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Saga The Chosen One and the Lightning child (AU) TPM

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by dralksakrak, May 27, 2006.

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  1. dralksakrak

    dralksakrak Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Backround : Ginji Amano the Raitei ,Thunder Emperor, accidently gets sent to the Star Wars universe.
    This is during the time he is the ruler of the Volts. He is currently fifteen years old. This Ginji is slightly different than the cannon. He can still channel electricity and aborb it though. Ginji can also create plasma balls. He also can become a human magnet and has amazing regenerative abilities. He can also act as a battery. Instead of feeding of the limitless energy in Mugenjou, his energy comes from the force. Despite his dark past, Ginji's personality is one of an unassuming, energetic, and friendly boy. But when put under great stress he reverts to his Raitei personality. Raitei is a darker version and full of anger and power. Essentialy a sith lord who has limitless energy. If he was turned, he would be unstoppable.

    Summary: After a fight against invaders, Ginji falls in a multi-demensioanl hole into the Star Wars universe. He lands on the catwalk during the duel between Maul and Qui-gon. He lands on the catwalk between the two dueling beings.

    This will be centered around Ginji and how the jedi will react. Anakin and Ginji are releated in a weird way.

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    Ginji directed his energy to electrocute the intruder that tried to kill MakubeX. He sighed; killing was a daily activity in his life. Sometimes he wished he were somewhere else other than the Infinity Fortress. However, his duty to protect the citizens from the monsters from Beltline overrode all desires to leave. He cared deeply for the people who lived in Infinity Fortress. As he stood there vertical to the wall, he contemplated his life. He mostly thought of his powers. He did not understand why he could generate and control electricity. His powers were greatly enhanced in Mugenjou, but if he went to the outside world his powers would be diminished and on a smaller scale.

    While he was pondering his life, a multi-dimensional hole opened up and sucked him through. The light and the weird tingling feeling greatly disoriented Ginji as he was dragged along for the ride. When he turned his head, he saw pictures of entrances of other dimensions. He was finally spat out into a world that was like Mugenjou, but on a larger scale. He felt very disoriented, nausea, and drained for some reason.


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    Obi wan gripped the edge of the metal catwalk desperately as he flung himself onto the catwalk. Luckily, his lightsaber did not roll off the catwalk. He stood there ready to jump up to the catwalk where his master and the sith fought. He nearly collapsed as the Force screamed. He held his head in pain and saw a blue hole appear and spit out a boy right above the area where his master was. Master!


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    Qui-gon calmly defended himself from the tattooed warrior. He wasn't worried about his padawan; he had fallen but grabbed onto a catwalk and wasn't too far from him. The sith was skilled with the lightsaber and it took all his skill to parry the blows sent to him. As they fought, he felt the disturbance in the force and he too nearly collapsed. He felt a warning in the force and barely got out of the way as a body fell between him and the sith. He stared in confusion. In front of him was a sprawled youth wearing clothes that he never seen. The youth was surrounded by dark side and yet there was a bright light radiating from him.


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    Darth Maul had been swinging his double lightsaber at the old Jedi, pushing him backwards. He had already sent the little idiot sidekick flying with his kick. Maul was disappointed the Jediling hadn?t died, but focused on the Jedi before him. His m
     
  2. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This story looks like it could go in an interesting direction. I'm not familiar with Ginji Amano the Raitei ,Thunder Emperor but your explanation:

    "Despite his dark past, Ginji's personality is one of an unassuming, energetic, and friendly boy. But when put under great stress he reverts to his Raitei personality. Raitei is a darker version and full of anger and power. Essentialy a sith lord who has limitless energy."

    Add that to the SW universe and this could be exciting!

    Thanks for the background and summary that sets up the story.

    The light and the weird tingling feeling greatly disoriented Ginji as he was dragged along for the ride. When he turned his head, he saw pictures of entrances of other dimensions. He was finally spat out into a world that was like Mugenjou, but on a larger scale. He felt power surging through his veins. He felt more aware and powerful than ever.

    So, he's both powerful and disoriented by a multi-dimensional hole (yeah, I'd be, too). Wonder how disoriented he'll remain once Maul and Qui-Gon stop gaping at him.

    Nice start to this story and I'm curious to see it develop.
     
  3. dralksakrak

    dralksakrak Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Thank you for you review :_|
    I am so happy!!!! [face_good_luck]
     
  4. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I see you edited your first post and it flows much more nicely now, and I understand the Point of View (POV) shifts much better now.

    This is going to be good...
     
