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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by Briannakin , Jun 18, 2017.

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  1. Chyntuck

    Chyntuck Force Ghost star 5

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    What Nyota said. I've often got replies to my reviews where the author said "I didn't even realise I'd put that in there", and my answer is always the above. I'm on the essay end of the review spectrum (understatement of the century) because I like to look at patterns and underlying themes in people's writing, and when your brain is wired that way you tend to spot the subconscious layer of writing and you see how alive a character is in the author's mind. Characters that are alive make for good stories, and good stories are a pleasure to read and review!

    With that being said, I don't think that there's any such thing as good and bad reviews, or even good and better reviews. A review is just what the reader took away from the story they read, and different readers will take away different things. For some it's the pleasure of emotions, for others it's the pleasure of the plot, for others yet it's the pleasure of analysis, etc. etc. and all of that is good. In the end it all boils down to the absolute joy of interaction between a reader and a writer, and that's what we're here for.
     
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  2. Chyntuck

    Chyntuck Force Ghost star 5

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    It's the last day of 2024, which means it's time to look back on what we achieved in the last twelve months and make hyperambitious resolutions that we can't keep up with for 2025! 8-}

    So: given the way 2024 went for me, I had to downsize my goals considerably in September, but the good news is that I achieved pretty much all of what I said then [face_dancing] I wrote a detailed outline of Outsiders and even several chapters that I started posting; I added stories to three of my on-going collection threads (I actually finished The Secret Life of Droids thanks to the Word Race, which was an unexpected bonus); I managed to keep up with the UDC XI so far and there's only two weeks to go (crossing fingers that I'm not jinxing it as I type); and I caught up with the vast majority of reviews I had pending for 2024 fics. I also had a goal of writing at least one NSWFF story this year, which I'd already achieved with the Kessel Run before I downsized my goals.

    For 2025, my primary writing goal is to bring three of my on-going threads to a close, namely Outsiders, which is a multi-chapter, and Outcast and The Family Holos, which are one-shot collections. My secondary goal is to add to the rest of my one-shot collections, plus participate in the KR and Fanfic Olympics with at least one NSWFF story.

    Then, as a reader, my resolution is to not let a mountain of pending reviews pile up for the Review Race. To that end, I'm setting myself a goal of writing at least two reviews every week, and I’ll go without cookies if I don’t (which would be good for my silhouette, but I digress).

    That's it for me, what about everybody else?
     
  3. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Excellent balance @Chyntuck of realistic and ambitiousness. ;)

    I'm going to do a year long Dear Diary and participate in the Fanfiction Olympics and Monday Mush and OTP challenges.
     
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  4. ConservativeJedi321

    ConservativeJedi321 Force Ghost star 6

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    I'm on track to finish A Shattered Mind's Eye early next year, most of the writings actually already done I just need to get the Epilogue just right.
    At my current publishing rate of one chapter per week I'm likely to end it early March or so, and in the meantime as I edit and fiddle with the little things I'm going to start my own yearlong diary challenge with one of the secondary characters from that story whose perspective I find rather interesting.

    I've got a rather ambitious goal with that, hoping to cover years of that character's life in months, but if done right I think I can do it.
     
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  5. amidalachick

    amidalachick Favorites of FanFic Hostess Extraordinaire star 5 VIP - Game Host

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    I'm focusing heavily on some RL goals in 2025, and while I'm obviously pursuing those for RL reasons, I'm hoping it will indirectly help me with fanfic and other hobbies as well by reducing some of the stress in my life and leaving more time and energy for the things I enjoy. That's the theory, at least. We'll see how it actually goes. :p

    For fanfic-specific goals, I didn't achieve any of my 2024 goals so I'm trying something a little different this year. The actual goals are still basically the same, though. :p

    1. Leave at least 1 review every month. I know that's not very much but I often end up going months at a time without commenting. I want to do better about showing my admiration and appreciation for the stories I enjoy!
    2. Finish a oneshot for the Obscure Sorrows Mini-Games Challenge.
    Sometimes I'll be in the mood to write but have no ideas, so I'll go through my hundreds of docs looking for something to work on and can't choose anything, so I end up writing nothing at all. I've worked on this particular vignette on and off for a while, and I keep coming back to it, so I want to focus on that and finish it.
    3. Complete the Kessel Run. It honestly helps me so much with perfectionism. Plus it's just such a fun time and a wonderful celebration of creativity!

