A Task of Extreme Awe (post Bandomeer- Qui\Xanatos\Obi\Adi\Yoda\Eeth and a few surprises also!)

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This is the repost of a tale previously titled 'A Task of Extreme Awe {Qui-Gon after Bandomeer with Obi-Wan must accept Xanatos' fate and teach}' and this draft comes with edits and additional text.

Anyway, this first post is just a quick introduction. If it generates any type of interest, the following posts are going to be quite lengthy. That?s a promise! Any comments and/or feedback would be appreciated tremendously.

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A TASK OF EXTREME AWE

A well-known planet, littered with glistening lights, is seen ahead by Qui-Gon Jinn from the shuttle bay of his nearby space-enveloped transport.

A countless number of craft, mostly frigates and transport vehicles, penetrate the world's atmosphere, while many other vessels rocket away towards space from the opposite direction.

A bunch of snub fighters race across the scene, some far in the distance, and a few of them close enough to momentarily obscure Qui-Gon?s view of the planet. He knew where they were headed.

A cloaked figure to the few technicians that occasionally walk by, the Jedi Master obviously appears to be keeping to himself quietly. Attempting to hide among the vehicles of the shuttle bay for a bit of much needed solitude, he gazes at the magnificent vista of the planet with intense engrossment.

A quick trip from this transport to the bustling world ahead was now the only endeavor left until Qui-Gon would obtain another task of extreme awe.

 

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A TASK OF EXTREME AWE

A well-known planet, littered with glistening lights, is seen ahead by Qui-Gon Jinn from the shuttle bay of his nearby space-enveloped transport.

A countless number of craft, mostly frigates and transport vehicles, penetrate the world's atmosphere, while many other vessels rocket away towards space from the opposite direction.

A bunch of snub fighters race across the scene, some far in the distance, and a few of them close enough to momentarily obscure Qui-Gon?s view of the planet. He knew where they were headed.

A cloaked figure to the few technicians that occasionally walk by, the Jedi Master obviously appears to be keeping to himself quietly. Attempting to hide among the vehicles of the shuttle bay for a bit of much needed solitude, he gazes at the magnificent vista of the planet with intense engrossment.

A quick trip from this transport to the bustling world ahead was now the only endeavor left until Qui-Gon would obtain another task of extreme awe.

TRANSPORT
While the cloaked figure of Qui-Gon Jinn observes through the transparisteel of the shuttle bay, the mighty planet looms closer. This man, calm and collected, is preparing himself for the task ahead.

Once Qui-Gon reached his destination, there would be no turning back. He would have to accept the ultimate responsibility, again.

He would have to risk failure, extreme failure. He knew what it was like, for he?d been dealing with the reality of failure for some time now.

The effect of Qui-Gon's self-declared laxity was not apparent by looking at his face, for he knew all too well how to display a facade. However, the thoughts of his carelessness taunted him with a ferocity not experienced by many. The lot of things he could have done differently, his words, his teachings, his method, all raced across his consciousness like lightning, each tendril sparking another emotion.

All of this turmoil now existed, but Qui-Gon knew what he had to do. He would have to come to terms with all this by the time his teaching techniques began again.

A master at deception, not many had any knowledge that Qui-Gon?s disappointment had suddenly returned. No one aboard the transport knew, but the Council, now that was a different story.

The cloaked figure of Qui-Gon Jinn was aware, without a doubt, that a particular friend would know of his contemplation. Qui-Gon?s recent analysis of his own actions would not be kept a secret from Yoda. In fact, this powerful confidant knew everything about it already, for he was able to sense emotions across unfathomable distances.

Qui-Gon pondered his imminent arrival to the planet. He was unsure if being honest with his peers would be an advantage.

Qui-Gon Jinn put his hand to his chin, knowing that Yoda was at the Jedi Temple waiting for him.

Of course Qui-Gon had been reprimanded by the wise Jedi Master before, but he knew that now, when he needed it the most, Yoda would be ready to reassure him, and that was an immense help. One thing he could always count upon, despite his rebellious nature, was the support of his fellow Jedi.

Momentarily surprised, he took notice of the absence of his beard, which was an intentional act on his behalf. Disgusted by his once reckless nature, he no longer wore the beard, a symbol of his readiness to change, perhaps to even do things by the Code. He had just removed the beard recently, upon his return from Bandomeer and after the announcement that a new padawan would be apprenticed to him.

