Saga Anakin's Sorrows Poem

This is my first fanfiction that I've ever published online, and I'm happy to receive feedback from people who like my poem. The first part takes place during Episode 3, after Darth Vader is put into the suit. The second stanza is during ROTJ, when Vader captures Luke at Endor. The third stanza is about Anakin after his redemption.

Screaming, Alone, I cry.
Everything that I loved, has died.
Wife, children, former companions, and my Republic
All by my hand of obsessions
With the powers of evil
That the Light had never meant to be dabbled with
The Dark Side I've sworn myself to
Is now what I abhor the most

But there is hope, unbeknownst, as I shall soon discover
Amongst this life of destruction, power, and misery
A light by the name of Luke
Has come to save me from the darkness
Buried deep within the soul of evil
Lies the soul of heroism and a dead man
Named Anakin Skywalker
Soon I will discover him, and he shall arise from the ashes
But, as for now, Darth Vader will never leave
Or so he thought

A life of evil
Brought down to it's heels
By a savior, the son of the suns, my own flesh and blood
Darth Vader is now gone, consumed by my soul
I am Anakin Skywalker

 

Good stuff! I really liked the lines:
All by my hand of obsessions
With the powers of evil
That the Light had never meant to be dabbled with

 

Welcome to the JCF!

Good poem!
(I'm terrible at poems and am always amazed at people who can write them)

I especially liked the last stanza, but this was a great look at different times in his life!