace. Really, I realize that it?s not every day that one gets to announce to his fellow windbags that a Jedi within this very Temple is an undead bloodsucker, but must we be so dramatic?
    ROTFL! Goodness, the force cracks me up!!! Such a little smart (edited)!
     
  25. vader_incarnate

    vader_incarnate Force Ghost star 4

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    Mace, you beeeeeeeeeep! :mad:

    Now go... do something! Something! Anything!
     
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