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Saga A Mission Gone Awry! Obi-Wan/Anakin/OCs. Prize-Award for Esther Anderson--Complete.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Mar 14, 2014.

  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Title: A Mission Gone Awry!
    By Nyota's Heart

    Genre: Drama, multipart
    Characters: Obi-Wan, Anakin, OCs, see below & Captain Rex :cool:

    Usual Disclaimer Applies

    AN: For Esther Anderson -- a fic award.
    Master Sha's, Elias Kage & Clone Trooper '42' are Esther's OCs. @};-

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    Prologue

    Obi-Wan rushed into the quarters he shared with Anakin and dashed for his room to get his travel bag ready. An urgent message from Master Sha'as on a mid-Rim world had just come in. The world was embroiled in a civil war and was endeavoring to establish a truce.

    Obi-Wan's natural concern was heightened by the fact that Elias Kage was his close friend. His stomach knotted at the thought of what must have happened to the experienced pair. He knew that Master Sha'as would not have sent a message asking for help unless the situation had turned serious.

    Anakin was filled in on the details and was excited for a bit of adventure.

    He was on the verge of adolescence, which only accentuated his thirst for adventure.

    Obi-Wan smiled fondly ... he had been very much the same at that age.


    "I hope we arrive on time. I hope they're all right." Anakin observed, mirroring Obi-Wan's thoughts.

    Obi-Wan grimaced in determination.

    They had to be.

    ++++

    TBC... [face_batting]
     
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  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    Great and intriguing start
     
  3. Esther Anderson

    Esther Anderson Jedi Knight

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    Awesome!! I can't wait for more!
     
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  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Note: Worked this up earlier than expected :)

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    Cold dread knifed through Obi-Wan as the comm-board lit up. Rex was able to initiate on a secure frequency contact with "42."

    "'Bout time you guys showed up." 42 growled. "Sha'as was double-crossed and ambushed by a group of 'Enforcers' with battle droids. Even more than he could take out."

    "What happened to Elias?" broke in Obi-Wan.

    "I cannot find him. He's locked away under heavy guard."

    "We'll have to negotiate his release." piped in Anakin.

    "Hmmmph. Negotiating with terrorists ..." 42 retorted. "That should work."

    "We don't have an insertion team at the ready." Rex pointed out.

    "Well, you should have thought of that first."

    Obi-Wan's eyes narrowed. "This isn't getting us anywhere. We hae to come up with a plan."

    **

    Events transpred very quickly after that. The opposition faction sprang Kage loose as they were cemtning their hold on the capital.

    When he was safe, he rendezvoused with Obi-Wan and the rest in a bittersweet reunion.

    Kage's hazel eyes were clouded.

    "I will miss Master Sha'as." He confided. "His wry sense of humor ..."

    Obi-Wan felt a sympathetic twinge. He still missed Master Jinn. He did not think that feeling would fade, completely.

    Such a loss would and should make the remaining friendships that much more appreciated, he thought, and expressed this to Kage.

    "You're getting downright philosophical," He teased, in a lighter mood.

    Obi-Wan laughed.

    "I'm paired with Anakin, remember. One of us has to be the voice of reason."

    Kage grinned.

    "How's Siri doing, by the way?"

    Obi-Wan shrugged. His friend knew him too well to be put off by such a semblance of casualness.

    "As feisty as ever." He remarked.

    What the Council did not know about himself and Siri's soul-bond was nothing they needed to know.

    "Thanks for coming after us." Kage said. "I wanted to express our thanks for the group, since I figure 42 neglected to do so."

    "He's as snippy as a Correllian." Obi-Wan observed. "But you just have to dig past the snark."

    "I'm not sure what you'd find if you did." Kage rejoined.

    Obi-Wan sighed.

    "What he lacks is good female companionship." He answered. "It's done Captain Rex a world of good." He finished conspiratorially.

    "That gives me an idea." Kage said, thoughtfully after a moment.

    "Count me in." Obi-Wan said, always willing to lend a hand in the furtherance of romance.

    +++

    Fini

    :)

    Esther Anderson ___________ earlybird-obi-wan
     
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  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    Nice to see the mission completed and with the romance[face_dancing]for Kage.
    A sequel?;)
     
  6. Esther Anderson

    Esther Anderson Jedi Knight

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    :D Loved it! If you want to to write a sequel for this, that would be cool...
     
  7. serendipityaey

    serendipityaey Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 24, 2004
    Obi was great in this! Good job!
     
  8. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Ashley! Thanks, and you're here! LOL So blooming relieved! LOL [face_love]
     
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  9. serendipityaey

    serendipityaey Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 24, 2004
    Sometimes I'm slow, lol, but I will always get there eventually! More Obi!!!! You do him so well!! :D[:D][face_love]
     
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  10. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    "I will miss Master Sha'as." He confided. "His wry sense of humor ..."

    Like that sense of humour in your story. :D
     
  11. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Thanks, Nicole I do love elucidating thoughts and character(s) through dialogue. :)
     
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