    Wishing everyone all the best in 2025, in writing and in life! [:D]
     
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  6. ConservativeJedi321

    ConservativeJedi321 Force Ghost star 6

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    Happy New Year!
    I planned on starting the diary challenge ASAP, but my dad probably cracked a rib when he fell trying to pack the car, so here's hoping things can only go up from here. [face_plain]
     
  7. Mechalich

    Mechalich Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I confess I've been moving away from fanfiction lately to focus much more heavily on original work (links in signature), and I hope to average 1,000 words per day over the course of the year on that project.

    I'll still try to do a diary though, since I've had lots of luck with that project and owe it a huge developmental debt.
     
  8. Happy Sando

    Happy Sando Jedi Master star 4

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    Ouch! Hope he's doing okay, and that he's just getting his year's bad luck out of the way early.

    I'm always loathe to set my own goals. First sign I might miss one and I'm guaranteed to assume the worst and end up missing 'em all. But thanks to the great community here and its wide array of challenges throughout the year, I'm gonna continue to try new things whenever possible, all while working on my next standalone project in the background. I also need to get better at leaving reviews, too!

    Good luck, everybody! [face_praying] :) Looking forward to reading all the awesome stuff you're gonna share!
     
  9. ConservativeJedi321

    ConservativeJedi321 Force Ghost star 6

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    He's stubborn, slept it off, says he feels better this morning. At least well enough to spend his time cleaning up me and my mom's messes. :p
    Hopefully that's good news.
     
  10. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    [face_laugh] [face_dancing] That reminds me of more than one of my favorite teams' athletes. It takes a lot to get them out of commission. [face_love]
     
  11. devilinthedetails

    devilinthedetails Fiendish Fanfic & SWTV Manager, Tech Admin star 6 Staff Member Administrator

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    Good luck to everyone in meeting their fanfic resolutions for 2025!

    My fanfic resolutions for 2025 are as follows:

    1. Continue to experiment with different tenses and storytelling techniques since that was super rewarding for me last year.
    2. Continue to chip away at my longer works in progress and also start some more multi-chapter, longer length stories.
    3. Write with more OC's.
    4. Write for a variety of fandoms and Star Wars eras.
    5. Be a more consistent reviewer for my fellow fanfic authors.
     
  12. TherenAdarni

    TherenAdarni Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Going through a new year's slump lately. Might have to finish off the rest of the drabble challenge in the coming months.

    Trying not to stress myself out to much about fic writing, so I'm going to avoid putting too much on my plate challenge-wise.

    Goals are:
    - Stick with the longfic, hopefully getting to a point where I can post a chapter per week
    - Finish UDC XI, then maybe work my way through the UDC X prompts. They're a fun challenge!
    - Work my way through the Angstmongers challenges
    - Make a To-Read-and-Review list and work my way through it!
     
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  13. GregMcP

    GregMcP Force Ghost star 5

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    Goals.

    Honestly my writing and reading are pretty intermittent nowadays. So I won't set goals or deadlines. A couple of stories in the pipeline. One that has accidentally turned into something mushy and heartfelt, and the other a rather silly attempt at big screen Star Wars action.

    That's all I will promise. I don't have the mental power to commit to competitions right now.
     
  14. Kahara

    Kahara Chosen One star 4

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    Okay, I thought I did worse on this than I actually did. I wrote a week for the UDC, so that is something posted. And though I didn't make it here to review something every week, the amount of reviews that I left over the year seems pretty close to or even over 52. So, not too shabby. :p

    This year's goals:
    1. Write something that I post (if it ain't broke don't fix it? :p )
    2. Leave at least 5 reviews for 5 different authors per month.

    There we go, that seems like enough to start with!
     