  5. dralksakrak

    dralksakrak Jedi Youngling star 1

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    The next part in the series. :cool:

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    Ginji blinked at them. His head was pounding and he felt like throwing up. The two people who surrounded him seemed fuzzy. He gripped his head in pain as a wave of nausea flooded his body. As his sight cleared, it became apparent to him that he was in a middle of some sort of fight. The tension in the air was very heavy and he felt there was another person below them. He peaked down to see where, and the sight scared him. Below him was nothing but air and more platforms. If he fell, he might not survive.

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    He turned back to the warriors. One reminded him of Takeru Teshimine, a man who took care of him when he lived in Mugenjou. The other seemed to reek of menace. His tattooed face and intimidating stance clearly pointed out he meant business. The weird light sticks they wielded seemed to hum in the air. Ginji gulped and spoke.

    ?Hey guys. How are you doing?? Ginji said with a slight tremor in his voice.

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    Qui-gon stared at the youth before him. His probes had revealed nothing but fluctuations. It seemed the being was not a native to this galaxy. However, as time passed his signature seem to blend in. Most curious, he thought. The boy?s force signature was unusually strong and if he looked closely enough he could see a battle between the light and dark raging inside him. The sith across from him seem to be contemplating the same thing as he was. Qui-gon used this time to check up on his padawan via the bond. His padawan seemed fine and was standing on the catwalk below waiting to join him. He was startled when a weird sound emanated from the foreign being.

    ?wre guwp, pwuo sdf yiu wping? ?? said the being.

    Qui-gon stared this time in disbelier. From the rising inflection in his tone, he was asking a question. There was clearly a language barrier. If he were 40 years younger, he would have groaned and pounded his head into a wall. It was way too much for the old master. First there was a sith warrior, then the council?s refusal to teach Anakin, and now this strange life form.

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    Maul scrutinized the being in front of him. He seemed not to be a threat but he could not take chances. His master?s will was to destroy the two jedi. This small obstacle would not get in his way! He paid no heed to the strange sounds that emanated from the child. He swung his lightsaber at the non-jedi. He did not notice the warning the force have been whispering in his ear. A moment later, he learned his lesson. Painfully.

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    Ginji blinked. They apparently did not understand what he said. There appeared to be a language barrier that kept him from telling them that he was a peaceful earthman. He felt a brush on his senses and barely leaped out of the way of the glowing light sticks. The light barely missed him, singeing his vest. His preservation instincts went into overdrive and he shot a lighting bolt at the tattooed person. The lighting hit the tattooed person and a moment later he was awarded with a slight scream that came from the attacker. Ginji smirked and was unprepared for the invisible force that chucked him off the platform. He fell down the shaft.

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    Maul screamed as the lightning fried his nerves. He used the force to push the boy off the catwalk and he leapt up with a hiss of pain. He attacked the old jedi again, this time catching him by surprise and started pressing him backwards. Maul swore he would destroy the jedi, and later destroy the little
     
  6. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    ?Hey guys. How are you doing?? Ginji said with a slight tremor in his voice. [face_laugh]
    Doubt I'd speak so calmly if I were dropped into that situation.

    Obi-wan was prepared to jump up and help his master fight against the sith but was distracted by a falling object. He felt the sith use the Force to fling the boy off the catwalk. He reached out and barely caught the plummeting youth. He was shocked by how young said person was. He had earlier observed the same boy showering the sith warrior with lightning. When the event occurred he felt the shift in the force as the boy showered the sith with lightning. The dark side seemed prominent and then it dissipated.

    Surprise, surprise. What an inconvenient place to drop into the middle of. Lucky for Ginji that Obi-Wan had first been knocked to a lower level, and was there to catch him.

    Wonder what will change in this fight with our newcomer present.

     
  7. dralksakrak

    dralksakrak Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Qui-gon and Maul stood there waiting for the shields to go down. Obiwan was currently at the back tensing ready to help his master. When the shield went down Obiwan ran as fast as he could, but failed to reach his master. He was stuck watching his master locked in mortal combat.
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    Ginji ran towards the funny red walls. When he touched it, his hand got slightly burnt. He backed up and ran at the wall, molding a shield of electricity in front of him. He figured the opposite charge should allow him to run right through the red wall. As he ran through the shields opened up, and he ran all the way through to the last one.
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    Obiwan screamed in horror as his master was skewered. He glared at Maul, full of hate. His thoughts centered on revenge. The link between him and his master allowed him to experience the intense pain his master was feeling. The dark side clouded his thoughts and fueled his tired limbs. He was blind to everything else but the sith. When the shields turned off, he attacked like a lunatic. He just attacked, forgetting all jedi principle and teachings.

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    Ginji barely stopped at the last shield; in fact, he did not. The shield hit his left leg just as he slid through. Incredible jolts of energy passed through him. Since he was immune to most energy, he was up and ready to fight after the energy passed through. The two fighters barely noticed him. He watched the mesmerizing dance of the two warriors. They moved so fast and to him it looked very dazzling.