Yes, Qui-Gon thought to himself, he would embrace the rules of the Council this time around, for his own benefit, and for the benefit of his new apprentice. He would do it for the boy and for his own protection.

The planet's image was now occupying the entire transparisteel viewport of the shuttle bay. While another craft approached the transport, Qui-G

 

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He looked ahead through the doorway. Then Qui-Gon exited the enviro-hatch by stepping aboard the attached craft, all the while blocking the possibility of a mind probe by Adi Gallia, even if she were to attain it unintentionally. Qui-Gon was fairly certain she wouldn?t know, for his skill in this area of the Force was exceptional.

THE RADIANT
Upon entering, Qui-Gon found himself at a long corridor. He knew his way to the cockpit, and immediately turned left. As he walked, he watched the transport pull away through a giant transparisteel viewport along the corridor wall.

As he continued his way to the cockpit, Qui-Gon made a quick right into the adjacent corridor. There, to meet him, was Eeth Koth.

With his hand extended for a shake, Eeth Koth spoke. ?It?s headed where all those snub fighters were going.? Qui-Gon had continued to watch the transport as he turned the corner, and Eeth had seen him looking at it.

Qui-Gon Jinn accepted Eeth?s offer and shook his hand fiercely. ?And we all know where that is.? Qui-Gon said this as he smiled, genuinely glad to see Eeth Koth, his fellow Jedi Master.

As he gave a hearty pat upon the back to Qui, Eeth Koth responded. ?Yes, all too well.? The atmosphere was playful as the pair of Jedi Masters welcomed the sight of each other for the first time in quite a while. However, among the laughter and smiles, they were chatting about a very important topic. ?We shall join them soon enough,? Eeth added.

Qui-Gon cocked an eyebrow at the comment, and then put his arm around Eeth. His smiling persisted as he asked ?How are you my friend??

?I?m just fine Qui-Gon. It is good to see you,? Eeth Koth answered. After a brief pause, he continued. ?However, I wish I could say that about your beard too!? Eeth Koth grabbed Qui?s shaven chin and shook it, playfully. ?What is this?? he said loudly. ?By the stars!?

Even though it was a meaningful act by Qui-Gon Jinn, he laughed anyway. ?Oh? just a recent fashion choice.?

The pair had begun walking towards the next junction. All the while, they were pushing and laughing at each other.

Eeth Koth and Qui-Gon Jinn arrived at the next junction. Ahead, the corridor continued. To the left was the entrance to the cockpit, and opposite that was another doorway.

Qui-Gon heard a familiar sound emanating from that entrance, and being that the door was already open, he took a peek.

There was an adjoining room, which seemed totally bare, except for its occupant.

Adi Gallia was at the center of the room, practicing her lightsaber skills with a practice remote. The spherical device was firing bolts of condensed energy at her from a variety of locations. The sound that Qui-Gon had heard was the crackle of the shots hitting Adi?s intimidating crimson saber.

Qui-Gon Jinn let go a smile, for this was quite a rare sight. Qui-Gon knew that she chose not to use her lightsaber unless all other options had failed, so he never really pictured Adi Gallia as the type that would be brushing up on her saber skills during a typical rendezvous task.

Adi must really be focused, Qui-Gon thought, she doesn?t even sense me. It seemed as though she was unaware of Eeth Koth as well.

Adi just kept battling the practice remote.

Qui-Gon thought that the display was quite impressive. He watched the crimson-bladed lightsaber move with such unique elegance, a product distributed by its wielder, Adi Gallia. Qui-Gon knew her traits well, and he always thought of her as elegant.

Well, he thought, she hasn?t sensed us yet, so preventing a mind probe shouldn?t prove to be as difficult as I had anticipated. Nevertheless, Qui-Gon concentrated on the Force-enhanced block with extreme focus.

He and Eeth Koth entere

 

Any comments and/or feedback would be appreciated tremendously.

 

Heeey! I like the story! Its kewl!

 

Here is some text from the first post:

'Anyway, this first post is just a quick introduction. If it generates any type of interest, the following posts are going to be quite lengthy. That?s a promise!'

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That is of course, only if you like it that way. Using the first three posts as an example, do you guys like your posts shorter, longer, or the way they are now.

 

hey do post more I never read this. and I like it, but I have a question: where's Obi?

 

Great story!!! Could you add Siri? Since she's Adi's apprentice(maybe future apprentice).

 

Hey hi there!

Your posts are appreciated tremendously!

And now to get to your questions everyone!

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To start, this is a pretty lengthy tale.