  15. ConservativeJedi321

    ConservativeJedi321 Force Ghost star 6

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    Loving the weekend. (Especially a long weekend!)
    Over the last 24 hours I'm in the process of writing chapters in both of my currently active fics that are in a class of their own, very near the top of my all-time favorite chapters/entries I have ever written. [face_mischief]
     
  16. Chyntuck

    Chyntuck Force Ghost star 5

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    It's the end of March, and that means it's time to check how I'm doing on my 2025 fanfic goals! Here's what I said at the end of December…
    … and I'm glad to report that I've been doing very well! [face_party]

    The threads I want to bring to a close in 2025: I posted a weekly update for Outsiders every Monday since January; a lot of that was stuff that I'd drafted in 2024 but I also wrote a fair bit of new stuff. I'm more than half-way through the story and it's novel-length, so I’m counting this as a win. I haven't updated Outcast or The Family Holos yet, but I had a look at those story concepts in-between two KR prompts and I'm planning to write at least one of them during WIP month.

    My one-shot collections: I returned to my Wookiee myths and legends for the Spring Bingo and I'll (probably) manage 5 ficlets for it. I'm also hoping to finish at least one of the half-written stories I have for my other one-shot collections during WIP month; if not, that's fine, there's always the November Word Race [face_batting]

    The heavy-duty challenges: I just completed the 2025 Kessel Run with a NSWFF thread, and while it's not my best writing, I'm reasonably happy with it and most importantly I'm happy with myself for not going overboard and keeping the stories to a sensible length. I was also able to work in-between KR prompts on my plans for another NSWFF thread in a different fandom for the Fanfic Olympics this summer; at this point it would take a massive assault from DRL for that one not to happen because I've laid all the groundwork and I'm just waiting for the list of prompts to turn that into stories. I have further plans for a SWFF thread for the Olympics, but that idea has taken on a life of its own and it may just be too ambitious; I'll have to see where it goes.

    And lastly, as a reader/reviewer: I'm proud to report that I obliterated my goal during this first quarter. I’ve written a whooping 143 reviews since the beginning of the year [face_dancing] and while I can't reasonably commit to keeping up that pace for the rest of 2025, I'll do my best to not fall too far behind [face_praying]

    What about everyone else, how have you been doing? The original discussion about goals starts here, if you want to find your post.
     
  17. devilinthedetails

    devilinthedetails Fiendish Fanfic & SWTV Manager, Tech Admin star 6 Staff Member Administrator

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    @Chyntuck Cool idea to check in on our progress toward our goals after quarter 1.

    I'm a little late, but here is my evaluation of my progress.

    My 2025 goals were to quote my past self:

    In terms of my first goal, I'm pleased to say that I have indeed been experimenting with different tenses and storytelling techniques so far this year. The Kessel Run in particular is a wonderful event for encouraging me to branch out and try things like an omniscient narrator or an embedded narrative, for example.

    In terms of goal 2, I regret that I haven't been able to chip away at my longer works in progress, but I hope that for WIP month, I'll be able to turn my attention to some of my neglected longer works.

    With goal 3, I'm proud of the OC's that I've written. Again, the Kessel Run was great for giving me the opportunity and motivation to write some OC's. I'm also in the midst of brainstorming a story for the latest Angstmonger settings roulette challenge that would be centered around an OC, so if I am able to get my muse to write the story and not just brainstorm about it, that would be another OC written. So I would say I am looking pretty good in regard to this goal!

    With goal 4, so far this year, I have been able to write for a variety of fandoms. Making my Kessel Run a multi-fandom one definitely helped with that. However, I would like to do more in terms of writing for a variety of Star Wars eras. The idea I have whirling around in my head for the Angstmonger settings roulette would be set in what I consider the OT era of Star Wars, so that would be progress toward meeting that aspect of my fourth goal if I am able to finish it.

    With regard to goal 5, I feel like I started the year strong in terms of reviewing, but then my reviewing tapered off as my schedule got more chaotic. So this is very much something I hope to be able to do better at as the year progresses. The Reading Challenge does help me stay on track with this, though.

    So, there has been some progress toward some of my goals, and some areas for continued growth with some of my other goals.

