Saga ~Detective Skywalker on the Loose:The Case of the Senator?s Assassin. AotC, a/p~

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Utterly inventive!!
It is so film noir...
Can't wait for the next update!

 

So Anakin and Padmé knew each other once upon a time. I think I like this development...

 

mmfcfa: i am glad you appreciate it!

TrinityDay: i wish you were more sure...

 

We ran out of that restraunt like we just wanted to disapear into nowhere with eachother. We ran until the restraunt was as far away as a distant memory. When we stopped Padme was holding her hands to her knees panting. I thought we would just walk and laugh some more, but this girl never stopped surprizing me, still doesn't.

"You were the boy weren't you?" She said, standing up.

"Why would you think that?" I asked, uneasy.

"Just a feeling." She said Shaiking her head.

We kept walking in silence, for a little while. Then another surprise.

"But it's true, right?" She asked. "I mean, I know you agree."

"Maybe." I said, gulping.

"Maybe you agree?" She asked, testing me. "Or maybe it's possible?"

I didn't say anything.

"Anakin?"

"Yeah, I know." I said, quietly.

She nodded, her head down. After a little more walking our hands met. I don't exactly know when, my concentration wasn't in my hand, or hers.

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"This is my place." She said.

"What?" I said, probably sounding like a fool. I thought we were just walking, but I guess I was walking her home. "Oh, right."

"Well, bye." She said.

"Yeah, bye." I said back.

"I'll... uhh, see you tommarrow." She said., slowly walking up the steps, until she was gone. It felt odd to me. Incomplete, so much for a first date.

 

What a first date!

Please, longer chapters!

 

Jadie: don't worry, from here on out my chapters will be very long, i wrote this one in a hurry.

 

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