    He saw the older man lying there, dying. He quickly moved to the older man checking his vitals. The younger one was fighting with such vigor and strength Ginji doubted he would be able to keep up at that pace. The older man was barely breathing due to what seemed like to be a hole in his chest. He looked at the hole and was shocked to see the metal underneath him. Something burned a hole through his chest. He knew that the man would not survive without immediate medical attention. He grabbed a vial from his vest pocket and unscrewed it. Ginji carefully poured the medicine into the man?s mouth. Now all he needs is medical attention.

    Remarkable the fighters missed Ginji in all their fighting. Ginji looked up as he felt the same tingly feeling sweep through his body. He witnessed the tattooed man seemly push the young person into the deep hole in the floor without his hands. The man turned to him grinning and raised his light blade to kill Ginji.
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    Maul was feeling victorious. When the containment field stopped the idiot sidekick from helping his master he knew he would win. The older jedi knew it too. He laughed in his mind as his blade slid into the older man?s body, through and through. He faced the other jedi and sneered. This one was already bordering the dark side. He was unprepared by the flurry of attacks the jedi sent his way. He was paying too much attention to the lightsaber to notice the intruder that slid into the room.

    As he knocked the idiot into the exhaust vent, he turned to the intruder. The one who seemed to be a sith earlier. There could be only two, the master and the apprentice. Maul was the apprentice; there could be no one else. Soon he will be the master; he swung his lightsaber down at the boy. After all treachery was breed into the sith.
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    The man brought down his red blade down on Ginji?s head, at that split second Ginji attacked the man with lightning. Then he kicked him and grabbed the hilt of the younger man?s glow stick. Pushing the button randomly, a light shot out. Ginji barely had time to admire it when the red blade clas
     
  8. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Hmm, so Qui will live? Wonder how they'll explain all this...looking forward to the next chapter.
     
  9. dralksakrak

    dralksakrak Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Next chapter for all those who love Getbackers and Ginji.

    Ginji sat there, guarded by one of the surviving royal guard. After the battle was over, they wanted to make sure he was not a threat to them. He was searched and they took his knife, and a few knickknacks he had pocketed. In it was a crumpled Polaroid picture of him and his gang. It was a flurry of activity as they carried the injured man?s body to the hospital.

    Ginji?s nose twitched slightly, this place smelled differently from his home. Nevertheless, it felt like home. A soothing blanket enveloped him, buzzing slightly. This place felt so big, and so full. It was strange, little lightly danced in his mind. His power seems to tingle and it felt so strange using it here. During the fight, when he willed lightning to come forth, he was swallowed by coldness, then a burning sensation. It reminded him of a time, when he first became Lightning Lord, the same coldness. Here, the darkness was harder to fight, it was everywhere. He could not escape to the outside world for a breather, there was no outside world.

    He fingered his jacket, wearing the edges down. He had to be careful here, even though the people here were more exotic than and strange than his hometown, people would freak if someone saw him saw him let lightning dance between fingers. The technology was interesting here, except it shuts down when he gets near them. That was why he was not in the hospital area; they were scared he might shut down the machines. Truthfully, he felt that too, it was strange the injured man felt familiar.

    The younger man, Obi-Wan was extremely distraught over the injured man?s injury was hovering. The nurses had to shoo the young man out. Therefore, the young man decided to see how their young guest was doing. The guest was ten years younger then him, but showed great force potential. The force seemed to surround and envelope the young man in an almost visible shield. It was interesting; it was as if the force was trying to protect the boy. From what Obi-Wan could reckon, the boy did not need protection. After all, whenever he got even near him, his sense would scream. A dark taint was hovering near the boy. As a Jedi, he taught the dark taint would forever remain. However, there was this light, this innocence that he sensed from the boy, like Anakin. A sense to help everyone with a strong passion no matter what. Come to think of it, they even looked identical, the same sandy blond hair and intense blue eyes. However, the youth, had a darkness that seem to stare at you, licking its lips in anticipation. It unnerved the Jedi greatly.

    He walked towards the unique presence. Obi-Wan turned the corner and took a sharp breath. The boy was enchased in a halo of lightning. It danced on his skin and sparked in the air. The Force was humming slightly, a faint pleasant buzzing feeling.

    ?Hi, I?m Jedi Padawan Obi-Wan.?

    His voice, while quiet echoed. The stranger startled and turned his head revealing huge blue eyes.

    A warm smile lite the boy?s face, making him younger than he seems.

    ?Pleased to meet you. I?m Ginji Armano.?

    Ginji left his title out, here nobody knows him. It was better this way.

     
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