After this first chapter, the action starts pretty quickly.

The story focuses upon Qui but as you know, we come across many characters along the way.

As for Obi just be ready. He's mentioned and talked about this first chapter. Then, he is the focus of a forthcoming one.

This first chapter also mentions Siri and she does have a role eventually. We also meet Eeth's padawan and a few other new characters too.

 

Can we expect a post soon.I have read this,but this version seems better.PEACE Ewen

 

Yes quite soon you can expect the next post.

 

Ooops! A double post.

 

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Again, the recap is shown as blue text.

Hope you like it.

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He and Eeth Koth entered the room and stood near the doorway. Then Qui-Gon spoke. ?I foresee you becoming a Jedi Master in the near future, my friend.? Adi Gallia immediately turned toward the both of them with a look of surprise upon her face. The practice remote had stopped firing when it detected that Adi was no longer in battle position.

The crimson glow of Adi?s saber reflected off of her brown skin as she looked at her fellow Jedi. ?Qui-Gon!? she exclaimed, and a smile instantaneously formed across her mouth. Quickly, she ran towards Qui-Gon, deactivating her lightsaber as she flew across the room.

Qui-Gon Jinn took both of her hands and donned a smile. They both looked at each other with arms outstretched, while holding hands tightly. ?What happened to your face?? Adi said jokingly.

Eeth Koth couldn?t resist letting go a laugh. His hand was upon Qui-Gon?s shoulder. ?How about I let you guys get reacquainted? I suppose I should get us going anyway. Yoda awaits and we all know how that can get,? Eeth said with a jocular look upon his face. With that, he walked across the corridor and entered the cockpit.

Qui-Gon watched him go, and then turned back towards Adi. He chuckled as he felt his chin with one hand. ?It?s my new look,? he stated humorously.

He looks so handsome, Adi thought to herself.

Together, as if guided by the Force itself, they firmly hugged each other.

As they made contact, Qui-Gon was certain to focus upon his mind-blocking technique.

Adi squeezed him tightly. Her skin felt so smooth against him. Adi truly was beautiful he thought. Qui-Gon kept that sentiment blocked too.

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Qui-Gon Jinn and Adi Gallia only took a few standard minutes to get caught up with each other. With all of the happenings they had both recently encountered, the talk could have went on for an infinite length. However, they kept it quick and simple, limiting the chat to trivial subject matter and an exchange of pleasantries.

Even though Qui-Gon was blocking his most intimate of emotions, there was an ease to the conversation that he had not experienced for quite a while.

Amazing, he thought. It was as if they had never been away from each other, as if Qui-Gon hadn?t gone to Bandomeer with his soon-to-be Padawan.

The Force-enhanced block was working well, regardless of the fact that Qui-Gon and Adi were being all chummy with each other, a behavior that usually increased the chance of an unintentional probe. Qui-Gon could tell she wasn?t trying to probe him anyway. Even so, his emotions were there, like an unseen ball of heat.

After the brief prattle, they left the bare room and went to join Eeth Koth at the cockpit.

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The seating area at the control panel didn?t provide the most ample of accommodations but the three Jedi were comfortable enough.

Qui-Gon was sitting between Adi and Eeth, the latter occupying the pilot?s seat.

Qui-Gon was actually surprised at how much room there was behind the seats. It was quite odd, he thought, for a craft of this type.

It seemed like it had been such a long time for Qui-Gon, but now he was with his friends again. Here, alongside his fellow Jedi, is where he belonged now. Not many would believe that Qui-Gon could admit to that, due mostly to his independent rebellious nature. Nevertheless, it was true.

When Qui-Gon and Adi arrived at the cockpit, the craft had already broken the planet?s atmosphere.

Qui-Gon gazed through the transparisteel viewport, as the dark canvas of space quickly morphed into a magnificent vista of never-ending blue.

Now, strips of thin white cloud accompanied their vessel through the vast expanse of sky. Even at this altitude, the glimmer of the well-known planet could be seen, each far away edifice twinkling from the sunlight.

Qui-Gon took notice of the resplendent sight, genuinely excited to be back. He allowed himself to bask for a moment, and a smile a

 

Good post!

 

I appreciate it!

Here's a question just out of pure curiosity.

Using the posted posts as an example, do you guys like your posts shorter, longer, or the way they are now?

 

Oh please excuse the fact that a few of the thoughts were not italicized. The next post is on the way!

 

Here comes the next post.

 

Hey is anyone waiting so I know if I should post or not?

