Saga *DarkFire- Shadowflame's Poems*

This is my little spot to show people my poems. Since you are reading this, you are looking at it -Captain Obvious moment...sorry - Shall we get on with it? *ignores anyone saying 'no'*
First up....One I wrote in honour of Anakin/Darth Vader.

Beneath The Mask
Beneath the mask, a dying heart
Encased in steely hate
Contains one spark of shining light
Will freedom be its fate?
The deepest truths are bittersweet
Be brave and strong, don't hide
Take off the mask that weighs you down
To see the one inside.
The darkness is forgiven
The spirit now takes flight
And Anakin now once again
Stands proudly in the light.

 

the insight into the true underlying identity of anakin is deep and powerful.. i love it

 

I love it, too.

 

Next up, a Sithly sorta poem....Come to think of it, most of them are Sithly...Ah, well. Thats fun.

Die Tonight
My hatred is my strength
My anger is my power
Your fear is your weakness
And my advantage.
Run and hide
Or stay and fight
The choice is yours
Will you die tonight?

 

Another one:

Turning From Light
My blade is burning, blood-red flame,
Your heart is turning, in shadows and shame,
Turning from light, and a Jedi's code,
Towards my own, much darker road,
Follow me within this hour,
Taste for yourself the Dark Side's power,
Don't dare refuse, my proud Jedi,
You'll join the Sith, or you will die.

 

I like them, especially Die tonight.
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(and I actively dislike the OPPM, it should do just that, or preferably this afternoon!)

 

Hidden Sith
They came from shadows, turned to myth,
The Jedi forgot the hidden Sith,
Blood-red blades in black midnight,
Striking in darkness, feeding on fright,
Powerful hunters, cloaked in hate
Only seen when it's far too late,
Eternally enemies of the light,
Caring not for wrong and right,
They came from shadows, turned to myth,
And avenged again are the ancient Sith.

DarthUncle, Doc4Converse, and ShadowSoldier6x6; Thanks.
Next, is one inspired by one particular person on these boards- if he dislikes it, he can PM me, and I will remove it.

Izlos Kun
In Jedi circles, naming one
Brings heavy dread- Izlos Kun.
They once believed he could be tamed
But all such efforts were in vain.
To gain a power long denied
He soon gave in to his darker side.
His new, Sith name, like an icy breath
Chilled Jedi hearts like the touch of death.
Beware, young Jedi; flee him, shun
The man whose name was Izlos Kun.

 

Very well done apprentice! If you would please post some of it on our trials site!

 

Wow, you have an astounding talent for poetry. I particularly like Beneath the Mask, but they're all very moving and deep.

Bravo!!

 

Dragonsith13, ZekksGoddess:Thanks.

Ok, I've already done one Anakin/Darth Vader one, but I believe there is room for another.

Vader's Choice
I heard it in the morning,
I heard it in the night,
I heard the Dark Side calling,
Luring me from the light.
A chill wind whispered in my heart,
That terrible voice would play its part.
From deepest dream I have awoken,
To scream again, I won't be broken.
Trapped within my darkest fears,
Doomed to shed these bitter tears.
All to gain, yet all to lose,
It calls again and I must choose.
For the last time ever, I face the light,
Then turn away, to embrace the night.
The voice is real, it's no nightmare,
It speaks again; "Rise, Lord Vader."

 

Excellent job on these poem, Rilwen. Really, very nice. You have much talent.

~Vassago

 

Ahh. I love a good poem. excellent Job Shadowflame. I hope there's more soon!
-mia-

 

Darth-Vassago, americantragedy:Thanks.
Ok, two more poems, both made for users on tf.n. The first is a gift for a Sith Lord I know. Enjoy.

Darth Dispicable
Well-nigh undefeatable
Is the Gen'Dai Darth Dispicable.
With knowledge of the Dark Side's path
He has earned the right to the title 'Darth'.
Yet to make their names, some poor fools,
Challenge him to useless duels,
Though those who seek to make his doom,
Shall swiftly hear a calling tomb.
In full respect, a truth is this,
To simply name him 'a true Sith'.

Ok, this next one is for someone on the boards, who, I think, knows who he is ans why I wrote it. Anyways, its for a very cool master.

The Dragon's Shadow
I walk in the shadow of a Dragon's wings,
As he teaches me how to fly,
For I will learn a thousand things,
Before we say goodbye.

I walk in the shadow of a Dragon's wings,
In the Temple of the Sith,
For I have sworn my loyalty,
To my Master, Draconis.

I walk in the shadows of a Dragon's wings,
I follow where he flies,
And thus this Sith Apprentice,
Thanks a Master of the skies.

 

These are....amazing! I like them a lot! Keep it up!

darth_nemisis

 

I am throughly impressed. Your poems are very well done, Rilwen. Keep up the great work.

~Vassago

 

Great job on these! More!

 

I did not know that you wrote, your stuff is really good (way better than anything I would ever dream of being able to do ). Thank you very much for that poem you wrote about my RP character, I am very honored by it.

MTDSBWY
~D1

 

Yes, you have a very good talent here!!! KEep it up!

 

Thanks everyone for the kind words.
Next up, another little giftie. This one's for....well, you'll see.
Darth Nemisis
Within the temple of the Sith,
Stands one-by name, Darth Nemisis,
A mighty Sith Lord cold and cruel,
Nigh unmatched in any duel.

Trading jokes or funny rumours,
We bow before his sense of humour,
Possessed of such malicious glee,
His sense of humour's as evil as he.

Hot of temper, cold of heart,
Seeming forged by some dark art,
A demon from a dark abyss,
Who bears the name Darth Nemisis.

 

Awesome! Great job!

 

Wow. All these poems are great! I'm a big poetry fan and my humble attempts pale in comparison to these. You've got talent, ShadowFlame.

My favorite one so far is the first one but they're all really good.

Keep it up.

 

Awesome my friend, keep it up!


I'll start mine later days.


Destroy.

 

Very good! I can't write poems at all

 

Thanks guys.
Ok, I decided to try something a little different- a trio of linked haikus.
Lightsaber
Blade of shining light
Ozone tang fills the air
Saber ignited.
Jedi Blade
Defending justice
War weapon in peaceful hands
Shadows flee the light.
Sith Saber
Vengeful bloodshine blade
Weapon wielded in hatred
Saber sings of death.

 

Very good. A uniqe new style, and it looks like it worked very well. Keep up the good work.

~Vassago