    Which is not too shabby I guess.
     
  18. ConservativeJedi321

    ConservativeJedi321 Force Ghost star 6

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    I'm currently on track to finish A Shattered Minds eye this month. I did actually consider putting it off until the end of the year to better align with my DDC, it definitely had some spoilery stuff in it, but for various reasons I don't want to get into at this time I decided finish now and anyone who cares can choose to put off reading it until later.

    Along a similar note I officially have one or two supplementary texts in progress that ought to enhance the Clawmouse Clan experience. Both of which are related to other challenges on these boards. (Definitely wasn't planning on getting TUNDRA for the angst challenge, but after panicking for a hot minute I managed to rework a plot bunny I hadn't even fully developed before now into a story I absolutely adore. Expect that in the next couple weeks)
     
  19. Jacen Skywalker

    Jacen Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Hi. This is my first created thread here, and I wanted to begin a discussion with all those who'd like to and are willing to contribute.

    I was always wondering: if George Lucas had sold Star Wars and LucasFilm Limited to Comcast/NBCUniversal/Universal Studios (whatever you all wanna refer to it as), had placed Leland Chee and Abel G. Peña in charge as President and Vice President of LucasFilm Limited respectively (or even vice versa with Abel as President and Leland as Vice President), and Universal had decided to keep the Star Wars Expanded Universe as Official Canon and created movie series and sagas based off of all of the books, comic books, graphic novels, and video games, then which actors would you want to play your favorite EU characters in live action?

    I'll begin with my own fancasts, and then you can all contribute yours to get the ball rolling for all of us to have some amazing discussions.

    PS. I had to put this here in the fanfiction section because it was the closest thing that I could get to the term fancasting....so I just wanted to clear that up. If I did something against any rules then I wholeheartedly apologize as that wasn't at all my intent.

    My fancast would be (please note the images displayed and that you'll have to begin from Sebastian Stan to Darth Plagueis and from right to left in respective order to see each fancast decision in...well, respective order):



    Sebastian Stan (although make him younger so that he's a little older than Emma) as Jacen Solo/Darth Caedus:

    Emma Watson as Jaina Solo-Fel:

    Logan Lerman as Anakin Solo:

    Freya Allan (just make her the same age as Logan) as Tahiri Veila:

    Karen Gillan as Mara Jade-Skywalker:

    Ty Simpkins (from around the time of his cameo scene in Avengers: Endgame) as Ben Skywalker:

    Anna Kendrick (although make her younger and the same age as Ty) as Vestara Khai:

    Alyla Browne as Allana Djo Solo:

    Kathryn Newton as Future Allana (when she was seen in the Force Vision sitting upon the Throne of Balance):

    Henry Cavill as Kyp Durron:

    Michael Fassbender and David Kaye (body and voice respectively) as Thrawn:

    Jensen Ackles (although make him younger and the same age as Emma) as Jagged Fel:

    Melody Perkins (when she was younger back during Power Rangers in Space and Power Rangers: Lost Galaxy) as Darth Zannah:

    Christopher Judge (just have him covered in makeup so that he looks fair-skinned/Caucasian) as Darth Bane:

    Russell Crowe and Charles Dance (body and voice respectively) as Darth Vitiate when he was Valkorion:

    Keanu Reeves (although make him younger and with shorter hair like he had in Speed and Matrix) as Revan:

    Jennifer Hale (although make her younger and the same age as Keanu) as Bastila Shan:

    Daniel Davis (voice) (as the character will be computer generated) as Darth Plagueis:

    Those are some of my fancasts...now please tell me what yours are. PS. I'll fully admit and acknowledge that the images that I provided for everyone mentioned aren't mine, but I don't claim any kind of ownership over them, and I hope that they won't be any kind of interference with them as I just want you all to see where I was going with my fancasting decisions.
     
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  20. Findswoman

    Findswoman Fanfic and Pancakes and Waffles Mod (in Pink) star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    @Jacen Skywalker hello and welcome to Fanfic! :) I have moved your post on fancasts from its own thread into our writing discussion thread, which is the correct place for discussions and questions of that type. For rules and pointers on posting in the Resource section of our forum, please check out the appropriate section of the Fanfic FAQ.