 

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He shook his head slowly. He wasn?t getting away from this one. He turned towards Eeth, then back to Adi. They were both looking at him.

?You can?t blame yourself,? Adi said. Qui-Gon had now submitted to the fact that this conversation was going to take place.

He spoke a bit more loudly now, to both of them. ?We don?t have to talk about this you know.?

I had been working so hard to not reveal the plight to Adi, Qui-Gon thought, only to have Eeth announce it.

Well now they both know.

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The talk had begun.

After about a standard minute, Qui-Gon Jinn had left his seat. He was now pacing back and forth across the roomy area behind it.

Once the chat had been initiated, he had told himself that it was useless to deny the fact that his emotions were affecting him. Both Adi Gallia and Eeth Koth already knew.

Adi and Eeth were assessing the situation, and as Qui-Gon waited for another comment, he continued to pace.

He put his hand to his mouth out of contemplation. Again, he was surprised to find no beard there. This might take some getting used to, he thought. What also astonished Qui-Gon was how honest he could actually be with his friends Adi and Eeth. They genuinely wanted to help, and ever since the talk began, being honest just seemed like the best thing to do.

Qui-Gon actually wanted to share his emotions now. It just seemed befitting. And although unexpectedly for Qui-Gon, it did help.

The talk continued as Eeth swiveled his pilot?s chair around in order to face Qui-Gon. ?I know he has difficulty showing it,? Eeth spoke quickly, ?but Yoda has the utmost of confidence in you.?

After a slight pause while he let go of an exaggerated nod, Qui-Gon uttered ?I find that hard to believe my friend."

?It?s true, Qui-Gon,? Eeth returned.

?Yeah,? Qui-Gon muttered.

?What Xanatos brings about is not a reflection of you,? Adi interjected. She had also swiveled her chair around to face Qui-Gon. ?It?s been like that ever since he left you.?

After an epic battle with his former apprentice at Telos, Qui-Gon was left to return to Coruscant without a padawan. He had told himself he?d never take an apprentice again.

?But if only I had done something different, perhaps I could have shielded him more effectively from the dark side." Qui-Gon paused. "Tell me, how many Jedi have wound up forced to battle their former Padawan?? The question didn?t seem to be directed at anyone in particular, and Qui-Gon didn?t expect a response.

Adi and Eeth glanced at each other, and Adi was the one to reply. ?Qui-Gon, you were confronted with Xanatos? treachery. You had no choice but to act.?

?Yes Adi, and I earned his unending hatred from that point on. What if that was the reason? What if the hate that I caused is what turned him to the dark side??

?Qui-Gon!" she practically yelled, "Xanatos attacked a world.? Adi blatantly accentuated those words so that Qui-Gon would comprehend. ?You defended the innocent. It is the Jedi way. You did nothing unjust!? Then, she paused. ?Besides, he was a servant to the dark side long before your confrontation at Telos. It wasn?t you.?

Qui-Gon had accepted his most recent student?s fate from the start, not blaming himself at first. However, now was different. He had cause for doubt. It was due to the realization that he must start again, with a new apprentice. Ever since his experiences at Bandomeer with his next Padawan, he had considered blaming himself for Xanatos' fate.

?Tell us about the boy.? Eeth Koth said this calmly, attempting to steer the talk in another direction.

?Obi-Wan Kenobi has a bond with me." Qui-Gon paused yet again. "We are linked through the Force. But starting again... at that level... the importance is too extreme... I can?t risk it all happening again."

"Qui-Gon, your doubt is swelling," Eeth said.

"I had told myself that I would not take another apprentice," Qui-Gon explained.

"Nevertheless, you had to co

 

Hi!

Healer_Leona
I appreciate your reply tremendously! It's nice to have you along.

Your comment about the length of the posts really helped. It's hard to get feedback!

About the blue recap at the beginning of each post, I only put it there because sometimes when I go to a story I find myself wonderin' what happened last post. This happens when I'm lookin' at too many tales at once! Anyway, I made it blue so you can easily skip beyond it. However, if it truly continues to irk you, let me know. I'd rather satisfy one reader than none.

 

Very cool. I've never read a fan-fic that had Eeth Koth playing any substantial role in it! So for that fact alone I'm hooked! He's my favorite Council Member.

Your post lengths are fine. Long or short, I'll read them!

Please add more to this tale soon.

 

Hi!

zabrak_lady

Your name is the coolest! By your taste I guess the next few posts would be of interest to you now. Your post is appreciated tremendously!