    Also, I am noticing that none of the images you included are showing. Are they hosted on your own image hosting site? Just as a heads-up, hotlinking of images from anything other than your own hosting is prohibited (see item 13 in this post), so you may want to move them to such a site if they aren’t already. We also have a wonderful Practice Markup Codes thread that is very helpful for testing posting of images and such.

    Thanks so much, and enjoy your time here! If you have any questions, just let any of us Fanfic mods know. :)
     
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  21. Jacen Skywalker

    Jacen Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    At least you're nice and moved my post here instead of deleting it/closing it down.

    I didn't mean to place it in the wrong place, but I'm still new to posting comments here, and that was my first ever thread...so I didn't know where to go to place it. I wholeheartedly apologize and want to say I'm sorry for the inconvenience, Ms.: that was never my intention.

    I tried to make a post on Reddit about my fancasting and the Moderators closed my post, but yet they let someone else make two different ones for the same reason that my post was closed down for and kept that person's posts open. I personally believe it was bias and/or favoritism.

    What are your opinions on my fancasting decisions? I'd really like to know and hear some of yours if you'd be kind enough to share them.

    PS. I was only using those images (which it stinks that some of them didn't appear) so that everyone who sees my post could visually see where I was going with my fancasting decisions instead of using their imagination.

    If it's an issue, then I'll remove them...just please don't remove my post: I tried really hard with it as it was my first one, and I don't have as much experience as others with it.

    Please reply back at your earliest convenience so that we could meet on the same page, and see where we can go from there regarding this post.
     
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  22. Findswoman

    Findswoman Fanfic and Pancakes and Waffles Mod (in Pink) star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    Hi again @Jacen Skywalker , and no worries at all! We totally understand being new and not yet knowing where things are; that’s part of why we mods are here. :)

    And as for the images, no worries there either—no need to remove them, and I won’t remove your post. It’s not against the rules to post images, just to hotlink them in the way described in the link in my previous post. I don’t actually know if that is what you did or not; I just was proposing it as a possible reason for why they might not be showing up, by way of troubleshooting. Sorry if that wasn’t clear. There’s unlimited edit time in the Fanfic forum, so if you do happen to figure out what was wrong, you can edit the post to update the image links at any time. Hope that helps!
     
  23. Jacen Skywalker

    Jacen Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Please ignore this page as I was finally able to fix the error.
     
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  24. Jacen Skywalker

    Jacen Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Please ignore this one too.
     
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  25. Findswoman

    Findswoman Fanfic and Pancakes and Waffles Mod (in Pink) star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    @Jacen Skywalker OK, a few things:

    1. Images are still not showing up in either post, so I’m not sure what exactly was changed. That’s not a violation of the rules in any way, but…

    2. Another thing we have a rule against here on the TF.N Forums is spamming and double posting. You can see what that means in the rule post I linked. Your second post of names and pictures could easily have with been part of the first one, and your most recent post—the one quoting me—could have been part of that post as well, especially given that Fanfic has unlimited edit time. We know you are new and learning the rules, so I won’t do this now—but please be aware that any further double posting will result in a ban.

    3. A friendly reminder about the purpose of this Scribble Pad thread: It is specifically for fanfic writing discussion. Thus one post starting a discussion on fancasting is OK, as are responses to those taking part in the discussion. But any more than that—especially posts in immediate succession from the same user like this—gets into the territory of spamming and is not permitted.


    4. Finally, we mods are glad to answer questions about boards rules and procedures, but it’s too much to ask of us to ask us to advise on the content of every edit of an individual post, or aspect of the content of a given post, which also eats up space in the thread that could be used for discussion relevant to the main topic. Thus, for now, let’s just leave your posts here, and see what discussion they lead to. :)

    Thanks for understanding, and I hope that all makes sense. I recommend that you take some time to get to know both the general rules of the boards, and the Fanfic FAQ in particular, before diving into posting. We mods are here if you have questions about those rules.